Comments received on poems by M.E.M.



Why I Could be okay Dying
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 7th, 2024 10:31

People might think I’m insane
Doggerel Dave said:

Definitely have a day off and don\'t drive!!

November 6th, 2024 15:44

People might think I’m insane
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 6th, 2024 15:11

Movie Street
Doggerel Dave said:

Shivers and memories...or should that be memories and shivers?

November 5th, 2024 22:49

Mighty Words Meant for You
Cheeky Missy said:

It\'s definitely a challenge but prettily accomplished, methinks. Thought-provoking and fascinating, the breadth of subjects considered rather less large than initially meets the eye. Excellently rendered with delightful imagery. Thank you for sharing.

October 24th, 2024 00:14

Mighty Words Meant for You
Doggerel Dave said:

Alliteration always allocates alphabetic assonances attempting to abbreviate artificially amiable assurances.

And I enjoy them very much!


October 23rd, 2024 14:42

The Unknown
Doggerel Dave said:

Smoothly rendered imaginative trip. Imaginative because I doubt there are any spaces left on earth which haven’t been affected by human presence.
Prior to that, nature evolved and became an environment friendly to humans, who were able to exist in it, then exploit it and finally all but destroy it.
Still possible to dream, though…


September 26th, 2024 17:47

An Ode to Growing Up
Cheeky Missy said:

Lovely and haunting, classic and beautifully rendered. P.S. Dave never grew up, just kidding.

September 25th, 2024 16:18

An Ode to Growing Up
Doggerel Dave said:

\'Been a long time since I grew up............or did I ever?
I was going to add - thanks for the memory...but....☺️

September 25th, 2024 16:13

Stars Above
Doggerel Dave said:

Great thought - unity in separation with the universe as your connection.

Yours the uni-verse.

September 20th, 2024 18:28

Stars Above
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 20th, 2024 13:00

The Tears
Doggerel Dave said:

First time prompt free? That You? Sad that it is so sad, because it is neat and easy to read for me.
Another, more optimistic to come?

September 13th, 2024 21:56

No One Left
Tony36 said:

Raw, excellent, great write

August 26th, 2024 20:00

No One Left
sorenbarrett said:

Raw and well done

August 26th, 2024 16:11

Lurking in the Shadows
Doggerel Dave said:

Boo!

August 22nd, 2024 08:38

Lurking in the Shadows
Thoughtless said:

Things unseen. They can be so real.

August 21st, 2024 15:14

Lurking in the Shadows
sorenbarrett said:

Few people take the time to listen too busy in their own heads.

August 21st, 2024 11:21

This is Rhetorical
sorenbarrett said:

A good response to the question and prompt. One must take care of oneself before one can take care of others.

August 19th, 2024 16:56

This is Rhetorical
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'m not an advocate for absolute selfishness every time, but an altruistic situation this isn\'t.

August 19th, 2024 16:53

This is Rhetorical
Thoughtless said:

Sometimes change is hard, Nice write,

August 19th, 2024 16:34

Funeral
Doggerel Dave said:

Very descriptive.
Yes - funerals are for the living, It\'s just garbage disposal for the dead - who aren\'t there anyway.
You don\'t pop in often enough, MEM. If you must utilise prompts, then find more of them, please.

August 7th, 2024 17:35

Funeral
sorenbarrett said:

A passage in life that all must take. Nicely worded

August 7th, 2024 11:41

Stars Falling
peto said:

I\'ve been reading you for years and you never disappoint
Great to see you still going strong

June 6th, 2024 12:19

Life Boat
Doggerel Dave said:

Feels like a rich in detail allegory - so I hope you are really OK..
Enjoyed the picture you painted.

May 30th, 2024 18:57

A Thundering Whisper
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work. You paint this scene well.

February 29th, 2024 18:25

A Thundering Whisper
Cassie58 said:

Pleased you fell into serenity rather than falling into the water. This is a lovely tranquil poem, but I was worried about the crocs. Great imagery. You took me there MEM.

February 29th, 2024 17:06

A Thundering Whisper
David Wakeling said:

Nice poem.It took me there.Beautiful

February 29th, 2024 14:56

Remember
Doggerel Dave said:

Just don\'t sleep in......... 🛌🏻 !!!

January 25th, 2024 15:30

Remember
Cassie58 said:

Made me laugh. So relatable.

January 25th, 2024 15:30

Take a Moment
Caring dove said:

A lovely writing nicely expressed ))

October 25th, 2023 14:24

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