Comments received on poems by dusk arising
me
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant stuff and perfect first read of the year!
Thank you my friend and may it be a bit less confusing for us all!
January 1st, 2022 11:59
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant stuff and perfect first read of the year!
Thank you my friend and may it be a bit less confusing for us all!
January 1st, 2022 11:59
me
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting writing dusk ) makes me think about our inner child .. and that contrast between how we are perceived to be , and how we feel internally . Sitting in the middle of two different feelings , which one can we be .. which one do we want to be .
A good writing ,. Like it )
January 1st, 2022 08:37
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting writing dusk ) makes me think about our inner child .. and that contrast between how we are perceived to be , and how we feel internally . Sitting in the middle of two different feelings , which one can we be .. which one do we want to be .
A good writing ,. Like it )
January 1st, 2022 08:37
destiny
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words d a, but in my life I know that light will always be there for me, that is my destiny.
Andy
January 1st, 2022 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words d a, but in my life I know that light will always be there for me, that is my destiny.
Andy
January 1st, 2022 01:53
destiny
SureshG said:
Those who walk the path of peace, with not a hint to defraud, their inner light illuminates brightly never to falter or lead astray.
The words you so poetically displayed to remain warm by that inner light.
December 31st, 2021 10:09
SureshG said:
Those who walk the path of peace, with not a hint to defraud, their inner light illuminates brightly never to falter or lead astray.
The words you so poetically displayed to remain warm by that inner light.
December 31st, 2021 10:09
destiny
Neville said:
No matter how or which way I look at it, I can\'t fault this .. Sentiments perfectly poemed and likewise pinned to the page ....................... N
December 31st, 2021 09:22
Neville said:
No matter how or which way I look at it, I can\'t fault this .. Sentiments perfectly poemed and likewise pinned to the page ....................... N
December 31st, 2021 09:22
destiny
Fay Slimm. said:
Excellent advice to read over again and digest - -thanks dear Dusk for another poetic gem and into my list it goes.
December 31st, 2021 06:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Excellent advice to read over again and digest - -thanks dear Dusk for another poetic gem and into my list it goes.
December 31st, 2021 06:19
destiny
woundedheart said:
All we can do is move forward and not dwell on past failures 2022 a brand new start a blank page lets all write a brighter future for ourselves.☺
December 31st, 2021 05:08
woundedheart said:
All we can do is move forward and not dwell on past failures 2022 a brand new start a blank page lets all write a brighter future for ourselves.☺
December 31st, 2021 05:08
destiny
Paul Bell said:
Great message.
There are many paths out there, but there\'s only yours to follow.
December 31st, 2021 04:49
Paul Bell said:
Great message.
There are many paths out there, but there\'s only yours to follow.
December 31st, 2021 04:49
destiny
Rozina said:
An excellent positive message. It highlights integrity.
December 31st, 2021 03:57
Rozina said:
An excellent positive message. It highlights integrity.
December 31st, 2021 03:57
destiny
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Brilliant poem , dusk 🙂🙂 follow our light and listen to ourselves .. this really makes me think of our higher selves ,
I like your words
December 31st, 2021 03:20
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Brilliant poem , dusk 🙂🙂 follow our light and listen to ourselves .. this really makes me think of our higher selves ,
I like your words
December 31st, 2021 03:20
killing our children from space
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words d a.
Andy
December 31st, 2021 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words d a.
Andy
December 31st, 2021 01:31
killing our children from space
SureshG said:
Knowledge alone is not enough to absolve mankind form his destructive nature
December 30th, 2021 10:11
SureshG said:
Knowledge alone is not enough to absolve mankind form his destructive nature
December 30th, 2021 10:11
killing our children from space
spilleronsheet said:
A good satire
I won’t deny
I do look up at universe in awe
But some science don’t know where it might take us to
December 30th, 2021 08:51
spilleronsheet said:
A good satire
I won’t deny
I do look up at universe in awe
But some science don’t know where it might take us to
December 30th, 2021 08:51
killing our children from space
orchidee said:
Well, E.T.\'s gone home, so he\'s not bothered about it!
December 30th, 2021 06:29
orchidee said:
Well, E.T.\'s gone home, so he\'s not bothered about it!
December 30th, 2021 06:29
the educators
Neville said:
I take my hat off to you DA .. there are some words simply crying to be let out .. and these are a fine example of that precise principle ...................... N
December 30th, 2021 05:09
Neville said:
I take my hat off to you DA .. there are some words simply crying to be let out .. and these are a fine example of that precise principle ...................... N
December 30th, 2021 05:09
the educators
Rozina said:
There is always something to learn. How others cope with problems with their courage and never giving up values. With humility and integrity. This message in your poem is a very important one. Thank you.
December 30th, 2021 01:53
Rozina said:
There is always something to learn. How others cope with problems with their courage and never giving up values. With humility and integrity. This message in your poem is a very important one. Thank you.
December 30th, 2021 01:53
the educators
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true d a, we can all learn from so many differing people and societies.
Andy
December 30th, 2021 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true d a, we can all learn from so many differing people and societies.
