Comments received on poems by M.E.M.
If I Could See Him Again
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., your poem really touched me, reminded me of my mom and how I was thousands of miles away when she passed.
Very beautifully written, straight from the heart. Thank you!
November 6th, 2017 14:43
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., your poem really touched me, reminded me of my mom and how I was thousands of miles away when she passed.
Very beautifully written, straight from the heart. Thank you!
November 6th, 2017 14:43
If I Could See Him Again
Christina8 said:
A moving tribute to your pawpaw. I\'m sure he would be very proud!!
November 6th, 2017 12:10
Christina8 said:
A moving tribute to your pawpaw. I\'m sure he would be very proud!!
November 6th, 2017 12:10
Theatre
FredPeyer said:
You made me use google translate, M.E.M.! Have no idea how accurate that translation is, but from what I could see, I am glad I did translate it.
You are right, life is but a stage, and we alone decide how to act on it.
November 4th, 2017 19:45
FredPeyer said:
You made me use google translate, M.E.M.! Have no idea how accurate that translation is, but from what I could see, I am glad I did translate it.
You are right, life is but a stage, and we alone decide how to act on it.
November 4th, 2017 19:45
Identity
FredPeyer said:
You were kicked out of Pencey Prep??? And I thought you were this model student, math genius, chess club founder, cheer leader, AND founder of the \'support the library\' movement!
Well written, M.E.M., but what a disappointment!
November 2nd, 2017 13:34
FredPeyer said:
You were kicked out of Pencey Prep??? And I thought you were this model student, math genius, chess club founder, cheer leader, AND founder of the \'support the library\' movement!
Well written, M.E.M., but what a disappointment!
November 2nd, 2017 13:34
New World
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M. your excellent poem shows A LOT of maturity. It would be great if every young person would think like that and take your great poem to heart. I am only sad about what kind of world we, the older generation, are leaving for you.
November 1st, 2017 11:51
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M. your excellent poem shows A LOT of maturity. It would be great if every young person would think like that and take your great poem to heart. I am only sad about what kind of world we, the older generation, are leaving for you.
November 1st, 2017 11:51
Soon To Be Graduate
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to the \"real\" world, M.E.M., where YOU now handle your own life! It is a great feeling, sometimes it sucks, you have nobody to blame but yourself, but you are now the conductor of your own symphony! :-)
You could have put this poem into \'Reflection\'.
Keep on writing, you are good!
October 31st, 2017 18:25
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to the \"real\" world, M.E.M., where YOU now handle your own life! It is a great feeling, sometimes it sucks, you have nobody to blame but yourself, but you are now the conductor of your own symphony! :-)
You could have put this poem into \'Reflection\'.
Keep on writing, you are good!
October 31st, 2017 18:25
.09 Milliseconds
Anna Marg said:
True even in milliseconds one moment can define a person\'s life! Great work as always!
October 31st, 2017 11:49
Anna Marg said:
True even in milliseconds one moment can define a person\'s life! Great work as always!
October 31st, 2017 11:49
Lust
FredPeyer said:
Yes, M.E.M., that\'s what a kiss can do, and you wrote it very nicely!
Like the line \'Stormy spheres...\' (there is a little typo, huger instead of hunger, and another little one on the last line you instead of you, but no big deal!)
October 31st, 2017 11:14
FredPeyer said:
Yes, M.E.M., that\'s what a kiss can do, and you wrote it very nicely!
Like the line \'Stormy spheres...\' (there is a little typo, huger instead of hunger, and another little one on the last line you instead of you, but no big deal!)
October 31st, 2017 11:14
Life
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., never thought of a friend this way, but you said it beautifully!
October 30th, 2017 20:16
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., never thought of a friend this way, but you said it beautifully!
October 30th, 2017 20:16
Life
orchidee said:
A fine write MEM. I\'ve never seen any sense in boxing - two people bashing each other about, leading to brain-damage in severe cases. I suppose they do it for the money. Otherwise it seems a complete waste of time to me!
October 30th, 2017 10:58
orchidee said:
A fine write MEM. I\'ve never seen any sense in boxing - two people bashing each other about, leading to brain-damage in severe cases. I suppose they do it for the money. Otherwise it seems a complete waste of time to me!
October 30th, 2017 10:58
Gluttony
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., I am married to a Chinese woman where love goes through the stomach! We don\'t waste food, but hell yes, bring on the gluttony!
Fun poem, like it a lot!
October 29th, 2017 01:20
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., I am married to a Chinese woman where love goes through the stomach! We don\'t waste food, but hell yes, bring on the gluttony!
Fun poem, like it a lot!
October 29th, 2017 01:20
Pride
orchidee said:
Ahh, good write to get 7 lines, each with 7 words! And similar to what Cat says, \"I\" is in the centre of PRIDE. Erm, so it in sIn too. Hmmm.
