Comments received on poems by M.E.M.
What is a Woman
dusk arising said:
I offer a wish that such freedom were there for every woman. Sadly, in our world there are societies and religions which forbid freedom for the female of our species. This is disgusting to the emancipated western mind.
August 4th, 2021 08:44
dusk arising said:
I offer a wish that such freedom were there for every woman. Sadly, in our world there are societies and religions which forbid freedom for the female of our species. This is disgusting to the emancipated western mind.
August 4th, 2021 08:44
What is a Man
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
those who understand will appreciate
the depths of your Poetry\'s brevity;
and those who don\'t, will bark
their snarky comments, to hide
their ignorance fuelled: incompetence...
(a meaningful and timely write/message
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
August 3rd, 2021 03:53
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
those who understand will appreciate
the depths of your Poetry\'s brevity;
and those who don\'t, will bark
their snarky comments, to hide
their ignorance fuelled: incompetence...
(a meaningful and timely write/message
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
August 3rd, 2021 03:53
What is a Man
Doggerel Dave said:
Should ultimately a woman be judged by different standards?
How and why?
August 2nd, 2021 21:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Should ultimately a woman be judged by different standards?
How and why?
August 2nd, 2021 21:46
Rider
L. B. Mek said:
what an impactful image
reminds me of stencil art
\'gold plated\' - printed, over a watercolour
spot painting, or
pointillism technique, utilised to accentuate
a serenade to all-things, Blue and overwhelming...
and still, the unique voice of your poem
is pronounced loud:
\'like a penguin,
She keeps her birch roots grounded.
surround by white roses\'..
(a wonderfully poetic experience
you\'ve Curated, thank you for sharing)
July 29th, 2021 03:26
L. B. Mek said:
what an impactful image
reminds me of stencil art
\'gold plated\' - printed, over a watercolour
spot painting, or
pointillism technique, utilised to accentuate
a serenade to all-things, Blue and overwhelming...
and still, the unique voice of your poem
is pronounced loud:
\'like a penguin,
She keeps her birch roots grounded.
surround by white roses\'..
(a wonderfully poetic experience
you\'ve Curated, thank you for sharing)
July 29th, 2021 03:26
Rider
Fay Slimm. said:
For sure these wise words of fine imagery and tribute to a young mind\'s search for the next adventure will be treasured forever by your friend - thank you for sharing them with us M.E.M.
July 28th, 2021 15:37
Fay Slimm. said:
For sure these wise words of fine imagery and tribute to a young mind\'s search for the next adventure will be treasured forever by your friend - thank you for sharing them with us M.E.M.
July 28th, 2021 15:37
Making it Back UP
L. B. Mek said:
\'Patience is key.\'
Amen!
and, \'Acceptance, our survival door\'
(liked the positivity
a wonderful write, with an empowering message
thanks for sharing)
July 23rd, 2021 03:03
L. B. Mek said:
\'Patience is key.\'
Amen!
and, \'Acceptance, our survival door\'
(liked the positivity
a wonderful write, with an empowering message
thanks for sharing)
July 23rd, 2021 03:03
Awake Before Sleep
Goldfinch60 said:
So true but cannot remember any of them. LOL
Andy
July 19th, 2021 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
So true but cannot remember any of them. LOL
Andy
July 19th, 2021 01:20
Awake Before Sleep
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s just the chemical reactions of your brain as it readies for sleep. But they are strange, - Phil A.
July 18th, 2021 22:23
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s just the chemical reactions of your brain as it readies for sleep. But they are strange, - Phil A.
July 18th, 2021 22:23
The Dance
flyingfish said:
There are two thorny vines in tropical North Queensland with delightful names. \"Linger Longer\" and \"Stay Awhile\". Cheers. Loved your poem
July 16th, 2021 12:40
flyingfish said:
There are two thorny vines in tropical North Queensland with delightful names. \"Linger Longer\" and \"Stay Awhile\". Cheers. Loved your poem
July 16th, 2021 12:40
Rothko Chapel Painting
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, I agree with Dusk
I too, couldn\'t find the contextual correlation
between your words and the painting/picture..
but that\'s truly meaningless, in this case
because I found your writing, a stand alone
immersive read of insightfully nuanced artistry:
\'A new day appears, repeating
a cycle of anger and hatred.
Rain
Fog
Bruised
This time it can take no more.
Holding on by a single thread,
the sky takes a breath.\'
such a joy to read, dear poet
thank you for choosing to share
July 15th, 2021 03:21
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, I agree with Dusk
I too, couldn\'t find the contextual correlation
between your words and the painting/picture..
but that\'s truly meaningless, in this case
because I found your writing, a stand alone
immersive read of insightfully nuanced artistry:
\'A new day appears, repeating
a cycle of anger and hatred.
Rain
Fog
Bruised
This time it can take no more.
Holding on by a single thread,
the sky takes a breath.\'
such a joy to read, dear poet
thank you for choosing to share
July 15th, 2021 03:21
Rothko Chapel Painting
dusk arising said:
Paintings provided by Dulux colour swashes? There\'s far more depth in your poem than in those pictures. My eye.
