Comments received on poems by M.E.M.
Lost and Found
orchidee said:
Good write MEM. Ohh, anyone who likes \'My little pony\' must have some good in them! heehee. I saw your profile.
April 16th, 2020 11:36
orchidee said:
Good write MEM. Ohh, anyone who likes \'My little pony\' must have some good in them! heehee. I saw your profile.
April 16th, 2020 11:36
Innocence Through Music
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a good poem, the innocence of childhood is so wonderful and in this day and age seems not to last long.
Andy
March 30th, 2020 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a good poem, the innocence of childhood is so wonderful and in this day and age seems not to last long.
Andy
March 30th, 2020 01:23
I’m Done
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write M.E.M. some people can be like this but the true friends will always be with you.
December 7th, 2019 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write M.E.M. some people can be like this but the true friends will always be with you.
December 7th, 2019 01:26
I’m Done
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thnaks for sharing MEM ! This is a great Poem in both its STRUCTURE & SUBLECT ~ Im Done ! ~ I like the single lines when your attitude has been soured by discourtesy ! I give up - Im done - Im done - to them - Im just ....... DONE ! In my own personal experience (Im 36) sharing an experience with someone is important ! When you do something on your own (Moovie or Theatre) there is no one to reminisce with. When you do something WITH someone the experience is TEN times better and everytime you meet you can relive it ~ OK ! love it ~ thanks for sharing !
Peace & Joy
Your through POETRY ~ BRIAN
December 6th, 2019 18:35
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thnaks for sharing MEM ! This is a great Poem in both its STRUCTURE & SUBLECT ~ Im Done ! ~ I like the single lines when your attitude has been soured by discourtesy ! I give up - Im done - Im done - to them - Im just ....... DONE ! In my own personal experience (Im 36) sharing an experience with someone is important ! When you do something on your own (Moovie or Theatre) there is no one to reminisce with. When you do something WITH someone the experience is TEN times better and everytime you meet you can relive it ~ OK ! love it ~ thanks for sharing !
Peace & Joy
Your through POETRY ~ BRIAN
December 6th, 2019 18:35
I’m Done
FredPeyer said:
Love your writing, M.E.M., honest and straight forward. But I don\'t agree on giving up completely. Haven\'t we been guilty of the same thing once in a while? It is annoying and terribly impolite when somebody cancels with \"I don\'t feel like it\" or some phony excuse. Give them the benefit of the doubt, try again, and then if it still does not work, OK, dump em!
December 6th, 2019 17:41
FredPeyer said:
Love your writing, M.E.M., honest and straight forward. But I don\'t agree on giving up completely. Haven\'t we been guilty of the same thing once in a while? It is annoying and terribly impolite when somebody cancels with \"I don\'t feel like it\" or some phony excuse. Give them the benefit of the doubt, try again, and then if it still does not work, OK, dump em!
December 6th, 2019 17:41
I’m Done
Bragee said:
Very good writing.
Self reflect and change.
Some people are just not worthy of the prized moments in our lives.
Forget them.
December 6th, 2019 12:09
Bragee said:
Very good writing.
Self reflect and change.
Some people are just not worthy of the prized moments in our lives.
Forget them.
December 6th, 2019 12:09
Envy
Nicholas Browning said:
To envy is to aspire for what belongs to another. That\'s why it\'s considered a sin. You could have what someone else does, but envy implies that you want to steal theirs and possess it for yourself. A nice little read.
The topic of the seven deadly sins is always a neat one.
March 24th, 2019 20:42
Nicholas Browning said:
To envy is to aspire for what belongs to another. That\'s why it\'s considered a sin. You could have what someone else does, but envy implies that you want to steal theirs and possess it for yourself. A nice little read.
The topic of the seven deadly sins is always a neat one.
March 24th, 2019 20:42
Envy
Fay Slimm. said:
A good poetic description of the sin of envy. Nothing good can come from this trait........ thanks for the needed reminder M.E,M.
March 24th, 2019 17:36
Fay Slimm. said:
A good poetic description of the sin of envy. Nothing good can come from this trait........ thanks for the needed reminder M.E,M.
March 24th, 2019 17:36
Love Not Had
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Men are such mind game players..they need to grow balls and stop acting like little girls...it sounds like he led you on..he knew what he was doing believe me..maybe he\'s gay..lol..seriously, it could very well be what the issue is..anyway, I wish you the best..just be up right and confront him about it...if he stops being your friend over that then you don\'t need the dude anyway..nice write..take care
December 18th, 2018 03:37
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Men are such mind game players..they need to grow balls and stop acting like little girls...it sounds like he led you on..he knew what he was doing believe me..maybe he\'s gay..lol..seriously, it could very well be what the issue is..anyway, I wish you the best..just be up right and confront him about it...if he stops being your friend over that then you don\'t need the dude anyway..nice write..take care
December 18th, 2018 03:37
Just Friends
Goldfinch60 said:
With friends you need nothing else, they are special.
December 11th, 2018 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
With friends you need nothing else, they are special.
December 11th, 2018 01:39
It’s... Complicated?
onepauly said:
I\'m happy for him and for you.
I thought the image was great.
like those people in the movie total recall.
