Comments received on poems by dusk arising
music amplified
Neville said:
in my opinion, the word love is banded around far too often these days but.. if I were to write I luv your words.. your authors note and the music clip.. in essence, this whole page.. I would not be fibbing...
To be honest, I found the whole experience incredibly moving on the back of reading Laura\'s lovely gesture in remembering our dear departed friend Kevin Browne\'s birthday...
Neville
July 1st, 2020 08:05
Neville said:
in my opinion, the word love is banded around far too often these days but.. if I were to write I luv your words.. your authors note and the music clip.. in essence, this whole page.. I would not be fibbing...
To be honest, I found the whole experience incredibly moving on the back of reading Laura\'s lovely gesture in remembering our dear departed friend Kevin Browne\'s birthday...
Neville
July 1st, 2020 08:05
a different way
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories of when all was well are still there and always will be.
Andy
June 30th, 2020 00:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories of when all was well are still there and always will be.
Andy
June 30th, 2020 00:05
a different way
Accidental Poet said:
What might have once worked, must now lay in restful sleep where memories inspire forever smiles.
Great write da.
June 29th, 2020 18:14
Accidental Poet said:
What might have once worked, must now lay in restful sleep where memories inspire forever smiles.
Great write da.
June 29th, 2020 18:14
a different way
Fay Slimm. said:
Your pen so aptly describes the depth of sorrow when time defeats our efforts to mend something in love that is \"lost and undone\"
June 29th, 2020 09:35
Fay Slimm. said:
Your pen so aptly describes the depth of sorrow when time defeats our efforts to mend something in love that is \"lost and undone\"
June 29th, 2020 09:35
a different way
Suresh said:
parting is such sweet sorrow
has never been so painlessly and poetically expressed
June 29th, 2020 09:29
Suresh said:
parting is such sweet sorrow
has never been so painlessly and poetically expressed
June 29th, 2020 09:29
a different way
Neville said:
there is always more than one way of skinning a cat.. unless you happen to be vegan.... Nice one DA :)
June 29th, 2020 07:38
Neville said:
there is always more than one way of skinning a cat.. unless you happen to be vegan.... Nice one DA :)
June 29th, 2020 07:38
for Julie-Ann
MojoFreewrite said:
I love this piece, I can see what you meant after you commented on my piece. The longing of someone but at the same time being glad that it’s over because it was longer working out.
June 28th, 2020 18:15
MojoFreewrite said:
I love this piece, I can see what you meant after you commented on my piece. The longing of someone but at the same time being glad that it’s over because it was longer working out.
June 28th, 2020 18:15
for Julie-Ann
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE - Good Evening DA - My Mantra has always been *Better to have loved & lost ~than never to have loved at all !* I think this is eastier for Men to say than Women. All I can say is that in balance I gained MORE positive experience from each *Encounter of the Amorous Kind* than I sacrificed. I was 33 when I met Angela (28)and was exerienced enough to sense that this *Encounter* was very special and too be taken seriously & sensibly. In retrospect Angela told me she felt the same. However I acknowledge I do owe gratitude to *All the Girls I ever loved before .................. !* and Angela to all her Beaus ! That how it is in Life & Love we all learn by our past experiences ! Good - Bad & Not so Bad ~ Thanks for sharing. And when the Angels ask me to recall - the thrill of it all - I*ll tell them I remeber Ann - Beryl - Cathy - Doris ................ Zoe ! But most of all I*ll tell them I remember ANGELA - AMEN !
Love & Peace & Joy
Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙
June 28th, 2020 16:36
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE - Good Evening DA - My Mantra has always been *Better to have loved & lost ~than never to have loved at all !* I think this is eastier for Men to say than Women. All I can say is that in balance I gained MORE positive experience from each *Encounter of the Amorous Kind* than I sacrificed. I was 33 when I met Angela (28)and was exerienced enough to sense that this *Encounter* was very special and too be taken seriously & sensibly. In retrospect Angela told me she felt the same. However I acknowledge I do owe gratitude to *All the Girls I ever loved before .................. !* and Angela to all her Beaus ! That how it is in Life & Love we all learn by our past experiences ! Good - Bad & Not so Bad ~ Thanks for sharing. And when the Angels ask me to recall - the thrill of it all - I*ll tell them I remeber Ann - Beryl - Cathy - Doris ................ Zoe ! But most of all I*ll tell them I remember ANGELA - AMEN !
