Comments received on poems by M.E.M.
Melting
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., this is the best write-up on this Salvador Dali painting I have ever read! I is also the only one I have ever read. :-)
Seriously, you did write something special here.
November 11th, 2017 18:56
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., this is the best write-up on this Salvador Dali painting I have ever read! I is also the only one I have ever read. :-)
Seriously, you did write something special here.
November 11th, 2017 18:56
Melting
Syd said:
Hi there, I like your poem and Salvador Dalis\' painting - Syd
November 11th, 2017 11:09
Syd said:
Hi there, I like your poem and Salvador Dalis\' painting - Syd
November 11th, 2017 11:09
Melting
Laura🌻 said:
Ahh...yes...
“Time is everyone’s enemy”...
...for those who don’t have
enough of it...
....and for those who
have too much of it...!
Awesome choice of a
Surrealist painting for
your interesting write
about time! He is one
of my favorite painters!
Enjoyed the read!
Thank you!
November 11th, 2017 10:14
Laura🌻 said:
Ahh...yes...
“Time is everyone’s enemy”...
...for those who don’t have
enough of it...
....and for those who
have too much of it...!
Awesome choice of a
Surrealist painting for
your interesting write
about time! He is one
of my favorite painters!
Enjoyed the read!
Thank you!
November 11th, 2017 10:14
Melting
orchidee said:
Good write M. In that case, it\'s not always true that \'time goes slowly when one is NOT enjoying oneself\'!
November 11th, 2017 09:50
orchidee said:
Good write M. In that case, it\'s not always true that \'time goes slowly when one is NOT enjoying oneself\'!
November 11th, 2017 09:50
Haikus
FredPeyer said:
I like all three, M.E.M. The third one brought to mind Schroedinger\'s Cat, a paradox, by Austrian physicist Erwin Schrödinger in 1935. An illustration of what he saw as the problem of quantum mechanics applied to everyday objects. Your Haiku perfectly reflects what that cat could have thought!
November 8th, 2017 13:06
FredPeyer said:
I like all three, M.E.M. The third one brought to mind Schroedinger\'s Cat, a paradox, by Austrian physicist Erwin Schrödinger in 1935. An illustration of what he saw as the problem of quantum mechanics applied to everyday objects. Your Haiku perfectly reflects what that cat could have thought!
November 8th, 2017 13:06
First It Was Blue
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M, you have a very special gift to convey a lot with only a few lines.
November 7th, 2017 12:46
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M, you have a very special gift to convey a lot with only a few lines.
November 7th, 2017 12:46
If I Could See Him Again
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, he will always be with you.
November 7th, 2017 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, he will always be with you.
November 7th, 2017 01:42
If I Could See Him Again
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., your poem really touched me, reminded me of my mom and how I was thousands of miles away when she passed.
Very beautifully written, straight from the heart. Thank you!
November 6th, 2017 14:43
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., your poem really touched me, reminded me of my mom and how I was thousands of miles away when she passed.
Very beautifully written, straight from the heart. Thank you!
November 6th, 2017 14:43
If I Could See Him Again
Christina8 said:
A moving tribute to your pawpaw. I\'m sure he would be very proud!!
November 6th, 2017 12:10
Christina8 said:
A moving tribute to your pawpaw. I\'m sure he would be very proud!!
November 6th, 2017 12:10
Theatre
FredPeyer said:
You made me use google translate, M.E.M.! Have no idea how accurate that translation is, but from what I could see, I am glad I did translate it.
You are right, life is but a stage, and we alone decide how to act on it.
November 4th, 2017 19:45
FredPeyer said:
You made me use google translate, M.E.M.! Have no idea how accurate that translation is, but from what I could see, I am glad I did translate it.
You are right, life is but a stage, and we alone decide how to act on it.
November 4th, 2017 19:45
Identity
FredPeyer said:
You were kicked out of Pencey Prep??? And I thought you were this model student, math genius, chess club founder, cheer leader, AND founder of the \'support the library\' movement!
