Comments received on poems by dusk arising
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Goldfinch60 said:
Dawn is so beautiful in our lives d a and each new one shows us another wonderful day.
Andy
December 22nd, 2021 16:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Dawn is so beautiful in our lives d a and each new one shows us another wonderful day.
Andy
December 22nd, 2021 16:25
velvet
Neville said:
my guess is we were looking up at the very same sky & maybe, even at the very same time ................ twas glorious ....................................... N
December 22nd, 2021 11:17
Neville said:
my guess is we were looking up at the very same sky & maybe, even at the very same time ................ twas glorious ....................................... N
December 22nd, 2021 11:17
velvet
woundedheart said:
Morning has broken indeed within this wonderfully colourful poem you capture both the scene and the readers attention, beautiful. 👏
December 22nd, 2021 07:17
woundedheart said:
Morning has broken indeed within this wonderfully colourful poem you capture both the scene and the readers attention, beautiful. 👏
December 22nd, 2021 07:17
velvet
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely poem , dusk 🙂🙂 very nicely expressed
December 22nd, 2021 06:03
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely poem , dusk 🙂🙂 very nicely expressed
December 22nd, 2021 06:03
still waters
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The changing situational phrases for lack of a better description here are literally a motion picture! You story telling is impeccable dear writer. An outstanding piece dear writer.
December 21st, 2021 15:38
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The changing situational phrases for lack of a better description here are literally a motion picture! You story telling is impeccable dear writer. An outstanding piece dear writer.
December 21st, 2021 15:38
still waters
MDStone said:
Dusk, you are certainly one of my most favorite poets to read on this site. Thanks for sharing with us.
December 21st, 2021 12:46
MDStone said:
Dusk, you are certainly one of my most favorite poets to read on this site. Thanks for sharing with us.
December 21st, 2021 12:46
still waters
L. B. Mek said:
\'that\'s exactly it!\'
it\'s all
about those bite sized, treats
in life...
imbued with so much warmth
a great write, thanks Dusk
December 21st, 2021 05:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'that\'s exactly it!\'
it\'s all
about those bite sized, treats
in life...
imbued with so much warmth
a great write, thanks Dusk
December 21st, 2021 05:41
still waters
woundedheart said:
The loss of the physical can never erase the love or the happy memories and the way you speak of them shows such a depth of connection I\'m sure shes never truly far from you. This is a very touching and heart warming poem my friend.☺
December 21st, 2021 04:48
woundedheart said:
The loss of the physical can never erase the love or the happy memories and the way you speak of them shows such a depth of connection I\'m sure shes never truly far from you. This is a very touching and heart warming poem my friend.☺
December 21st, 2021 04:48
still waters
Neville said:
Several things immediately sprung to mind upon my first reading ..
the opening lines brought a whiff of 10cc so thanks for the journey ..
then the pace picked up and my heart almost missed a clunk .. I was sitting here last night writing very much along similar lines (I shall send em to ya)
then having recovered, the rest was plain sailing and so very pleasantly so ..
until I got caught unawares by the undercurrent & ensuing riptide that made me think WOW .. this guy is so very darned good at this game ... Respect & much of it DA ... N
December 21st, 2021 03:35
Neville said:
Several things immediately sprung to mind upon my first reading ..
the opening lines brought a whiff of 10cc so thanks for the journey ..
then the pace picked up and my heart almost missed a clunk .. I was sitting here last night writing very much along similar lines (I shall send em to ya)
then having recovered, the rest was plain sailing and so very pleasantly so ..
until I got caught unawares by the undercurrent & ensuing riptide that made me think WOW .. this guy is so very darned good at this game ... Respect & much of it DA ... N
December 21st, 2021 03:35
still waters
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words d a and so well written.
Enjoy that ice cream with the grandchildren.
Andy
December 21st, 2021 02:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words d a and so well written.
Enjoy that ice cream with the grandchildren.
Andy
December 21st, 2021 02:38
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Goldfinch60 said:
Life does go on and I am sure yours will go on for a long time yet.
Andy
December 21st, 2021 02:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Life does go on and I am sure yours will go on for a long time yet.
Andy
December 21st, 2021 02:32
still waters
Coyote said:
This brought me to tears dusk and that\'s not an easy thing to do. A very moving and emotional write. LOVED it🙂
December 21st, 2021 00:42
Coyote said:
This brought me to tears dusk and that\'s not an easy thing to do. A very moving and emotional write. LOVED it🙂
December 21st, 2021 00:42
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Fay Slimm. said:
Such a heart-moving read Dusk.The power of metaphor in this poetic gem is second to none - a favourite with me for sure my friend.
December 20th, 2021 12:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a heart-moving read Dusk.The power of metaphor in this poetic gem is second to none - a favourite with me for sure my friend.
December 20th, 2021 12:19
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jarcher54 said:
A delicately ferocious and unforgettable title.
December 20th, 2021 11:17
jarcher54 said:
A delicately ferocious and unforgettable title.
