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Coyote said:

Wow! This is really superb Dusk. The rhyming is exquisite🙂

December 17th, 2021 17:18

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Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

A lovely well expressed poem , dusk 🙂 we’re lucky if we have a lot of good memories .. some people don’t , I know I have a lot more sad memories than positive ones and that pains me ( I wish I could turn back the clock sometimes and have all those things I should have had and missed out on

I really like your poem tho ..

December 17th, 2021 09:31

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L. B. Mek said:

simply therapeutic, to read
a wonderful gift, thank you Dusk

December 17th, 2021 06:14

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spilleronsheet said:

The heart’s greatest desire
Which my mind rants on and on
I wish if I could turn back the clock
That’s one of my fantasy you spoke
It’s not unscientific but not yet practical
Speaking of wormholes in space which can make it possible yet it’s not possible
Only if I could turn back the clock to not make those mistakes
Loved these lines of yours :
“ a once aspiring achiever
. became sardonic disbeliever
. spiritually enriched “
Maybe I am a believer of those lines
Well penned dear Dusk
Though we can’t turn back the clock of time


December 17th, 2021 05:54

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Rozina said:

Such beautiful lines expressed in this poem. Thank you for sharing.

December 16th, 2021 19:52

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Coyote said:

Really love this one Dusk, particularly the final Stanza. I can so relate. Very well done my friend🙂

December 16th, 2021 13:36

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woundedheart said:

Beautiful the inner self requiring release not through anger or tears but by beautifully presented poetry, 👏 a wonderful piece of self preservation to exorcise one\'s own daemons.

December 16th, 2021 03:31

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orchidee said:

Good write dusk. I never noticed that verve and lust when I wrote my poetry. You found it out when you read my poems! lol.

December 16th, 2021 03:14

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spilleronsheet said:

So beautiful
If love could be written
This is the finest
So emotive and so warm
The closing lines were just epic
So well the good was so felt and it’s silence made a great noise
A bug clap dear Dusk

December 16th, 2021 02:07

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Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Great writing , dusk 🙂🙂 really like this poem .,

I especially like these lines

but your pain your colours
your verve and lust
overpowers how I write

And yes , I like how you mention opening the shelf

December 16th, 2021 00:52

what makes a poet
Poetic Dan said:

That be true than true and no poet worthy than you in my hall of fame! To keep on burning that eternal flame..

Thank you.

December 15th, 2021 14:06

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Michael Edwards said:

It\'s a good \'un and certainly true of my work when I\'m wearing my serious hat (which isn\'t that often theses days).

December 15th, 2021 11:21

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Vamsi Sudha said:

Dear Dusk,

Today you really described the dusk of a poet\'s life. It really touched me for sure...Thanks Dusk !!

December 15th, 2021 09:36

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Goldfinch60 said:

So very true d a, poets must write down their inner feelings.

Andy

December 15th, 2021 02:49

what are we?
Rozina said:

Just today the local newspaper reported a 5 year old boy was killed by his mother and stepfather. It seems to be more frequent recently. Is this evil a worldwide phenomenon?

December 15th, 2021 01:34