Comments received on poems by dusk arising
behind the shield
L. B. Mek said:
\'when
I can least of all
afford to be
losing time...
at this time
of life.....\'
how easily your insightful words - seep,
deep: to help resurface those chards of truth we hide far from our minds eye...
a Brilliant write and engaging read my friend,
thank you!
January 12th, 2021 04:19
L. B. Mek said:
\'when
I can least of all
afford to be
losing time...
at this time
of life.....\'
how easily your insightful words - seep,
deep: to help resurface those chards of truth we hide far from our minds eye...
a Brilliant write and engaging read my friend,
thank you!
January 12th, 2021 04:19
behind the shield
Goldfinch60 said:
You know about my days then d a.
At least we have music.
Andy
January 12th, 2021 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
You know about my days then d a.
At least we have music.
Andy
January 12th, 2021 02:02
behind the shield
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Nice job of manipulating MyPoeticSide\'s remarkably tricky formatting options. something I\'m just learning. Shades of e.e. cummings!
January 11th, 2021 21:17
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Nice job of manipulating MyPoeticSide\'s remarkably tricky formatting options. something I\'m just learning. Shades of e.e. cummings!
January 11th, 2021 21:17
behind the shield
Doggerel Dave said:
Who cannot relate to those words? Certainly a couple of contacts I still have in the UK would agree with you - as they returned , weak but relieved, from hospital.
Even here in Oz things fluctuate and there is no doubt that the fear of the virus is ever present...
Take it easy and stay safe (unnecessary advice)
Dave
January 11th, 2021 18:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Who cannot relate to those words? Certainly a couple of contacts I still have in the UK would agree with you - as they returned , weak but relieved, from hospital.
Even here in Oz things fluctuate and there is no doubt that the fear of the virus is ever present...
Take it easy and stay safe (unnecessary advice)
Dave
January 11th, 2021 18:46
behind the shield
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an honest assessment of life behind shields - - keep that ink flowing D.A. - - - time will arrive when freedom\'s sunshine beckons us all outside again.
January 11th, 2021 16:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an honest assessment of life behind shields - - keep that ink flowing D.A. - - - time will arrive when freedom\'s sunshine beckons us all outside again.
January 11th, 2021 16:58
behind the shield
orchidee said:
Will the days seem longer, as the daylight slowly increases now? We\'ve had the \'Shortest Day\'.
January 11th, 2021 15:02
orchidee said:
Will the days seem longer, as the daylight slowly increases now? We\'ve had the \'Shortest Day\'.
January 11th, 2021 15:02
behind the shield
Michael Edwards said:
Think I\'ll join you. if I can find the time to stand up between nodding off. Think I\'ll do a sodoku - or count the leaves on the avocado.Great write.
January 11th, 2021 11:39
Michael Edwards said:
Think I\'ll join you. if I can find the time to stand up between nodding off. Think I\'ll do a sodoku - or count the leaves on the avocado.Great write.
January 11th, 2021 11:39
tomorrow
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
that looming threat must never be forgotten, a timely reminder Dusk
January 8th, 2021 07:33
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
that looming threat must never be forgotten, a timely reminder Dusk
January 8th, 2021 07:33
tomorrow
Fay Slimm. said:
No truer word spoken my friend - - climate change has to be challenged.
January 7th, 2021 10:49
Fay Slimm. said:
No truer word spoken my friend - - climate change has to be challenged.
January 7th, 2021 10:49
pandemic limericks
L. B. Mek said:
\'i\'m fed up with watching too much telly
and feeding junk to a growing belly
i want to get out
where i can roam about
staying home\'s getting awful smelly\'
appreciate your choice to invest and share in a few rhymes to help bring some much needed respite to our tattooed status of frowning hopelessness...
a grounded, insightful, yet delightfully quirky read my friend,
Happy New Year dear Poet!
January 5th, 2021 06:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'i\'m fed up with watching too much telly
and feeding junk to a growing belly
i want to get out
where i can roam about
staying home\'s getting awful smelly\'
appreciate your choice to invest and share in a few rhymes to help bring some much needed respite to our tattooed status of frowning hopelessness...
a grounded, insightful, yet delightfully quirky read my friend,
Happy New Year dear Poet!
January 5th, 2021 06:10
pandemic limericks
Goldfinch60 said:
Good limericks d a for this Strange Time.
Andy
January 2nd, 2021 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Good limericks d a for this Strange Time.