Love & Peace & Joy
Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙
June 28th, 2020 16:36
for Julie-Ann
Accidental Poet said:
I can very easily relate to this piece of your heart da. An excellent write. Well done.
June 28th, 2020 12:02
Accidental Poet said:
I can very easily relate to this piece of your heart da. An excellent write. Well done.
June 28th, 2020 12:02
for Julie-Ann
Neville said:
Oh\' wow.. the world must surely be filled to overflowing with Julie Ann\'s..
I know there are several of my own that go way back.. I keep in touch with only a few for maybe obvious reasons..
Your Julie Ann was clearly a very special one & in more than just name.... Now of course, immortalised... Aint that just what poets do ...
Neville
June 28th, 2020 05:14
Neville said:
Oh\' wow.. the world must surely be filled to overflowing with Julie Ann\'s..
I know there are several of my own that go way back.. I keep in touch with only a few for maybe obvious reasons..
Your Julie Ann was clearly a very special one & in more than just name.... Now of course, immortalised... Aint that just what poets do ...
Neville
June 28th, 2020 05:14
for Julie-Ann
Fay Slimm. said:
An appeal of a verse that really strikes home - - \"the glory we drank\" hit the nail on the head for me my friend. Such a tender tribute D.A. for once what was and is no longer.
June 28th, 2020 04:14
Fay Slimm. said:
An appeal of a verse that really strikes home - - \"the glory we drank\" hit the nail on the head for me my friend. Such a tender tribute D.A. for once what was and is no longer.
June 28th, 2020 04:14
for Julie-Ann
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories will never leave you, as they won\'t me.
Andy
June 28th, 2020 04:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories will never leave you, as they won\'t me.
Andy
June 28th, 2020 04:11
for Julie-Ann
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Each one a little scar?
Great tribute to a love lost DA
Thanks for sharing
June 28th, 2020 03:59
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Each one a little scar?
Great tribute to a love lost DA
Thanks for sharing
June 28th, 2020 03:59
messing with the clock
Goldfinch60 said:
What if? once more raises its head.
We have all said that but as Andrew has said the ending is so very true and there are so many wonderful memories to be had.
Andy
June 28th, 2020 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
What if? once more raises its head.
We have all said that but as Andrew has said the ending is so very true and there are so many wonderful memories to be had.
Andy
June 28th, 2020 00:43
messing with the clock
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m with you. I don\'t regret a thing complacent - no. Gratefull - yes.
June 27th, 2020 14:57
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m with you. I don\'t regret a thing complacent - no. Gratefull - yes.
June 27th, 2020 14:57
messing with the clock
Bragee said:
True understanding of life expressed here. Without our experiences and memories we have nothing.
June 27th, 2020 14:22
Bragee said:
True understanding of life expressed here. Without our experiences and memories we have nothing.
June 27th, 2020 14:22
messing with the clock
Neville said:
Now ya messin with me head so you are... I am not sure whether I would turn back the clock if given the chance and or the means.... I have often thought about this, as I\'m sure most of us do, particularly as we get older.... There are certainly loads of good memories I would like to hang on to, whereas the not so good times are a different kettle of fish altogether....
I do like your writing style DA and you certainly have the knack of making the page look good...
Neville
June 27th, 2020 12:16
Neville said:
Now ya messin with me head so you are... I am not sure whether I would turn back the clock if given the chance and or the means.... I have often thought about this, as I\'m sure most of us do, particularly as we get older.... There are certainly loads of good memories I would like to hang on to, whereas the not so good times are a different kettle of fish altogether....
I do like your writing style DA and you certainly have the knack of making the page look good...
Neville
June 27th, 2020 12:16
messing with the clock
Accidental Poet said:
Time goes forward only. But your mind can take you anywhere you want da. Travel safe. ; )
June 27th, 2020 08:34
Accidental Poet said:
Time goes forward only. But your mind can take you anywhere you want da. Travel safe. ; )
June 27th, 2020 08:34
messing with the clock
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk. I thought it was gonna be about BST, and mucking about with the clocks then!
