Comments received on poems by M.E.M.
Post-Cancer
L. B. Mek said:
So happy for you, dear Poet
thanks for sharing your great news
\'The wait.
The long wait
in the waiting room\'
made it so vivid, so well written
March 10th, 2023 04:20
L. B. Mek said:
So happy for you, dear Poet
thanks for sharing your great news
\'The wait.
The long wait
in the waiting room\'
made it so vivid, so well written
March 10th, 2023 04:20
Post-Cancer
David Wakeling said:
There is a pull of the tourniquet around my bicep
as my fingernails dig into my skin, forming a fist.
Please let it only be one poke.
At the prick of the needle, I am sucking air through my teeth.
March 9th, 2023 21:16
David Wakeling said:
There is a pull of the tourniquet around my bicep
as my fingernails dig into my skin, forming a fist.
Please let it only be one poke.
At the prick of the needle, I am sucking air through my teeth.
March 9th, 2023 21:16
Post-Cancer
David Wakeling said:
I can\'t read this because there are words missing. Its good that you don\'t have cancer.
March 9th, 2023 15:55
David Wakeling said:
I can\'t read this because there are words missing. Its good that you don\'t have cancer.
March 9th, 2023 15:55
It Feels Like Yesterday
Myth said:
From the womb of suffering vivd feelings are born ..
Then comes flow of words to shape a burbling poem that impress others ..
(I can feel the extent of the pain .. )
March 7th, 2023 14:02
Myth said:
From the womb of suffering vivd feelings are born ..
Then comes flow of words to shape a burbling poem that impress others ..
(I can feel the extent of the pain .. )
March 7th, 2023 14:02
Elements: Earth
Myth said:
Earth
A flying carpet we all on board ..
A mother never fed-up suckling..
*Nature seems extra vivid in your poems..,
March 3rd, 2023 14:50
Myth said:
Earth
A flying carpet we all on board ..
A mother never fed-up suckling..
*Nature seems extra vivid in your poems..,
March 3rd, 2023 14:50
Evil Eye
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words M.E.M but it is certainly not you.
Andy
February 25th, 2023 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words M.E.M but it is certainly not you.
Andy
February 25th, 2023 01:33
Evil Eye
Myth said:
Definitely that person wasn\'t you .. a sensitive poet like you won\'t carry such negative vibes .. (🏀) this is a small amulet protect from evil eyes..😊
February 24th, 2023 15:08
Myth said:
Definitely that person wasn\'t you .. a sensitive poet like you won\'t carry such negative vibes .. (🏀) this is a small amulet protect from evil eyes..😊
February 24th, 2023 15:08
Take a Moment
Myth said:
Once again you steal the beauty of nutare to build your poem .. I enjoyed it ...
February 23rd, 2023 01:41
Myth said:
Once again you steal the beauty of nutare to build your poem .. I enjoyed it ...
February 23rd, 2023 01:41
In the Room
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust is so important in any relationship M.E.M.
Andy
February 22nd, 2023 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust is so important in any relationship M.E.M.
Andy
February 22nd, 2023 01:43
Entity
Myth said:
I wonder .. do we need a face ..name .. body to feel our existence ?
Someone says : (Words that all we need ..)
Be safe ..
February 20th, 2023 14:39
Myth said:
I wonder .. do we need a face ..name .. body to feel our existence ?
Someone says : (Words that all we need ..)
Be safe ..
February 20th, 2023 14:39
Anti-valentine
Doggerel Dave said:
My feelings/attitudes conveyed in their entirety - though expressed here leagues ahead of my capabilities. Thanks.
February 14th, 2023 19:53
Doggerel Dave said:
My feelings/attitudes conveyed in their entirety - though expressed here leagues ahead of my capabilities. Thanks.
February 14th, 2023 19:53
Snow Has Yet to Fall
Goldfinch60 said:
Well written words M.E.M and so meaningful.
Andy
February 14th, 2023 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Well written words M.E.M and so meaningful.
Andy
February 14th, 2023 02:20
Snow Has Yet to Fall
Eileen Clark said:
Hi, nice piece of poetry and I\'m with you on your feelings about winter.
