Comments received on poems by dusk arising



what makes a poet
spilleronsheet said:

What makes a poet ?
So well described
The poetry was an essence of very poet
So poignant and very touching
Striking the chords of my heart
For me those lines turned personal as those were the emotions that made me a poet
Thanks a lot dear Dusk for this wonderful write
The journey of every poet you gilded in letters of purple


December 15th, 2021 01:02

what are we?
Coyote said:

A very good question you ask in this tragic piece my friend.

December 14th, 2021 15:22

what are we?
woundedheart said:

Bad enough when its a stranger but when its a guardian meant to protect them then it becomes incomprehensible. Very powerful piece in so few words. ✌

December 14th, 2021 12:45

what are we?
spilleronsheet said:

This is insidious
So damn vicious
Sorry for the wrong words of rage used
But it really boils the blood to the core
You sharply pointed the fire humanity in our society
It’s really a pity for the innocent to suffer this

December 14th, 2021 12:28

what are we?
Fay Slimm. said:

No tragedy worse my friend than the murder of innocents - like yourself I am wordless indeed at this recent evil - - where is the help when it is needed from welfare services. ?

December 14th, 2021 11:30

dear reader
Rozina said:

Beautiful words here. Thank you for sharing.

December 14th, 2021 00:06

dear reader
Paul Bell said:

Great piece for a dark and dreary Monday. Faving it cos you made Teddy cry.

December 13th, 2021 12:52

dear reader
woundedheart said:

We touch so many hearts and minds with nothing more than our well chosen words. Beautiful poem my fruend☺

December 13th, 2021 10:30

dear reader
L. B. Mek said:

this scribbles we share
as crumb trails
to the who, we want to be
and the what: we once
hoped for in life...
(such a memorable read
and a theme that\'s relatable
to anyone
whose ever picked up a pen
thanks Dusk)

December 13th, 2021 04:37

dear reader
Saxon Crow said:

A very cool poem to read this morning Dusk. Nice one

December 13th, 2021 03:03

dear reader
orchidee said:

A fine write dusk.

December 13th, 2021 02:54

dear reader
Goldfinch60 said:

That morning light arises in my sight with the words that I read here.

Andy

December 13th, 2021 01:52

come on in
Garth Rakumakoe said:

I love the flow of this piece, so beautifully woven! I love it!

December 12th, 2021 13:12

come on in
Lorna said:

Magical write....

December 12th, 2021 06:35

come on in
SureshG said:

The flame of a love still lingering shall never be extinguished, and in words so poemed will always linger on.

December 11th, 2021 23:24

yeardrops
Quijote said:

Good reflections unfortunately we all leave this world damaged by life having bits of ourselves ripped out

December 11th, 2021 07:16

come on in
woundedheart said:

Beautiful love song such imagery and metaphor interwoven throughout. Very nice

December 11th, 2021 05:39

come on in
spilleronsheet said:

Lady was filled with magic
What a wonderful sight
Is it her beauty or the beholder who holds the beauty
Such beautiful pearls you stringed together dear poet
So poetic and lovestruck
Very romantic dear Dusk

December 11th, 2021 03:42

come on in
orchidee said:

Yes, come on in, said a certain church - the waters lovely. Rich? No problem. Join us and you\'ll soon be broke. Doh!
But not ALL churches.

December 11th, 2021 02:57

come on in
Goldfinch60 said:

Super lovelorn words d a.

Andy

December 11th, 2021 01:43

the only love she held on to
Quijote said:

Nothing quite as peace evoking as a clear sunset. One can appreciate why the ancients applied then to Goddesses like the Phoenician Tanit

December 11th, 2021 01:27

all in a dream
Lorna said:

Images of Titania and Oberon! I want that dream!

December 9th, 2021 14:46

all in a dream
Neville said:



effing brill ....................................... N

December 9th, 2021 12:04

all in a dream
Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine write, Dusk.
Beautiful morning coffee read.

December 9th, 2021 10:51

all in a dream
Rozina said:

I would have loved to have such a dream. Beautiful.

December 9th, 2021 05:48

all in a dream
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!


December 9th, 2021 05:40

all in a dream
woundedheart said:

Unearthly beautiful the shadowy silhouettes that dance across the dreamers subconscious bringing magic and myth to ease and relax the recumbent and bring them home again arrested.

December 9th, 2021 04:13

all in a dream
spilleronsheet said:

So beautiful dear dusk
What an imagery
A night may fall
Wonder what dream it may bring upon all
So well written

December 9th, 2021 03:54

all in a dream
Poetic Dan said:

Thank you for the repost as I\'ve now read 3 times and after a month mental breakdown your words bring me back to others in my world!

Glad to see you still shining my friend

December 9th, 2021 03:35

all in a dream
Saxon Crow said:

Ooo oi likes a wood nymph oi do. Nice earthy magical. Conjuration there Dusk

December 9th, 2021 03:13



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