Comments received on poems by M.E.M.
What is a Man
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
those who understand will appreciate
the depths of your Poetry\'s brevity;
and those who don\'t, will bark
their snarky comments, to hide
their ignorance fuelled: incompetence...
(a meaningful and timely write/message
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
August 3rd, 2021 03:53
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
those who understand will appreciate
the depths of your Poetry\'s brevity;
and those who don\'t, will bark
their snarky comments, to hide
their ignorance fuelled: incompetence...
(a meaningful and timely write/message
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
August 3rd, 2021 03:53
What is a Man
Doggerel Dave said:
Should ultimately a woman be judged by different standards?
How and why?
August 2nd, 2021 21:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Should ultimately a woman be judged by different standards?
How and why?
August 2nd, 2021 21:46
Rider
L. B. Mek said:
what an impactful image
reminds me of stencil art
\'gold plated\' - printed, over a watercolour
spot painting, or
pointillism technique, utilised to accentuate
a serenade to all-things, Blue and overwhelming...
and still, the unique voice of your poem
is pronounced loud:
\'like a penguin,
She keeps her birch roots grounded.
surround by white roses\'..
(a wonderfully poetic experience
you\'ve Curated, thank you for sharing)
July 29th, 2021 03:26
L. B. Mek said:
what an impactful image
reminds me of stencil art
\'gold plated\' - printed, over a watercolour
spot painting, or
pointillism technique, utilised to accentuate
a serenade to all-things, Blue and overwhelming...
and still, the unique voice of your poem
is pronounced loud:
\'like a penguin,
She keeps her birch roots grounded.
surround by white roses\'..
(a wonderfully poetic experience
you\'ve Curated, thank you for sharing)
July 29th, 2021 03:26
Rider
Fay Slimm. said:
For sure these wise words of fine imagery and tribute to a young mind\'s search for the next adventure will be treasured forever by your friend - thank you for sharing them with us M.E.M.
July 28th, 2021 15:37
Fay Slimm. said:
For sure these wise words of fine imagery and tribute to a young mind\'s search for the next adventure will be treasured forever by your friend - thank you for sharing them with us M.E.M.
July 28th, 2021 15:37
Making it Back UP
L. B. Mek said:
\'Patience is key.\'
Amen!
and, \'Acceptance, our survival door\'
(liked the positivity
a wonderful write, with an empowering message
thanks for sharing)
July 23rd, 2021 03:03
L. B. Mek said:
\'Patience is key.\'
Amen!
and, \'Acceptance, our survival door\'
(liked the positivity
a wonderful write, with an empowering message
thanks for sharing)
July 23rd, 2021 03:03
Awake Before Sleep
Goldfinch60 said:
So true but cannot remember any of them. LOL
Andy
July 19th, 2021 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
So true but cannot remember any of them. LOL
Andy
July 19th, 2021 01:20
Awake Before Sleep
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s just the chemical reactions of your brain as it readies for sleep. But they are strange, - Phil A.
July 18th, 2021 22:23
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s just the chemical reactions of your brain as it readies for sleep. But they are strange, - Phil A.
July 18th, 2021 22:23
The Dance
flyingfish said:
There are two thorny vines in tropical North Queensland with delightful names. \"Linger Longer\" and \"Stay Awhile\". Cheers. Loved your poem
July 16th, 2021 12:40
flyingfish said:
There are two thorny vines in tropical North Queensland with delightful names. \"Linger Longer\" and \"Stay Awhile\". Cheers. Loved your poem
July 16th, 2021 12:40
Rothko Chapel Painting
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, I agree with Dusk
I too, couldn\'t find the contextual correlation
between your words and the painting/picture..
but that\'s truly meaningless, in this case
because I found your writing, a stand alone
immersive read of insightfully nuanced artistry:
\'A new day appears, repeating
a cycle of anger and hatred.
Rain
Fog
Bruised
This time it can take no more.
Holding on by a single thread,
the sky takes a breath.\'
such a joy to read, dear poet
thank you for choosing to share
July 15th, 2021 03:21
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, I agree with Dusk
I too, couldn\'t find the contextual correlation
between your words and the painting/picture..
but that\'s truly meaningless, in this case
because I found your writing, a stand alone
immersive read of insightfully nuanced artistry:
\'A new day appears, repeating
a cycle of anger and hatred.
Rain
Fog
Bruised
This time it can take no more.
Holding on by a single thread,
the sky takes a breath.\'
such a joy to read, dear poet
thank you for choosing to share
July 15th, 2021 03:21
Rothko Chapel Painting
dusk arising said:
Paintings provided by Dulux colour swashes? There\'s far more depth in your poem than in those pictures. My eye.
July 14th, 2021 09:20
dusk arising said:
Paintings provided by Dulux colour swashes? There\'s far more depth in your poem than in those pictures. My eye.
