Comments received on poems by dusk arising
my breath
AwHec8 said:
Damn Dude pretty good. Love it when there is the extra music or song to go with.
June 18th, 2020 06:37
AwHec8 said:
Damn Dude pretty good. Love it when there is the extra music or song to go with.
June 18th, 2020 06:37
my breath
Fay Slimm. said:
Breath-taking romance in such poetic and beautiful wording - your chosen lady would surely treasure this one my friend.
June 18th, 2020 03:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Breath-taking romance in such poetic and beautiful wording - your chosen lady would surely treasure this one my friend.
June 18th, 2020 03:20
my breath
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words enhanced by my favourite trumpeter singing - what more could I want this morning.
Andy
June 18th, 2020 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words enhanced by my favourite trumpeter singing - what more could I want this morning.
Andy
June 18th, 2020 01:10
what remains
Suresh said:
Your words are truly captivating, such as is the music.
June 17th, 2020 22:51
Suresh said:
Your words are truly captivating, such as is the music.
June 17th, 2020 22:51
what remains
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening DA - Angela Here - We love Debussy and the flow in the music is well suited to the harp. Thanks for a very poignant Love Poem. Interesting rhyme pattern xaxxa in each verse - great to recite. Brian & I are in the first enjoyments of married love - but we are encouraged by your final verse. It reminds us that when all else has run its course - Love Remains !
Love - Peace - Joy
Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
June 16th, 2020 15:26
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening DA - Angela Here - We love Debussy and the flow in the music is well suited to the harp. Thanks for a very poignant Love Poem. Interesting rhyme pattern xaxxa in each verse - great to recite. Brian & I are in the first enjoyments of married love - but we are encouraged by your final verse. It reminds us that when all else has run its course - Love Remains !
Love - Peace - Joy
Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
June 16th, 2020 15:26
what remains
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk.
My singing always remains, even if all else is lost. Arrgghhh, they say, and run away from me lol.
June 16th, 2020 01:48
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk.
My singing always remains, even if all else is lost. Arrgghhh, they say, and run away from me lol.
June 16th, 2020 01:48
what remains
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words d a. In spite of the many troubles we may have had love is always there, including love for music as shown in this piece by Debussy.
I have several interpretations of music played on harp including Bach\'s Goldberg Variations played by Catrin Finch which I think is wonderful.
https://youtu.be/H3nhBXD1Fbs
June 16th, 2020 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words d a. In spite of the many troubles we may have had love is always there, including love for music as shown in this piece by Debussy.
I have several interpretations of music played on harp including Bach\'s Goldberg Variations played by Catrin Finch which I think is wonderful.
https://youtu.be/H3nhBXD1Fbs
June 16th, 2020 00:44
when life comes around
Suresh said:
Pleased to know that you have kicked the \'C\' to the curb, for we wish to enjoy your company for a very long long time.
June 12th, 2020 12:19
Suresh said:
Pleased to know that you have kicked the \'C\' to the curb, for we wish to enjoy your company for a very long long time.
June 12th, 2020 12:19
when life comes around
MaddieJ said:
What a masterful write! I really appreciate what you\'re saying and can relate. I love your attitude reading all the other comments and replies from you. I hope that if this kind of news happens to me again, that I will take it like a champ like you. Inspiring, daunting, entertaining and real! Much obliged to read this.
June 11th, 2020 17:45
MaddieJ said:
What a masterful write! I really appreciate what you\'re saying and can relate. I love your attitude reading all the other comments and replies from you. I hope that if this kind of news happens to me again, that I will take it like a champ like you. Inspiring, daunting, entertaining and real! Much obliged to read this.
June 11th, 2020 17:45
when life comes around
Poetic Dan said:
That it does on this spinning rock from the sun!
All the power in your words bring out the spirit to keep on enjoying every day as it comes!
Thanks for playing your part and the gift that you are!
May the rest of your journey be smooth sailing from now on..
All the best
June 11th, 2020 17:08
Poetic Dan said:
That it does on this spinning rock from the sun!
All the power in your words bring out the spirit to keep on enjoying every day as it comes!
Thanks for playing your part and the gift that you are!
May the rest of your journey be smooth sailing from now on..
All the best
June 11th, 2020 17:08
when life comes around
Neville said:
the very first line of your poem today just about say\'s it all my friend...
you have posted another poignant reminder of how we each live life in a state of balance and with a cloud never too far away … I am so glad you finally felt strong enough able to hit the send button my friend..
Respect & All Good Things,
Neville
June 11th, 2020 12:55
Neville said:
the very first line of your poem today just about say\'s it all my friend...
you have posted another poignant reminder of how we each live life in a state of balance and with a cloud never too far away … I am so glad you finally felt strong enough able to hit the send button my friend..
