Comments received on poems by dusk arising
summer No 17
Neville said:
When I close my eyes, these words ring golden in my head and gently so..
Thank you for a moments respite my friend .................
Neville
November 28th, 2020 00:47
Neville said:
When I close my eyes, these words ring golden in my head and gently so..
Thank you for a moments respite my friend .................
Neville
November 28th, 2020 00:47
summer No 17
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely \"Those Lazy-Hazy-Crazy Days of Summer\"
Ah - memories...
Remembering..
Dave
November 28th, 2020 00:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely \"Those Lazy-Hazy-Crazy Days of Summer\"
Ah - memories...
Remembering..
Dave
November 28th, 2020 00:46
the rain
RDS said:
Ah, the bitter sting of memories, dark moods and regrets. Thanks dusk, atmospheric and brooding with the added tension and drama of the unspoken. Great one.
J
November 27th, 2020 20:21
RDS said:
Ah, the bitter sting of memories, dark moods and regrets. Thanks dusk, atmospheric and brooding with the added tension and drama of the unspoken. Great one.
J
November 27th, 2020 20:21
there and here
Poetic Dan said:
Ooooo, ending with goosebumps!
Magnificence flow and definitely felt a gentle wisdom of why we let it all out!
November 27th, 2020 13:25
Poetic Dan said:
Ooooo, ending with goosebumps!
Magnificence flow and definitely felt a gentle wisdom of why we let it all out!
November 27th, 2020 13:25
there and here
Fay Slimm. said:
A gentle reminder that limbs can bud best when mature - colours of love indeed my friend and so expertly presented.
November 27th, 2020 04:04
Fay Slimm. said:
A gentle reminder that limbs can bud best when mature - colours of love indeed my friend and so expertly presented.
November 27th, 2020 04:04
there and here
orchidee said:
Good write dusk.
And now my poem \'Here and there\', It\'s like your poem, but in reverse.
November 27th, 2020 03:10
orchidee said:
Good write dusk.
And now my poem \'Here and there\', It\'s like your poem, but in reverse.
November 27th, 2020 03:10
there and here
Goldfinch60 said:
That image will be forever with you d a and may the colours of that love be always there.
Andy
November 27th, 2020 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
That image will be forever with you d a and may the colours of that love be always there.
Andy
November 27th, 2020 02:00
the rain
Neville said:
a delightfully atmospheric example of classic prose ... a tale told terribly well and leaving the reader both wanting more but also strangely satisfied ...
... Neville
November 27th, 2020 01:09
Neville said:
a delightfully atmospheric example of classic prose ... a tale told terribly well and leaving the reader both wanting more but also strangely satisfied ...
... Neville
November 27th, 2020 01:09
there and here
Neville said:
a beautifully crafted dedication DA .. this could easily have been written both to and for my favourite oak tree in autumn or spring .. a noble specimen indeed and with a spiritual if not sacred presence ...
November 27th, 2020 01:03
Neville said:
a beautifully crafted dedication DA .. this could easily have been written both to and for my favourite oak tree in autumn or spring .. a noble specimen indeed and with a spiritual if not sacred presence ...
November 27th, 2020 01:03
the rain
Michael Edwards said:
Raining cats and dogs - mind you don\'t step in a poodle.
November 27th, 2020 00:27
Michael Edwards said:
Raining cats and dogs - mind you don\'t step in a poodle.
November 27th, 2020 00:27
the rain
Poetic Dan said:
O the irony or what ever! The rain is coming down, I so hope it stops her crying and let me get a few more hours in!
If not then like a soldier I\'ll start with the water to do last nights washing up lol
November 26th, 2020 23:13
Poetic Dan said:
O the irony or what ever! The rain is coming down, I so hope it stops her crying and let me get a few more hours in!
If not then like a soldier I\'ll start with the water to do last nights washing up lol
November 26th, 2020 23:13
the rain
Goldfinch60 said:
...and if he stood long enough....?
Intriguing words d a.
Andy
November 26th, 2020 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
...and if he stood long enough....?
Intriguing words d a.
Andy
November 26th, 2020 02:16
the long goodnight
Fay Slimm. said:
Had to read this over again before I could not find words to describe the sorrow that lingers around every line -
- -- a heart-wrenching helping of known preciousness so mournfully missed - - - and so beautifully expressed my friend.
November 24th, 2020 13:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Had to read this over again before I could not find words to describe the sorrow that lingers around every line -
- -- a heart-wrenching helping of known preciousness so mournfully missed - - - and so beautifully expressed my friend.
November 24th, 2020 13:45
the long goodnight
orchidee said:
Good write dusk
Erm, how long is that night? (Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol).
November 24th, 2020 06:15
orchidee said:
Good write dusk
Erm, how long is that night? (Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol).
November 24th, 2020 06:15
the long goodnight
L. B. Mek said:
emotive writing, I like your use of everyday metaphors, it grounds the realness and expands the scope of relatability in your write, at least for me
great read, especially that first stanza: gripping
November 24th, 2020 05:16
L. B. Mek said:
emotive writing, I like your use of everyday metaphors, it grounds the realness and expands the scope of relatability in your write, at least for me
great read, especially that first stanza: gripping
November 24th, 2020 05:16
the long goodnight
Doggerel Dave said:
Felt that and it hurts.