July 14th, 2021 09:20
Resist the Urge
L. B. Mek said:
really like the pacing
and desperation, imbued in your choice wording
such an unassuming yet truly relatable write..
thanks for sharing, a joy to read!
July 13th, 2021 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
really like the pacing
and desperation, imbued in your choice wording
such an unassuming yet truly relatable write..
thanks for sharing, a joy to read!
July 13th, 2021 04:17
Resist the Urge
Goldfinch60 said:
If that spark is there nothing can stop you.
Andy
July 12th, 2021 15:21
Goldfinch60 said:
If that spark is there nothing can stop you.
Andy
July 12th, 2021 15:21
Music
L. B. Mek said:
\'A fleeting thought
Their feet land
for a split second
then they are off again\'..
wonderful, I get a sense of the waves
you were vibing with when you were inspired
to pen this dedication, a great read
thanks for sharing
July 9th, 2021 03:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'A fleeting thought
Their feet land
for a split second
then they are off again\'..
wonderful, I get a sense of the waves
you were vibing with when you were inspired
to pen this dedication, a great read
thanks for sharing
July 9th, 2021 03:22
Dr. Facilier
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful read
really liked the drop down, unveiling format
both for its metaphorical insight
and its natural poetic flow,
thank you for sharing, dear poet
(sadly until I listen to the song, eventually
I know little of the context or meaning behind it
but I\'m hopeful
the message is a seemingly positive one)
might be worthwhile to include a link
so future (lazy) readers like me
can quickly gain an appreciation for your write
inclusive of its meaningful context
especially, the numerical references
July 5th, 2021 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful read
really liked the drop down, unveiling format
both for its metaphorical insight
and its natural poetic flow,
thank you for sharing, dear poet
(sadly until I listen to the song, eventually
I know little of the context or meaning behind it
but I\'m hopeful
the message is a seemingly positive one)
might be worthwhile to include a link
so future (lazy) readers like me
can quickly gain an appreciation for your write
inclusive of its meaningful context
especially, the numerical references
July 5th, 2021 05:25
Traffic to Gifts
Goldfinch60 said:
That first line says it all, \'to accommodate\' not to share with.
Andy
June 29th, 2021 23:56
Goldfinch60 said:
That first line says it all, \'to accommodate\' not to share with.
Andy
June 29th, 2021 23:56
Traffic to Gifts
dusk arising said:
Brought to mind the reality behind the romance of the Chris Rea song \'driving home for christmas\'.
June 29th, 2021 14:28
dusk arising said:
Brought to mind the reality behind the romance of the Chris Rea song \'driving home for christmas\'.
June 29th, 2021 14:28
Squirrel
M.E.M. said:
Wow I’m surprised how many comments this poem got. Honestly I didn’t think it would get this much traction. Thank you all for you comments!
June 28th, 2021 10:36
M.E.M. said:
Wow I’m surprised how many comments this poem got. Honestly I didn’t think it would get this much traction. Thank you all for you comments!
June 28th, 2021 10:36
Squirrel
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully portrays
that playful essence of their charismatic nature
especially in that symbolical arrangement
of your poetry\'s purposely jagged, rhythm..
a fun read
June 28th, 2021 07:43
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully portrays
that playful essence of their charismatic nature
especially in that symbolical arrangement
of your poetry\'s purposely jagged, rhythm..
a fun read
June 28th, 2021 07:43
Squirrel
Goldfinch60 said:
Just keep running, jumping and skittering with your words MEM.
Andy
June 28th, 2021 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Just keep running, jumping and skittering with your words MEM.
Andy
June 28th, 2021 00:38
Squirrel
Accidental Poet said:
Wonderful poem MEM. Near my work place I have some squirrels I regularly feed peanuts to twice a week. Squirrels rock! ; )
June 27th, 2021 14:10
Accidental Poet said:
Wonderful poem MEM. Near my work place I have some squirrels I regularly feed peanuts to twice a week. Squirrels rock! ; )
June 27th, 2021 14:10
Kaleidoscope
Fay Slimm. said:
Deeply moving this view on life and its changing patterns my friend - -- agreed that we either cope with change or maybe never find our true self in the daily kaleidoscope.
June 25th, 2021 13:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Deeply moving this view on life and its changing patterns my friend - -- agreed that we either cope with change or maybe never find our true self in the daily kaleidoscope.
June 25th, 2021 13:26
Brokenness
L. B. Mek said:
the poetic sincerity, in your impassioned plea
is evident, for us all to see..
thanks for sharing
June 22nd, 2021 03:10
L. B. Mek said:
the poetic sincerity, in your impassioned plea
is evident, for us all to see..
thanks for sharing
June 22nd, 2021 03:10
Brokenness
Goldfinch60 said:
Helping others can fix them as you are doing with your words.
Andy
June 22nd, 2021 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Helping others can fix them as you are doing with your words.
Andy
June 22nd, 2021 00:20
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