Respect & All Good Things,
Neville
June 11th, 2020 12:55
apathy begat genocide
Barry Hodges said:
There are worse things in the world than being \"racist\" - such as murderer, rapist, liar, Donald Trump.
June 11th, 2020 10:59
Barry Hodges said:
There are worse things in the world than being \"racist\" - such as murderer, rapist, liar, Donald Trump.
June 11th, 2020 10:59
when life comes around
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes life ;has to be faced and coping with cancer must be the biggest of challenges - - the fact that that there is now no trace found deserves this outing of how it first felt D.A. - may the state of your present life keep on improving in leaps and bounds my dear friend.
June 11th, 2020 05:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes life ;has to be faced and coping with cancer must be the biggest of challenges - - the fact that that there is now no trace found deserves this outing of how it first felt D.A. - may the state of your present life keep on improving in leaps and bounds my dear friend.
June 11th, 2020 05:13
when life comes around
orchidee said:
A sensitive write dusk.
I won\'t go into \'why\' - won\'t come up with any answers. I read a book of Christian Minister who had it. He departed this life after a year of trial with it. And not the only story I know either.
June 11th, 2020 01:58
orchidee said:
A sensitive write dusk.
I won\'t go into \'why\' - won\'t come up with any answers. I read a book of Christian Minister who had it. He departed this life after a year of trial with it. And not the only story I know either.
June 11th, 2020 01:58
when life comes around
Goldfinch60 said:
That life is back with you d a and may it be with you for a very long time.
Andy
June 11th, 2020 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
That life is back with you d a and may it be with you for a very long time.
Andy
June 11th, 2020 01:26
in a place he wants to be
Laura🌻 said:
dusk arising,
Reading your poem reminded me of a gentleman I met at a rehabilitation facility who was in the Vietnam War on behalf of his country. He survived the war and was rewarded with mental health disabilities and drug addiction!
Laura
June 10th, 2020 19:43
Laura🌻 said:
dusk arising,
Reading your poem reminded me of a gentleman I met at a rehabilitation facility who was in the Vietnam War on behalf of his country. He survived the war and was rewarded with mental health disabilities and drug addiction!
Laura
June 10th, 2020 19:43
in a place he wants to be
Suresh said:
We recoil at the sight of the scars
Never realizing how they were earned
Would we be willing to pay the price
To earn those scars for our freedom
I am in tune with your words, so poetically expressed
June 10th, 2020 15:33
Suresh said:
We recoil at the sight of the scars
Never realizing how they were earned
Would we be willing to pay the price
To earn those scars for our freedom
I am in tune with your words, so poetically expressed
June 10th, 2020 15:33
in a place he wants to be
MendedFences27 said:
A great message for Vets of any era. Will their spirit live on in future generation? Seems lately it\'s all about ME, ME, ME.
I liked your poem and its message of respect for those who served. - Phil A.
June 9th, 2020 22:24
MendedFences27 said:
A great message for Vets of any era. Will their spirit live on in future generation? Seems lately it\'s all about ME, ME, ME.
I liked your poem and its message of respect for those who served. - Phil A.
June 9th, 2020 22:24
in a place he wants to be
Neville said:
I rarely pop back here once I have done my all too infrequent rounds... glad I did today though.. this is a splendid poem dedicated I presume to all our ex-service men who deserve so much more than what they currently get...
a poignant and perfectly penned poem indeed....
Neville
June 9th, 2020 02:40
Neville said:
I rarely pop back here once I have done my all too infrequent rounds... glad I did today though.. this is a splendid poem dedicated I presume to all our ex-service men who deserve so much more than what they currently get...
a poignant and perfectly penned poem indeed....
Neville
June 9th, 2020 02:40
in a place he wants to be
Fay Slimm. said:
The tragedy is that these heroes among us never receive the respect they deserve - - thanks for this sad but fervent reminder D.A.
June 9th, 2020 02:25
Fay Slimm. said:
The tragedy is that these heroes among us never receive the respect they deserve - - thanks for this sad but fervent reminder D.A.
June 9th, 2020 02:25
in a place he wants to be
Goldfinch60 said:
So many just do not care for those who fought for us and the government is the worst culprit.
Andy
June 9th, 2020 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
So many just do not care for those who fought for us and the government is the worst culprit.
Andy
June 9th, 2020 00:37
the great healer
Goldfinch60 said:
There is always time even if it is just in memories, savour each and every one.
Andy
June 9th, 2020 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
There is always time even if it is just in memories, savour each and every one.
Andy
June 9th, 2020 00:31
the great healer
Fay Slimm. said:
A truly intriguing piece of prose that captures those moments of love\'s aftermath where silent embraces word all that\'s needed. An opening chapter with more to follow ?
June 8th, 2020 17:49
Fay Slimm. said:
A truly intriguing piece of prose that captures those moments of love\'s aftermath where silent embraces word all that\'s needed. An opening chapter with more to follow ?
June 8th, 2020 17:49
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