Comments received on poems by dusk arising
know JB
Goldfinch60 said:
Listening to JB this early in the morning nearly made me get up and \'strut my stuff\' which hasn\'t changed since JB first appeared.
Fine tribute to a great guy.
August 8th, 2018 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Listening to JB this early in the morning nearly made me get up and \'strut my stuff\' which hasn\'t changed since JB first appeared.
Fine tribute to a great guy.
August 8th, 2018 00:35
know JB
Heartwriter said:
Great funky write dude! Loved it. Was he Motown? I think he was. James Brown.
August 7th, 2018 14:13
Heartwriter said:
Great funky write dude! Loved it. Was he Motown? I think he was. James Brown.
August 7th, 2018 14:13
know JB
Michael Edwards said:
Oh golly gosh - not at all familiar with him - I must get into this funk thing whatever it is :) :) Great write.
August 7th, 2018 11:56
Michael Edwards said:
Oh golly gosh - not at all familiar with him - I must get into this funk thing whatever it is :) :) Great write.
August 7th, 2018 11:56
in the dark
sylviasearcher said:
I used to have a recurring dream that I was in an endless dark tunnel my only company were the rats. None ever came. But the dream stopped.
I think it helped me see that only I could find a way out.
Your poem reminded me of those dreams.
It is a hopeful poem. Reaching out.
August 6th, 2018 01:33
sylviasearcher said:
I used to have a recurring dream that I was in an endless dark tunnel my only company were the rats. None ever came. But the dream stopped.
I think it helped me see that only I could find a way out.
Your poem reminded me of those dreams.
It is a hopeful poem. Reaching out.
August 6th, 2018 01:33
in the dark
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk. Was it me? Did I come along with a torch?
Can\'t see much point in two people walking together in the dark. Dunno where they\'ll end up. Can\'t see a thing!
Yet there can be spiritual meaning in \'going through the darkness together\'.
August 6th, 2018 01:26
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk. Was it me? Did I come along with a torch?
Can\'t see much point in two people walking together in the dark. Dunno where they\'ll end up. Can\'t see a thing!
Yet there can be spiritual meaning in \'going through the darkness together\'.
August 6th, 2018 01:26
in the dark
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, there is somebody out there for us all to walk them into the light.
August 6th, 2018 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, there is somebody out there for us all to walk them into the light.
August 6th, 2018 00:38
peace 2
orchidee said:
It\'s the human state since Adam and Eve (if we believe they existed). The \'problem\' of evil, as it were. Not that we are all terrorists, etc, of course.
August 2nd, 2018 11:23
orchidee said:
It\'s the human state since Adam and Eve (if we believe they existed). The \'problem\' of evil, as it were. Not that we are all terrorists, etc, of course.
August 2nd, 2018 11:23
peace 2
Heartwriter said:
I will never understand that strength of hate. To end your own life while desiring to kill others. Terrible. Peace dusk! PEACE!
August 2nd, 2018 04:46
Heartwriter said:
I will never understand that strength of hate. To end your own life while desiring to kill others. Terrible. Peace dusk! PEACE!
August 2nd, 2018 04:46
peace 2
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, I wonder what compels them to do such things, If it is as they say their Faith then they are being misled by their Faith leaders, all Faiths believe in peace and not using others to commit suicide to try and achieve it.
August 2nd, 2018 03:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, I wonder what compels them to do such things, If it is as they say their Faith then they are being misled by their Faith leaders, all Faiths believe in peace and not using others to commit suicide to try and achieve it.
August 2nd, 2018 03:38
peace
Goldfinch60 said:
That peace is a long time coming, if only those in the world who have the power could see what they are doing to the ordinary lives of the world it would be better but all they want is power for themselves and damn the consequences.
Great statement by Scrambled Letters.
Very good write.
August 2nd, 2018 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
That peace is a long time coming, if only those in the world who have the power could see what they are doing to the ordinary lives of the world it would be better but all they want is power for themselves and damn the consequences.
Great statement by Scrambled Letters.
Very good write.
August 2nd, 2018 00:18
peace
Poetic Dan said:
Wow that is pure light, we will change the vibration of this plain with energetic words like this.