Best regards
February 13th, 2023 15:12
Eileen Clark said:
Hi, nice piece of poetry and I\'m with you on your feelings about winter.
Best regards
February 13th, 2023 15:12
To New Relationships
Doggerel Dave said:
What no external prompt? Great: Please continue - less direction and more you.
PS: Having written the above, I went for a stroll through some of your back catalogue - The prompt thing is fairly recent...so I owe you an apology.
February 9th, 2023 18:13
Doggerel Dave said:
What no external prompt? Great: Please continue - less direction and more you.
PS: Having written the above, I went for a stroll through some of your back catalogue - The prompt thing is fairly recent...so I owe you an apology.
February 9th, 2023 18:13
To New Relationships
charles69 said:
very nice brief poem I have made the mistake more than once of trusting a new friend too soon
it does take time to build a good relationship, a good friend
if you get time read my poem \"Beyonce\"
I\'d like to know how you feel about what I say
Will be looking for more poems from you
February 9th, 2023 16:14
charles69 said:
very nice brief poem I have made the mistake more than once of trusting a new friend too soon
it does take time to build a good relationship, a good friend
if you get time read my poem \"Beyonce\"
I\'d like to know how you feel about what I say
Will be looking for more poems from you
February 9th, 2023 16:14
A Little White Lie
Goldfinch60 said:
Any lie can get out of hand and affect many people. Good words M.E.M.
Andy
February 1st, 2023 02:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Any lie can get out of hand and affect many people. Good words M.E.M.
Andy
February 1st, 2023 02:56
The Dreadful Silence
Goldfinch60 said:
That silence can bring so much peace into our lives M.E.M that it should never be ignored.
Andy
January 31st, 2023 02:30
Goldfinch60 said:
That silence can bring so much peace into our lives M.E.M that it should never be ignored.
Andy
January 31st, 2023 02:30
My City on Fire
Doggerel Dave said:
No, can\'t get this to translate into English via Google. Only way was to copy to a blank page in Word........
But I\'d rather not have to....
January 29th, 2023 06:29
Doggerel Dave said:
No, can\'t get this to translate into English via Google. Only way was to copy to a blank page in Word........
But I\'d rather not have to....
January 29th, 2023 06:29
Death Walks Among Man
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words M.E.M, I have written a poem in the past about being death.
I AM BEHIND YOU!
Andy
January 28th, 2023 02:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words M.E.M, I have written a poem in the past about being death.
I AM BEHIND YOU!
Andy
January 28th, 2023 02:33
Death Walks Among Man
Doggerel Dave said:
Your prompt, in this instance, paid dividends here.
If, when I write that I found this a good fun piece, you felt that I have not understood it, well you would be wrong!
January 27th, 2023 23:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Your prompt, in this instance, paid dividends here.
If, when I write that I found this a good fun piece, you felt that I have not understood it, well you would be wrong!
January 27th, 2023 23:16
Death Walks Among Man
jarcher54 said:
I love your take on this. So many wonderful lines. This is sublimely cold and rings true: I am Death and I take my job seriously.
January 27th, 2023 23:07
jarcher54 said:
I love your take on this. So many wonderful lines. This is sublimely cold and rings true: I am Death and I take my job seriously.
January 27th, 2023 23:07
Pier
Doggerel Dave said:
Doesn\'t require a classification to my mind - it is a great introduction to a much longer story......
January 26th, 2023 18:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Doesn\'t require a classification to my mind - it is a great introduction to a much longer story......
January 26th, 2023 18:47
Chroma
Doggerel Dave said:
Teal - a colour which has found it\'s way into Australian politics. The persons who fly under that colour are young, female and independent. More power to them.
Your usual good and competent write - Thanks
PS: You always welcome comments, yet never respond to them. Would be nice to know if my responses hit the mark.....
January 25th, 2023 00:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Teal - a colour which has found it\'s way into Australian politics. The persons who fly under that colour are young, female and independent. More power to them.
Your usual good and competent write - Thanks
PS: You always welcome comments, yet never respond to them. Would be nice to know if my responses hit the mark.....
January 25th, 2023 00:11
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