Well written, M.E.M., but what a disappointment!
November 2nd, 2017 13:34
FredPeyer said:
You were kicked out of Pencey Prep??? And I thought you were this model student, math genius, chess club founder, cheer leader, AND founder of the \'support the library\' movement!
Well written, M.E.M., but what a disappointment!
November 2nd, 2017 13:34
New World
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M. your excellent poem shows A LOT of maturity. It would be great if every young person would think like that and take your great poem to heart. I am only sad about what kind of world we, the older generation, are leaving for you.
November 1st, 2017 11:51
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M. your excellent poem shows A LOT of maturity. It would be great if every young person would think like that and take your great poem to heart. I am only sad about what kind of world we, the older generation, are leaving for you.
November 1st, 2017 11:51
Soon To Be Graduate
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to the \"real\" world, M.E.M., where YOU now handle your own life! It is a great feeling, sometimes it sucks, you have nobody to blame but yourself, but you are now the conductor of your own symphony! :-)
You could have put this poem into \'Reflection\'.
Keep on writing, you are good!
October 31st, 2017 18:25
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to the \"real\" world, M.E.M., where YOU now handle your own life! It is a great feeling, sometimes it sucks, you have nobody to blame but yourself, but you are now the conductor of your own symphony! :-)
You could have put this poem into \'Reflection\'.
Keep on writing, you are good!
October 31st, 2017 18:25
.09 Milliseconds
Anna Marg said:
True even in milliseconds one moment can define a person\'s life! Great work as always!
October 31st, 2017 11:49
Anna Marg said:
True even in milliseconds one moment can define a person\'s life! Great work as always!
October 31st, 2017 11:49
Lust
FredPeyer said:
Yes, M.E.M., that\'s what a kiss can do, and you wrote it very nicely!
Like the line \'Stormy spheres...\' (there is a little typo, huger instead of hunger, and another little one on the last line you instead of you, but no big deal!)
October 31st, 2017 11:14
FredPeyer said:
Yes, M.E.M., that\'s what a kiss can do, and you wrote it very nicely!
Like the line \'Stormy spheres...\' (there is a little typo, huger instead of hunger, and another little one on the last line you instead of you, but no big deal!)
October 31st, 2017 11:14
Life
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., never thought of a friend this way, but you said it beautifully!
October 30th, 2017 20:16
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., never thought of a friend this way, but you said it beautifully!
October 30th, 2017 20:16
Life
orchidee said:
A fine write MEM. I\'ve never seen any sense in boxing - two people bashing each other about, leading to brain-damage in severe cases. I suppose they do it for the money. Otherwise it seems a complete waste of time to me!
October 30th, 2017 10:58
orchidee said:
A fine write MEM. I\'ve never seen any sense in boxing - two people bashing each other about, leading to brain-damage in severe cases. I suppose they do it for the money. Otherwise it seems a complete waste of time to me!
October 30th, 2017 10:58
Gluttony
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., I am married to a Chinese woman where love goes through the stomach! We don\'t waste food, but hell yes, bring on the gluttony!
Fun poem, like it a lot!
October 29th, 2017 01:20
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., I am married to a Chinese woman where love goes through the stomach! We don\'t waste food, but hell yes, bring on the gluttony!
Fun poem, like it a lot!
October 29th, 2017 01:20
Pride
orchidee said:
Ahh, good write to get 7 lines, each with 7 words! And similar to what Cat says, \"I\" is in the centre of PRIDE. Erm, so it in sIn too. Hmmm.
October 27th, 2017 13:36
orchidee said:
Ahh, good write to get 7 lines, each with 7 words! And similar to what Cat says, \"I\" is in the centre of PRIDE. Erm, so it in sIn too. Hmmm.
October 27th, 2017 13:36
Pride
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., maybe it\'s my eyes, but as the blind man said: I see, I can\'t see anything.
