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Michael Edwards said:
It sure is the day for limericks - keep \'em coming.
December 29th, 2020 15:25
Michael Edwards said:
It sure is the day for limericks - keep \'em coming.
December 29th, 2020 15:25
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Neville said:
He\'s got a lot to answer for, has that Mr. M. E ...
These three might well have been swiftly penned, but they are very muchly enjoyed and no end ....... N :)
December 29th, 2020 12:29
Neville said:
He\'s got a lot to answer for, has that Mr. M. E ...
These three might well have been swiftly penned, but they are very muchly enjoyed and no end ....... N :)
December 29th, 2020 12:29
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Jerry Reynolds said:
Very funny. Stay Safer Have a Happy New Year. You won\'t go wrong \"Stroking Pussy\"
December 29th, 2020 10:49
Jerry Reynolds said:
Very funny. Stay Safer Have a Happy New Year. You won\'t go wrong \"Stroking Pussy\"
December 29th, 2020 10:49
O C D
Suresh said:
the SELF RIGHTEOUS.........PREACH, preying on the lambs and the sheep
December 29th, 2020 07:25
Suresh said:
the SELF RIGHTEOUS.........PREACH, preying on the lambs and the sheep
December 29th, 2020 07:25
O C D
Goldfinch60 said:
I used to believe in the christian faith and was in face a Chaplain at one point in my life preaching the christian faith but I never ever forced it down people throats as I have always believed and recognised that people have their own beliefs.
When my wife, Joyce, was taken by dementia I prayed and prayed to the christian god who Joyce had sung to a prayed to all her long life but it did not work and she passed away, more about that in a couple of days.
I then looked seriously at religion and came to the conclusion that organised religion is a farce and the lies were being spread. I actually came to this conclusion in church listening to the lies being spread, as I realised this and dismissed christianity from my life it was as though a weight had been lifted from me and I felt free once more.
I still believe there is a god but it is my god the one I believe in.
Dave Allen had it right when he ended his programmes with the words:
\"MAY YOUR GOD GO WITH YOU.\"
Andy
December 28th, 2020 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
I used to believe in the christian faith and was in face a Chaplain at one point in my life preaching the christian faith but I never ever forced it down people throats as I have always believed and recognised that people have their own beliefs.
When my wife, Joyce, was taken by dementia I prayed and prayed to the christian god who Joyce had sung to a prayed to all her long life but it did not work and she passed away, more about that in a couple of days.
I then looked seriously at religion and came to the conclusion that organised religion is a farce and the lies were being spread. I actually came to this conclusion in church listening to the lies being spread, as I realised this and dismissed christianity from my life it was as though a weight had been lifted from me and I felt free once more.
I still believe there is a god but it is my god the one I believe in.
Dave Allen had it right when he ended his programmes with the words:
\"MAY YOUR GOD GO WITH YOU.\"
Andy
December 28th, 2020 01:25
O C D
Neville said:
I have no objection whatsoever to people believing in this or that .. I do object however when they (said people) try to force or impose their beliefs on me and or mine .... and in that respect, I understand where you are coming from sir .......... where ya going tho, is anybody\'s business ...............
Neville
December 27th, 2020 11:22
Neville said:
I have no objection whatsoever to people believing in this or that .. I do object however when they (said people) try to force or impose their beliefs on me and or mine .... and in that respect, I understand where you are coming from sir .......... where ya going tho, is anybody\'s business ...............
Neville
December 27th, 2020 11:22
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Jerry Reynolds said:
Sometimes they do get on your last nerve Dusk. Happy New Year.
December 27th, 2020 09:59
Jerry Reynolds said:
Sometimes they do get on your last nerve Dusk. Happy New Year.
December 27th, 2020 09:59
O C D
orchidee said:
I see what you mean.
I hope I don\'t put words in Jesus\'/Bible prophets/Apostles mouths in my writings though.
December 27th, 2020 08:53
orchidee said:
I see what you mean.
I hope I don\'t put words in Jesus\'/Bible prophets/Apostles mouths in my writings though.
