Comments received on poems by M.E.M.
The Tears
Doggerel Dave said:
First time prompt free? That You? Sad that it is so sad, because it is neat and easy to read for me.
Another, more optimistic to come?
September 13th, 2024 21:56
Doggerel Dave said:
First time prompt free? That You? Sad that it is so sad, because it is neat and easy to read for me.
Another, more optimistic to come?
September 13th, 2024 21:56
Lurking in the Shadows
sorenbarrett said:
Few people take the time to listen too busy in their own heads.
August 21st, 2024 11:21
sorenbarrett said:
Few people take the time to listen too busy in their own heads.
August 21st, 2024 11:21
This is Rhetorical
sorenbarrett said:
A good response to the question and prompt. One must take care of oneself before one can take care of others.
August 19th, 2024 16:56
sorenbarrett said:
A good response to the question and prompt. One must take care of oneself before one can take care of others.
August 19th, 2024 16:56
This is Rhetorical
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m not an advocate for absolute selfishness every time, but an altruistic situation this isn\'t.
August 19th, 2024 16:53
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m not an advocate for absolute selfishness every time, but an altruistic situation this isn\'t.
August 19th, 2024 16:53
Funeral
Doggerel Dave said:
Very descriptive.
Yes - funerals are for the living, It\'s just garbage disposal for the dead - who aren\'t there anyway.
You don\'t pop in often enough, MEM. If you must utilise prompts, then find more of them, please.
August 7th, 2024 17:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Very descriptive.
Yes - funerals are for the living, It\'s just garbage disposal for the dead - who aren\'t there anyway.
You don\'t pop in often enough, MEM. If you must utilise prompts, then find more of them, please.
August 7th, 2024 17:35
Funeral
sorenbarrett said:
A passage in life that all must take. Nicely worded
August 7th, 2024 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
A passage in life that all must take. Nicely worded
August 7th, 2024 11:41
Stars Falling
peto said:
I\'ve been reading you for years and you never disappoint
Great to see you still going strong
June 6th, 2024 12:19
peto said:
I\'ve been reading you for years and you never disappoint
Great to see you still going strong
June 6th, 2024 12:19
Life Boat
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels like a rich in detail allegory - so I hope you are really OK..
Enjoyed the picture you painted.
May 30th, 2024 18:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels like a rich in detail allegory - so I hope you are really OK..
Enjoyed the picture you painted.
May 30th, 2024 18:57
A Thundering Whisper
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. You paint this scene well.
February 29th, 2024 18:25
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. You paint this scene well.
February 29th, 2024 18:25
A Thundering Whisper
Cassie58 said:
Pleased you fell into serenity rather than falling into the water. This is a lovely tranquil poem, but I was worried about the crocs. Great imagery. You took me there MEM.
February 29th, 2024 17:06
Cassie58 said:
Pleased you fell into serenity rather than falling into the water. This is a lovely tranquil poem, but I was worried about the crocs. Great imagery. You took me there MEM.
February 29th, 2024 17:06
A Thundering Whisper
David Wakeling said:
Nice poem.It took me there.Beautiful
February 29th, 2024 14:56
David Wakeling said:
Nice poem.It took me there.Beautiful
February 29th, 2024 14:56
Comfy Silence
BlessedbyGod said:
That\'s great M.E.M
if only there was a way to start a theme based section here on MPS, it would be very interesting to see the poems that would be written.
Great job
September 12th, 2023 10:29
BlessedbyGod said:
That\'s great M.E.M
if only there was a way to start a theme based section here on MPS, it would be very interesting to see the poems that would be written.
Great job
September 12th, 2023 10:29
100
Doggerel Dave said:
For some reason I found the odd stanzas (starting with the first) said more to me than the evens.
The first, for example, has much relevance in many (if not all) situations.
September 2nd, 2023 16:34
Doggerel Dave said:
For some reason I found the odd stanzas (starting with the first) said more to me than the evens.
The first, for example, has much relevance in many (if not all) situations.
September 2nd, 2023 16:34
Sandy Thoughts
Doggerel Dave said:
Thank you - yes it did.
Rewarding read. You certainly made good use of that prompt. The sand - yes I know it\'s discomfort myself, and I\'ll try to confine those images to my own experience rather than dwell too long on yours...................
A special person if you can control your thoughts - please keep that skill in good working order.
August 25th, 2023 18:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Thank you - yes it did.
Rewarding read. You certainly made good use of that prompt. The sand - yes I know it\'s discomfort myself, and I\'ll try to confine those images to my own experience rather than dwell too long on yours...................
A special person if you can control your thoughts - please keep that skill in good working order.
August 25th, 2023 18:10
Sandy Thoughts
Parisab said:
Very descriptive in the way you let âyour sandy thoughtsâ run its court âand made them happyâ I always liked those prompts for such âdescribe a placeâ poems-I also saw the imagery of your body becoming the cliff and the sands becoming the waves- it fit into the background composition-thanks for sharingâŠ
August 25th, 2023 11:32
Parisab said:
Very descriptive in the way you let âyour sandy thoughtsâ run its court âand made them happyâ I always liked those prompts for such âdescribe a placeâ poems-I also saw the imagery of your body becoming the cliff and the sands becoming the waves- it fit into the background composition-thanks for sharingâŠ
August 25th, 2023 11:32
Ghost Writer
SirStellar said:
First off, outstanding job on your poem! To be honest, I didn\'t see it as creepy, but maybe that\'s because of how loving and reflective the ghost was towards Mackenzie. I enjoyed the prompt itself and how effectively you conveyed it through your work, as it kind of hit home for me. The way the ghost went into the very specific details, especially of love and the stated relationships, added a layer of meaning since it\'s trying to help Mackenzie discover what she herself already knew. This, thus, was similar to therapy for her, I feel like. One last thought that I have is that the prompt you worked with stated \"a\" ghost, but what about a poem in which it was \"your\" future ghost writing to the present you? I think that\'d produce an engaging (or at least very thought-provoking) work! Still, great job on your poem, and I loved it!
July 4th, 2023 18:46
SirStellar said:
First off, outstanding job on your poem! To be honest, I didn\'t see it as creepy, but maybe that\'s because of how loving and reflective the ghost was towards Mackenzie. I enjoyed the prompt itself and how effectively you conveyed it through your work, as it kind of hit home for me. The way the ghost went into the very specific details, especially of love and the stated relationships, added a layer of meaning since it\'s trying to help Mackenzie discover what she herself already knew. This, thus, was similar to therapy for her, I feel like. One last thought that I have is that the prompt you worked with stated \"a\" ghost, but what about a poem in which it was \"your\" future ghost writing to the present you? I think that\'d produce an engaging (or at least very thought-provoking) work! Still, great job on your poem, and I loved it!
July 4th, 2023 18:46
The Ordinary Key
Soman Ragavan said:
Thank you. I have edited my comments by adding the following :
Some quotes :
âHearts, like doors, will open with ease
To very, very little keys.
And donât forget that two of these
Are âI thank youâ and âIf you pleaseâ â
In these boxes if you use > the text in between is automatically deleted.
Soman Ragavan. 21 June, 2023 //
June 20th, 2023 20:39
Soman Ragavan said:
Thank you. I have edited my comments by adding the following :
Some quotes :
âHearts, like doors, will open with ease
To very, very little keys.
And donât forget that two of these
Are âI thank youâ and âIf you pleaseâ â
In these boxes if you use > the text in between is automatically deleted.
Soman Ragavan. 21 June, 2023 //
June 20th, 2023 20:39
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