Comments received on poems by M.E.M.
My Life in the Stars
Eugene S. said:
Very easy to envision and relate to. I\'m there. I appreciate the aspects of direction and progression.
May 2nd, 2021 07:56
Eugene S. said:
Very easy to envision and relate to. I\'m there. I appreciate the aspects of direction and progression.
May 2nd, 2021 07:56
My Life in the Stars
Doggerel Dave said:
This work really drew me into your place in an environment full of texture and detail. A three dimensional picture. The feel of time passing and thus change also in the mix.
Really engaging read which put together elements of your life and transformed it into so much more.
Many thanks for that, M.
May 1st, 2021 21:59
Doggerel Dave said:
This work really drew me into your place in an environment full of texture and detail. A three dimensional picture. The feel of time passing and thus change also in the mix.
Really engaging read which put together elements of your life and transformed it into so much more.
Many thanks for that, M.
May 1st, 2021 21:59
My Life in the Stars
A Boy With Roses said:
I live in Scotland, and for as long as I can remember I\'ve always been weirdly fascinated with the Americana beauty. This poem is a deep ocean of life you\'ve facsimiled and turned into words. I could live in the bittersweet happiness of it.
May 1st, 2021 16:13
A Boy With Roses said:
I live in Scotland, and for as long as I can remember I\'ve always been weirdly fascinated with the Americana beauty. This poem is a deep ocean of life you\'ve facsimiled and turned into words. I could live in the bittersweet happiness of it.
May 1st, 2021 16:13
Soap Box
Doggerel Dave said:
Is there something about Florida you are a teensy bit unsure about?
After your sestina I am going for a siesta.
BTW pickles in any form give me indigestion :-)
April 15th, 2021 19:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Is there something about Florida you are a teensy bit unsure about?
After your sestina I am going for a siesta.
BTW pickles in any form give me indigestion :-)
April 15th, 2021 19:41
Soap Box
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you. I admit to not being sold on either pickles or Florida.
April 15th, 2021 19:32
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you. I admit to not being sold on either pickles or Florida.
April 15th, 2021 19:32
We Battle at Dawn
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write MEM.
Even in the darkness
The moon will show its light
Showing to us all
That this world will all be right.
Andy
March 21st, 2021 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write MEM.
Even in the darkness
The moon will show its light
Showing to us all
That this world will all be right.
Andy
March 21st, 2021 01:44
We Battle at Dawn
Doggerel Dave said:
Straightforward and well constructed, an easy read. Enjoyed. Must be a very small town to be so enveloped by night.
March 20th, 2021 16:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Straightforward and well constructed, an easy read. Enjoyed. Must be a very small town to be so enveloped by night.
March 20th, 2021 16:03
Why Did the Chicken Cross the Road?
dusk arising said:
Not destined to the destiny someone else plans for us..... parent?.... tutor?.... employer? NO! .. strike out and take it as it comes.... that way you\'ll have a life to look back on and be able to song along with Frank \"I did it my way\" lol
Enjoyed reading your post very much.
March 5th, 2021 08:54
dusk arising said:
Not destined to the destiny someone else plans for us..... parent?.... tutor?.... employer? NO! .. strike out and take it as it comes.... that way you\'ll have a life to look back on and be able to song along with Frank \"I did it my way\" lol
Enjoyed reading your post very much.
March 5th, 2021 08:54
Why Did the Chicken Cross the Road?
L. B. Mek said:
ok, so much deeper than those first three stanza\'s lull us readers into pre-emptively judging, insuring that final stanza\'s twist, maximises its impact,
an interesting format, that I\'m sure can be perfected over time into a unique style for poignant write\'s that surprise your readers into alert awareness for the subject matter you want to highlight..
really well thought-out and executed,
thanks for bringing up such an important topic of moral and social ambiguity in our treatment of nature\'s - (fellow), children
March 5th, 2021 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
ok, so much deeper than those first three stanza\'s lull us readers into pre-emptively judging, insuring that final stanza\'s twist, maximises its impact,
an interesting format, that I\'m sure can be perfected over time into a unique style for poignant write\'s that surprise your readers into alert awareness for the subject matter you want to highlight..
really well thought-out and executed,
thanks for bringing up such an important topic of moral and social ambiguity in our treatment of nature\'s - (fellow), children
March 5th, 2021 04:06
Why Did the Chicken Cross the Road?
Goldfinch60 said:
We may never know, like many things in life we may always take that chance to move on.
Andy
March 5th, 2021 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
We may never know, like many things in life we may always take that chance to move on.
Andy
March 5th, 2021 02:07
Why Did the Chicken Cross the Road?
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t keep me in suspenders - did she or didn\'t she? Good beginning, expansive middle; now what about an ending? :-)
You\'ve made it clear to me why I\'m a veggo.
March 4th, 2021 16:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t keep me in suspenders - did she or didn\'t she? Good beginning, expansive middle; now what about an ending? :-)
You\'ve made it clear to me why I\'m a veggo.
March 4th, 2021 16:50
Why Did the Chicken Cross the Road?
Jerry Reynolds said:
Anywhere else is better than here.
Good write, M.E.M.
March 4th, 2021 13:54
Jerry Reynolds said:
Anywhere else is better than here.
Good write, M.E.M.
