Comments received on poems by dusk arising
remembering lockdowntown
orchidee said:
\"Vote for cabbages!\" then, as Teddy gives as one suggestion.
January 12th, 2022 06:08
orchidee said:
\"Vote for cabbages!\" then, as Teddy gives as one suggestion.
January 12th, 2022 06:08
remembering lockdowntown
spilleronsheet said:
I hope the days that passed never comes again
May this pandemic rest in peace now, never to return anymore
May it die down after the present variation it got
January 12th, 2022 05:05
spilleronsheet said:
I hope the days that passed never comes again
May this pandemic rest in peace now, never to return anymore
May it die down after the present variation it got
January 12th, 2022 05:05
remembering lockdowntown
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true d a, it seemed to have returned yesterday when I went out for a coffee, very few people around.
Andy
January 12th, 2022 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true d a, it seemed to have returned yesterday when I went out for a coffee, very few people around.
Andy
January 12th, 2022 01:47
emotionless?
Goldfinch60 said:
The despair in the poetry has recently become more telling, is it that people are becoming so low in their lives due to the world problems, especially the covid ones.
We will come out of this as you will d a and life will be good once more.
Andy
January 12th, 2022 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
The despair in the poetry has recently become more telling, is it that people are becoming so low in their lives due to the world problems, especially the covid ones.
We will come out of this as you will d a and life will be good once more.
Andy
January 12th, 2022 01:35
emotionless?
Rozina said:
We are only human. We have good days, bad days. Could be brilliant tomorrow. All the best.
January 12th, 2022 01:25
Rozina said:
We are only human. We have good days, bad days. Could be brilliant tomorrow. All the best.
January 12th, 2022 01:25
remembering lockdowntown
Rozina said:
Many places were ghost towns. Some have resumed this pattern. Others remain opened. I wonder what lies ahead. Your poem reminds me of what it was like for us too last year - frightening.
January 12th, 2022 01:13
Rozina said:
Many places were ghost towns. Some have resumed this pattern. Others remain opened. I wonder what lies ahead. Your poem reminds me of what it was like for us too last year - frightening.
January 12th, 2022 01:13
emotionless?
woundedheart said:
As a sufferer i feel your words and loved your poem my friend ☺
January 11th, 2022 17:12
woundedheart said:
As a sufferer i feel your words and loved your poem my friend ☺
January 11th, 2022 17:12
emotionless?
Paul Bell said:
I\'m a day of the week guy.
Monday- Depressing.
Tuesday- Weird day.
Wednesday- We\'re on the way.
January 11th, 2022 12:14
Paul Bell said:
I\'m a day of the week guy.
Monday- Depressing.
Tuesday- Weird day.
Wednesday- We\'re on the way.
January 11th, 2022 12:14
emotionless?
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Sometimes we just need to pamper our selves. I was reading Teddys reply. I\'m sorry I didn\'t realize. Take a break,have a Kit Kat🤗✌🌟✌🕊
January 11th, 2022 10:49
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Sometimes we just need to pamper our selves. I was reading Teddys reply. I\'m sorry I didn\'t realize. Take a break,have a Kit Kat🤗✌🌟✌🕊
January 11th, 2022 10:49
mind slip
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderful memory shared with brilliant imagery here dusk arising, I truly felt as if I was with you.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 11th, 2022 08:52
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderful memory shared with brilliant imagery here dusk arising, I truly felt as if I was with you.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 11th, 2022 08:52
emotionless?
L. B. Mek said:
anger, is often
the first and easiest of emotions
for us to turn to
especially when experiencing
such unfair
and all-consuming, bleak passages
in our lives
so it\'s ok, to vent a little or agitate others
if it works
to drown-out, that incessant need
for carnage
but, just balance it
with some deeds of kindness
when the opportunity arises
we should never: choose
to let our frustration\'s, hate
warp who we are
in-to some, poisonous existence
that only inflicts pain
on strangers, because its easy
to do so
especially
if we were a decent person, to begin with
that\'s only hurting ourselves, even more
in the end,
dear cherished Poet
and fellow quester of \'right action\'
amongst
life\'s abundance of wrongness...