December 27th, 2020 08:53
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Michael Edwards said:
There is OCD on both sides of the debate but I have to agree with you here..
December 27th, 2020 08:11
Michael Edwards said:
There is OCD on both sides of the debate but I have to agree with you here..
December 27th, 2020 08:11
perspective
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic read and if it was not 4 am I\'d happily listen lol
December 23rd, 2020 23:08
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic read and if it was not 4 am I\'d happily listen lol
December 23rd, 2020 23:08
perspective
Goldfinch60 said:
So much understanding of the past can be seen in the now.
As for the music, where did that time go it was amazing listening to that and you were right it needed listening to the end but even then it just faded out, great musician and great jazzer - another one on my list to look into.
Andy
December 23rd, 2020 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
So much understanding of the past can be seen in the now.
As for the music, where did that time go it was amazing listening to that and you were right it needed listening to the end but even then it just faded out, great musician and great jazzer - another one on my list to look into.
Andy
December 23rd, 2020 01:51
touching and heartfelt
L. B. Mek said:
yup, I understand - sometimes our differences seem insurmountable, especially since \'some\' people\'s answer to open dialogue that remotely threatens the feeble foundation they\'ve cocooned their life\'s upon: is to clasp their hands over their ears, glue tight their eyelids and dive into that pit of wilful ignorance, they\'ve cultivated as their go-to survival state...
but hey, who are we to judge? who said our answers will yield a tomorrow that\'s any better...
still, I\'m with you Dusk - at least in conversing we can better find a solution, as our alternative is digging ever-deeper in our carved-up trenches of society, flinging dirt at other\'s - while bathing daily: to rid ourselves of that taint of guilt, we bury too deep, to be witnessed by even those \'all knowing\' eyes in our reflections...
good write my friend, utilising that frustration to weave words of love and compassion, is the Artform within recycling, well executed!
(also like \'Nor ordinary love\' and \'Jezebel\' from Sade\'s cannon, to me she\'ll always be \'Pop music\'s\': Elizabeth Browning)
December 22nd, 2020 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
yup, I understand - sometimes our differences seem insurmountable, especially since \'some\' people\'s answer to open dialogue that remotely threatens the feeble foundation they\'ve cocooned their life\'s upon: is to clasp their hands over their ears, glue tight their eyelids and dive into that pit of wilful ignorance, they\'ve cultivated as their go-to survival state...
but hey, who are we to judge? who said our answers will yield a tomorrow that\'s any better...
still, I\'m with you Dusk - at least in conversing we can better find a solution, as our alternative is digging ever-deeper in our carved-up trenches of society, flinging dirt at other\'s - while bathing daily: to rid ourselves of that taint of guilt, we bury too deep, to be witnessed by even those \'all knowing\' eyes in our reflections...
good write my friend, utilising that frustration to weave words of love and compassion, is the Artform within recycling, well executed!
(also like \'Nor ordinary love\' and \'Jezebel\' from Sade\'s cannon, to me she\'ll always be \'Pop music\'s\': Elizabeth Browning)
December 22nd, 2020 05:11
touching and heartfelt
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words d a and so true.
Wonderful music, that\'s going to be with me all day now!
Andy
December 22nd, 2020 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words d a and so true.
Wonderful music, that\'s going to be with me all day now!
Andy
December 22nd, 2020 01:26
touching and heartfelt
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you. Good one. I kept coming back to it.
December 21st, 2020 18:47
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you. Good one. I kept coming back to it.
December 21st, 2020 18:47
touching and heartfelt
Clara said:
I like this poem... I like the song too! 🙂
December 21st, 2020 15:18
Clara said:
I like this poem... I like the song too! 🙂
December 21st, 2020 15:18
touching and heartfelt
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read Dusk. Have a happy Holiday and stay safe.
December 21st, 2020 14:10
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read Dusk. Have a happy Holiday and stay safe.