Left me a bit raw.
Dave
November 24th, 2020 05:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Felt that and it hurts.
Left me a bit raw.
Dave
November 24th, 2020 05:01
the long goodnight
Neville said:
hauntingly beautiful ... and so bloomin sad .................
November 24th, 2020 04:12
Neville said:
hauntingly beautiful ... and so bloomin sad .................
November 24th, 2020 04:12
the long goodnight
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotive words d a.
I am sure that sunlight will fill your life.
Andy
November 24th, 2020 04:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotive words d a.
I am sure that sunlight will fill your life.
Andy
November 24th, 2020 04:08
my dreams light
Neville said:
Just checking ... yep.. still she\'s beautiful ....
November 22nd, 2020 17:03
Neville said:
Just checking ... yep.. still she\'s beautiful ....
November 22nd, 2020 17:03
listen and lay back
Neville said:
I never thought it would work .. but believe me, it just worked ..
I take it my single malt might be regarded as a warm drink ... cheers,
Neville
November 21st, 2020 12:26
Neville said:
I never thought it would work .. but believe me, it just worked ..
I take it my single malt might be regarded as a warm drink ... cheers,
Neville
November 21st, 2020 12:26
slab square sunset
Dove said:
Well thanks for sharing! Enjoyed the poem and all the comments! Take care!
November 21st, 2020 10:39
Dove said:
Well thanks for sharing! Enjoyed the poem and all the comments! Take care!
November 21st, 2020 10:39
slab square sunset
Christina8 said:
Such a wonderful piece of poetry here, dusk. Sounds like hard times. You expressed yourself really well. Nice to see you after such a long time!
November 20th, 2020 19:20
Christina8 said:
Such a wonderful piece of poetry here, dusk. Sounds like hard times. You expressed yourself really well. Nice to see you after such a long time!
November 20th, 2020 19:20
to end all wars
Neville said:
Wish I could have caught these splendid words, this perfectly timed poem on the day itself ... I can not imagine why I was otherwise distracted .. but just felt the need to add my two penn\'orth here and acknowledge your apt and emotionally charged post my friend ...
Neville
November 19th, 2020 08:10
Neville said:
Wish I could have caught these splendid words, this perfectly timed poem on the day itself ... I can not imagine why I was otherwise distracted .. but just felt the need to add my two penn\'orth here and acknowledge your apt and emotionally charged post my friend ...
Neville
November 19th, 2020 08:10
slab square sunset
Clara said:
You are always able to spin such tales in your poetry. It\'s almost a cinematic experience. It was real for you and you\'ve brought it to life for us. Great work.
November 18th, 2020 19:32
Clara said:
You are always able to spin such tales in your poetry. It\'s almost a cinematic experience. It was real for you and you\'ve brought it to life for us. Great work.
November 18th, 2020 19:32
slab square sunset
Neville said:
this kinda not only rams it home but takes me back to when I hit the streets and hard ... just a nip over six months street homeless I woz .. spent quite a few nights in St Luke\'s church until the very kind Rev ******** kicked me out ... its lot more dangerous today though .. a lot more ....
November 18th, 2020 12:24
Neville said:
this kinda not only rams it home but takes me back to when I hit the streets and hard ... just a nip over six months street homeless I woz .. spent quite a few nights in St Luke\'s church until the very kind Rev ******** kicked me out ... its lot more dangerous today though .. a lot more ....
November 18th, 2020 12:24
slab square sunset
Goldfinch60 said:
Hard times back in those days for you d a, I am glad that you found the way out and are living quite happily in your
green wellie in Gloucester, I am not far away in Evesham living in my overgrown red flowerpot by the river.
Seriously though I have been very fortunate in my life and have never been anywhere near to being on the streets, I do try and help those who are.
Andy
November 18th, 2020 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Hard times back in those days for you d a, I am glad that you found the way out and are living quite happily in your
green wellie in Gloucester, I am not far away in Evesham living in my overgrown red flowerpot by the river.
Seriously though I have been very fortunate in my life and have never been anywhere near to being on the streets, I do try and help those who are.
Andy
November 18th, 2020 01:55
slab square sunset
Doggerel Dave said:
Never quite hit the streets, although I came very very close (next step up?).
I think I know enough to experience every line which you colour in so well. An exhausting way to spend a day....weeks..months.
Dave
November 17th, 2020 19:08
Doggerel Dave said:
Never quite hit the streets, although I came very very close (next step up?).
I think I know enough to experience every line which you colour in so well. An exhausting way to spend a day....weeks..months.
Dave
November 17th, 2020 19:08
slab square sunset
Michael Edwards said:
I know the slab square well (although that name is new to me) having worked in Queens Drive for several years. Haven\'t been back for ages except to the theatre - enjoyed the read.
November 17th, 2020 14:25
Michael Edwards said:
I know the slab square well (although that name is new to me) having worked in Queens Drive for several years. Haven\'t been back for ages except to the theatre - enjoyed the read.
November 17th, 2020 14:25
please, so much
L. B. Mek said:
a great read, is there such a thing as tasteful eroticism or did you just create a new genre all by yourself
November 17th, 2020 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
a great read, is there such a thing as tasteful eroticism or did you just create a new genre all by yourself
November 17th, 2020 04:34
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