January 11th, 2022 08:09
L. B. Mek said:
anger, is often
the first and easiest of emotions
for us to turn to
especially when experiencing
such unfair
and all-consuming, bleak passages
in our lives
so it\'s ok, to vent a little or agitate others
if it works
to drown-out, that incessant need
for carnage
but, just balance it
with some deeds of kindness
when the opportunity arises
we should never: choose
to let our frustration\'s, hate
warp who we are
in-to some, poisonous existence
that only inflicts pain
on strangers, because its easy
to do so
especially
if we were a decent person, to begin with
that\'s only hurting ourselves, even more
in the end,
dear cherished Poet
and fellow quester of \'right action\'
amongst
life\'s abundance of wrongness...
January 11th, 2022 08:09
mind slip
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
This brought back some great memories of my grandpas farm🌟🌟🌟Thanks dusk😀✌️🕊
January 10th, 2022 15:56
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
This brought back some great memories of my grandpas farm🌟🌟🌟Thanks dusk😀✌️🕊
January 10th, 2022 15:56
mind slip
spilleronsheet said:
Your memories down the
lane
Made me remember the pond in which ducks waddled
Where i used to go for morning walks
Bak then i was really scared of the ducks
Don’t know why but i was
Thanks dear dusk for sharing such treasured memories
January 10th, 2022 11:49
spilleronsheet said:
Your memories down the
lane
Made me remember the pond in which ducks waddled
Where i used to go for morning walks
Bak then i was really scared of the ducks
Don’t know why but i was
Thanks dear dusk for sharing such treasured memories
January 10th, 2022 11:49
mind slip
woundedheart said:
As we get older we all seem to do this more and more as youth is truly wasted on the young i wanna climb trees and roll down hills again ☺
January 10th, 2022 11:18
woundedheart said:
As we get older we all seem to do this more and more as youth is truly wasted on the young i wanna climb trees and roll down hills again ☺
January 10th, 2022 11:18
soulmate
Caring dove said:
I understand about soulmates and twin flames
A good writing , dusk arising )
January 10th, 2022 08:43
Caring dove said:
I understand about soulmates and twin flames
A good writing , dusk arising )
January 10th, 2022 08:43
mind slip
L. B. Mek said:
\'and to a pond
near the hillside top, where
we discovered newts
common, newts
of camoflaged green speckle
and their larger, black salamander brothers
with pink bellies bespotted in black
learning, enjoying and leaving behind
a boyhood adventure of discovery
just a five minute, mind slip
to a yesterday\'..
(in my second primary school
we had a similar pond
where, I too - left behind
such similar memories
and so, these words of yours
read
especially poignant, to me...)
thank you for sharing, Dusk
a Great read!
January 10th, 2022 08:01
L. B. Mek said:
\'and to a pond
near the hillside top, where
we discovered newts
common, newts
of camoflaged green speckle
and their larger, black salamander brothers
with pink bellies bespotted in black
learning, enjoying and leaving behind
a boyhood adventure of discovery
just a five minute, mind slip
to a yesterday\'..
(in my second primary school
we had a similar pond
where, I too - left behind
such similar memories
and so, these words of yours
read
especially poignant, to me...)
thank you for sharing, Dusk
a Great read!
January 10th, 2022 08:01
mind slip
Eugene S. said:
Crawdaddies & tadpoles here. Thought provoking & nostalgic piece.
January 10th, 2022 04:22
Eugene S. said:
Crawdaddies & tadpoles here. Thought provoking & nostalgic piece.
January 10th, 2022 04:22
soulmate
James Michael said:
Great questions to ask oneself. Love surely is mysterious. Soulmates can be found in many people. Maybe the payback is meaningless as long as you appreciate the experience whether good or bad.
January 6th, 2022 19:19
James Michael said:
Great questions to ask oneself. Love surely is mysterious. Soulmates can be found in many people. Maybe the payback is meaningless as long as you appreciate the experience whether good or bad.
