Comments received on poems by dusk arising
somehow something
Christina8 said:
A great poem. So true to life, so relatable! When you have a relationship you need that glue for when things get shaken up. Awesome!
October 18th, 2017 06:19
Christina8 said:
A great poem. So true to life, so relatable! When you have a relationship you need that glue for when things get shaken up. Awesome!
October 18th, 2017 06:19
tide
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful metaphor of love now past, dusk! You paint the scene well in this write.
October 6th, 2017 16:23
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful metaphor of love now past, dusk! You paint the scene well in this write.
October 6th, 2017 16:23
tide
Fay Slimm. said:
So vividly portrayed the change autumn brings to both tide and shore - love the imagery you chose to bring other changes to mind which affects our lives. Thanks for sharing with us again DA.
October 6th, 2017 11:18
Fay Slimm. said:
So vividly portrayed the change autumn brings to both tide and shore - love the imagery you chose to bring other changes to mind which affects our lives. Thanks for sharing with us again DA.
October 6th, 2017 11:18
tide
malubotelho said:
This is beautiful and very poetic. Love the metaphor used to describe a relationship that only left marks. Lovely. Nice to see a post from you.
October 6th, 2017 10:38
malubotelho said:
This is beautiful and very poetic. Love the metaphor used to describe a relationship that only left marks. Lovely. Nice to see a post from you.
October 6th, 2017 10:38
Storm
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderful write, I was with you all the way, even though I don\'t swim, did the treasure fall from your dream.
Into favourites with this one.
September 25th, 2017 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderful write, I was with you all the way, even though I don\'t swim, did the treasure fall from your dream.
Into favourites with this one.
September 25th, 2017 00:19
Storm
malubotelho said:
You\'ve got me here. I was all about your tale entangled with you and Graciana trying to figure out the ending and there you come with the alarm clock. Oh no! Go back to sleep and write the end. Nice writing Dusk.
September 24th, 2017 16:35
malubotelho said:
You\'ve got me here. I was all about your tale entangled with you and Graciana trying to figure out the ending and there you come with the alarm clock. Oh no! Go back to sleep and write the end. Nice writing Dusk.
September 24th, 2017 16:35
Storm
Christina8 said:
Excellent writing! The ending was unexpected for sure. Great job dusk!
September 24th, 2017 09:33
Christina8 said:
Excellent writing! The ending was unexpected for sure. Great job dusk!
September 24th, 2017 09:33
Storm
Michael Edwards said:
Fabulous storey with a great ending - nice one dusk.
September 24th, 2017 07:37
Michael Edwards said:
Fabulous storey with a great ending - nice one dusk.
September 24th, 2017 07:37
Storm
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh - what a compelling tale and what a surprise ending in that final line - - a verse to set my Sunday read off to a flying start my friend. Loud applause for this well-told and exciting tale of the sea.
September 24th, 2017 05:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh - what a compelling tale and what a surprise ending in that final line - - a verse to set my Sunday read off to a flying start my friend. Loud applause for this well-told and exciting tale of the sea.
September 24th, 2017 05:40
colours
Louis Gibbs said:
What greater \"winnings\" than wisdom? Like your fine poem, dusk!
September 22nd, 2017 15:57
Louis Gibbs said:
What greater \"winnings\" than wisdom? Like your fine poem, dusk!
September 22nd, 2017 15:57
colours
malubotelho said:
Awesome writing Dusk. Ageing like everything brings good and bad. Less sleep, more thoughts, sometimes more weight. More wisdom, less stress. A different way of feeling happy. I\'m getting there.
September 22nd, 2017 10:00
malubotelho said:
Awesome writing Dusk. Ageing like everything brings good and bad. Less sleep, more thoughts, sometimes more weight. More wisdom, less stress. A different way of feeling happy. I\'m getting there.
September 22nd, 2017 10:00
colours
Christina8 said:
I loved your poem. I\'m still in my thirties so I can\'t speak about aging, really, but I wanted you to know that I read your poem and I enjoyed it.
