Comments received on poems by M.E.M.
Cloud
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, you always look beautiful floating in the sky.
November 15th, 2017 02:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, you always look beautiful floating in the sky.
November 15th, 2017 02:31
Cloud
lasergraph said:
I enjoyed the write, and watching the real time playback.
November 14th, 2017 13:16
lasergraph said:
I enjoyed the write, and watching the real time playback.
November 14th, 2017 13:16
Favorite Word
FredPeyer said:
Dostoefsky said it much better than I can: To live without Hope is to Cease to live. Fyodor Dostoevsky
Beautiful poem, m.e.m.
November 13th, 2017 18:13
FredPeyer said:
Dostoefsky said it much better than I can: To live without Hope is to Cease to live. Fyodor Dostoevsky
Beautiful poem, m.e.m.
November 13th, 2017 18:13
Favorite Word
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true, we all need hope.
November 13th, 2017 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true, we all need hope.
November 13th, 2017 02:14
Favorite Word
Fay Slimm. said:
Good points in favour of encouraging the feeling of hope M.E.M. and so engagingly written.
November 12th, 2017 16:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Good points in favour of encouraging the feeling of hope M.E.M. and so engagingly written.
November 12th, 2017 16:33
Favorite Word
orchidee said:
Well I dunno about Pandora. I don\'t know her myself! lol. I don\'t believe in her. But we had a great talk about hope at church. Then I did a hymn-poem on it, went on for 11 verses! (not posted yet).
November 12th, 2017 13:03
orchidee said:
Well I dunno about Pandora. I don\'t know her myself! lol. I don\'t believe in her. But we had a great talk about hope at church. Then I did a hymn-poem on it, went on for 11 verses! (not posted yet).
November 12th, 2017 13:03
Melting
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, that painting is iconic in the movement of time. His other paintings are well worth looking at as well.
November 12th, 2017 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, that painting is iconic in the movement of time. His other paintings are well worth looking at as well.
November 12th, 2017 01:08
Melting
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., this is the best write-up on this Salvador Dali painting I have ever read! I is also the only one I have ever read. :-)
Seriously, you did write something special here.
November 11th, 2017 18:56
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., this is the best write-up on this Salvador Dali painting I have ever read! I is also the only one I have ever read. :-)
Seriously, you did write something special here.
November 11th, 2017 18:56
Melting
Syd said:
Hi there, I like your poem and Salvador Dalis\' painting - Syd
November 11th, 2017 11:09
Syd said:
Hi there, I like your poem and Salvador Dalis\' painting - Syd
November 11th, 2017 11:09
Melting
Laura🌻 said:
Ahh...yes...
“Time is everyone’s enemy”...
...for those who don’t have
enough of it...
....and for those who
have too much of it...!
Awesome choice of a
Surrealist painting for
your interesting write
about time! He is one
of my favorite painters!
Enjoyed the read!
Thank you!
November 11th, 2017 10:14
Laura🌻 said:
Ahh...yes...
“Time is everyone’s enemy”...
...for those who don’t have
enough of it...
....and for those who
have too much of it...!
Awesome choice of a
Surrealist painting for
your interesting write
about time! He is one
of my favorite painters!
Enjoyed the read!
Thank you!
November 11th, 2017 10:14
Melting
orchidee said:
Good write M. In that case, it\'s not always true that \'time goes slowly when one is NOT enjoying oneself\'!
November 11th, 2017 09:50
orchidee said:
Good write M. In that case, it\'s not always true that \'time goes slowly when one is NOT enjoying oneself\'!
November 11th, 2017 09:50
Haikus
FredPeyer said:
I like all three, M.E.M. The third one brought to mind Schroedinger\'s Cat, a paradox, by Austrian physicist Erwin Schrödinger in 1935. An illustration of what he saw as the problem of quantum mechanics applied to everyday objects. Your Haiku perfectly reflects what that cat could have thought!
