Comments received on poems by dusk arising
cookie jar
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening Dusk ! Ihave been married for under a Year but I am finding Each & Every Day that ~ *Angela sure is my COOKIE JAR* !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela Brian & Smokey ! ! !
December 10th, 2020 12:04
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening Dusk ! Ihave been married for under a Year but I am finding Each & Every Day that ~ *Angela sure is my COOKIE JAR* !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela Brian & Smokey ! ! !
December 10th, 2020 12:04
destiny
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully lived-in words of real life truth\'s, worth reading a few times to digest all the wisdom it shares,
thanks Dusk
December 10th, 2020 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully lived-in words of real life truth\'s, worth reading a few times to digest all the wisdom it shares,
thanks Dusk
December 10th, 2020 04:27
destiny
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words d a, that light is always there for us all and even when the darkness comes there is still light when that darkness ends.
Andy
December 10th, 2020 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words d a, that light is always there for us all and even when the darkness comes there is still light when that darkness ends.
Andy
December 10th, 2020 01:23
cookie jar
Neville said:
I love the way these words seem to bleed down the page on which you have pinned them DA ...
I totally get what you mean in your authors note about any tweaks you thought were necessary ..and for what its worth, I reckon you pulled it off ..
pitched perfectly sir .. filled with sentimentality without being too mushy .. in my opinion at least ....
Neville
December 10th, 2020 00:35
Neville said:
I love the way these words seem to bleed down the page on which you have pinned them DA ...
I totally get what you mean in your authors note about any tweaks you thought were necessary ..and for what its worth, I reckon you pulled it off ..
pitched perfectly sir .. filled with sentimentality without being too mushy .. in my opinion at least ....
Neville
December 10th, 2020 00:35
destiny
Fay Slimm. said:
What a wonderfully well-written and positive first read of my day that leaves my inner light with the glow of a grateful smile. So pleased you aired this one - - thank you D.A.
December 9th, 2020 03:17
Fay Slimm. said:
What a wonderfully well-written and positive first read of my day that leaves my inner light with the glow of a grateful smile. So pleased you aired this one - - thank you D.A.
December 9th, 2020 03:17
destiny
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk.
Wasn\'t any poetry from me twenty five years ago. Well, the odd snippet or two per year maybe.
December 9th, 2020 03:17
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk.
Wasn\'t any poetry from me twenty five years ago. Well, the odd snippet or two per year maybe.
December 9th, 2020 03:17
destiny
Doggerel Dave said:
Glad your muse has gone bush (sorry - on holiday), dusk, otherwise, I can assure you, I wouldn\'t have gained access to your back catalogue of 25 yrs ago.
Go placidly, mate
Dave
December 9th, 2020 03:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Glad your muse has gone bush (sorry - on holiday), dusk, otherwise, I can assure you, I wouldn\'t have gained access to your back catalogue of 25 yrs ago.
Go placidly, mate
Dave
December 9th, 2020 03:16
the artist
Goldfinch60 said:
The art of both words and pictures created and music can mean so much to many of us, I can look at artworks and really be drawn into them so they can become part of me, similarly with words and probably more so with music but each of us see or hear different things within our own minds. That is the glory of it all, it can bring so much to us.
Very good words d a, and this will go into my favourites.
Andy
December 9th, 2020 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
The art of both words and pictures created and music can mean so much to many of us, I can look at artworks and really be drawn into them so they can become part of me, similarly with words and probably more so with music but each of us see or hear different things within our own minds. That is the glory of it all, it can bring so much to us.
Very good words d a, and this will go into my favourites.
Andy
December 9th, 2020 01:24
the artist
Poetic Dan said:
Ha ha! I have tooth ache and it\'s gone to my ear lol!
Took me a while to get down this because my mind kept floating around in a beautiful picture but the way pulled me back in was fantastic!
Think I\'m all done and end on a high... Lol
December 8th, 2020 14:39
Poetic Dan said:
Ha ha! I have tooth ache and it\'s gone to my ear lol!
Took me a while to get down this because my mind kept floating around in a beautiful picture but the way pulled me back in was fantastic!
Think I\'m all done and end on a high... Lol
December 8th, 2020 14:39
the artist
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Thanks DUSK for a very powerful TONE POEM which does indeed paint a very real & moving - time passing - picture. Thanks for reprising & sharing !
Love & Peace to You & Yours
Angela Brian Smokey ! ! !