September 22nd, 2017 09:30
Christina8 said:
I loved your poem. I\'m still in my thirties so I can\'t speak about aging, really, but I wanted you to know that I read your poem and I enjoyed it.
September 22nd, 2017 09:30
colours
orchidee said:
Good write dusk. Come on now, we are all 21! heehee.
September 22nd, 2017 08:10
orchidee said:
Good write dusk. Come on now, we are all 21! heehee.
September 22nd, 2017 08:10
colours
Mugsdaddy said:
Who knew in our ignorance of youth as we race ahead to reach those so important Milestones of becoming a teenager, learning to drive, being able to drink and finally calling ourselves adults we\'re all just minor victories in a race that none of us want to be first to cross the finish line .
Mugsdaddy
September 22nd, 2017 07:25
Mugsdaddy said:
Who knew in our ignorance of youth as we race ahead to reach those so important Milestones of becoming a teenager, learning to drive, being able to drink and finally calling ourselves adults we\'re all just minor victories in a race that none of us want to be first to cross the finish line .
Mugsdaddy
September 22nd, 2017 07:25
colours
Fay Slimm. said:
A poignant read which applies to everyone over a certain stage in life. \"Colours of Yesterdays\" could become a poem in itself D.
September 22nd, 2017 04:50
Fay Slimm. said:
A poignant read which applies to everyone over a certain stage in life. \"Colours of Yesterdays\" could become a poem in itself D.
September 22nd, 2017 04:50
tower
myself and me said:
You sit on the windowsill gazing, created such a great poem with a tale. What kind of genius are you?
September 16th, 2017 17:32
myself and me said:
You sit on the windowsill gazing, created such a great poem with a tale. What kind of genius are you?
September 16th, 2017 17:32
quench
arazimus said:
You paint a wonderful picture in this one, I can see the world you have created in 4K 😀 Keep up this wonderful art I enjoy it very much
September 16th, 2017 13:18
arazimus said:
You paint a wonderful picture in this one, I can see the world you have created in 4K 😀 Keep up this wonderful art I enjoy it very much
September 16th, 2017 13:18
pictures
arazimus said:
Great poem, great meaning , I can feel this, thank you
September 16th, 2017 13:07
arazimus said:
Great poem, great meaning , I can feel this, thank you
September 16th, 2017 13:07
thoughts on time
arazimus said:
Time to show the bleeding heart of a poet,
Great line. time will tell , our lives revealed,I fear like u the world has more time than love, maybe with enough time the bleeding hearts can change the world but time WILL tell. Until then keep writing poet , great read my frnd
September 16th, 2017 12:50
arazimus said:
Time to show the bleeding heart of a poet,
Great line. time will tell , our lives revealed,I fear like u the world has more time than love, maybe with enough time the bleeding hearts can change the world but time WILL tell. Until then keep writing poet , great read my frnd
September 16th, 2017 12:50
tower
Fay Slimm. said:
A mighty find Saturday tale with a twist methinks in that minstrel\'s cadence. Magical read.
September 16th, 2017 11:10
Fay Slimm. said:
A mighty find Saturday tale with a twist methinks in that minstrel\'s cadence. Magical read.
September 16th, 2017 11:10
tower
Michael Edwards said:
I am sure he will be smelling of roses - just hope he took the fungal spray with him - my roses are covered in black spot at the moment :) :) Great write dusk
September 16th, 2017 01:12
Michael Edwards said:
I am sure he will be smelling of roses - just hope he took the fungal spray with him - my roses are covered in black spot at the moment :) :) Great write dusk
September 16th, 2017 01:12
tower
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may the knight come up smelling of roses.
September 16th, 2017 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may the knight come up smelling of roses.
September 16th, 2017 01:06
Kat and Santita all at sea
Seek said:
This is masterful writing and sumptuous humor.
September 16th, 2017 00:16
Seek said:
This is masterful writing and sumptuous humor.
September 16th, 2017 00:16
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