December 20th, 2021 11:17
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spilleronsheet said:
Glad your muse came back
I wonder what if it’s gone
I was thinking about your situation
Alas my muse gone
Without muse does one feel so empty ?
Maybe upon this I can write a poetry
Welcome back dear Dusk
Your back with a bang
Wonderful imagery
And the thought life goes on
Hmm
It has to
Right?
Else we would be sleeping in a grave
December 20th, 2021 11:08
spilleronsheet said:
Glad your muse came back
I wonder what if it’s gone
I was thinking about your situation
Alas my muse gone
Without muse does one feel so empty ?
Maybe upon this I can write a poetry
Welcome back dear Dusk
Your back with a bang
Wonderful imagery
And the thought life goes on
Hmm
It has to
Right?
Else we would be sleeping in a grave
December 20th, 2021 11:08
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woundedheart said:
Does life go on has a double edge as in after a misfortune can we simply move forward or is there an after life, either way we perceive your poem I would like to believe the answer is always yes
December 20th, 2021 10:52
woundedheart said:
Does life go on has a double edge as in after a misfortune can we simply move forward or is there an after life, either way we perceive your poem I would like to believe the answer is always yes
December 20th, 2021 10:52
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kitty the naughty poet said:
This is fantastic and beautiful all rolled into one well done dusk I hope your muse stays... you inspire
December 20th, 2021 09:55
kitty the naughty poet said:
This is fantastic and beautiful all rolled into one well done dusk I hope your muse stays... you inspire
December 20th, 2021 09:55
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Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I can see she has returned
Great writing , dusk 🙂 I hope things have somehow improved for you .
I do not feel like writing recently … maybe il write a poem inspired by another film.. when I feel like it
It’s difficult isn’t it … to make ourselves write sometimes and sometimes we feel in completely the wrong place
December 20th, 2021 09:43
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I can see she has returned
Great writing , dusk 🙂 I hope things have somehow improved for you .
I do not feel like writing recently … maybe il write a poem inspired by another film.. when I feel like it
It’s difficult isn’t it … to make ourselves write sometimes and sometimes we feel in completely the wrong place
December 20th, 2021 09:43
birth of a poet No2 (revised)
jarcher54 said:
The simplicity of the poem reflects the speaker\'s purported lack of artifice and expertise. But of course only an expert could have penned this!
December 20th, 2021 02:28
jarcher54 said:
The simplicity of the poem reflects the speaker\'s purported lack of artifice and expertise. But of course only an expert could have penned this!
December 20th, 2021 02:28
birth of a poet No2 (revised)
Paul Bell said:
Just that little seed, and a word become more words and a page is born.
December 19th, 2021 06:14
Paul Bell said:
Just that little seed, and a word become more words and a page is born.
December 19th, 2021 06:14
birth of a poet No2 (revised)
Rozina said:
Yes that\'s exactly how it is, from a word or a thought or a sound or a vision....the seed. Beautifully said.
December 19th, 2021 03:50
Rozina said:
Yes that\'s exactly how it is, from a word or a thought or a sound or a vision....the seed. Beautifully said.
December 19th, 2021 03:50
birth of a poet No2 (revised)
spilleronsheet said:
Many shall resonate
But I can’t resist to relate more to such fine lines you store
December 19th, 2021 03:42
spilleronsheet said:
Many shall resonate
But I can’t resist to relate more to such fine lines you store
December 19th, 2021 03:42
the fogs of jayne
Rozina said:
I haven’t heard of this eerie tale before. It’s fascinating. Will read up on this. Thank you.
December 18th, 2021 18:20
Rozina said:
I haven’t heard of this eerie tale before. It’s fascinating. Will read up on this. Thank you.
December 18th, 2021 18:20
the fogs of jayne
spilleronsheet said:
Ohhh
A lot many takes surround the lighthouse
And this is one of the finest that I have heard
Weaved lyrically the Story of lighthouse and its ghost…
December 18th, 2021 02:09
spilleronsheet said:
Ohhh
A lot many takes surround the lighthouse
And this is one of the finest that I have heard
Weaved lyrically the Story of lighthouse and its ghost…
December 18th, 2021 02:09
turn back the clock
Goldfinch60 said:
If we turned back the clock and did different things we would be in a different place and not in the wonderful life that I know that you and I can look back on d a.
Andy
December 18th, 2021 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
If we turned back the clock and did different things we would be in a different place and not in the wonderful life that I know that you and I can look back on d a.
Andy
December 18th, 2021 01:38
turn back the clock
Rozina said:
Wow very thought provoking poem. Sometimes I think \'if only I had not said or done this\' but it\'s a pointless exercise. Just have to move forward and make the most of every day. Thank you.
December 17th, 2021 20:51
Rozina said:
Wow very thought provoking poem. Sometimes I think \'if only I had not said or done this\' but it\'s a pointless exercise. Just have to move forward and make the most of every day. Thank you.
December 17th, 2021 20:51
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