Comments received on poems by dusk arising
though tears
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - -Dusk how I relate to your words today. Tears are a gift for calming emotions so poets can express each chosen subject more deeply --- life\'s challenges can evoke need of weeping and your poem shows how strength is achieved when we learn the wisdom of healing by means of tears. Thank you for sharing it dear friend.
December 27th, 2021 03:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - -Dusk how I relate to your words today. Tears are a gift for calming emotions so poets can express each chosen subject more deeply --- life\'s challenges can evoke need of weeping and your poem shows how strength is achieved when we learn the wisdom of healing by means of tears. Thank you for sharing it dear friend.
December 27th, 2021 03:42
though tears
Poetic Dan said:
Yes and shown me I am my savoury as I feel many become there own. This is why home is a feeling not something you own!
Thank you my friend
I hope all is well your end.
December 27th, 2021 03:36
Poetic Dan said:
Yes and shown me I am my savoury as I feel many become there own. This is why home is a feeling not something you own!
Thank you my friend
I hope all is well your end.
December 27th, 2021 03:36
though tears
Crowns4Christ said:
I can feel your emotion friend, and am crying along with y.
December 27th, 2021 02:44
Crowns4Christ said:
I can feel your emotion friend, and am crying along with y.
December 27th, 2021 02:44
though tears
Goldfinch60 said:
Those tears bring a cleansing to your body as they are transformed to words.
Andy
December 27th, 2021 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Those tears bring a cleansing to your body as they are transformed to words.
Andy
December 27th, 2021 02:06
though tears
Lauraš» said:
DA,
I āhearā you loud and clear. I empathize with your shared and shed emotions. Faith and courage are my companions these days.
Thank you for sharing, my dear poet.
Lauraš»
December 27th, 2021 01:53
Lauraš» said:
DA,
I āhearā you loud and clear. I empathize with your shared and shed emotions. Faith and courage are my companions these days.
Thank you for sharing, my dear poet.
Lauraš»
December 27th, 2021 01:53
though tears
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dusk !! let the tears flow, and be devoid of the heavy emotion..
Good one !!
December 27th, 2021 01:20
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dusk !! let the tears flow, and be devoid of the heavy emotion..
Good one !!
December 27th, 2021 01:20
blackness of night
Neville said:
Simply splendid DA .., my bag entirely sir & hereās to many more ššš·
December 26th, 2021 07:11
Neville said:
Simply splendid DA .., my bag entirely sir & hereās to many more ššš·
December 26th, 2021 07:11
blackness of night
Goldfinch60 said:
As you know d a, that light is always there for us all.
Alarm clock? An alarm clock - blimey that is in the last century for me. LOL
Andy
December 26th, 2021 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
As you know d a, that light is always there for us all.
Alarm clock? An alarm clock - blimey that is in the last century for me. LOL
Andy
December 26th, 2021 01:33
blackness of night
spilleronsheet said:
Itās a vibe of realisation
Happy for the breathe the lungs carry
Merry Christmas dear Dusk
December 25th, 2021 11:29
spilleronsheet said:
Itās a vibe of realisation
Happy for the breathe the lungs carry
Merry Christmas dear Dusk
December 25th, 2021 11:29
blackness of night
woundedheart said:
Thank the Lord for wake up calls, nice Xmas poem āŗ
December 25th, 2021 09:03
woundedheart said:
Thank the Lord for wake up calls, nice Xmas poem āŗ
December 25th, 2021 09:03
blackness of night
Draven said:
Finally something other than tinsel! Nice write
December 25th, 2021 08:01
Draven said:
Finally something other than tinsel! Nice write
December 25th, 2021 08:01
a taste to forget
Goldfinch60 said:
Your mind will return soon and all will be wonderful d a.
Andy
December 24th, 2021 15:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Your mind will return soon and all will be wonderful d a.
