Comments received on poems by M.E.M.



Pride
FredPeyer said:

M.E.M., maybe it\'s my eyes, but as the blind man said: I see, I can\'t see anything.
I do like the poem though, especially the two lines \'Don\'t be afraid...\' and \'Protecting you...\'

October 27th, 2017 12:29

The Crisis
FredPeyer said:

M.E.M., this is a great take on Thomas Paine. Well penned, well thought out, very imaginative, great structure. Kudos!

October 26th, 2017 19:51

Once In A Blue Moon
FredPeyer said:

M.E.M., this guy sounds just about perfect! I do like your poem, well written, has a nice flow and great structure.
And you are right, a guy like that does come only around once in a blue moon, which kind of means never? Tone it down a bit and take the next one on the list! :-)

October 26th, 2017 03:55

Once In A Blue Moon
Verta said:

Great job! I wrote a piece similar to this when I was 15. But I wrote it towards the opposite direction. I wrote it about a guy that was a player. I wish I could get back that journal. My grandma accidentally threw it away, while cleaning house.

October 25th, 2017 23:17

Once In A Blue Moon
Christina8 said:

Perfect job describing the man that I married...well besides the blue eyes! LOL. Kidding aside, this is a well written poem! Great job!

October 25th, 2017 20:06

Once In A Blue Moon
Dakota said:

I think you did a great job! You painted a picture with your words I like that.

October 25th, 2017 18:21

A Winter’s Night
FredPeyer said:

I really love this poem, M.E.M., even though I didn\'t have a winter\'s night for the past 30 years, I still remember them. And your poem does them justice. Very poetic, love the last stanza.

October 25th, 2017 01:00

.09 Milliseconds
FredPeyer said:

Yes, a lot can happen in a very short time, you wrote that very well. Leaving your house 2 seconds earlier could have prevented getting hit by a bus, etc. I think we keep fighting because we don\'t know what will happen.

October 25th, 2017 00:59

Life After Death
FredPeyer said:

A very thought provoking poem, M.E.M.! Well written too!


October 25th, 2017 00:56

Heart Wrenching
Christina8 said:

Great write. All very good questions. Hopefully I have some time before I have to answer them. Great job!

October 23rd, 2017 10:57

Verses
Christina8 said:

Very good, expressive write! \"scarred beauty\" Loved it!

October 19th, 2017 12:40

Basketball
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, all sport is there to be enjoyed as you obviously do with basketball.

October 19th, 2017 00:56

Barriers
Goldfinch60 said:

Good positive write. Welcome to MPS.

October 17th, 2017 00:28

Barriers
Louis Gibbs said:

A fine metaphor on all-important hope, M.E.M. Welcome to MPS!

October 16th, 2017 11:25

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