March 4th, 2021 13:54
White Pawn
L. B. Mek said:
how venerable you\'ve made yourself in sharing such crippling self-realisation, though
the mere act of gleaning this much wisdom out of life, shows you may have always been on the right track,
just waiting for that opportunistic train to help you demonstrate your true worth..
this is a profound write, I like how you recognise and acknowledge, taking accountability, but quite rightly not offering meaningless apologies for a situation you never had too much control over,
it is a rare person that can swim - back, against the flow of their lives current and set an example for us all to follow,
thank you for sharing this brave write dear poet (whether literal or abstract)
March 4th, 2021 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
how venerable you\'ve made yourself in sharing such crippling self-realisation, though
the mere act of gleaning this much wisdom out of life, shows you may have always been on the right track,
just waiting for that opportunistic train to help you demonstrate your true worth..
this is a profound write, I like how you recognise and acknowledge, taking accountability, but quite rightly not offering meaningless apologies for a situation you never had too much control over,
it is a rare person that can swim - back, against the flow of their lives current and set an example for us all to follow,
thank you for sharing this brave write dear poet (whether literal or abstract)
March 4th, 2021 05:40
Cease to Exist
Goldfinch60 said:
The silence between each word separates them and then each words becomes an individual.
Andy
March 3rd, 2021 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
The silence between each word separates them and then each words becomes an individual.
Andy
March 3rd, 2021 01:36
What Women Want… or don’t want, you figure it out
orchidee said:
Well, no, it didn\'t get \'hot\' or saucy in this poem, so no need for an 18+.
But what do I know about hot poems?! lol.
February 9th, 2021 03:00
orchidee said:
Well, no, it didn\'t get \'hot\' or saucy in this poem, so no need for an 18+.
But what do I know about hot poems?! lol.
February 9th, 2021 03:00
What Women Want… or don’t want, you figure it out
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words MEM..
Andy
February 9th, 2021 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words MEM..
Andy
February 9th, 2021 01:23
What Women Want… or don’t want, you figure it out
Doggerel Dave said:
Doing the best we can - some of us.
You remark that your poems are \'silly\' .That\'s wrong - they\'re funny, yes, not silly.
February 8th, 2021 19:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Doing the best we can - some of us.
You remark that your poems are \'silly\' .That\'s wrong - they\'re funny, yes, not silly.
February 8th, 2021 19:11
What Women Want… or don’t want, you figure it out
FredPeyer said:
Well said, M.E.M., and we men are still running around in the dark, having no clue!
February 8th, 2021 15:50
FredPeyer said:
Well said, M.E.M., and we men are still running around in the dark, having no clue!
February 8th, 2021 15:50
What Women Want… or don’t want, you figure it out
dusk arising said:
I\'m sure you speak for all women.....
February 8th, 2021 14:22
dusk arising said:
I\'m sure you speak for all women.....
February 8th, 2021 14:22
First Time Girl
FredPeyer said:
I am uniquely disqualified to say anything about \'bras\', but I am qualified to say that I really like your poem. Since you find it \'amusing\', maybe the poem could go into the humor section, but then again, bras are no laughing matter!
February 5th, 2021 19:27
FredPeyer said:
I am uniquely disqualified to say anything about \'bras\', but I am qualified to say that I really like your poem. Since you find it \'amusing\', maybe the poem could go into the humor section, but then again, bras are no laughing matter!
February 5th, 2021 19:27
First Time Girl
orchidee said:
Erm, dunno! I was never a gal, only a guy! (heehee).
February 5th, 2021 11:00
orchidee said:
Erm, dunno! I was never a gal, only a guy! (heehee).
February 5th, 2021 11:00
First Time Girl
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write M.E.M. I am not qualified to comment on women. The copy writer for \"Training Bra\" was probably a man.
February 5th, 2021 10:08
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write M.E.M. I am not qualified to comment on women. The copy writer for \"Training Bra\" was probably a man.
February 5th, 2021 10:08
Sharpen My Love
L. B. Mek said:
innuendo at its witty and biting best,
wonderfully executed with a smooth deadpan style of delivery,
all hail the \'laughing lion\'s\' of a new generation...
may humour forever prevail!
February 5th, 2021 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
innuendo at its witty and biting best,
wonderfully executed with a smooth deadpan style of delivery,
all hail the \'laughing lion\'s\' of a new generation...
may humour forever prevail!
February 5th, 2021 05:21
Sharpen My Love
FredPeyer said:
This is a great poem, M.E.M. Well done! You made me smile!
I wonder how we would read this without seeing the picture.
February 4th, 2021 22:00
FredPeyer said:
This is a great poem, M.E.M. Well done! You made me smile!
I wonder how we would read this without seeing the picture.
February 4th, 2021 22:00
Sharpen My Love
Doggerel Dave said:
Great fun - full of whimsy. Agree with bLq above, but don\'t abandon that humourous instinct, ever.
February 4th, 2021 19:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Great fun - full of whimsy. Agree with bLq above, but don\'t abandon that humourous instinct, ever.
February 4th, 2021 19:11
Sharpen My Love
b-LAH-que said:
I like the humor behind this, but there may be even more to be said about being able to channel creativity and create a whole poem from something normally so insignificant. It makes me wonder what you\'d create based on something in which you found true depth or beauty. Nicely done.
February 4th, 2021 09:54
b-LAH-que said:
I like the humor behind this, but there may be even more to be said about being able to channel creativity and create a whole poem from something normally so insignificant. It makes me wonder what you\'d create based on something in which you found true depth or beauty. Nicely done.
February 4th, 2021 09:54
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