Comments received on poems by dusk arising
Fishing Rod
Heartwriter said:
Lol. I was the younger cousin and always was told things make me not follow the older ones. Like there\'s a scarecrow in the barn do not go in there. I always wondered why they went. Lol. I was not too smart then. Now, I know what they were doing. Things they did not want little eyes with big mouths to see. Great share.
July 22nd, 2018 04:35
Heartwriter said:
Lol. I was the younger cousin and always was told things make me not follow the older ones. Like there\'s a scarecrow in the barn do not go in there. I always wondered why they went. Lol. I was not too smart then. Now, I know what they were doing. Things they did not want little eyes with big mouths to see. Great share.
July 22nd, 2018 04:35
Fishing Rod
Michael Edwards said:
Super work - reminds me of my sister who I love to bits but so annoying when we were young
July 22nd, 2018 02:50
Michael Edwards said:
Super work - reminds me of my sister who I love to bits but so annoying when we were young
July 22nd, 2018 02:50
Fishing Rod
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic, i could really feel the younger you and how one persons fun is anothers nightmare. Or maybe that is my childhood but nevertheless thank you for sharing this memorie my friend.
To me this is what art or poetry is, expression of one\'s truth and soul.
July 22nd, 2018 02:48
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic, i could really feel the younger you and how one persons fun is anothers nightmare. Or maybe that is my childhood but nevertheless thank you for sharing this memorie my friend.
To me this is what art or poetry is, expression of one\'s truth and soul.
July 22nd, 2018 02:48
easy
Poetic Dan said:
Easy like Sunday morning, let playing in my head. The wise words from you my friend has stained across my page, it will for ever join me each mile that I gauge.
July 20th, 2018 13:47
Poetic Dan said:
Easy like Sunday morning, let playing in my head. The wise words from you my friend has stained across my page, it will for ever join me each mile that I gauge.
July 20th, 2018 13:47
easy
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the positive outlook on life in this poetic and perceptive reminder that we are all unique thus our paths through life differ. That \"truckload of the unforeseen\" bears down on us all at sometime or other - yet this gem of a write leaves readers in no doubt that seeing the beauty around lifts up our heads and hearts to walk on. A favourite to read again for sure.
July 20th, 2018 01:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the positive outlook on life in this poetic and perceptive reminder that we are all unique thus our paths through life differ. That \"truckload of the unforeseen\" bears down on us all at sometime or other - yet this gem of a write leaves readers in no doubt that seeing the beauty around lifts up our heads and hearts to walk on. A favourite to read again for sure.
July 20th, 2018 01:14
easy
Goldfinch60 said:
Each mile we walk in our life is filled with moments and each moment is precious, treasure them. Good write.
July 20th, 2018 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Each mile we walk in our life is filled with moments and each moment is precious, treasure them. Good write.
July 20th, 2018 00:41
promise
PoeticPsycho said:
This is really powerful, and can be translated in many ways. I love the way the writing is used in a way that it feels as if the girl is explaining what had happened. Excited to see some more writings from you.
July 12th, 2018 21:31
PoeticPsycho said:
This is really powerful, and can be translated in many ways. I love the way the writing is used in a way that it feels as if the girl is explaining what had happened. Excited to see some more writings from you.
July 12th, 2018 21:31
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Edthepoet said:
And you say I cut straight to it.. Wow dusk.. This is so powerful. The subject matter is extremely well handled, these sorts of writes can often become tight rope writes, brilliant work. Again..powerful.
July 12th, 2018 15:25
Edthepoet said:
And you say I cut straight to it.. Wow dusk.. This is so powerful. The subject matter is extremely well handled, these sorts of writes can often become tight rope writes, brilliant work. Again..powerful.
July 12th, 2018 15:25
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🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Oh nooh, such a touching poem written so movingly on behalf of an orphaned kid. So poetic and appealing. Thumbs up.
Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too , titled , O human heart\"l, I like meeting poem pals to say hi.
July 12th, 2018 15:01
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Oh nooh, such a touching poem written so movingly on behalf of an orphaned kid. So poetic and appealing. Thumbs up.
Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too , titled , O human heart\"l, I like meeting poem pals to say hi.
July 12th, 2018 15:01
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Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write da, one day we may all learn that drinking and driving is a complete no, no.
July 12th, 2018 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write da, one day we may all learn that drinking and driving is a complete no, no.