Andy
January 2nd, 2021 02:11
pandemic limericks
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Strictly speaking, these aren\'t limericks. The lines are iambic, more or less - duple meter anyway. A limerick is in triple meter - anapestic or amphibrachic.
taDAda taDAda taDAda,
taDAda taDAda taDAda .
taDAda taDAda,
taDAda taDAda.
taDAda taDAda taDAda.
January 1st, 2021 18:36
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Strictly speaking, these aren\'t limericks. The lines are iambic, more or less - duple meter anyway. A limerick is in triple meter - anapestic or amphibrachic.
taDAda taDAda taDAda,
taDAda taDAda taDAda .
taDAda taDAda,
taDAda taDAda.
taDAda taDAda taDAda.
January 1st, 2021 18:36
pandemic limericks
Dove said:
Truth in humor! Here the hospitals are full and we\'re back to lock downs! But all aside great lines! Very relatable
January 1st, 2021 14:57
Dove said:
Truth in humor! Here the hospitals are full and we\'re back to lock downs! But all aside great lines! Very relatable
January 1st, 2021 14:57
pandemic limericks
Fay Slimm. said:
Great rhymes in this grouse about being locked in and yearning to be allowed out - - loved the atmospheric but solemn ending to a year we all want to put behind my dear friend.
January 1st, 2021 13:41
Fay Slimm. said:
Great rhymes in this grouse about being locked in and yearning to be allowed out - - loved the atmospheric but solemn ending to a year we all want to put behind my dear friend.
January 1st, 2021 13:41
pandemic limericks
Neville said:
......... seriously, serious limericks could be this years in thing methinks .... .....
January 1st, 2021 12:59
Neville said:
......... seriously, serious limericks could be this years in thing methinks .... .....
January 1st, 2021 12:59
pandemic limericks
Poetic Dan said:
I turned off the news 3 months ago yet it still won\'t let go of my soul! Yet sadly that junk food still rots away in my belly, until I read your funny fingers and remember it\'s all jelly!
When the cow jumps over the moon, I\'ll turn back on the telly!
Happy New year my friend, thanks for triggering then lightning my brain!
January 1st, 2021 08:45
Poetic Dan said:
I turned off the news 3 months ago yet it still won\'t let go of my soul! Yet sadly that junk food still rots away in my belly, until I read your funny fingers and remember it\'s all jelly!
When the cow jumps over the moon, I\'ll turn back on the telly!
Happy New year my friend, thanks for triggering then lightning my brain!
January 1st, 2021 08:45
good things to come
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you for the warm wishes dear friend and the same to you too as the New Year begins.
January 1st, 2021 03:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you for the warm wishes dear friend and the same to you too as the New Year begins.
January 1st, 2021 03:45
good things to come
Poetic Dan said:
..... I\'ve not heard that tune in some time, well placed!
Yet I find my mind stuck by your notes.... Freedom! Such a strange feeling to do as we please yet find that balance to let others do the same..
All the best for this new year & beyond my friend..
January 1st, 2021 02:46
Poetic Dan said:
..... I\'ve not heard that tune in some time, well placed!
Yet I find my mind stuck by your notes.... Freedom! Such a strange feeling to do as we please yet find that balance to let others do the same..
All the best for this new year & beyond my friend..
January 1st, 2021 02:46
good things to come
FineB said:
Thanks Dusk Arising.
A superb write to herald in the New Year.
Happy New Year.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 31st, 2020 18:49
FineB said:
Thanks Dusk Arising.
A superb write to herald in the New Year.
Happy New Year.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 31st, 2020 18:49
good things to come
Michael Edwards said:
And to you dusk and thanks for all ypour excellent versed comments - keep \'em comin\'
December 31st, 2020 16:17
Michael Edwards said:
And to you dusk and thanks for all ypour excellent versed comments - keep \'em comin\'
December 31st, 2020 16:17
good things to come
Jerry Reynolds said:
Happy New Year to you as well.Love the poem.
December 31st, 2020 15:16
Jerry Reynolds said:
Happy New Year to you as well.Love the poem.
December 31st, 2020 15:16
perspective
Neville said:
a foot tapper for sure .... now all I need is a Park Drive and a single malt ..........
December 30th, 2020 11:35
Neville said:
a foot tapper for sure .... now all I need is a Park Drive and a single malt ..........
December 30th, 2020 11:35
more limericks
Fay Slimm. said:
Limerick day and yours brings a smile D.A. with mention of what this lock-down is doing to hairstyles of those house-bound - - - let\'s hope next year will let in fresher air eh?
December 29th, 2020 17:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Limerick day and yours brings a smile D.A. with mention of what this lock-down is doing to hairstyles of those house-bound - - - let\'s hope next year will let in fresher air eh?
December 29th, 2020 17:05
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