Andy
December 24th, 2021 15:41
a taste to forget
spilleronsheet said:
Dear Dusk
No words can reduce the pains that you went through
Still I would like to say, your warrior
With so much pain engulfed your pen radiates hope, strength and gives the vibe to fight the dark pains and the difficult days
With great insights, you make us look at world with opportunities
I learn a lot from the poetic words you craft
Sir your work is exemplary and no waste of space
Such refinement can never be compared
Thanks for making us read to such deep meanings and beautiful insights
The true reality that world lives in
And teaching us the word āgratitudeā
I canāt imagine how tough it is to face such harsh pains
Big cheers from my side
You have overcome the pains in past
And you will do it again
Your a winner sir
December 24th, 2021 08:45
spilleronsheet said:
Dear Dusk
No words can reduce the pains that you went through
Still I would like to say, your warrior
With so much pain engulfed your pen radiates hope, strength and gives the vibe to fight the dark pains and the difficult days
With great insights, you make us look at world with opportunities
I learn a lot from the poetic words you craft
Sir your work is exemplary and no waste of space
Such refinement can never be compared
Thanks for making us read to such deep meanings and beautiful insights
The true reality that world lives in
And teaching us the word āgratitudeā
I canāt imagine how tough it is to face such harsh pains
Big cheers from my side
You have overcome the pains in past
And you will do it again
Your a winner sir
December 24th, 2021 08:45
a taste to forget
L. B. Mek said:
I have no words, to appease or attempt to ease the suffering
you\'re fighting through, dear Poet
but if I may, let me remind you
of all the comments and praise
your Poetry, has gifted you
this year,
words of thanks, for sharing
your insight and wisdom
and helping, so many
glean a little more understanding
about life
or giving them, lifeline that escape
even for just a few, treasured minutes
lost, engrossed
in your poetic genius..
(so no, I refute your last line
wholeheartedly
as a \'waste of space\', wouldn\'t
be deserving of all the love you receive!)
Stay strong, dear Poet
in those Timeless words
of Dylan Thomas:
\'Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Though wise men at their end know dark is right,
Because their words had forked no lightning they
Do not go gentle into that good night.\'
December 24th, 2021 06:12
L. B. Mek said:
I have no words, to appease or attempt to ease the suffering
you\'re fighting through, dear Poet
but if I may, let me remind you
of all the comments and praise
your Poetry, has gifted you
this year,
words of thanks, for sharing
your insight and wisdom
and helping, so many
glean a little more understanding
about life
or giving them, lifeline that escape
even for just a few, treasured minutes
lost, engrossed
in your poetic genius..
(so no, I refute your last line
wholeheartedly
as a \'waste of space\', wouldn\'t
be deserving of all the love you receive!)
Stay strong, dear Poet
in those Timeless words
of Dylan Thomas:
\'Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Though wise men at their end know dark is right,
Because their words had forked no lightning they
Do not go gentle into that good night.\'
December 24th, 2021 06:12
a taste to forget
woundedheart said:
My father is going through this right now so found this piece very touching and heart wrenching, you captured this wonderfully. Merry Christmas š
December 24th, 2021 05:33
woundedheart said:
My father is going through this right now so found this piece very touching and heart wrenching, you captured this wonderfully. Merry Christmas š
December 24th, 2021 05:33
a taste to forget
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Iām sorry you had to go through that. And that your having to go through chemo again ()
December 24th, 2021 04:04
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Iām sorry you had to go through that. And that your having to go through chemo again ()
December 24th, 2021 04:04
a taste to forget
Crowns4Christ said:
Why did you need chemotherapy,if you don\'t mind my asking
Cancer has taken hold of my family too
December 24th, 2021 03:58
Crowns4Christ said:
Why did you need chemotherapy,if you don\'t mind my asking
Cancer has taken hold of my family too
December 24th, 2021 03:58
a taste to forget
Crowns4Christ said:
You are not a waste of space dus,k,your work is a welcome read anytime
December 24th, 2021 03:56
Crowns4Christ said:
You are not a waste of space dus,k,your work is a welcome read anytime
December 24th, 2021 03:56
torn but not forgotten
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words d a and so true for many in this world.
Andy
December 24th, 2021 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words d a and so true for many in this world.
Andy
December 24th, 2021 01:50
velvet
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This write drips poetic excellence DA. A charming work of art very vivid, rich, and colourful! Thank you for sharing. šš¼
December 23rd, 2021 14:08
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This write drips poetic excellence DA. A charming work of art very vivid, rich, and colourful! Thank you for sharing. šš¼
December 23rd, 2021 14:08
torn but not forgotten
Neville said:
well worthy of a re-post mate ... might I suggest an annual airing ........... N
December 23rd, 2021 14:07
Neville said:
well worthy of a re-post mate ... might I suggest an annual airing ........... N
December 23rd, 2021 14:07
torn but not forgotten
Michael Edwards said:
My immediate response: yes I do want to see your pain so I can console you, share your pain and show you that you are not alone - that\'s what true friends are there for. Glad you reposted.
