Comments received on poems by M.E.M.
The Ordinary Key
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"The ordinary key” by MEM.
Some quotes :
‘Hearts, like doors, will open with ease
To very, very little keys.
And don’t forget that two of these
Are “I thank you” and “If you please” ‘
--Anonymous
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--\"Many a book is like a key to unknown chambers within the castle of one’s own self.\"
--Franz Kafka (1883-1924)
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Keys can lock someone in or out. The smallest key can open the biggest door. There are keys to success, keys to freedom… The biggest door is useless without a lock or a bolt. That lock is useless without a key or its equivalent.
Soman Ragavan. 20 June, 2023. //
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June 20th, 2023 09:33
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"The ordinary key” by MEM.
Some quotes :
‘Hearts, like doors, will open with ease
To very, very little keys.
And don’t forget that two of these
Are “I thank you” and “If you please” ‘
--Anonymous
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--\"Many a book is like a key to unknown chambers within the castle of one’s own self.\"
--Franz Kafka (1883-1924)
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Keys can lock someone in or out. The smallest key can open the biggest door. There are keys to success, keys to freedom… The biggest door is useless without a lock or a bolt. That lock is useless without a key or its equivalent.
Soman Ragavan. 20 June, 2023. //
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June 20th, 2023 09:33
Hard Truths
Karen Greiner said:
This was a very sad poem. Well written though. Good Job
Yours Karen L. Greiner
May 18th, 2023 17:18
Karen Greiner said:
This was a very sad poem. Well written though. Good Job
Yours Karen L. Greiner
May 18th, 2023 17:18
Mortality
Myth said:
Death is the practical application of (absolute equality ..)
We all on the list .. no exceptions !
Yet, no one wants to be in the lead ..
(Stay well)
March 23rd, 2023 07:30
Myth said:
Death is the practical application of (absolute equality ..)
We all on the list .. no exceptions !
Yet, no one wants to be in the lead ..
(Stay well)
March 23rd, 2023 07:30
Revolutions of Sonder
Doggerel Dave said:
The word \'wonder\' has never crossed your path before? - I find that so very hard to believe....Despite your deficiency (😇) you have extremely accurately described how I feel when I look at a large group of people (in say a shopping mall) and wonder......
March 20th, 2023 17:26
Doggerel Dave said:
The word \'wonder\' has never crossed your path before? - I find that so very hard to believe....Despite your deficiency (😇) you have extremely accurately described how I feel when I look at a large group of people (in say a shopping mall) and wonder......
March 20th, 2023 17:26
Darling Whispers
Mello said:
This offers a powerful message of support and encouragement to those who are struggling. It reminds us that we do not have to face our challenges alone and that there are people who are willing to help us through our pain.
March 18th, 2023 17:33
Mello said:
This offers a powerful message of support and encouragement to those who are struggling. It reminds us that we do not have to face our challenges alone and that there are people who are willing to help us through our pain.
March 18th, 2023 17:33
Towers in the Sky
L. B. Mek said:
(suspended poetic lines
reflective
of those floating, what if\'s
of life)
a sobering read, wonderfully unique
I\'m sorry for your loss and hurt, dear poet
March 17th, 2023 05:16
L. B. Mek said:
(suspended poetic lines
reflective
of those floating, what if\'s
of life)
a sobering read, wonderfully unique
I\'m sorry for your loss and hurt, dear poet
March 17th, 2023 05:16
Whispers on the Wind
Myth said:
Hollo .. mysterious. .
I think you have been nominated to join them
Because I sense unique tint in this poem ..Even before you know their native tongue ..☺
March 14th, 2023 15:28
Myth said:
Hollo .. mysterious. .
I think you have been nominated to join them
Because I sense unique tint in this poem ..Even before you know their native tongue ..☺
March 14th, 2023 15:28
Post-Cancer
Myth said:
Sorry I found no words to add ..
It\'s a new dawn .. new birth
I\'m happy for you..
March 10th, 2023 15:03
Myth said:
Sorry I found no words to add ..
It\'s a new dawn .. new birth
I\'m happy for you..
March 10th, 2023 15:03
Post-Cancer
L. B. Mek said:
So happy for you, dear Poet
thanks for sharing your great news
\'The wait.