January 6th, 2022 19:19
soulmate
woundedheart said:
The great thing about curves is they add up to a circle allowing us to get a second chance if we are willing to wait others may agree curves also look great on a woman making waiting worth it. Deep poetry today my friend ☺
January 6th, 2022 06:49
woundedheart said:
The great thing about curves is they add up to a circle allowing us to get a second chance if we are willing to wait others may agree curves also look great on a woman making waiting worth it. Deep poetry today my friend ☺
January 6th, 2022 06:49
soulmate
L. B. Mek said:
love the tender tonality and care;
poetic words
that whisper, rather than state
asking
instead of merely assuming
and hoping, and hoping
till that very last line
its not ourselves that caused
the mess, we\'re
just now realising, could have so easily
been our blessing...
(another of your subtle write\'s, dear Poet
thank you for choosing to share, your Brilliant poetic talent!)
January 6th, 2022 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
love the tender tonality and care;
poetic words
that whisper, rather than state
asking
instead of merely assuming
and hoping, and hoping
till that very last line
its not ourselves that caused
the mess, we\'re
just now realising, could have so easily
been our blessing...
(another of your subtle write\'s, dear Poet
thank you for choosing to share, your Brilliant poetic talent!)
January 6th, 2022 05:14
susceptible
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The complexities of a love complex we cannot live with and cannot live without! - I love your depiction!
January 6th, 2022 05:13
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The complexities of a love complex we cannot live with and cannot live without! - I love your depiction!
January 6th, 2022 05:13
soulmate
Fay Slimm. said:
Appropriate and so well scripted questions on this tricky subject dear Dusk - - -perhaps we all do the rounds and learn a bit at the same time - who knows- but what a compelling read this reflection of yours today.
January 6th, 2022 03:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Appropriate and so well scripted questions on this tricky subject dear Dusk - - -perhaps we all do the rounds and learn a bit at the same time - who knows- but what a compelling read this reflection of yours today.
January 6th, 2022 03:26
soulmate
Goldfinch60 said:
That huge learning curve never comes to an end d a, we will continue to learn for infinity.
Andy
January 6th, 2022 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
That huge learning curve never comes to an end d a, we will continue to learn for infinity.
Andy
January 6th, 2022 01:44
soulmate
spilleronsheet said:
Payback for what I deserve…
What a thunderclap
A soulmate may be a matter of fate
A soulmate may be a just a few kilometres away
While I be dozing off in blankets
Not spirited enough to find that mate
So well clasped the meeting if chance encounters
Though I don’t like things to be fated
But it’s one if the things I often use
Totally irony in my own lies
January 6th, 2022 01:24
spilleronsheet said:
Payback for what I deserve…
What a thunderclap
A soulmate may be a matter of fate
A soulmate may be a just a few kilometres away
While I be dozing off in blankets
Not spirited enough to find that mate
So well clasped the meeting if chance encounters
Though I don’t like things to be fated
But it’s one if the things I often use
Totally irony in my own lies
January 6th, 2022 01:24
susceptible
Rozina said:
The very best of luck and good wishes for whatever happens in the future.
January 6th, 2022 01:20
Rozina said:
The very best of luck and good wishes for whatever happens in the future.
January 6th, 2022 01:20
susceptible
spilleronsheet said:
Well Cupid might surprise
Who knows what is love
Just love yourself
A self love is the greatest love
Good one dear dusk
January 5th, 2022 12:18
spilleronsheet said:
Well Cupid might surprise
Who knows what is love
Just love yourself
A self love is the greatest love
Good one dear dusk
January 5th, 2022 12:18
susceptible
Michael Edwards said:
Guess I\'m lucky - I live with the love of my life but should I be left on my own I\'ll never seek another. Just count my blessings.
January 5th, 2022 11:35
Michael Edwards said:
Guess I\'m lucky - I live with the love of my life but should I be left on my own I\'ll never seek another. Just count my blessings.
January 5th, 2022 11:35
susceptible
Poetic Dan said:
Yes my friend I think I get the message in this. If we have felt it all and got stack full of memories why is there need for more, if in 20 years mine was all to fall.
I\'d happily just love nature and wait for the call, after all I was told its more a doing word not a thing called love ;)
January 5th, 2022 06:10
Poetic Dan said:
Yes my friend I think I get the message in this. If we have felt it all and got stack full of memories why is there need for more, if in 20 years mine was all to fall.
I\'d happily just love nature and wait for the call, after all I was told its more a doing word not a thing called love ;)
January 5th, 2022 06:10
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