Comments received on poems by dusk arising
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Thekkinkkattil said:
Dear Dusk Love is not something to walk away from.It has its ups and down but our whole existence revolves around it.
January 5th, 2022 05:41
Thekkinkkattil said:
Dear Dusk Love is not something to walk away from.It has its ups and down but our whole existence revolves around it.
January 5th, 2022 05:41
susceptible
L. B. Mek said:
too many people live, estranged
from the very notion of loving
as a required element, in their lives
but
those very same people, are sadly
morosely - quite often, usually
the people with the most love, to give...
(your words, remined me of the lyrics
to one of my favourite songs
by Joshua James:
\'This road has over taught me lessons
About my lonely soul
I am young and getting wiser
Soon I will grow old
Strip my heart from misconceptions
Fill my eyes with greed
Let me make my own convictions
In this endless sea
Of muscle cars
And endless bars
Of shopping centres for the teens
Of our price propane
And crack cocaine
And lovers without love
like me\'
song is titled,
\'Lovers without Love\')
thanks for sharing
such a poignant poem Dusk
your words spoke to those parts
of myself, I keep buried
beneath all my posturing, poetry..
January 5th, 2022 05:18
L. B. Mek said:
too many people live, estranged
from the very notion of loving
as a required element, in their lives
but
those very same people, are sadly
morosely - quite often, usually
the people with the most love, to give...
(your words, remined me of the lyrics
to one of my favourite songs
by Joshua James:
\'This road has over taught me lessons
About my lonely soul
I am young and getting wiser
Soon I will grow old
Strip my heart from misconceptions
Fill my eyes with greed
Let me make my own convictions
In this endless sea
Of muscle cars
And endless bars
Of shopping centres for the teens
Of our price propane
And crack cocaine
And lovers without love
like me\'
song is titled,
\'Lovers without Love\')
thanks for sharing
such a poignant poem Dusk
your words spoke to those parts
of myself, I keep buried
beneath all my posturing, poetry..
January 5th, 2022 05:18
susceptible
Goldfinch60 said:
But if thet true love comes your way d a I am sure you will be so grateful.
Andy
January 5th, 2022 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
But if thet true love comes your way d a I am sure you will be so grateful.
Andy
January 5th, 2022 01:50
the kissing breeze
Goldfinch60 said:
But those words will be there and one day the breeze will bring them back to be heard.
Andy
January 5th, 2022 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
But those words will be there and one day the breeze will bring them back to be heard.
Andy
January 5th, 2022 01:39
the kissing breeze
spilleronsheet said:
Every line spoke an emotion and in unison it amplified
I am just awestruck by these lines…
January 4th, 2022 13:07
spilleronsheet said:
Every line spoke an emotion and in unison it amplified
I am just awestruck by these lines…
January 4th, 2022 13:07
the kissing breeze
Poetic Dan said:
Like trying to talk on the seafront most days!
Fantastic stuff, read 3 times and like said it did get powerful each turn until the waves were back in my face!
January 4th, 2022 11:07
Poetic Dan said:
Like trying to talk on the seafront most days!
Fantastic stuff, read 3 times and like said it did get powerful each turn until the waves were back in my face!
January 4th, 2022 11:07
the kissing breeze
L. B. Mek said:
yup
and just like that
our now\'s, become prisoners
to the whispering winds
of Time and memory...
a wonderfully succinct write, dear Poet
and Happy New Year!
January 4th, 2022 08:35
L. B. Mek said:
yup
and just like that
our now\'s, become prisoners
to the whispering winds
of Time and memory...
a wonderfully succinct write, dear Poet
and Happy New Year!
January 4th, 2022 08:35
pain
Goldfinch60 said:
That thread is made of steel d a and it will only get stronger the more you hang on.
Andy
January 4th, 2022 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
That thread is made of steel d a and it will only get stronger the more you hang on.
Andy
January 4th, 2022 01:33
pain
Rozina said:
Such meaningful lines. Thank you for sharing your feelings in this beautiful poem.
January 4th, 2022 00:09
Rozina said:
Such meaningful lines. Thank you for sharing your feelings in this beautiful poem.
January 4th, 2022 00:09
pain
Laura🌻 said:
DA,
‘learning to love life itself’…
great words…very inspirational.
