Comments received on poems by M.E.M.



Powerless
Goldfinch60 said:

There are so many people who cannot agree with the problem but but also in the UK it has shown the good in people that has been coming out even though there is no physical contact.

April 23rd, 2020 01:11

Powerless
jarcher54 said:

Did we imagine starting 2020 that we would enter such enigmatic times? How ironic that, midst natural challenges that should unite mankind, the petty politics of the resentful continues to assert itself. That is the most bizarre thing to me... it\'s as if they will politicize an asteroid about to collide with earth.

April 23rd, 2020 01:05

Powerless
FredPeyer said:

As much as it hurts seeing Waikiki as a ghost town, I could not agree with you more!

April 22nd, 2020 11:45

Powerless
dusk arising said:

Whereas I do agree with your sentiments, I can see from across the ocean that poor ambiguous leadership has encouraged their behaviour. Strong steadfast leadership is what is required.

I worry that in the event of a second wave of restrictions, brought about by lax management of current restrictions, will lead to serious civil unrest in usa.

April 22nd, 2020 10:46

Lost and Found
Goldfinch60 said:

That survival will always bring life eternal to them.

Andy

April 17th, 2020 00:49

Lost and Found
dusk arising said:

Some of us conceal life\'s scars more effectively than others do. Some people would weep everytime they recall the cause of those scars so rather than weep they are poker faced. You can\'t read a book by looking at the cover is a very true saying.
There are streets full of survivors who you will never see. They conceal it so well.

Mind you, if they were all poets, reading their poetry would be revealing.

April 16th, 2020 11:47

Lost and Found
FredPeyer said:

Well written, M.E.M., we are all survivors, all with different scars. And sometimes, when compared to others, we realize how insignificant our own scars are. That is why we have to reach out to those whose with huge scars!

April 16th, 2020 11:39

Lost and Found
orchidee said:

Good write MEM. Ohh, anyone who likes \'My little pony\' must have some good in them! heehee. I saw your profile.

April 16th, 2020 11:36

Innocence Through Music
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a good poem, the innocence of childhood is so wonderful and in this day and age seems not to last long.

Andy

March 30th, 2020 01:23

Forsaken
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotion laden write M.E.M.

February 16th, 2020 16:21

I’m Done
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write M.E.M. some people can be like this but the true friends will always be with you.

December 7th, 2019 01:26

I’m Done
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thnaks for sharing MEM ! This is a great Poem in both its STRUCTURE & SUBLECT ~ Im Done ! ~ I like the single lines when your attitude has been soured by discourtesy ! I give up - Im done - Im done - to them - Im just ....... DONE ! In my own personal experience (Im 36) sharing an experience with someone is important ! When you do something on your own (Moovie or Theatre) there is no one to reminisce with. When you do something WITH someone the experience is TEN times better and everytime you meet you can relive it ~ OK ! love it ~ thanks for sharing !

Peace & Joy
Your through POETRY ~ BRIAN

December 6th, 2019 18:35

I’m Done
FredPeyer said:

Love your writing, M.E.M., honest and straight forward. But I don\'t agree on giving up completely. Haven\'t we been guilty of the same thing once in a while? It is annoying and terribly impolite when somebody cancels with \"I don\'t feel like it\" or some phony excuse. Give them the benefit of the doubt, try again, and then if it still does not work, OK, dump em!

December 6th, 2019 17:41

I’m Done
Bragee said:

Very good writing.
Self reflect and change.
Some people are just not worthy of the prized moments in our lives.
Forget them.

December 6th, 2019 12:09

Sloth
FredPeyer said:

Looks like you beat the challenge, M.E.M!

November 5th, 2019 11:07

Envy
Nicholas Browning said:

To envy is to aspire for what belongs to another. That\'s why it\'s considered a sin. You could have what someone else does, but envy implies that you want to steal theirs and possess it for yourself. A nice little read.
The topic of the seven deadly sins is always a neat one.

March 24th, 2019 20:42

Envy
Fay Slimm said:

A good poetic description of the sin of envy. Nothing good can come from this trait........ thanks for the needed reminder M.E,M.

March 24th, 2019 17:36

Love Not Had
Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33) said:

Men are such mind game players..they need to grow balls and stop acting like little girls...it sounds like he led you on..he knew what he was doing believe me..maybe he\'s gay..lol..seriously, it could very well be what the issue is..anyway, I wish you the best..just be up right and confront him about it...if he stops being your friend over that then you don\'t need the dude anyway..nice write..take care

December 18th, 2018 03:37

Just Friends
Goldfinch60 said:

With friends you need nothing else, they are special.

December 11th, 2018 01:39

Oh Graduation
Goldfinch60 said:

That road not taken is full of wonder.

May 25th, 2018 14:14

It’s... Complicated?
onepauly said:

I\'m happy for him and for you.
I thought the image was great.
like those people in the movie total recall.

May 3rd, 2018 13:40

Metamorphosis Based Poem
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. Yes we all die from these bodies we have but our Spirit will go on for eternity.

March 20th, 2018 02:11

Metamorphosis Based Poem
Poetic Dan said:

The points I feel are endless as for the reason to carry on or stop is.

I\'ve always wondered what it will be like from a young age, now plenty of friends and family have passed.
I\'m slowly thinking it\'s just find balance in a forever flow of change.

Thanks for write, nicely done

March 19th, 2018 14:17

Fly
FredPeyer said:

Just be careful you don\'t end up like Icarus!

January 13th, 2018 22:50

Fly
orchidee said:

Oh no, this has all turned out in Greek! A glitch in some script, it is. I will translate it!

January 12th, 2018 11:00

Frozen
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write.

January 12th, 2018 02:18

Frozen
FredPeyer said:

To understand others, to feel their joy or anguish, we have to walk in their shoes!
Well penned, M.E.M.

January 11th, 2018 16:39

Frozen
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 11th, 2018 14:38

Alone
space_girl said:

Dark write ,but yet it’s very well written:)

January 5th, 2018 17:01

Alone
FredPeyer said:

Very well expressed, an apt description of \'loneliness\'. Reading it I could feel the coldness seeping into me.

January 5th, 2018 15:57

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