Hats off good sir!
August 1st, 2018 15:06
Poetic Dan said:
Wow that is pure light, we will change the vibration of this plain with energetic words like this.
Hats off good sir!
August 1st, 2018 15:06
peace
orchidee said:
A sensitive write dusk.
If not so serious, I would have said: \'Meanwhile, a peace descends - it\'s me not singing!\' The two cats fighting sound better. heehee.
August 1st, 2018 08:00
orchidee said:
A sensitive write dusk.
If not so serious, I would have said: \'Meanwhile, a peace descends - it\'s me not singing!\' The two cats fighting sound better. heehee.
August 1st, 2018 08:00
peace
Heartwriter said:
You peeled back your skin. I loved what layed there in! Beautiful, absolutely beautiful!
August 1st, 2018 07:20
Heartwriter said:
You peeled back your skin. I loved what layed there in! Beautiful, absolutely beautiful!
August 1st, 2018 07:20
unanswered questions
Poetic Dan said:
I can relate to this so much and now you\'ve reminded me that they got answered. I hope yours did too with this well expressed peace of art from the soul
July 30th, 2018 04:50
Poetic Dan said:
I can relate to this so much and now you\'ve reminded me that they got answered. I hope yours did too with this well expressed peace of art from the soul
July 30th, 2018 04:50
unanswered questions
Goldfinch60 said:
Those unanswered questions can be so disastrous in relationships. Good song.
July 30th, 2018 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Those unanswered questions can be so disastrous in relationships. Good song.
July 30th, 2018 00:27
unanswered questions
Heartwriter said:
I am impressed! Multitalented! That\'s awesome. Thanks for sharing. I\'ve always wanted to play the guitar. Sadly never learned.
July 29th, 2018 20:42
Heartwriter said:
I am impressed! Multitalented! That\'s awesome. Thanks for sharing. I\'ve always wanted to play the guitar. Sadly never learned.
July 29th, 2018 20:42
somehow something
dusk arising said:
I had in mind the overall feel created by Everything But The Girl on their early album Eden which i liked very much. Worth a listen.
July 29th, 2018 17:58
dusk arising said:
I had in mind the overall feel created by Everything But The Girl on their early album Eden which i liked very much. Worth a listen.
July 29th, 2018 17:58
somehow something
dusk arising said:
Hi Joe. Thank you for commenting on this piece. It is written as a song and does have a melody line already. Would be cool to hear your interpretation and edit.
July 29th, 2018 17:53
dusk arising said:
Hi Joe. Thank you for commenting on this piece. It is written as a song and does have a melody line already. Would be cool to hear your interpretation and edit.
July 29th, 2018 17:53
unanswered questions
orchidee said:
What did I say wrong? What did I do wrong? Why ya upset with me? I knows - I started actually singing it. That brings the death knell to any song-poem! heehee.
July 29th, 2018 07:13
orchidee said:
What did I say wrong? What did I do wrong? Why ya upset with me? I knows - I started actually singing it. That brings the death knell to any song-poem! heehee.
July 29th, 2018 07:13
unanswered questions
dusk arising said:
It\'s already been written and performed sir! I\'m a singer and musician too for my sins. Haven\'t gigged in a while but i used to be out couple of nights a week mostly doing other peoples music though.
July 29th, 2018 07:02
dusk arising said:
It\'s already been written and performed sir! I\'m a singer and musician too for my sins. Haven\'t gigged in a while but i used to be out couple of nights a week mostly doing other peoples music though.
July 29th, 2018 07:02
Charlie
Heartwriter said:
I think I understand much of it. At least the important parts. Haha! Great write dude!
July 28th, 2018 10:00
Heartwriter said:
I think I understand much of it. At least the important parts. Haha! Great write dude!
July 28th, 2018 10:00
Charlie
Michael Edwards said:
Read this wiv me best cockney accent ( bein\' a Lunduner me self) and it\'s gotta go in me favrits) Great read dusk
July 28th, 2018 02:54
Michael Edwards said:
Read this wiv me best cockney accent ( bein\' a Lunduner me self) and it\'s gotta go in me favrits) Great read dusk
July 28th, 2018 02:54
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