I do like the poem though, especially the two lines \'Don\'t be afraid...\' and \'Protecting you...\'
October 27th, 2017 12:29
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., maybe it\'s my eyes, but as the blind man said: I see, I can\'t see anything.
I do like the poem though, especially the two lines \'Don\'t be afraid...\' and \'Protecting you...\'
October 27th, 2017 12:29
The Crisis
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., this is a great take on Thomas Paine. Well penned, well thought out, very imaginative, great structure. Kudos!
October 26th, 2017 19:51
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., this is a great take on Thomas Paine. Well penned, well thought out, very imaginative, great structure. Kudos!
October 26th, 2017 19:51
Once In A Blue Moon
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., this guy sounds just about perfect! I do like your poem, well written, has a nice flow and great structure.
And you are right, a guy like that does come only around once in a blue moon, which kind of means never? Tone it down a bit and take the next one on the list! :-)
October 26th, 2017 03:55
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., this guy sounds just about perfect! I do like your poem, well written, has a nice flow and great structure.
And you are right, a guy like that does come only around once in a blue moon, which kind of means never? Tone it down a bit and take the next one on the list! :-)
October 26th, 2017 03:55
Once In A Blue Moon
Verta said:
Great job! I wrote a piece similar to this when I was 15. But I wrote it towards the opposite direction. I wrote it about a guy that was a player. I wish I could get back that journal. My grandma accidentally threw it away, while cleaning house.
October 25th, 2017 23:17
Verta said:
Great job! I wrote a piece similar to this when I was 15. But I wrote it towards the opposite direction. I wrote it about a guy that was a player. I wish I could get back that journal. My grandma accidentally threw it away, while cleaning house.
October 25th, 2017 23:17
Once In A Blue Moon
Christina8 said:
Perfect job describing the man that I married...well besides the blue eyes! LOL. Kidding aside, this is a well written poem! Great job!
October 25th, 2017 20:06
Christina8 said:
Perfect job describing the man that I married...well besides the blue eyes! LOL. Kidding aside, this is a well written poem! Great job!
October 25th, 2017 20:06
Once In A Blue Moon
Dakota said:
I think you did a great job! You painted a picture with your words I like that.
October 25th, 2017 18:21
Dakota said:
I think you did a great job! You painted a picture with your words I like that.
October 25th, 2017 18:21
A Winter’s Night
FredPeyer said:
I really love this poem, M.E.M., even though I didn\'t have a winter\'s night for the past 30 years, I still remember them. And your poem does them justice. Very poetic, love the last stanza.
October 25th, 2017 01:00
FredPeyer said:
I really love this poem, M.E.M., even though I didn\'t have a winter\'s night for the past 30 years, I still remember them. And your poem does them justice. Very poetic, love the last stanza.
October 25th, 2017 01:00
.09 Milliseconds
FredPeyer said:
Yes, a lot can happen in a very short time, you wrote that very well. Leaving your house 2 seconds earlier could have prevented getting hit by a bus, etc. I think we keep fighting because we don\'t know what will happen.
October 25th, 2017 00:59
FredPeyer said:
Yes, a lot can happen in a very short time, you wrote that very well. Leaving your house 2 seconds earlier could have prevented getting hit by a bus, etc. I think we keep fighting because we don\'t know what will happen.
October 25th, 2017 00:59
Life After Death
FredPeyer said:
A very thought provoking poem, M.E.M.! Well written too!
October 25th, 2017 00:56
FredPeyer said:
A very thought provoking poem, M.E.M.! Well written too!
October 25th, 2017 00:56
Heart Wrenching
Christina8 said:
Great write. All very good questions. Hopefully I have some time before I have to answer them. Great job!
October 23rd, 2017 10:57
Christina8 said:
Great write. All very good questions. Hopefully I have some time before I have to answer them. Great job!
October 23rd, 2017 10:57
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