July 14th, 2021 09:20
dusk arising said:
Paintings provided by Dulux colour swashes? There\'s far more depth in your poem than in those pictures. My eye.
July 14th, 2021 09:20
Resist the Urge
L. B. Mek said:
really like the pacing
and desperation, imbued in your choice wording
such an unassuming yet truly relatable write..
thanks for sharing, a joy to read!
July 13th, 2021 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
really like the pacing
and desperation, imbued in your choice wording
such an unassuming yet truly relatable write..
thanks for sharing, a joy to read!
July 13th, 2021 04:17
Resist the Urge
Goldfinch60 said:
If that spark is there nothing can stop you.
Andy
July 12th, 2021 15:21
Goldfinch60 said:
If that spark is there nothing can stop you.
Andy
July 12th, 2021 15:21
Music
L. B. Mek said:
\'A fleeting thought
Their feet land
for a split second
then they are off again\'..
wonderful, I get a sense of the waves
you were vibing with when you were inspired
to pen this dedication, a great read
thanks for sharing
July 9th, 2021 03:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'A fleeting thought
Their feet land
for a split second
then they are off again\'..
wonderful, I get a sense of the waves
you were vibing with when you were inspired
to pen this dedication, a great read
thanks for sharing
July 9th, 2021 03:22
Dr. Facilier
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful read
really liked the drop down, unveiling format
both for its metaphorical insight
and its natural poetic flow,
thank you for sharing, dear poet
(sadly until I listen to the song, eventually
I know little of the context or meaning behind it
but I\'m hopeful
the message is a seemingly positive one)
might be worthwhile to include a link
so future (lazy) readers like me
can quickly gain an appreciation for your write
inclusive of its meaningful context
especially, the numerical references
July 5th, 2021 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful read
really liked the drop down, unveiling format
both for its metaphorical insight
and its natural poetic flow,
thank you for sharing, dear poet
(sadly until I listen to the song, eventually
I know little of the context or meaning behind it
but I\'m hopeful
the message is a seemingly positive one)
might be worthwhile to include a link
so future (lazy) readers like me
can quickly gain an appreciation for your write
inclusive of its meaningful context
especially, the numerical references
July 5th, 2021 05:25
Traffic to Gifts
Goldfinch60 said:
That first line says it all, \'to accommodate\' not to share with.
Andy
June 29th, 2021 23:56
Goldfinch60 said:
That first line says it all, \'to accommodate\' not to share with.
Andy
June 29th, 2021 23:56
Traffic to Gifts
dusk arising said:
Brought to mind the reality behind the romance of the Chris Rea song \'driving home for christmas\'.
June 29th, 2021 14:28
dusk arising said:
Brought to mind the reality behind the romance of the Chris Rea song \'driving home for christmas\'.
June 29th, 2021 14:28
Squirrel
M.E.M. said:
Wow I’m surprised how many comments this poem got. Honestly I didn’t think it would get this much traction. Thank you all for you comments!
June 28th, 2021 10:36
M.E.M. said:
Wow I’m surprised how many comments this poem got. Honestly I didn’t think it would get this much traction. Thank you all for you comments!
June 28th, 2021 10:36
Squirrel
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully portrays
that playful essence of their charismatic nature
especially in that symbolical arrangement
of your poetry\'s purposely jagged, rhythm..
a fun read
June 28th, 2021 07:43
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully portrays
that playful essence of their charismatic nature
especially in that symbolical arrangement
of your poetry\'s purposely jagged, rhythm..
a fun read
June 28th, 2021 07:43
Squirrel
Goldfinch60 said:
Just keep running, jumping and skittering with your words MEM.
Andy
June 28th, 2021 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Just keep running, jumping and skittering with your words MEM.
Andy
June 28th, 2021 00:38
Squirrel
Accidental Poet said:
Wonderful poem MEM. Near my work place I have some squirrels I regularly feed peanuts to twice a week. Squirrels rock! ; )
June 27th, 2021 14:10
Accidental Poet said:
Wonderful poem MEM. Near my work place I have some squirrels I regularly feed peanuts to twice a week. Squirrels rock! ; )
June 27th, 2021 14:10
Kaleidoscope
Fay Slimm. said:
Deeply moving this view on life and its changing patterns my friend - -- agreed that we either cope with change or maybe never find our true self in the daily kaleidoscope.
June 25th, 2021 13:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Deeply moving this view on life and its changing patterns my friend - -- agreed that we either cope with change or maybe never find our true self in the daily kaleidoscope.
June 25th, 2021 13:26
Brokenness
L. B. Mek said:
the poetic sincerity, in your impassioned plea
is evident, for us all to see..
thanks for sharing
June 22nd, 2021 03:10
L. B. Mek said:
the poetic sincerity, in your impassioned plea
is evident, for us all to see..
thanks for sharing
June 22nd, 2021 03:10
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