December 8th, 2020 12:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Thanks DUSK for a very powerful TONE POEM which does indeed paint a very real & moving - time passing - picture. Thanks for reprising & sharing !
Love & Peace to You & Yours
Angela Brian Smokey ! ! !
December 8th, 2020 12:58
the artist
L. B. Mek said:
just the mere vastness of subjects/atrocities touched upon and handled with such a degree of empathy and insight,
means this has to be read - several times, to merely grasp and even then read a few more times to find its true meaning,
a brilliant write! worth sharing again every few months
December 8th, 2020 06:29
L. B. Mek said:
just the mere vastness of subjects/atrocities touched upon and handled with such a degree of empathy and insight,
means this has to be read - several times, to merely grasp and even then read a few more times to find its true meaning,
a brilliant write! worth sharing again every few months
December 8th, 2020 06:29
make believe its your first time
Neville said:
every now and then, I need to re-trace my steps ... some might call it going round in circles ... I call it respect and admiration ....
what a wonderful way to while away an evening.. or any time of day for that matter... a deep sigh and whispers perfect....because it very nearly is... N
December 7th, 2020 10:54
Neville said:
every now and then, I need to re-trace my steps ... some might call it going round in circles ... I call it respect and admiration ....
what a wonderful way to while away an evening.. or any time of day for that matter... a deep sigh and whispers perfect....because it very nearly is... N
December 7th, 2020 10:54
If i could stay
L. B. Mek said:
wow, damn what a FIND!
thank you for not posting in a while, truly: or else I wouldn\'t have come looking and missed-out on one of the best write\'s I have ever read
December 7th, 2020 07:21
L. B. Mek said:
wow, damn what a FIND!
thank you for not posting in a while, truly: or else I wouldn\'t have come looking and missed-out on one of the best write\'s I have ever read
December 7th, 2020 07:21
the rain
Fatlass said:
I can really empathise with the sentiment. Really like this piece
December 4th, 2020 05:49
Fatlass said:
I can really empathise with the sentiment. Really like this piece
December 4th, 2020 05:49
summer No 17
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evenin* Dusk ~ Thanks for VIDEO ~ very kool !
Loved the scenario in the Poem ~ I fear (for a variety of social & other reasons) those Lazy - Hazy - Crazy days you describe will never again retrun to the UK ~ Life gets serious don* it !
Thanks for remindin* & sharin*
Love - Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Angela - Brian & Smokey ! ! !
November 28th, 2020 16:44
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evenin* Dusk ~ Thanks for VIDEO ~ very kool !
Loved the scenario in the Poem ~ I fear (for a variety of social & other reasons) those Lazy - Hazy - Crazy days you describe will never again retrun to the UK ~ Life gets serious don* it !
Thanks for remindin* & sharin*
Love - Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Angela - Brian & Smokey ! ! !
November 28th, 2020 16:44
summer No 17
Poetic Dan said:
Happy music is playing and quickly read one rhyme..... Roll on the good times!!
Cheers buddy
November 28th, 2020 10:59
Poetic Dan said:
Happy music is playing and quickly read one rhyme..... Roll on the good times!!
Cheers buddy
November 28th, 2020 10:59
summer No 17
L. B. Mek said:
\'With a stolen kiss
. i watched a dream unfold in moonlit eyes.\'
beautiful imagery, a great read
November 28th, 2020 06:47
L. B. Mek said:
\'With a stolen kiss
. i watched a dream unfold in moonlit eyes.\'
beautiful imagery, a great read
November 28th, 2020 06:47
summer No 17
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - -- as the song said - -\"Those were the days my friend - We thought they would never end \" --- thanks for this nostalgic write that gets to the heart and makes for sighs.......
November 28th, 2020 04:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - -- as the song said - -\"Those were the days my friend - We thought they would never end \" --- thanks for this nostalgic write that gets to the heart and makes for sighs.......
November 28th, 2020 04:15
there and here
RDS said:
Lovely imagery and fusion between feelings and sensations flowing around the words
J
November 28th, 2020 04:14
RDS said:
Lovely imagery and fusion between feelings and sensations flowing around the words
J
November 28th, 2020 04:14
summer No 17
Goldfinch60 said:
Indeed back then, mine was a pint of bitter though, not cider.
Andy
November 28th, 2020 02:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Indeed back then, mine was a pint of bitter though, not cider.
Andy
November 28th, 2020 02:36
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