Comments received on poems by dusk arising
unanswered questions
orchidee said:
What did I say wrong? What did I do wrong? Why ya upset with me? I knows - I started actually singing it. That brings the death knell to any song-poem! heehee.
July 29th, 2018 07:13
orchidee said:
What did I say wrong? What did I do wrong? Why ya upset with me? I knows - I started actually singing it. That brings the death knell to any song-poem! heehee.
July 29th, 2018 07:13
unanswered questions
dusk arising said:
It\'s already been written and performed sir! I\'m a singer and musician too for my sins. Haven\'t gigged in a while but i used to be out couple of nights a week mostly doing other peoples music though.
July 29th, 2018 07:02
dusk arising said:
It\'s already been written and performed sir! I\'m a singer and musician too for my sins. Haven\'t gigged in a while but i used to be out couple of nights a week mostly doing other peoples music though.
July 29th, 2018 07:02
Charlie
Heartwriter said:
I think I understand much of it. At least the important parts. Haha! Great write dude!
July 28th, 2018 10:00
Heartwriter said:
I think I understand much of it. At least the important parts. Haha! Great write dude!
July 28th, 2018 10:00
Charlie
Michael Edwards said:
Read this wiv me best cockney accent ( bein\' a Lunduner me self) and it\'s gotta go in me favrits) Great read dusk
July 28th, 2018 02:54
Michael Edwards said:
Read this wiv me best cockney accent ( bein\' a Lunduner me self) and it\'s gotta go in me favrits) Great read dusk
July 28th, 2018 02:54
Veronica
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write da, I am sure that she appreciated your words - did you sing them to her?
July 28th, 2018 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write da, I am sure that she appreciated your words - did you sing them to her?
July 28th, 2018 00:19
Veronica
Fay Slimm. said:
Great number and a tribute to your writing ability. Am sure Veronica will treasure these words.
July 27th, 2018 16:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Great number and a tribute to your writing ability. Am sure Veronica will treasure these words.
July 27th, 2018 16:11
Veronica
Poetic Dan said:
Your words swished side to side
A rhythm still stuck in my mind
A magnificent fella does this rhyme
Like Popeye the Sailor Man
This was brilliant buddy
July 27th, 2018 15:59
Poetic Dan said:
Your words swished side to side
A rhythm still stuck in my mind
A magnificent fella does this rhyme
Like Popeye the Sailor Man
This was brilliant buddy
July 27th, 2018 15:59
Veronica
Lorna said:
My goodness this was fun.......... what a great name to have: Veronica - one of a kind............like the poem........
July 27th, 2018 12:41
Lorna said:
My goodness this was fun.......... what a great name to have: Veronica - one of a kind............like the poem........
July 27th, 2018 12:41
epitaph
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, be remembered for the person inside their soul.
July 26th, 2018 08:26
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, be remembered for the person inside their soul.
July 26th, 2018 08:26
epitaph
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh I so agree - those traits so expertly outlined here are the real marks of greatness.
July 26th, 2018 05:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh I so agree - those traits so expertly outlined here are the real marks of greatness.
July 26th, 2018 05:27
epitaph
Heartwriter said:
Lol!!!! I remembered one well. How did you know? You must have been among the crowd. Huh? He was already dead. Boy, that\'s real magic. Great write. Just in time. I loved it.
July 26th, 2018 04:50
Heartwriter said:
Lol!!!! I remembered one well. How did you know? You must have been among the crowd. Huh? He was already dead. Boy, that\'s real magic. Great write. Just in time. I loved it.
July 26th, 2018 04:50
without a sound
Heartwriter said:
I hope she magnifies her self to you! Lol. Great write! Have a good one dusk.
July 25th, 2018 06:45
Heartwriter said:
I hope she magnifies her self to you! Lol. Great write! Have a good one dusk.
July 25th, 2018 06:45
scars
Poetic Dan said:
... Speechless! Well not really but I\'d rather just stay with your words and quote.
Thank you very much
July 25th, 2018 02:20
Poetic Dan said:
... Speechless! Well not really but I\'d rather just stay with your words and quote.
Thank you very much
July 25th, 2018 02:20
without a sound
orchidee said:
Does she say \'cccoooeeee\' when she calls, as I do?! lol.
July 25th, 2018 01:23
orchidee said:
Does she say \'cccoooeeee\' when she calls, as I do?! lol.
July 25th, 2018 01:23
without a sound
sylviasearcher said:
What a beautiful poem of an unspeakable unfathomable longing and knowing which often evades description?
July 25th, 2018 01:00
sylviasearcher said:
What a beautiful poem of an unspeakable unfathomable longing and knowing which often evades description?
July 25th, 2018 01:00
move along
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true but it can be very hard sometimes but it will always be for the better.
July 25th, 2018 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true but it can be very hard sometimes but it will always be for the better.
July 25th, 2018 00:55
move along
dusk arising said:
Thanks Cat. Yes i know only too well the pain etc but you\'re so right, one has to ride it out with positivity and move along to \'better times\'.
July 24th, 2018 11:26
dusk arising said:
Thanks Cat. Yes i know only too well the pain etc but you\'re so right, one has to ride it out with positivity and move along to \'better times\'.
July 24th, 2018 11:26
move along
dusk arising said:
A moment ago i was leaving a comment on your piece today and wondering how you would react to mine. A huge grin on my face to find your comment. In years past i have done a \'juliet\' phase (similar to your description but without fatality) after a relationships demise but in the end... one has to move along.
July 24th, 2018 10:38
dusk arising said:
A moment ago i was leaving a comment on your piece today and wondering how you would react to mine. A huge grin on my face to find your comment. In years past i have done a \'juliet\' phase (similar to your description but without fatality) after a relationships demise but in the end... one has to move along.
July 24th, 2018 10:38
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