December 21st, 2020 14:10
Bedtime for tiny tots
Neville said:
this is a splendid example of a perfectly pitched fairy-tale for both young uns and us growed ups alike ... I can see where the inspiration came from my friend and if I had any, I would not hesitate to read this to my grand children .......... in fact, I can imagine reading it to kids would be almost as much fun as hearing it through their ears .. if ya know what I mean ...
Neville
December 16th, 2020 14:04
Neville said:
this is a splendid example of a perfectly pitched fairy-tale for both young uns and us growed ups alike ... I can see where the inspiration came from my friend and if I had any, I would not hesitate to read this to my grand children .......... in fact, I can imagine reading it to kids would be almost as much fun as hearing it through their ears .. if ya know what I mean ...
Neville
December 16th, 2020 14:04
Bedtime for tiny tots
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write d a, the glory of grandchildren is so wonderful.
As the saying goes:
\"If I had known that grandchildren could be so wonderful I would have had them first!\"
Andy
December 15th, 2020 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write d a, the glory of grandchildren is so wonderful.
As the saying goes:
\"If I had known that grandchildren could be so wonderful I would have had them first!\"
Andy
December 15th, 2020 01:30
Bedtime for tiny tots
Doggerel Dave said:
Great one, Dusk. Took me back (way back) to that time of innocence (yes - an extremely long time ago).
Beyond the material, the construction must have taken much effort - worthwhile though.
Needs to be in book form, read at bedtime to young \'uns.
Dave
December 14th, 2020 18:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Great one, Dusk. Took me back (way back) to that time of innocence (yes - an extremely long time ago).
Beyond the material, the construction must have taken much effort - worthwhile though.
Needs to be in book form, read at bedtime to young \'uns.
Dave
December 14th, 2020 18:49
Bedtime for tiny tots
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderous journey upon your stream of consciousness Dusk, but my how poetic you narrate mere mortal thought\'s - oh gifted Poet,
even more beautiful a write for its unvarnished aspects of brave transparency,
thanks for sharing my friend
December 14th, 2020 06:25
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderous journey upon your stream of consciousness Dusk, but my how poetic you narrate mere mortal thought\'s - oh gifted Poet,
even more beautiful a write for its unvarnished aspects of brave transparency,
thanks for sharing my friend
December 14th, 2020 06:25
Bedtime for tiny tots
Dove said:
Darling write! I think you should write for Disney! I can see this as a animated cartoon
December 14th, 2020 06:09
Dove said:
Darling write! I think you should write for Disney! I can see this as a animated cartoon
December 14th, 2020 06:09
Bedtime for tiny tots
orchidee said:
Oohh yes, perfect write dusk.
I wrote one me self (did I?) - though I was senile, or a in \'a senior moment\' heehee.
December 14th, 2020 05:23
orchidee said:
Oohh yes, perfect write dusk.
I wrote one me self (did I?) - though I was senile, or a in \'a senior moment\' heehee.
December 14th, 2020 05:23
Bedtime for tiny tots
dusk arising said:
Dan thanks mate, one for Maarii when she\'s a little bit older perhaps..... i just altered the ending so it reads better.
December 14th, 2020 04:04
dusk arising said:
Dan thanks mate, one for Maarii when she\'s a little bit older perhaps..... i just altered the ending so it reads better.
December 14th, 2020 04:04
Bedtime for tiny tots
Poetic Dan said:
Perfectly done for me, what an awesome trip of pure Innocence and love this comes from... I will definitely read again, part of me wants to pen my own then the other part say \"just read, you are home\"
Thank you my friend for the soulful words you always post!
December 14th, 2020 04:00
Poetic Dan said:
Perfectly done for me, what an awesome trip of pure Innocence and love this comes from... I will definitely read again, part of me wants to pen my own then the other part say \"just read, you are home\"
Thank you my friend for the soulful words you always post!
December 14th, 2020 04:00
destiny
Dove said:
Awe Yes, the desiderata! As I read your words, it reminded of something,
Well said! Enjoyed the read
December 12th, 2020 08:23
Dove said:
Awe Yes, the desiderata! As I read your words, it reminded of something,
Well said! Enjoyed the read
December 12th, 2020 08:23
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