Comments received on poems by dusk arising
lustfully, greedily
FredPeyer said:
Got me all going here, d a, but then that unexpected, yet great last line!
September 6th, 2017 15:21
FredPeyer said:
Got me all going here, d a, but then that unexpected, yet great last line!
September 6th, 2017 15:21
renzi
Renzi said:
Oh my goodness.. this has actually just brought the warmest smile to my face. Incredible💗 Thankyou so much.. ahhh i miss you guys. And reading your great work. Ranting about my crazy life haha) You are all amazing people.. and this wee poem. I feel so honoured to be reading it today.
Thankyou so much. Truely beautiful!
I\'M COMING BACK 💗
September 5th, 2017 08:57
Renzi said:
Oh my goodness.. this has actually just brought the warmest smile to my face. Incredible💗 Thankyou so much.. ahhh i miss you guys. And reading your great work. Ranting about my crazy life haha) You are all amazing people.. and this wee poem. I feel so honoured to be reading it today.
Thankyou so much. Truely beautiful!
I\'M COMING BACK 💗
September 5th, 2017 08:57
renzi
LukeCoomer said:
I don\'t know Renzi but from the sounds of her I wish I had
Great write!
September 5th, 2017 07:53
LukeCoomer said:
I don\'t know Renzi but from the sounds of her I wish I had
Great write!
September 5th, 2017 07:53
renzi
FredPeyer said:
Just happened to get a message from her TODAY! Said she will try to write again and hopefully we can read something from her soon! Don\'t know how to make this message available to all who commented.
September 4th, 2017 18:40
FredPeyer said:
Just happened to get a message from her TODAY! Said she will try to write again and hopefully we can read something from her soon! Don\'t know how to make this message available to all who commented.
September 4th, 2017 18:40
renzi
myself and me said:
Wish her the best, and hope she return one day and if she happen to read this poem, she shall know, we miss her.
September 4th, 2017 16:09
myself and me said:
Wish her the best, and hope she return one day and if she happen to read this poem, she shall know, we miss her.
September 4th, 2017 16:09
renzi
Christina8 said:
I really miss Renzi. Thank you for writing this wonderful poem. I think she is missed by many on MPS!!
September 4th, 2017 13:15
Christina8 said:
I really miss Renzi. Thank you for writing this wonderful poem. I think she is missed by many on MPS!!
September 4th, 2017 13:15
renzi
malubotelho said:
Yes, well remembered. Renzi, we are still waiting and loving you. I remember her. I miss her work and look for it. I\'m worried for her and other fellows friend that disappeared also. I remember Pauly. I was worried because he told me he is taking 30 something Benadryl. This scarys me. I feel so sorry for them. Thanks DA. For the reminder.
September 4th, 2017 13:09
malubotelho said:
Yes, well remembered. Renzi, we are still waiting and loving you. I remember her. I miss her work and look for it. I\'m worried for her and other fellows friend that disappeared also. I remember Pauly. I was worried because he told me he is taking 30 something Benadryl. This scarys me. I feel so sorry for them. Thanks DA. For the reminder.
September 4th, 2017 13:09
renzi
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve also missed her poems - she was so fresh and honest and open my heart went out her - let\'s hope we see her again soon.
September 4th, 2017 11:04
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve also missed her poems - she was so fresh and honest and open my heart went out her - let\'s hope we see her again soon.
September 4th, 2017 11:04
pictures
Wallace said:
Well written, so true nothing does last for ever. Like this a lot.
September 4th, 2017 09:20
Wallace said:
Well written, so true nothing does last for ever. Like this a lot.
September 4th, 2017 09:20
renzi
J.M. Shine said:
Beautiful poem, dusk arising. It made me long for all of my friends from school that each went their separate ways.
September 4th, 2017 09:11
J.M. Shine said:
Beautiful poem, dusk arising. It made me long for all of my friends from school that each went their separate ways.
September 4th, 2017 09:11
renzi
Goldfinch60 said:
I also share your concern, she is a wonderful lady and I miss her on the site.
September 4th, 2017 08:29
Goldfinch60 said:
I also share your concern, she is a wonderful lady and I miss her on the site.
September 4th, 2017 08:29
renzi
Louis Gibbs said:
I share your concern for Renzi. She is a gifted poet and a very special lady. Hopefully she will come back to her poetic family ... I miss her too.
September 4th, 2017 08:26
Louis Gibbs said:
I share your concern for Renzi. She is a gifted poet and a very special lady. Hopefully she will come back to her poetic family ... I miss her too.
