Comments received on poems by M.E.M.



Day by Day
Goldfinch60 said:

You do know that Friday is poets day.

Push Off Early Tomorrows Saturday.

Andy

May 13th, 2021 00:29

Be Unfine
Goldfinch60 said:

\"If your dreams do not scare they are not big enough\"

May 11th, 2021 00:24

Sunbathing Bliss
Goldfinch60 said:

May the sun always shine on your life MEM.

Andy

May 9th, 2021 00:28

Sunbathing Bliss
yellowrose said:

Very nice ! Lovely poem

May 8th, 2021 13:57

Take Pride in Liking
jarcher54 said:

Humorous subject, and I appreciate your candor! It\'s also very erotic in a very subtle way. The pantoum is successful in an interesting way... the current feelings and memory of that event interplay with one another in a dreamy, stream of consciousness way that is very fitting. Repeating the longings and experiences like not being able to sleep is like being reminded what it\'s like to toss and turn night after night!

May 7th, 2021 23:09

Take Pride in Liking
L. B. Mek said:

the message alone is powerful!
maybe worth reposting next month (would be a timely read, I think?)
a write with a lot of potential, but even as it is, a wonderfully emotive read
happy for you! dear poet
utilise that same wall-obliterating awesomeness, in your future poetry
and watch it transcend into realms of powerfully voiced: artistry,
thanks for sharing

May 7th, 2021 05:54

Take Pride in Liking
Goldfinch60 said:

Sometimes love is not their but the friendship that remains can be so important in life.

Andy

May 7th, 2021 00:46

Take Pride in Liking
rebmasters said:

I can relate! Love this

May 6th, 2021 14:37

Alone in the Woods
L. B. Mek said:

I would classify this as an impassioned poet\'s latest step
towards actualising their dream of crafting that elusive: perfect text,
liked the editorial diary dates, it takes experience
to acknowledge the toils of craft, within artistry..
thanks for sharing

May 6th, 2021 05:14

Alone in the Woods
Goldfinch60 said:

That light takes us to the magnificent places in our lives MEM, just switch it on.

Andy

May 5th, 2021 23:56

Alone with You
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful words, conveying an important message
thanks for choosing to share!
(utilise MPS as you wish to, dear poet
what\'s optimal for other\'s
doesn\'t necessarily have to be optimal for you,
I find those who have been here for years
have helped nurture an inclusive community
for the appreciation of poetry on this site, a rarity;
we should appreciate: while it lasts...
participation in comments and everything else
has never been a mandatory requirement
at least for me, just simply adds to the experience
should you choose to participate: willingly - eventually)

May 4th, 2021 05:18

Alone with You
Goldfinch60 said:

May that togetherness never end MEM, your life will be wonderful.

Andy

May 4th, 2021 00:24

Alone with You
Doggerel Dave said:

Your usual \'comments welcome\' missing here - why? Are comments drying up? If so this may be because you don\'t respond to these comments and so there\'s no dialogue, something MPS works better with. (I could possibly put this more tactfully, but I do mean well!)
Smooth piece of work with a close relationship clearly elaborated; you have, as you record, taken your time over this. That kind of effort should have just recognition.

May 3rd, 2021 23:05

Alone with You
Accidental Poet said:

Let the loneliness be replaced with contentment by whatever means necessary. Beautiful write MEM ; )

May 3rd, 2021 19:58

My Life in the Stars
L. B. Mek said:

utilising purposed imagery and detailed - clarity, to produce poetry
with a capacity to gift your audience
a painstakingly rendered and immersive reading experience,
(through countless subtle revisions, I imagine)..
such a brilliant read!
thanks for choosing to share your unique voice, dear poet

May 3rd, 2021 05:36

My Life in the Stars
Eugene S. said:

Very easy to envision and relate to. I\'m there. I appreciate the aspects of direction and progression.

May 2nd, 2021 07:56

My Life in the Stars
Doggerel Dave said:

This work really drew me into your place in an environment full of texture and detail. A three dimensional picture. The feel of time passing and thus change also in the mix.
Really engaging read which put together elements of your life and transformed it into so much more.
Many thanks for that, M.


May 1st, 2021 21:59

My Life in the Stars
XIdlepoetX said:

I live in Scotland, and for as long as I can remember I\'ve always been weirdly fascinated with the Americana beauty. This poem is a deep ocean of life you\'ve facsimiled and turned into words. I could live in the bittersweet happiness of it.

May 1st, 2021 16:13

Soap Box
Doggerel Dave said:

Is there something about Florida you are a teensy bit unsure about?
After your sestina I am going for a siesta.
BTW pickles in any form give me indigestion :-)

April 15th, 2021 19:41

Soap Box
Trenz Pruca said:

Thank you. I admit to not being sold on either pickles or Florida.

April 15th, 2021 19:32

We Battle at Dawn
Spiritual wanderer said:

Nice one..

March 21st, 2021 16:24

We Battle at Dawn
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write MEM.

Even in the darkness
The moon will show its light
Showing to us all
That this world will all be right.

Andy

March 21st, 2021 01:44

We Battle at Dawn
Doggerel Dave said:

Straightforward and well constructed, an easy read. Enjoyed. Must be a very small town to be so enveloped by night.

March 20th, 2021 16:03

Why Did the Chicken Cross the Road?
dusk arising said:

Not destined to the destiny someone else plans for us..... parent?.... tutor?.... employer? NO! .. strike out and take it as it comes.... that way you\'ll have a life to look back on and be able to song along with Frank \"I did it my way\" lol

Enjoyed reading your post very much.

March 5th, 2021 08:54

Why Did the Chicken Cross the Road?
L. B. Mek said:

ok, so much deeper than those first three stanza\'s lull us readers into pre-emptively judging, insuring that final stanza\'s twist, maximises its impact,
an interesting format, that I\'m sure can be perfected over time into a unique style for poignant write\'s that surprise your readers into alert awareness for the subject matter you want to highlight..
really well thought-out and executed,
thanks for bringing up such an important topic of moral and social ambiguity in our treatment of nature\'s - (fellow), children

March 5th, 2021 04:06

Why Did the Chicken Cross the Road?
Goldfinch60 said:

We may never know, like many things in life we may always take that chance to move on.

Andy

March 5th, 2021 02:07

Why Did the Chicken Cross the Road?
Doggerel Dave said:

Don\'t keep me in suspenders - did she or didn\'t she? Good beginning, expansive middle; now what about an ending? :-)
You\'ve made it clear to me why I\'m a veggo.

March 4th, 2021 16:50

Why Did the Chicken Cross the Road?
Jerry Reynolds said:

Anywhere else is better than here.
Good write, M.E.M.


March 4th, 2021 13:54

White Pawn
L. B. Mek said:

how venerable you\'ve made yourself in sharing such crippling self-realisation, though
the mere act of gleaning this much wisdom out of life, shows you may have always been on the right track,
just waiting for that opportunistic train to help you demonstrate your true worth..
this is a profound write, I like how you recognise and acknowledge, taking accountability, but quite rightly not offering meaningless apologies for a situation you never had too much control over,
it is a rare person that can swim - back, against the flow of their lives current and set an example for us all to follow,
thank you for sharing this brave write dear poet (whether literal or abstract)

March 4th, 2021 05:40

White Pawn
Goldfinch60 said:

Intriguing words MEM.

Andy

March 4th, 2021 01:24

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