December 23rd, 2021 11:59
Michael Edwards said:
My immediate response: yes I do want to see your pain so I can console you, share your pain and show you that you are not alone - that\'s what true friends are there for. Glad you reposted.
December 23rd, 2021 11:59
torn but not forgotten
L. B. Mek said:
so many people, think
because they know more
or that what they do, is deemed right
they no longer, need
to worry about consideration and kindness
they think
being frustrated, at the world
justifies their obstinate rudeness..
\'but you see, without empathy
for All
we\'re all, just faceless
counted as part of humanity
but devoid, of our individuality\'
Please, please: we must choose
to give each other
an opportunity
to find a better path, in life
and that begins, by realising
we\'re all, All
of us
as broken as each other
its just, our brokenness
doesn\'t show-up
on those judgemental x-ray\'s
most of the time...
(a great write Dusk
I think your conversational style
is a poetic choice that only adds
to point out the commonality
of the problematic topics
your write highlights;
thanks for sharing
and inspiring my little scribbled reply)
December 23rd, 2021 06:06
L. B. Mek said:
so many people, think
because they know more
or that what they do, is deemed right
they no longer, need
to worry about consideration and kindness
they think
being frustrated, at the world
justifies their obstinate rudeness..
\'but you see, without empathy
for All
we\'re all, just faceless
counted as part of humanity
but devoid, of our individuality\'
Please, please: we must choose
to give each other
an opportunity
to find a better path, in life
and that begins, by realising
we\'re all, All
of us
as broken as each other
its just, our brokenness
doesn\'t show-up
on those judgemental x-ray\'s
most of the time...
(a great write Dusk
I think your conversational style
is a poetic choice that only adds
to point out the commonality
of the problematic topics
your write highlights;
thanks for sharing
and inspiring my little scribbled reply)
December 23rd, 2021 06:06
torn but not forgotten
Rozina said:
Yes. Sometimes because we fear we may be judged unfavourably. Sometimes because once we get started so much more will spill out than we meant to say. You have put this together so well.
December 23rd, 2021 04:05
Rozina said:
Yes. Sometimes because we fear we may be judged unfavourably. Sometimes because once we get started so much more will spill out than we meant to say. You have put this together so well.
December 23rd, 2021 04:05
torn but not forgotten
woundedheart said:
We are all but actors upon a stage but must we always stick to the script can\'t we ad lib and say what we truly need to say express ourselves without fear of the critics bad response to our needs and words . Lovely penning my friend. ā
December 23rd, 2021 03:44
woundedheart said:
We are all but actors upon a stage but must we always stick to the script can\'t we ad lib and say what we truly need to say express ourselves without fear of the critics bad response to our needs and words . Lovely penning my friend. ā
December 23rd, 2021 03:44
torn but not forgotten
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
An expressive writing )so sad , when we feel we have to hide ourselves from others , and our pain too .. I guess itās some sort of way to try and protect ourselves , maybe .
To be honest with you , sometimes I really want to talk to others about how I feel ā¦ but honestly I feel some people wonāt want to listen or hear it .. and that they think Iām being too negative , also I donāt want to upset others by talking about my upset . Sometimes my mum asks me how I am and I donāt talk enough about how I feel , because I feel it may upset her and sheās already upset . But yeah , I honestly feel some people just wouldnāt want to listen anyway , so whatās the point ?
On the other hand , I donāt want to talk too much about how I feel incase I make myself more upset .
I guess theirs a balance isnāt there ā¦
December 23rd, 2021 03:30
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
An expressive writing )so sad , when we feel we have to hide ourselves from others , and our pain too .. I guess itās some sort of way to try and protect ourselves , maybe .
To be honest with you , sometimes I really want to talk to others about how I feel ā¦ but honestly I feel some people wonāt want to listen or hear it .. and that they think Iām being too negative , also I donāt want to upset others by talking about my upset . Sometimes my mum asks me how I am and I donāt talk enough about how I feel , because I feel it may upset her and sheās already upset . But yeah , I honestly feel some people just wouldnāt want to listen anyway , so whatās the point ?
On the other hand , I donāt want to talk too much about how I feel incase I make myself more upset .
I guess theirs a balance isnāt there ā¦
December 23rd, 2021 03:30
velvet
Fay Slimm. said:
Simply brilliant these poetic expressions of dawn\'s entrance. One for my list for sure dear Dusk.
December 22nd, 2021 16:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Simply brilliant these poetic expressions of dawn\'s entrance. One for my list for sure dear Dusk.
December 22nd, 2021 16:32
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