I especially needed to read this today.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Laura🌻
January 3rd, 2022 12:53
Laura🌻 said:
DA,
‘learning to love life itself’…
great words…very inspirational.
I especially needed to read this today.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Laura🌻
January 3rd, 2022 12:53
pain
Neville said:
what\'s not to like .. & so I bloomin did & very muchly .. ink well spent sir & painfully yours ... Neville
January 3rd, 2022 12:41
Neville said:
what\'s not to like .. & so I bloomin did & very muchly .. ink well spent sir & painfully yours ... Neville
January 3rd, 2022 12:41
pain
Fay Slimm. said:
Heart-tugging these words from the depths of honesty - - \"learning to love life itself\" births peace and beats all the other loves - -- a write that speaks to the soul of this reader dear Dusk.
January 3rd, 2022 10:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Heart-tugging these words from the depths of honesty - - \"learning to love life itself\" births peace and beats all the other loves - -- a write that speaks to the soul of this reader dear Dusk.
January 3rd, 2022 10:43
pain
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
This pulled at my hearts strings dusk😢 Wonderfully penned😉🌟✌️🕊
January 3rd, 2022 09:14
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
This pulled at my hearts strings dusk😢 Wonderfully penned😉🌟✌️🕊
January 3rd, 2022 09:14
pain
spilleronsheet said:
Very heartfelt words
Confined the feels in letters of poetry
So true dear poet
January 3rd, 2022 09:03
spilleronsheet said:
Very heartfelt words
Confined the feels in letters of poetry
So true dear poet
January 3rd, 2022 09:03
pain
Dove said:
Well versed! Poetry definitely is medicine for an aching heart! That is how my journey began, heartbroken!
January 3rd, 2022 08:02
Dove said:
Well versed! Poetry definitely is medicine for an aching heart! That is how my journey began, heartbroken!
January 3rd, 2022 08:02
their world
AuburnScribbler said:
Beautifully put here dusk arising, a clear message presented with a masterful tone.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 3rd, 2022 04:29
AuburnScribbler said:
Beautifully put here dusk arising, a clear message presented with a masterful tone.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 3rd, 2022 04:29
their world
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words d a and so true, we must save the planet.
Andy
January 3rd, 2022 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words d a and so true, we must save the planet.
Andy
January 3rd, 2022 01:24
their world
Rozina said:
Yes it may be too late for some of us but we must try to make it a better future for them. Wholeheartedly agree with you.
January 2nd, 2022 22:18
Rozina said:
Yes it may be too late for some of us but we must try to make it a better future for them. Wholeheartedly agree with you.
January 2nd, 2022 22:18
their world
Michael Edwards said:
Hear hear - I have 6 grandchildren and it\'s their world now.
January 2nd, 2022 15:42
Michael Edwards said:
Hear hear - I have 6 grandchildren and it\'s their world now.
January 2nd, 2022 15:42
their world
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read, Dusk.
I fear sometime we have crossed the turning point. I still write with hope.
January 2nd, 2022 14:38
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read, Dusk.
I fear sometime we have crossed the turning point. I still write with hope.
January 2nd, 2022 14:38
their world
spilleronsheet said:
So thoughtful and so true dear poet
Let’s preserve not because its our inheritance but because we owe it to future generations.
January 2nd, 2022 12:55
spilleronsheet said:
So thoughtful and so true dear poet
Let’s preserve not because its our inheritance but because we owe it to future generations.
January 2nd, 2022 12:55
me
spilleronsheet said:
A brilliant reflection
Beautiful observation
Great going dear poet
January 2nd, 2022 12:51
spilleronsheet said:
A brilliant reflection
Beautiful observation
Great going dear poet
January 2nd, 2022 12:51
their world
Fay Slimm. said:
I second that and muchly dear Dusk - - saving the planet is for more than our lifetime - - our children\'s world is worth all our efforts as time runs out for so many species they may never see.
January 2nd, 2022 10:51
Fay Slimm. said:
I second that and muchly dear Dusk - - saving the planet is for more than our lifetime - - our children\'s world is worth all our efforts as time runs out for so many species they may never see.
January 2nd, 2022 10:51
me
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have these differences within us d a but normally the better ones override the bad ones.
Andy
January 2nd, 2022 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have these differences within us d a but normally the better ones override the bad ones.
Andy
January 2nd, 2022 01:35
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