Comments received on poems by M.E.M.
Rainy
FredPeyer said:
A great last line that made me see the whole poem in a different way, more positive!
Great writing, M.E.M.!
December 22nd, 2017 12:01
FredPeyer said:
A great last line that made me see the whole poem in a different way, more positive!
Great writing, M.E.M.!
December 22nd, 2017 12:01
Rainy
Michael Edwards said:
Refreshing was the word that came to mind - enjoyed this write M E M
December 22nd, 2017 02:02
Michael Edwards said:
Refreshing was the word that came to mind - enjoyed this write M E M
December 22nd, 2017 02:02
The Memorable Moment
FredPeyer said:
Am happy for you, M.E.M., that your first date worked out! And from the poem it looks like there will be many more joyful dates! And the last stanza nails it.
December 14th, 2017 14:47
FredPeyer said:
Am happy for you, M.E.M., that your first date worked out! And from the poem it looks like there will be many more joyful dates! And the last stanza nails it.
December 14th, 2017 14:47
Sketch 160A
FredPeyer said:
Wow, M.E.M., what a ride I had reading your poem. I don\'t want the feeling of peace and quiet, I want the chaos, the emotions, the pure and unadulterated joy of life. Your poem is a favorite for me for sure!
December 10th, 2017 21:10
FredPeyer said:
Wow, M.E.M., what a ride I had reading your poem. I don\'t want the feeling of peace and quiet, I want the chaos, the emotions, the pure and unadulterated joy of life. Your poem is a favorite for me for sure!
December 10th, 2017 21:10
Cage
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem. How many times have we been told by parents, teachers, people in power, governments: It\'s for your own good. Is it really?
December 7th, 2017 20:12
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem. How many times have we been told by parents, teachers, people in power, governments: It\'s for your own good. Is it really?
December 7th, 2017 20:12
Pupa
FredPeyer said:
Very intriguing, M.E.M, and applicable to a lot more than a sculpture.
I took a position, am still waiting, nothing happened... :-)
December 5th, 2017 13:07
FredPeyer said:
Very intriguing, M.E.M, and applicable to a lot more than a sculpture.
I took a position, am still waiting, nothing happened... :-)
December 5th, 2017 13:07
Worry Will Vanish
FredPeyer said:
It is very hard to see the world through somebody else\'s eyes, because we see the world not only with our eyes, but also with our minds, our memories, our experiences. And these are uniquely us.
Very well written, M.E.M.!
December 5th, 2017 04:25
FredPeyer said:
It is very hard to see the world through somebody else\'s eyes, because we see the world not only with our eyes, but also with our minds, our memories, our experiences. And these are uniquely us.
Very well written, M.E.M.!
December 5th, 2017 04:25
Wind
Christina8 said:
Very good write MEM! You capture the wind and everything around you so well in this descriptive poem. A pleasure to read!
November 24th, 2017 15:51
Christina8 said:
Very good write MEM! You capture the wind and everything around you so well in this descriptive poem. A pleasure to read!
November 24th, 2017 15:51
Ode to Pugs
FredPeyer said:
The picture is cute, the dogs are cute, and you are cute the way you write about them! They aren\'t called \'Men\'s best friends\' for nothing!!!
November 22nd, 2017 12:43
FredPeyer said:
The picture is cute, the dogs are cute, and you are cute the way you write about them! They aren\'t called \'Men\'s best friends\' for nothing!!!
November 22nd, 2017 12:43
Ode to Pugs
Fay Slimm. said:
A delightful tribute to the remarkable pug-doggie M.E.M. - - they are all that you state - a wonderful companion and so full of fun too. My little Tessa has a pug-mummy and a yorkie daddy - so cute - - thank you for sharing your loving pets Zoey and Bailey with us on M.P.S.
November 21st, 2017 03:04
Fay Slimm. said:
A delightful tribute to the remarkable pug-doggie M.E.M. - - they are all that you state - a wonderful companion and so full of fun too. My little Tessa has a pug-mummy and a yorkie daddy - so cute - - thank you for sharing your loving pets Zoey and Bailey with us on M.P.S.
November 21st, 2017 03:04
Light In The Dark
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., this is the most clever and inventive poem about fire I have ever read. Kudos!
November 16th, 2017 21:40
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., this is the most clever and inventive poem about fire I have ever read. Kudos!
November 16th, 2017 21:40
Her
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., this is a very fine poem about the power of eyes. The girl in the picture is Gula, an Afghan refugee in a Pakistani refugee camp, on the cover of National Geographic, and she went through hell at an early age. The last line in your poem says it all!
November 16th, 2017 21:13
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., this is a very fine poem about the power of eyes. The girl in the picture is Gula, an Afghan refugee in a Pakistani refugee camp, on the cover of National Geographic, and she went through hell at an early age. The last line in your poem says it all!
November 16th, 2017 21:13
Cloud
FredPeyer said:
...And if you don\'t believe me, I will zap you with lightening!
November 15th, 2017 18:09
FredPeyer said:
...And if you don\'t believe me, I will zap you with lightening!
November 15th, 2017 18:09
Her
Fay Slimm. said:
A first rate description of the face in the picture - - so strong yet beguiling the look in those eyes.
November 15th, 2017 17:31
Fay Slimm. said:
A first rate description of the face in the picture - - so strong yet beguiling the look in those eyes.
November 15th, 2017 17:31
Her
lasergraph said:
The eyes that can stare right through you. Perhaps she can see what\'s there, and she still looks to see someone to trust.
November 15th, 2017 17:21
lasergraph said:
The eyes that can stare right through you. Perhaps she can see what\'s there, and she still looks to see someone to trust.
November 15th, 2017 17:21
Cloud
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, you always look beautiful floating in the sky.
November 15th, 2017 02:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, you always look beautiful floating in the sky.
November 15th, 2017 02:31
Cloud
lasergraph said:
I enjoyed the write, and watching the real time playback.
November 14th, 2017 13:16
lasergraph said:
I enjoyed the write, and watching the real time playback.
November 14th, 2017 13:16
Favorite Word
FredPeyer said:
Dostoefsky said it much better than I can: To live without Hope is to Cease to live. Fyodor Dostoevsky
Beautiful poem, m.e.m.
November 13th, 2017 18:13
FredPeyer said:
Dostoefsky said it much better than I can: To live without Hope is to Cease to live. Fyodor Dostoevsky
Beautiful poem, m.e.m.
November 13th, 2017 18:13
Favorite Word
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true, we all need hope.
November 13th, 2017 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true, we all need hope.
November 13th, 2017 02:14
Favorite Word
Fay Slimm. said:
Good points in favour of encouraging the feeling of hope M.E.M. and so engagingly written.
November 12th, 2017 16:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Good points in favour of encouraging the feeling of hope M.E.M. and so engagingly written.
November 12th, 2017 16:33
Favorite Word
orchidee said:
Well I dunno about Pandora. I don\'t know her myself! lol. I don\'t believe in her. But we had a great talk about hope at church. Then I did a hymn-poem on it, went on for 11 verses! (not posted yet).
November 12th, 2017 13:03
orchidee said:
Well I dunno about Pandora. I don\'t know her myself! lol. I don\'t believe in her. But we had a great talk about hope at church. Then I did a hymn-poem on it, went on for 11 verses! (not posted yet).
November 12th, 2017 13:03
Melting
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, that painting is iconic in the movement of time. His other paintings are well worth looking at as well.
November 12th, 2017 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, that painting is iconic in the movement of time. His other paintings are well worth looking at as well.
November 12th, 2017 01:08
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