Comments received on poems by M.E.M.
It’s... Complicated?
onepauly said:
I\'m happy for him and for you.
I thought the image was great.
like those people in the movie total recall.
May 3rd, 2018 13:40
onepauly said:
I\'m happy for him and for you.
I thought the image was great.
like those people in the movie total recall.
May 3rd, 2018 13:40
Metamorphosis Based Poem
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Yes we all die from these bodies we have but our Spirit will go on for eternity.
March 20th, 2018 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Yes we all die from these bodies we have but our Spirit will go on for eternity.
March 20th, 2018 02:11
Metamorphosis Based Poem
Poetic Dan said:
The points I feel are endless as for the reason to carry on or stop is.
I\'ve always wondered what it will be like from a young age, now plenty of friends and family have passed.
I\'m slowly thinking it\'s just find balance in a forever flow of change.
Thanks for write, nicely done
March 19th, 2018 14:17
Poetic Dan said:
The points I feel are endless as for the reason to carry on or stop is.
I\'ve always wondered what it will be like from a young age, now plenty of friends and family have passed.
I\'m slowly thinking it\'s just find balance in a forever flow of change.
Thanks for write, nicely done
March 19th, 2018 14:17
Fly
orchidee said:
Oh no, this has all turned out in Greek! A glitch in some script, it is. I will translate it!
January 12th, 2018 11:00
orchidee said:
Oh no, this has all turned out in Greek! A glitch in some script, it is. I will translate it!
January 12th, 2018 11:00
Alone
FredPeyer said:
Very well expressed, an apt description of \'loneliness\'. Reading it I could feel the coldness seeping into me.
January 5th, 2018 15:57
FredPeyer said:
Very well expressed, an apt description of \'loneliness\'. Reading it I could feel the coldness seeping into me.
January 5th, 2018 15:57
Insides
FredPeyer said:
Amazing write, M.E.M! There are times when we feel we can never be whole again, and you expressed it beautifully and artistically.
Instead of titling it \'live\', you could have titled it \'life\', because it will heal itself!
Btw, don\'t give up on kissing....it\'s just too much fun!
January 4th, 2018 16:26
FredPeyer said:
Amazing write, M.E.M! There are times when we feel we can never be whole again, and you expressed it beautifully and artistically.
Instead of titling it \'live\', you could have titled it \'life\', because it will heal itself!
Btw, don\'t give up on kissing....it\'s just too much fun!
January 4th, 2018 16:26
Insides
Shadowbox15 said:
It’s beautiful, but I’m struggling to figure out why you put in ‘nevermore’.
January 4th, 2018 15:44
Shadowbox15 said:
It’s beautiful, but I’m struggling to figure out why you put in ‘nevermore’.
January 4th, 2018 15:44
Photographer
M.E.M. said:
Thank you for all your input and comments. It means the world to me
January 3rd, 2018 14:27
M.E.M. said:
Thank you for all your input and comments. It means the world to me
January 3rd, 2018 14:27
Photographer
Tony36 said:
I love taking pictures. Setting up the camera. Finding the right angle. Trying to get that one perfect shot. Well written and expressed
January 3rd, 2018 13:10
Tony36 said:
I love taking pictures. Setting up the camera. Finding the right angle. Trying to get that one perfect shot. Well written and expressed
January 3rd, 2018 13:10
Photographer
FredPeyer said:
Creative and interesting angle! Never thought of photographs as victims before, but somehow it does make sense.
January 3rd, 2018 12:59
FredPeyer said:
Creative and interesting angle! Never thought of photographs as victims before, but somehow it does make sense.
January 3rd, 2018 12:59
Rainy
FredPeyer said:
A great last line that made me see the whole poem in a different way, more positive!
Great writing, M.E.M.!
December 22nd, 2017 12:01
FredPeyer said:
A great last line that made me see the whole poem in a different way, more positive!
Great writing, M.E.M.!
December 22nd, 2017 12:01
Rainy
Michael Edwards said:
Refreshing was the word that came to mind - enjoyed this write M E M
December 22nd, 2017 02:02
Michael Edwards said:
Refreshing was the word that came to mind - enjoyed this write M E M
December 22nd, 2017 02:02
The Memorable Moment
FredPeyer said:
Am happy for you, M.E.M., that your first date worked out! And from the poem it looks like there will be many more joyful dates! And the last stanza nails it.
December 14th, 2017 14:47
FredPeyer said:
Am happy for you, M.E.M., that your first date worked out! And from the poem it looks like there will be many more joyful dates! And the last stanza nails it.