May 3rd, 2018 13:40
onepauly said:
I\'m happy for him and for you.
I thought the image was great.
like those people in the movie total recall.
May 3rd, 2018 13:40
Metamorphosis Based Poem
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Yes we all die from these bodies we have but our Spirit will go on for eternity.
March 20th, 2018 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Yes we all die from these bodies we have but our Spirit will go on for eternity.
March 20th, 2018 02:11
Metamorphosis Based Poem
Poetic Dan said:
The points I feel are endless as for the reason to carry on or stop is.
I\'ve always wondered what it will be like from a young age, now plenty of friends and family have passed.
I\'m slowly thinking it\'s just find balance in a forever flow of change.
Thanks for write, nicely done
March 19th, 2018 14:17
Poetic Dan said:
The points I feel are endless as for the reason to carry on or stop is.
I\'ve always wondered what it will be like from a young age, now plenty of friends and family have passed.
I\'m slowly thinking it\'s just find balance in a forever flow of change.
Thanks for write, nicely done
March 19th, 2018 14:17
Fly
orchidee said:
Oh no, this has all turned out in Greek! A glitch in some script, it is. I will translate it!
January 12th, 2018 11:00
orchidee said:
Oh no, this has all turned out in Greek! A glitch in some script, it is. I will translate it!
January 12th, 2018 11:00
Alone
FredPeyer said:
Very well expressed, an apt description of \'loneliness\'. Reading it I could feel the coldness seeping into me.
January 5th, 2018 15:57
FredPeyer said:
Very well expressed, an apt description of \'loneliness\'. Reading it I could feel the coldness seeping into me.
January 5th, 2018 15:57
Insides
FredPeyer said:
Amazing write, M.E.M! There are times when we feel we can never be whole again, and you expressed it beautifully and artistically.
Instead of titling it \'live\', you could have titled it \'life\', because it will heal itself!
Btw, don\'t give up on kissing....it\'s just too much fun!
January 4th, 2018 16:26
FredPeyer said:
Amazing write, M.E.M! There are times when we feel we can never be whole again, and you expressed it beautifully and artistically.
Instead of titling it \'live\', you could have titled it \'life\', because it will heal itself!
Btw, don\'t give up on kissing....it\'s just too much fun!
January 4th, 2018 16:26
Insides
Shadowbox15 said:
It’s beautiful, but I’m struggling to figure out why you put in ‘nevermore’.
January 4th, 2018 15:44
Shadowbox15 said:
It’s beautiful, but I’m struggling to figure out why you put in ‘nevermore’.
January 4th, 2018 15:44
Photographer
M.E.M. said:
Thank you for all your input and comments. It means the world to me
January 3rd, 2018 14:27
M.E.M. said:
Thank you for all your input and comments. It means the world to me
January 3rd, 2018 14:27
Photographer
Tony36 said:
I love taking pictures. Setting up the camera. Finding the right angle. Trying to get that one perfect shot. Well written and expressed
January 3rd, 2018 13:10
Tony36 said:
I love taking pictures. Setting up the camera. Finding the right angle. Trying to get that one perfect shot. Well written and expressed
January 3rd, 2018 13:10
Photographer
FredPeyer said:
Creative and interesting angle! Never thought of photographs as victims before, but somehow it does make sense.
January 3rd, 2018 12:59
FredPeyer said:
Creative and interesting angle! Never thought of photographs as victims before, but somehow it does make sense.
January 3rd, 2018 12:59
Rainy
FredPeyer said:
A great last line that made me see the whole poem in a different way, more positive!
Great writing, M.E.M.!
December 22nd, 2017 12:01
FredPeyer said:
A great last line that made me see the whole poem in a different way, more positive!
Great writing, M.E.M.!
December 22nd, 2017 12:01
Rainy
Michael Edwards said:
Refreshing was the word that came to mind - enjoyed this write M E M
December 22nd, 2017 02:02
Michael Edwards said:
Refreshing was the word that came to mind - enjoyed this write M E M
December 22nd, 2017 02:02
The Memorable Moment
FredPeyer said:
Am happy for you, M.E.M., that your first date worked out! And from the poem it looks like there will be many more joyful dates! And the last stanza nails it.
December 14th, 2017 14:47
FredPeyer said:
Am happy for you, M.E.M., that your first date worked out! And from the poem it looks like there will be many more joyful dates! And the last stanza nails it.
December 14th, 2017 14:47
Sketch 160A
FredPeyer said:
Wow, M.E.M., what a ride I had reading your poem. I don\'t want the feeling of peace and quiet, I want the chaos, the emotions, the pure and unadulterated joy of life. Your poem is a favorite for me for sure!
December 10th, 2017 21:10
FredPeyer said:
Wow, M.E.M., what a ride I had reading your poem. I don\'t want the feeling of peace and quiet, I want the chaos, the emotions, the pure and unadulterated joy of life. Your poem is a favorite for me for sure!
December 10th, 2017 21:10
Cage
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem. How many times have we been told by parents, teachers, people in power, governments: It\'s for your own good. Is it really?
December 7th, 2017 20:12
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem. How many times have we been told by parents, teachers, people in power, governments: It\'s for your own good. Is it really?
December 7th, 2017 20:12
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