June 27th, 2020 05:53
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk. I thought it was gonna be about BST, and mucking about with the clocks then!
June 27th, 2020 05:53
messing with the clock
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Careful what you wish for eh?
Love the ending here DA wise words indeed
Bravo
June 27th, 2020 04:45
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Careful what you wish for eh?
Love the ending here DA wise words indeed
Bravo
June 27th, 2020 04:45
messing with the clock
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - you verse with wisdom the foibles of wanting the clock turned back - -- love that final punch-line on the foolishness of losing fond memories..... couldn\'t agree more where real wealth lies my friend.
June 27th, 2020 04:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - you verse with wisdom the foibles of wanting the clock turned back - -- love that final punch-line on the foolishness of losing fond memories..... couldn\'t agree more where real wealth lies my friend.
June 27th, 2020 04:10
autumnal beauty
Goldfinch60 said:
That autumnal beauty is so wonderful, natures art at its best.
Well I have my music list to listen to this evening now d a, Yusef Lateef will have to return to the ether.
Andy
June 27th, 2020 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
That autumnal beauty is so wonderful, natures art at its best.
Well I have my music list to listen to this evening now d a, Yusef Lateef will have to return to the ether.
Andy
June 27th, 2020 00:16
autumnal beauty
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening *DA* thanks for a very generous helping (2.5 + hrs) of mood Jazz - ideal background to write up my Weekly Reports !
Love the Poem reminds us *August come She must* ! Cooler days & nights and the vibrant Green of Summer morphing into the more diverse & subtle shades of Autumn. This Year the inevitable *Autumn Beauty* will do its best to eclipse the grip of COVID 19 - but there may be some light at the end of the Tunnel. Thanks foe sharing a promise of Autumn.
Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
June 26th, 2020 17:35
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening *DA* thanks for a very generous helping (2.5 + hrs) of mood Jazz - ideal background to write up my Weekly Reports !
Love the Poem reminds us *August come She must* ! Cooler days & nights and the vibrant Green of Summer morphing into the more diverse & subtle shades of Autumn. This Year the inevitable *Autumn Beauty* will do its best to eclipse the grip of COVID 19 - but there may be some light at the end of the Tunnel. Thanks foe sharing a promise of Autumn.
Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
June 26th, 2020 17:35
autumnal beauty
Fay Slimm. said:
The pathos of missing nature\'s bounty comes over so deeply in these autumnal lines D.A. - - so pleased you got round to posting this little gem along with the kinda music I like.
June 26th, 2020 12:24
Fay Slimm. said:
The pathos of missing nature\'s bounty comes over so deeply in these autumnal lines D.A. - - so pleased you got round to posting this little gem along with the kinda music I like.
June 26th, 2020 12:24
my breath
Neville said:
this has a really nice dreamy romantic feel and loads of poetic charm n appeal...
June 26th, 2020 10:45
Neville said:
this has a really nice dreamy romantic feel and loads of poetic charm n appeal...
June 26th, 2020 10:45
autumnal beauty
Neville said:
A bloomin good out of season seasonal poem sir.. and I like it.. I like it a lot..
Neville
June 26th, 2020 10:39
Neville said:
A bloomin good out of season seasonal poem sir.. and I like it.. I like it a lot..
Neville
June 26th, 2020 10:39
autumnal beauty
AwHec8 said:
Fine Write dusk arising.
Good Lord, I absolutely love the horns,
Trumpet (melody that awakens, troops no less, which I tried and couldn\'t even play),
Saxophone (sexy like a fine sound blowing over the curves of a woman),
Trombone (deep/loud sound like a baritone alerting to what\'s coming or maybe going),
Clarinet too (tweeting like a bird).
June 26th, 2020 10:11
AwHec8 said:
Fine Write dusk arising.
Good Lord, I absolutely love the horns,
Trumpet (melody that awakens, troops no less, which I tried and couldn\'t even play),
Saxophone (sexy like a fine sound blowing over the curves of a woman),
Trombone (deep/loud sound like a baritone alerting to what\'s coming or maybe going),
Clarinet too (tweeting like a bird).
June 26th, 2020 10:11
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