The long wait
in the waiting room\'
made it so vivid, so well written
March 10th, 2023 04:20
L. B. Mek said:
So happy for you, dear Poet
thanks for sharing your great news
\'The wait.
The long wait
in the waiting room\'
made it so vivid, so well written
March 10th, 2023 04:20
Post-Cancer
David Wakeling said:
There is a pull of the tourniquet around my bicep
as my fingernails dig into my skin, forming a fist.
Please let it only be one poke.
At the prick of the needle, I am sucking air through my teeth.
March 9th, 2023 21:16
David Wakeling said:
There is a pull of the tourniquet around my bicep
as my fingernails dig into my skin, forming a fist.
Please let it only be one poke.
At the prick of the needle, I am sucking air through my teeth.
March 9th, 2023 21:16
Post-Cancer
David Wakeling said:
I can\'t read this because there are words missing. Its good that you don\'t have cancer.
March 9th, 2023 15:55
David Wakeling said:
I can\'t read this because there are words missing. Its good that you don\'t have cancer.
March 9th, 2023 15:55
It Feels Like Yesterday
Myth said:
From the womb of suffering vivd feelings are born ..
Then comes flow of words to shape a burbling poem that impress others ..
(I can feel the extent of the pain .. )
March 7th, 2023 14:02
Myth said:
From the womb of suffering vivd feelings are born ..
Then comes flow of words to shape a burbling poem that impress others ..
(I can feel the extent of the pain .. )
March 7th, 2023 14:02
Elements: Earth
Myth said:
Earth
A flying carpet we all on board ..
A mother never fed-up suckling..
*Nature seems extra vivid in your poems..,
March 3rd, 2023 14:50
Myth said:
Earth
A flying carpet we all on board ..
A mother never fed-up suckling..
*Nature seems extra vivid in your poems..,
March 3rd, 2023 14:50
Evil Eye
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words M.E.M but it is certainly not you.
Andy
February 25th, 2023 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words M.E.M but it is certainly not you.
Andy
February 25th, 2023 01:33
Evil Eye
Myth said:
Definitely that person wasn\'t you .. a sensitive poet like you won\'t carry such negative vibes .. (🏀) this is a small amulet protect from evil eyes..😊
February 24th, 2023 15:08
Myth said:
Definitely that person wasn\'t you .. a sensitive poet like you won\'t carry such negative vibes .. (🏀) this is a small amulet protect from evil eyes..😊
February 24th, 2023 15:08
Take a Moment
Myth said:
Once again you steal the beauty of nutare to build your poem .. I enjoyed it ...
February 23rd, 2023 01:41
Myth said:
Once again you steal the beauty of nutare to build your poem .. I enjoyed it ...
February 23rd, 2023 01:41
In the Room
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust is so important in any relationship M.E.M.
Andy
February 22nd, 2023 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust is so important in any relationship M.E.M.
Andy
February 22nd, 2023 01:43
Entity
Myth said:
I wonder .. do we need a face ..name .. body to feel our existence ?
Someone says : (Words that all we need ..)
Be safe ..
February 20th, 2023 14:39
Myth said:
I wonder .. do we need a face ..name .. body to feel our existence ?
Someone says : (Words that all we need ..)
Be safe ..
February 20th, 2023 14:39
Anti-valentine
Doggerel Dave said:
My feelings/attitudes conveyed in their entirety - though expressed here leagues ahead of my capabilities. Thanks.
February 14th, 2023 19:53
Doggerel Dave said:
My feelings/attitudes conveyed in their entirety - though expressed here leagues ahead of my capabilities. Thanks.
February 14th, 2023 19:53
Snow Has Yet to Fall
Goldfinch60 said:
Well written words M.E.M and so meaningful.
Andy
February 14th, 2023 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Well written words M.E.M and so meaningful.
Andy
February 14th, 2023 02:20
Snow Has Yet to Fall
Eileen Clark said:
Hi, nice piece of poetry and I\'m with you on your feelings about winter.
Best regards
February 13th, 2023 15:12
Eileen Clark said:
Hi, nice piece of poetry and I\'m with you on your feelings about winter.
Best regards
February 13th, 2023 15:12
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