September 4th, 2017 08:26
graft
Viv Wade said:
Short, funny, and very true! A good message for a Monday morning. :) Nice write!
September 3rd, 2017 23:53
Viv Wade said:
Short, funny, and very true! A good message for a Monday morning. :) Nice write!
September 3rd, 2017 23:53
pulsing fluff
malubotelho said:
Wow Dusk! It is so magical, soft and beautiful. So perfect. I like to write about fantasyland and this one went straight to my heart ❤️
Thank you.
September 3rd, 2017 22:47
malubotelho said:
Wow Dusk! It is so magical, soft and beautiful. So perfect. I like to write about fantasyland and this one went straight to my heart ❤️
Thank you.
September 3rd, 2017 22:47
pulsing fluff
Seeker said:
Truly, this a beautiful poem. The images are exquisite. Bravo
September 3rd, 2017 16:26
Seeker said:
Truly, this a beautiful poem. The images are exquisite. Bravo
September 3rd, 2017 16:26
pulsing fluff
Luke Gordon said:
The imagery is immense, a truly beautiful poem, very relatable.
Thank you
September 3rd, 2017 15:46
Luke Gordon said:
The imagery is immense, a truly beautiful poem, very relatable.
Thank you
September 3rd, 2017 15:46
pulsing fluff
myself and me said:
Reading this makes me feel so relax and a bit sleepy.
So peaceful. Have a wonderful dream.
September 3rd, 2017 11:42
myself and me said:
Reading this makes me feel so relax and a bit sleepy.
So peaceful. Have a wonderful dream.
September 3rd, 2017 11:42
pulsing fluff
Michael Edwards said:
What a lovely piece of imagery = well done dusk
September 3rd, 2017 10:30
Michael Edwards said:
What a lovely piece of imagery = well done dusk
September 3rd, 2017 10:30
quench
BlueDays said:
Wow, i want to dive right into the page. Sumptuous poetry and the imagery it conjures is a masterpiece in its own right. I can see me reading this before bed to my children. Thank you.
Also, do you paint the pictures that go with your poems?
September 3rd, 2017 09:10
BlueDays said:
Wow, i want to dive right into the page. Sumptuous poetry and the imagery it conjures is a masterpiece in its own right. I can see me reading this before bed to my children. Thank you.
Also, do you paint the pictures that go with your poems?
September 3rd, 2017 09:10
pictures
Mugsdaddy said:
Contrast of beauty Vs. A dark view of life based in fact. Excellent job very moving.
M
September 3rd, 2017 09:01
Mugsdaddy said:
Contrast of beauty Vs. A dark view of life based in fact. Excellent job very moving.
M
September 3rd, 2017 09:01
woman
BlueDays said:
This moved me. A heart warming tribute to woman kind and a true love I hope you hold or soon find, beautifully written
September 3rd, 2017 08:58
BlueDays said:
This moved me. A heart warming tribute to woman kind and a true love I hope you hold or soon find, beautifully written
September 3rd, 2017 08:58
pulsing fluff
Mugsdaddy said:
Liked this one, made me think of a past love. Beautifully written
September 3rd, 2017 08:57
Mugsdaddy said:
Liked this one, made me think of a past love. Beautifully written
September 3rd, 2017 08:57
pulsing fluff
BlueDays said:
This was a really pleasant read, it made me feel happy and calm. I related it to my children and niece with their soft baby features. I imagined them being visited by a beautiful sleep angel who combed their hair and sent them off to an amazing dreamland thus giving me peace and the ability to drift off myself. Beautiful.
September 3rd, 2017 08:52
BlueDays said:
This was a really pleasant read, it made me feel happy and calm. I related it to my children and niece with their soft baby features. I imagined them being visited by a beautiful sleep angel who combed their hair and sent them off to an amazing dreamland thus giving me peace and the ability to drift off myself. Beautiful.
September 3rd, 2017 08:52
woman
Noah said:
I enjoyed the diction and syntax in this. As well as the rhyming. Lovely write.
September 3rd, 2017 01:06
Noah said:
I enjoyed the diction and syntax in this. As well as the rhyming. Lovely write.
September 3rd, 2017 01:06
pictures
malubotelho said:
I love ❤️ this DA. Your poem is so beautiful and the music just stunning. Love you playing your sax. Awesome. More please.
September 2nd, 2017 16:56
malubotelho said:
I love ❤️ this DA. Your poem is so beautiful and the music just stunning. Love you playing your sax. Awesome. More please.
September 2nd, 2017 16:56
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