Comments received on poems by M.E.M.
Awake Before Sleep
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s just the chemical reactions of your brain as it readies for sleep. But they are strange, - Phil A.
July 18th, 2021 22:23
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s just the chemical reactions of your brain as it readies for sleep. But they are strange, - Phil A.
July 18th, 2021 22:23
The Dance
flyingfish said:
There are two thorny vines in tropical North Queensland with delightful names. \"Linger Longer\" and \"Stay Awhile\". Cheers. Loved your poem
July 16th, 2021 12:40
flyingfish said:
There are two thorny vines in tropical North Queensland with delightful names. \"Linger Longer\" and \"Stay Awhile\". Cheers. Loved your poem
July 16th, 2021 12:40
Rothko Chapel Painting
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, I agree with Dusk
I too, couldn\'t find the contextual correlation
between your words and the painting/picture..
but that\'s truly meaningless, in this case
because I found your writing, a stand alone
immersive read of insightfully nuanced artistry:
\'A new day appears, repeating
a cycle of anger and hatred.
Rain
Fog
Bruised
This time it can take no more.
Holding on by a single thread,
the sky takes a breath.\'
such a joy to read, dear poet
thank you for choosing to share
July 15th, 2021 03:21
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, I agree with Dusk
I too, couldn\'t find the contextual correlation
between your words and the painting/picture..
but that\'s truly meaningless, in this case
because I found your writing, a stand alone
immersive read of insightfully nuanced artistry:
\'A new day appears, repeating
a cycle of anger and hatred.
Rain
Fog
Bruised
This time it can take no more.
Holding on by a single thread,
the sky takes a breath.\'
such a joy to read, dear poet
thank you for choosing to share
July 15th, 2021 03:21
Rothko Chapel Painting
dusk arising said:
Paintings provided by Dulux colour swashes? There\'s far more depth in your poem than in those pictures. My eye.
July 14th, 2021 09:20
dusk arising said:
Paintings provided by Dulux colour swashes? There\'s far more depth in your poem than in those pictures. My eye.
July 14th, 2021 09:20
Resist the Urge
L. B. Mek said:
really like the pacing
and desperation, imbued in your choice wording
such an unassuming yet truly relatable write..
thanks for sharing, a joy to read!
July 13th, 2021 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
really like the pacing
and desperation, imbued in your choice wording
such an unassuming yet truly relatable write..
thanks for sharing, a joy to read!
July 13th, 2021 04:17
Resist the Urge
Goldfinch60 said:
If that spark is there nothing can stop you.
Andy
July 12th, 2021 15:21
Goldfinch60 said:
If that spark is there nothing can stop you.
Andy
July 12th, 2021 15:21
Music
L. B. Mek said:
\'A fleeting thought
Their feet land
for a split second
then they are off again\'..
wonderful, I get a sense of the waves
you were vibing with when you were inspired
to pen this dedication, a great read
thanks for sharing
July 9th, 2021 03:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'A fleeting thought
Their feet land
for a split second
then they are off again\'..
wonderful, I get a sense of the waves
you were vibing with when you were inspired
to pen this dedication, a great read
thanks for sharing
July 9th, 2021 03:22
Dr. Facilier
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful read
really liked the drop down, unveiling format
both for its metaphorical insight
and its natural poetic flow,
thank you for sharing, dear poet
(sadly until I listen to the song, eventually
I know little of the context or meaning behind it
but I\'m hopeful
the message is a seemingly positive one)
might be worthwhile to include a link
so future (lazy) readers like me
can quickly gain an appreciation for your write
inclusive of its meaningful context
especially, the numerical references
July 5th, 2021 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful read
really liked the drop down, unveiling format
both for its metaphorical insight
and its natural poetic flow,
thank you for sharing, dear poet
(sadly until I listen to the song, eventually
I know little of the context or meaning behind it
but I\'m hopeful
the message is a seemingly positive one)
might be worthwhile to include a link
so future (lazy) readers like me
can quickly gain an appreciation for your write
inclusive of its meaningful context
especially, the numerical references
July 5th, 2021 05:25
Traffic to Gifts
Goldfinch60 said:
That first line says it all, \'to accommodate\' not to share with.
Andy
June 29th, 2021 23:56
Goldfinch60 said:
That first line says it all, \'to accommodate\' not to share with.
Andy
June 29th, 2021 23:56
Traffic to Gifts
dusk arising said:
Brought to mind the reality behind the romance of the Chris Rea song \'driving home for christmas\'.
June 29th, 2021 14:28
dusk arising said:
Brought to mind the reality behind the romance of the Chris Rea song \'driving home for christmas\'.
June 29th, 2021 14:28
Squirrel
M.E.M. said:
Wow I’m surprised how many comments this poem got. Honestly I didn’t think it would get this much traction. Thank you all for you comments!
June 28th, 2021 10:36
M.E.M. said:
Wow I’m surprised how many comments this poem got. Honestly I didn’t think it would get this much traction. Thank you all for you comments!