Andy
December 30th, 2021 01:35
the educators
Michael Edwards said:
Just so - if only everyone spent more time mixing with others, learning from them and accepting them regardless of any labels or preconceptions we would all be so much richer.
December 29th, 2021 15:12
Michael Edwards said:
Just so - if only everyone spent more time mixing with others, learning from them and accepting them regardless of any labels or preconceptions we would all be so much richer.
December 29th, 2021 15:12
the educators
spilleronsheet said:
A very thought provoking poetry
A need for society to realise
It’s not they are slow
It’s the moron brain of society who are unable to realise such hidden gems
Those who can be crafted as extremely talented souls
Had a classmate who suffered from Dyslexia, he turned out to be a pianist today
They need patience and care
That’s all they require
Very well penned dear Dusk
Always I discover the true essence in your poetry
December 29th, 2021 07:41
spilleronsheet said:
A very thought provoking poetry
A need for society to realise
It’s not they are slow
It’s the moron brain of society who are unable to realise such hidden gems
Those who can be crafted as extremely talented souls
Had a classmate who suffered from Dyslexia, he turned out to be a pianist today
They need patience and care
That’s all they require
Very well penned dear Dusk
Always I discover the true essence in your poetry
December 29th, 2021 07:41
the educators
woundedheart said:
Some believe schizophrenia is merely the ability to see what others can not maybe they are right just because we cannot see something doesn\'t make it any less real I\'ve never seen a whale but i know they are there, as for special needs treat them no differently just givev them more time and love and revel in their laughter as i do with all those i know and care for. Lovely words my friend ☺
December 29th, 2021 04:42
woundedheart said:
Some believe schizophrenia is merely the ability to see what others can not maybe they are right just because we cannot see something doesn\'t make it any less real I\'ve never seen a whale but i know they are there, as for special needs treat them no differently just givev them more time and love and revel in their laughter as i do with all those i know and care for. Lovely words my friend ☺
December 29th, 2021 04:42
the educators
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A good writing , dusk )) people can judge so easily .. but why judge someone who is struggling and hurting in life . These people have needs and wants , and are important .. their not to be judged because their different . Their probably hurting a lot inside of themselves
To be honest I think even those with mental health issues can get judged or feel discriminated against .. treated in a weird way ., and no it isn’t fair at all
December 29th, 2021 04:40
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A good writing , dusk )) people can judge so easily .. but why judge someone who is struggling and hurting in life . These people have needs and wants , and are important .. their not to be judged because their different . Their probably hurting a lot inside of themselves
To be honest I think even those with mental health issues can get judged or feel discriminated against .. treated in a weird way ., and no it isn’t fair at all
December 29th, 2021 04:40
though tears
Neville said:
to place my own thoughts here is but an honour sir & all mine ........................................ N
December 28th, 2021 13:16
Neville said:
to place my own thoughts here is but an honour sir & all mine ........................................ N
December 28th, 2021 13:16
though tears
Paul Bell said:
If you\'re not involved, there\'s no point writing the poem. I think we leave a little in every poem.
December 28th, 2021 11:51
Paul Bell said:
If you\'re not involved, there\'s no point writing the poem. I think we leave a little in every poem.
December 28th, 2021 11:51
though tears
dgrigorian said:
Putting your words on paper helps you heal and understand. It does to me. That is why I write.
December 28th, 2021 03:22
dgrigorian said:
Putting your words on paper helps you heal and understand. It does to me. That is why I write.
December 28th, 2021 03:22
though tears
woundedheart said:
Well lockdown certainly gave us all time to reflect and take a hard look at ourselves and our lives and your poetry has the same power, lovely. ☺
December 27th, 2021 18:02
woundedheart said:
Well lockdown certainly gave us all time to reflect and take a hard look at ourselves and our lives and your poetry has the same power, lovely. ☺
December 27th, 2021 18:02
though tears
spilleronsheet said:
Tears trailed
Lighter are our inner beings
Thanks to encouragement of mps I found a newer me
And healing started with deep wounds touching, resurfacing and then it healed
When others talked about how they could fight their woes
The heart knew it wasn’t alone
Thanks dear Dusk for writing so many beautiful lines
I cherish and feel the pleasure to go through your lovely write with deep insights…
December 27th, 2021 15:46
spilleronsheet said:
Tears trailed
Lighter are our inner beings
Thanks to encouragement of mps I found a newer me
And healing started with deep wounds touching, resurfacing and then it healed
When others talked about how they could fight their woes
The heart knew it wasn’t alone
Thanks dear Dusk for writing so many beautiful lines
I cherish and feel the pleasure to go through your lovely write with deep insights…
December 27th, 2021 15:46
though tears
Rozina said:
Sometimes our tears are inside of us. To be able to release them through poems shared with friends helps to ease the load. Thank you for sharing.
December 27th, 2021 04:02
Rozina said:
Sometimes our tears are inside of us. To be able to release them through poems shared with friends helps to ease the load. Thank you for sharing.
December 27th, 2021 04:02
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