October 27th, 2017 13:36
orchidee said:
Ahh, good write to get 7 lines, each with 7 words! And similar to what Cat says, \"I\" is in the centre of PRIDE. Erm, so it in sIn too. Hmmm.
October 27th, 2017 13:36
Pride
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., maybe it\'s my eyes, but as the blind man said: I see, I can\'t see anything.
I do like the poem though, especially the two lines \'Don\'t be afraid...\' and \'Protecting you...\'
October 27th, 2017 12:29
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., maybe it\'s my eyes, but as the blind man said: I see, I can\'t see anything.
I do like the poem though, especially the two lines \'Don\'t be afraid...\' and \'Protecting you...\'
October 27th, 2017 12:29
The Crisis
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., this is a great take on Thomas Paine. Well penned, well thought out, very imaginative, great structure. Kudos!
October 26th, 2017 19:51
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., this is a great take on Thomas Paine. Well penned, well thought out, very imaginative, great structure. Kudos!
October 26th, 2017 19:51
Once In A Blue Moon
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., this guy sounds just about perfect! I do like your poem, well written, has a nice flow and great structure.
And you are right, a guy like that does come only around once in a blue moon, which kind of means never? Tone it down a bit and take the next one on the list! :-)
October 26th, 2017 03:55
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., this guy sounds just about perfect! I do like your poem, well written, has a nice flow and great structure.
And you are right, a guy like that does come only around once in a blue moon, which kind of means never? Tone it down a bit and take the next one on the list! :-)
October 26th, 2017 03:55
Once In A Blue Moon
Verta said:
Great job! I wrote a piece similar to this when I was 15. But I wrote it towards the opposite direction. I wrote it about a guy that was a player. I wish I could get back that journal. My grandma accidentally threw it away, while cleaning house.
October 25th, 2017 23:17
Verta said:
Great job! I wrote a piece similar to this when I was 15. But I wrote it towards the opposite direction. I wrote it about a guy that was a player. I wish I could get back that journal. My grandma accidentally threw it away, while cleaning house.
October 25th, 2017 23:17
Once In A Blue Moon
Christina8 said:
Perfect job describing the man that I married...well besides the blue eyes! LOL. Kidding aside, this is a well written poem! Great job!
October 25th, 2017 20:06
Christina8 said:
Perfect job describing the man that I married...well besides the blue eyes! LOL. Kidding aside, this is a well written poem! Great job!
October 25th, 2017 20:06
Once In A Blue Moon
Dakota said:
I think you did a great job! You painted a picture with your words I like that.
October 25th, 2017 18:21
Dakota said:
I think you did a great job! You painted a picture with your words I like that.
October 25th, 2017 18:21
A Winter’s Night
FredPeyer said:
I really love this poem, M.E.M., even though I didn\'t have a winter\'s night for the past 30 years, I still remember them. And your poem does them justice. Very poetic, love the last stanza.
October 25th, 2017 01:00
FredPeyer said:
I really love this poem, M.E.M., even though I didn\'t have a winter\'s night for the past 30 years, I still remember them. And your poem does them justice. Very poetic, love the last stanza.
October 25th, 2017 01:00
.09 Milliseconds
FredPeyer said:
Yes, a lot can happen in a very short time, you wrote that very well. Leaving your house 2 seconds earlier could have prevented getting hit by a bus, etc. I think we keep fighting because we don\'t know what will happen.
October 25th, 2017 00:59
FredPeyer said:
Yes, a lot can happen in a very short time, you wrote that very well. Leaving your house 2 seconds earlier could have prevented getting hit by a bus, etc. I think we keep fighting because we don\'t know what will happen.
October 25th, 2017 00:59
Life After Death
FredPeyer said:
A very thought provoking poem, M.E.M.! Well written too!
October 25th, 2017 00:56
FredPeyer said:
A very thought provoking poem, M.E.M.! Well written too!
October 25th, 2017 00:56
Heart Wrenching
Christina8 said:
Great write. All very good questions. Hopefully I have some time before I have to answer them. Great job!
October 23rd, 2017 10:57
Christina8 said:
Great write. All very good questions. Hopefully I have some time before I have to answer them. Great job!
October 23rd, 2017 10:57
Verses
Christina8 said:
Very good, expressive write! \"scarred beauty\" Loved it!
October 19th, 2017 12:40
Christina8 said:
Very good, expressive write! \"scarred beauty\" Loved it!
October 19th, 2017 12:40
Basketball
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, all sport is there to be enjoyed as you obviously do with basketball.
October 19th, 2017 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, all sport is there to be enjoyed as you obviously do with basketball.
October 19th, 2017 00:56
Barriers
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine metaphor on all-important hope, M.E.M. Welcome to MPS!
October 16th, 2017 11:25
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine metaphor on all-important hope, M.E.M. Welcome to MPS!
October 16th, 2017 11:25
« Return to the profile of M.E.M.