June 28th, 2021 10:36
Squirrel
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully portrays
that playful essence of their charismatic nature
especially in that symbolical arrangement
of your poetry\'s purposely jagged, rhythm..
a fun read
June 28th, 2021 07:43
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully portrays
that playful essence of their charismatic nature
especially in that symbolical arrangement
of your poetry\'s purposely jagged, rhythm..
a fun read
June 28th, 2021 07:43
Squirrel
Goldfinch60 said:
Just keep running, jumping and skittering with your words MEM.
Andy
June 28th, 2021 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Just keep running, jumping and skittering with your words MEM.
Andy
June 28th, 2021 00:38
Squirrel
Accidental Poet said:
Wonderful poem MEM. Near my work place I have some squirrels I regularly feed peanuts to twice a week. Squirrels rock! ; )
June 27th, 2021 14:10
Accidental Poet said:
Wonderful poem MEM. Near my work place I have some squirrels I regularly feed peanuts to twice a week. Squirrels rock! ; )
June 27th, 2021 14:10
Kaleidoscope
Fay Slimm. said:
Deeply moving this view on life and its changing patterns my friend - -- agreed that we either cope with change or maybe never find our true self in the daily kaleidoscope.
June 25th, 2021 13:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Deeply moving this view on life and its changing patterns my friend - -- agreed that we either cope with change or maybe never find our true self in the daily kaleidoscope.
June 25th, 2021 13:26
Brokenness
L. B. Mek said:
the poetic sincerity, in your impassioned plea
is evident, for us all to see..
thanks for sharing
June 22nd, 2021 03:10
L. B. Mek said:
the poetic sincerity, in your impassioned plea
is evident, for us all to see..
thanks for sharing
June 22nd, 2021 03:10
Brokenness
Goldfinch60 said:
Helping others can fix them as you are doing with your words.
Andy
June 22nd, 2021 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Helping others can fix them as you are doing with your words.
Andy
June 22nd, 2021 00:20
Brokenness
Fay Slimm. said:
With genuine hands held out the sufferer has a rope to pull on and must feel more security as your tender lines state - -a fine read of compassion and all it means.
June 21st, 2021 14:46
Fay Slimm. said:
With genuine hands held out the sufferer has a rope to pull on and must feel more security as your tender lines state - -a fine read of compassion and all it means.
June 21st, 2021 14:46
Brokenness
dusk arising said:
Broken souls need time and find their own readyness. Perseverence often pays off.
June 21st, 2021 10:17
dusk arising said:
Broken souls need time and find their own readyness. Perseverence often pays off.
June 21st, 2021 10:17
Boxing Day
L. B. Mek said:
jarring to read this in the crippling heat of June
but also, somehow adds more weight to your
nostalgic words,
why do we assume, there will always be a better boxing day
in our future? what about, this chaotic existence we call life
means we\'re even guaranteed another one?
and that, dear poet is why write\'s like yours
are always timeless and necessary!
we must, celebrate our wonderful memories
so that those who read: can be reminded
its not all doom and gloom;
however sweltering the heat
or dreary grey, those gathering clouds,
good days: exist
just a few puffs of a wind, away...
thanks for sharing dear poet
June 18th, 2021 03:29
L. B. Mek said:
jarring to read this in the crippling heat of June
but also, somehow adds more weight to your
nostalgic words,
why do we assume, there will always be a better boxing day
in our future? what about, this chaotic existence we call life
means we\'re even guaranteed another one?
and that, dear poet is why write\'s like yours
are always timeless and necessary!
we must, celebrate our wonderful memories
so that those who read: can be reminded
its not all doom and gloom;
however sweltering the heat
or dreary grey, those gathering clouds,
good days: exist
just a few puffs of a wind, away...
thanks for sharing dear poet
June 18th, 2021 03:29
The Power
L. B. Mek said:
fences serve a purpose, see
without middle grounds
it would all be that eye for an eye
of all-consuming, futile hate
that\'s why middle grounds, exist
to balance out
the zealotry in humanity\'s
fallible extremes..
thanks for sharing
June 15th, 2021 04:47
L. B. Mek said:
fences serve a purpose, see
without middle grounds
it would all be that eye for an eye
of all-consuming, futile hate
that\'s why middle grounds, exist
to balance out
the zealotry in humanity\'s
fallible extremes..
thanks for sharing
June 15th, 2021 04:47
Seen
dusk arising said:
Great write about the confusion of who you are. Well right now you is, what you is. And what you is, is learning to be what you\'re going to be which normally is a more \'together\' version of you than today. phew!.... Well that\'s gotta be worth looking forward to for all the potential lovers around you!
May 28th, 2021 09:01
dusk arising said:
Great write about the confusion of who you are. Well right now you is, what you is. And what you is, is learning to be what you\'re going to be which normally is a more \'together\' version of you than today. phew!.... Well that\'s gotta be worth looking forward to for all the potential lovers around you!
May 28th, 2021 09:01
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