July 12th, 2018 01:39
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AmandaJade said:
So so so beautifully written, reminds me of my uncle who couldn\'t come home... all the love.
July 11th, 2018 20:25
AmandaJade said:
So so so beautifully written, reminds me of my uncle who couldn\'t come home... all the love.
July 11th, 2018 20:25
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Reyas said:
I’m honestly at loss of words. Its such a sad piece of work but the message behind it is so important. Topic aside, the way you carried out the story was perfect, it really kept me on my toes.
July 11th, 2018 19:12
Reyas said:
I’m honestly at loss of words. Its such a sad piece of work but the message behind it is so important. Topic aside, the way you carried out the story was perfect, it really kept me on my toes.
July 11th, 2018 19:12
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Laura🌻 said:
dusk,
A heart wrenching piece of writing!
Many tears have been shed in my family for the loss of a life because of a head on collision due to drunk driving! He was 21 years old!
~Laura~
July 11th, 2018 18:44
Laura🌻 said:
dusk,
A heart wrenching piece of writing!
Many tears have been shed in my family for the loss of a life because of a head on collision due to drunk driving! He was 21 years old!
~Laura~
July 11th, 2018 18:44
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brooklyn6timesplus said:
Drunk driving destroys lives! Great poem penned here dusk arising!
July 11th, 2018 18:37
brooklyn6timesplus said:
Drunk driving destroys lives! Great poem penned here dusk arising!
July 11th, 2018 18:37
promise
Poetic Dan said:
Not sure where this came from and if this is your own experience. You hit a nerve with this and I thank you for expressing it my friend, helping heal this inner pain. If you have any I that it can reflect back
July 11th, 2018 08:45
Poetic Dan said:
Not sure where this came from and if this is your own experience. You hit a nerve with this and I thank you for expressing it my friend, helping heal this inner pain. If you have any I that it can reflect back
July 11th, 2018 08:45
through tears
Poetic Dan said:
I only every wanted to show my truth, in the bigger world most people told me not to. I\'ve never listened and never will because as you so amazingly written, this is more than real when feeling others truthfulness spilled.
Well penned my friend
July 9th, 2018 15:37
Poetic Dan said:
I only every wanted to show my truth, in the bigger world most people told me not to. I\'ve never listened and never will because as you so amazingly written, this is more than real when feeling others truthfulness spilled.
Well penned my friend
July 9th, 2018 15:37
through tears
Heartwriter said:
Yes, we all spill over with raw emotion here and isn\'t it lovely!
July 7th, 2018 06:08
Heartwriter said:
Yes, we all spill over with raw emotion here and isn\'t it lovely!
July 7th, 2018 06:08
through tears
SLR said:
Love this! This is exactly IT! Thank you so much for putting into words what I\'ve felt since joining MPS.
June 7th, 2018 20:45
SLR said:
Love this! This is exactly IT! Thank you so much for putting into words what I\'ve felt since joining MPS.
June 7th, 2018 20:45
through tears
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive write da. So much is said in the poetry that is written on this site that would not be shared anywhere else. That is the release that poetry gives us.
June 7th, 2018 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive write da. So much is said in the poetry that is written on this site that would not be shared anywhere else. That is the release that poetry gives us.
June 7th, 2018 00:40
now ready to depart
HangingbyaHalo said:
What an amazing write.
You have vividly painted the revival of passion..
“the early hours reach out
And crawl to the light of dawn
Where hearts lay fragile, tender
Beneath a quilt of fear”
I love the lines above, I feel the blissful vulnerability of this moment ❤️
June 5th, 2018 18:44
HangingbyaHalo said:
What an amazing write.
You have vividly painted the revival of passion..
“the early hours reach out
And crawl to the light of dawn
Where hearts lay fragile, tender
Beneath a quilt of fear”
I love the lines above, I feel the blissful vulnerability of this moment ❤️
June 5th, 2018 18:44
Raft of reeds
HangingbyaHalo said:
It hurt to read this, I definitely relate having built a beautiful boat to watch it fall apart. Quite beautifully done.
June 5th, 2018 18:32
HangingbyaHalo said:
It hurt to read this, I definitely relate having built a beautiful boat to watch it fall apart. Quite beautifully done.
June 5th, 2018 18:32
it aint our summer
Jane Frye said:
I was wowed by your poem. Thank you for sharing it.
June 2nd, 2018 17:56
Jane Frye said:
I was wowed by your poem. Thank you for sharing it.
June 2nd, 2018 17:56
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