December 14th, 2017 14:47
Sketch 160A
FredPeyer said:
Wow, M.E.M., what a ride I had reading your poem. I don\'t want the feeling of peace and quiet, I want the chaos, the emotions, the pure and unadulterated joy of life. Your poem is a favorite for me for sure!
December 10th, 2017 21:10
FredPeyer said:
Wow, M.E.M., what a ride I had reading your poem. I don\'t want the feeling of peace and quiet, I want the chaos, the emotions, the pure and unadulterated joy of life. Your poem is a favorite for me for sure!
December 10th, 2017 21:10
Cage
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem. How many times have we been told by parents, teachers, people in power, governments: It\'s for your own good. Is it really?
December 7th, 2017 20:12
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem. How many times have we been told by parents, teachers, people in power, governments: It\'s for your own good. Is it really?
December 7th, 2017 20:12
Pupa
FredPeyer said:
Very intriguing, M.E.M, and applicable to a lot more than a sculpture.
I took a position, am still waiting, nothing happened... :-)
December 5th, 2017 13:07
FredPeyer said:
Very intriguing, M.E.M, and applicable to a lot more than a sculpture.
I took a position, am still waiting, nothing happened... :-)
December 5th, 2017 13:07
Worry Will Vanish
FredPeyer said:
It is very hard to see the world through somebody else\'s eyes, because we see the world not only with our eyes, but also with our minds, our memories, our experiences. And these are uniquely us.
Very well written, M.E.M.!
December 5th, 2017 04:25
FredPeyer said:
It is very hard to see the world through somebody else\'s eyes, because we see the world not only with our eyes, but also with our minds, our memories, our experiences. And these are uniquely us.
Very well written, M.E.M.!
December 5th, 2017 04:25
Wind
Christina8 said:
Very good write MEM! You capture the wind and everything around you so well in this descriptive poem. A pleasure to read!
November 24th, 2017 15:51
Christina8 said:
Very good write MEM! You capture the wind and everything around you so well in this descriptive poem. A pleasure to read!
November 24th, 2017 15:51
Ode to Pugs
FredPeyer said:
The picture is cute, the dogs are cute, and you are cute the way you write about them! They aren\'t called \'Men\'s best friends\' for nothing!!!
November 22nd, 2017 12:43
FredPeyer said:
The picture is cute, the dogs are cute, and you are cute the way you write about them! They aren\'t called \'Men\'s best friends\' for nothing!!!
November 22nd, 2017 12:43
Ode to Pugs
Fay Slimm. said:
A delightful tribute to the remarkable pug-doggie M.E.M. - - they are all that you state - a wonderful companion and so full of fun too. My little Tessa has a pug-mummy and a yorkie daddy - so cute - - thank you for sharing your loving pets Zoey and Bailey with us on M.P.S.
November 21st, 2017 03:04
Fay Slimm. said:
A delightful tribute to the remarkable pug-doggie M.E.M. - - they are all that you state - a wonderful companion and so full of fun too. My little Tessa has a pug-mummy and a yorkie daddy - so cute - - thank you for sharing your loving pets Zoey and Bailey with us on M.P.S.
November 21st, 2017 03:04
Light In The Dark
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., this is the most clever and inventive poem about fire I have ever read. Kudos!
November 16th, 2017 21:40
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., this is the most clever and inventive poem about fire I have ever read. Kudos!
November 16th, 2017 21:40
Her
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., this is a very fine poem about the power of eyes. The girl in the picture is Gula, an Afghan refugee in a Pakistani refugee camp, on the cover of National Geographic, and she went through hell at an early age. The last line in your poem says it all!
November 16th, 2017 21:13
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., this is a very fine poem about the power of eyes. The girl in the picture is Gula, an Afghan refugee in a Pakistani refugee camp, on the cover of National Geographic, and she went through hell at an early age. The last line in your poem says it all!
November 16th, 2017 21:13
Cloud
FredPeyer said:
...And if you don\'t believe me, I will zap you with lightening!
November 15th, 2017 18:09
FredPeyer said:
...And if you don\'t believe me, I will zap you with lightening!
November 15th, 2017 18:09
Her
Fay Slimm. said:
A first rate description of the face in the picture - - so strong yet beguiling the look in those eyes.
November 15th, 2017 17:31
Fay Slimm. said:
A first rate description of the face in the picture - - so strong yet beguiling the look in those eyes.
November 15th, 2017 17:31
Her
lasergraph said:
The eyes that can stare right through you. Perhaps she can see what\'s there, and she still looks to see someone to trust.
November 15th, 2017 17:21
lasergraph said:
The eyes that can stare right through you. Perhaps she can see what\'s there, and she still looks to see someone to trust.
November 15th, 2017 17:21
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