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Raft of reeds
FineB said:
Thank you Duskarising
Powerful stuff.
Keep writing
FineB
May 17th, 2018 06:45
FineB said:
Thank you Duskarising
Powerful stuff.
Keep writing
FineB
May 17th, 2018 06:45
Raft of reeds
SLR said:
You were right dusk, our minds were running on the same thread today. Love the last line \'a raft of reeds falling apart upon your waves\' .
May 14th, 2018 11:25
SLR said:
You were right dusk, our minds were running on the same thread today. Love the last line \'a raft of reeds falling apart upon your waves\' .
May 14th, 2018 11:25
Raft of reeds
Lorna said:
Such a clever description of love and lies as a frail raft Dusk - and I love being reminded of Kon Tiki (which actually held up pretty well for most of the journey)....
May 14th, 2018 06:47
Lorna said:
Such a clever description of love and lies as a frail raft Dusk - and I love being reminded of Kon Tiki (which actually held up pretty well for most of the journey)....
May 14th, 2018 06:47
Raft of reeds
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, those who lie remove any trust that may have been with them.
May 14th, 2018 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, those who lie remove any trust that may have been with them.
May 14th, 2018 00:56
it aint our summer
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The ever changing seasons are a great metaphor for our ever changing feelings. I enjoyed your writing.
May 6th, 2018 21:20
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The ever changing seasons are a great metaphor for our ever changing feelings. I enjoyed your writing.
May 6th, 2018 21:20
it aint our summer
Michael Edwards said:
Great work - so well expresses what so many of us think about the Autumn of our lives - mind you not I\'m looking forward to winter !!
April 11th, 2018 07:35
Michael Edwards said:
Great work - so well expresses what so many of us think about the Autumn of our lives - mind you not I\'m looking forward to winter !!
April 11th, 2018 07:35
it aint our summer
sylviasearcher said:
A lovely poem giving value to the autumn of life and love.
April 11th, 2018 03:57
sylviasearcher said:
A lovely poem giving value to the autumn of life and love.
April 11th, 2018 03:57
some facet of a stone
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, knowing you the Blues had to be in there somewhere.
March 18th, 2018 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, knowing you the Blues had to be in there somewhere.
March 18th, 2018 01:34
some facet of a stone
Laura🌻 said:
da,
Such a craving for the old familiar places! A great nostalgic write! Enjoyed it!
~Laura~
March 17th, 2018 19:13
Laura🌻 said:
da,
Such a craving for the old familiar places! A great nostalgic write! Enjoyed it!
~Laura~
March 17th, 2018 19:13
some facet of a stone
Lorna said:
I\'m crying for that old building........ it\'s lovely........
March 17th, 2018 06:13
Lorna said:
I\'m crying for that old building........ it\'s lovely........
March 17th, 2018 06:13
some facet of a stone
Michael Edwards said:
There\'s no place like home - enjoyed this da
March 17th, 2018 05:36
Michael Edwards said:
There\'s no place like home - enjoyed this da
March 17th, 2018 05:36
now ready to depart
Caring dove said:
hello dusk rising .. i cannot help but LOVE this ! i love how you mention colours, the colour blue and gold and your reference to you / your heart as being like a train now again ready to depart, no longer on hold for love but accepting its arrival and moving forwards .. your ending line is beautiful
\'\'emboldened love reassures
in passion now re-born
and hesitation \'ere within
lifts her veil and disappears\'\'
i love how you speak of of your hesitation being like a girl with a veil..
a truly enjoyable read ..
February 23rd, 2018 19:00
Caring dove said:
hello dusk rising .. i cannot help but LOVE this ! i love how you mention colours, the colour blue and gold and your reference to you / your heart as being like a train now again ready to depart, no longer on hold for love but accepting its arrival and moving forwards .. your ending line is beautiful
\'\'emboldened love reassures
in passion now re-born
and hesitation \'ere within
lifts her veil and disappears\'\'
i love how you speak of of your hesitation being like a girl with a veil..
a truly enjoyable read ..
February 23rd, 2018 19:00
now ready to depart
Michael Edwards said:
A real painting with words - so cleverly written and to my artists heart.
February 19th, 2018 01:33
Michael Edwards said:
A real painting with words - so cleverly written and to my artists heart.
February 19th, 2018 01:33
unprepared
Fay Slimm. said:
A gem of write which says much about coping and moving on.
February 16th, 2018 16:27
Fay Slimm. said:
A gem of write which says much about coping and moving on.
February 16th, 2018 16:27
unprepared
peeter pewter said:
Sounds like one of those encounters that turn the everyday grayness into color. A turning point in life, you say hello, you talk, you sit by the river, you age together... and you blink and it was all in your head; a ten minute life, imagined happiness before the color fades again. I get that a lot. :) Enjoyable moments, why bother trying to make it real? Is there a difference between fantasy and a memory?
February 16th, 2018 12:55
peeter pewter said:
Sounds like one of those encounters that turn the everyday grayness into color. A turning point in life, you say hello, you talk, you sit by the river, you age together... and you blink and it was all in your head; a ten minute life, imagined happiness before the color fades again. I get that a lot. :) Enjoyable moments, why bother trying to make it real? Is there a difference between fantasy and a memory?
February 16th, 2018 12:55
unprepared
Michael Edwards said:
Holds true it sure does- a little diamond write.
February 16th, 2018 12:41
Michael Edwards said:
Holds true it sure does- a little diamond write.
February 16th, 2018 12:41
unprepared
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may your life continue in ts new love.
February 16th, 2018 08:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may your life continue in ts new love.
February 16th, 2018 08:58
unprepared
Heather T said:
There is a book in this brief beauty. Sigh-worthy work!
February 16th, 2018 08:55
Heather T said:
There is a book in this brief beauty. Sigh-worthy work!
February 16th, 2018 08:55
words your eyes will never see
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive laden write.
February 14th, 2018 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive laden write.
February 14th, 2018 01:30
words your eyes will never see
Royboy said:
Truly amazing. Very similar like you say but with more depth and emotion.
February 13th, 2018 17:45
Royboy said:
Truly amazing. Very similar like you say but with more depth and emotion.
February 13th, 2018 17:45
words your eyes will never see
Michael Edwards said:
A great work that tears at the soul.
February 13th, 2018 16:52
Michael Edwards said:
A great work that tears at the soul.
February 13th, 2018 16:52
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