November 8th, 2017 13:06
FredPeyer said:
I like all three, M.E.M. The third one brought to mind Schroedinger\'s Cat, a paradox, by Austrian physicist Erwin Schrödinger in 1935. An illustration of what he saw as the problem of quantum mechanics applied to everyday objects. Your Haiku perfectly reflects what that cat could have thought!
November 8th, 2017 13:06
First It Was Blue
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M, you have a very special gift to convey a lot with only a few lines.
November 7th, 2017 12:46
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M, you have a very special gift to convey a lot with only a few lines.
November 7th, 2017 12:46
If I Could See Him Again
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, he will always be with you.
November 7th, 2017 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, he will always be with you.
November 7th, 2017 01:42
If I Could See Him Again
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., your poem really touched me, reminded me of my mom and how I was thousands of miles away when she passed.
Very beautifully written, straight from the heart. Thank you!
November 6th, 2017 14:43
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., your poem really touched me, reminded me of my mom and how I was thousands of miles away when she passed.
Very beautifully written, straight from the heart. Thank you!
November 6th, 2017 14:43
If I Could See Him Again
Christina8 said:
A moving tribute to your pawpaw. I\'m sure he would be very proud!!
November 6th, 2017 12:10
Christina8 said:
A moving tribute to your pawpaw. I\'m sure he would be very proud!!
November 6th, 2017 12:10
Theatre
FredPeyer said:
You made me use google translate, M.E.M.! Have no idea how accurate that translation is, but from what I could see, I am glad I did translate it.
You are right, life is but a stage, and we alone decide how to act on it.
November 4th, 2017 19:45
FredPeyer said:
You made me use google translate, M.E.M.! Have no idea how accurate that translation is, but from what I could see, I am glad I did translate it.
You are right, life is but a stage, and we alone decide how to act on it.
November 4th, 2017 19:45
Identity
FredPeyer said:
You were kicked out of Pencey Prep??? And I thought you were this model student, math genius, chess club founder, cheer leader, AND founder of the \'support the library\' movement!
Well written, M.E.M., but what a disappointment!
November 2nd, 2017 13:34
FredPeyer said:
You were kicked out of Pencey Prep??? And I thought you were this model student, math genius, chess club founder, cheer leader, AND founder of the \'support the library\' movement!
Well written, M.E.M., but what a disappointment!
November 2nd, 2017 13:34
New World
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M. your excellent poem shows A LOT of maturity. It would be great if every young person would think like that and take your great poem to heart. I am only sad about what kind of world we, the older generation, are leaving for you.
November 1st, 2017 11:51
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M. your excellent poem shows A LOT of maturity. It would be great if every young person would think like that and take your great poem to heart. I am only sad about what kind of world we, the older generation, are leaving for you.
November 1st, 2017 11:51
Soon To Be Graduate
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to the \"real\" world, M.E.M., where YOU now handle your own life! It is a great feeling, sometimes it sucks, you have nobody to blame but yourself, but you are now the conductor of your own symphony! :-)
You could have put this poem into \'Reflection\'.
Keep on writing, you are good!
October 31st, 2017 18:25
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to the \"real\" world, M.E.M., where YOU now handle your own life! It is a great feeling, sometimes it sucks, you have nobody to blame but yourself, but you are now the conductor of your own symphony! :-)
You could have put this poem into \'Reflection\'.
Keep on writing, you are good!
October 31st, 2017 18:25
.09 Milliseconds
Anna Marg said:
True even in milliseconds one moment can define a person\'s life! Great work as always!
October 31st, 2017 11:49
Anna Marg said:
True even in milliseconds one moment can define a person\'s life! Great work as always!
October 31st, 2017 11:49
Lust
FredPeyer said:
Yes, M.E.M., that\'s what a kiss can do, and you wrote it very nicely!
Like the line \'Stormy spheres...\' (there is a little typo, huger instead of hunger, and another little one on the last line you instead of you, but no big deal!)
October 31st, 2017 11:14
FredPeyer said:
Yes, M.E.M., that\'s what a kiss can do, and you wrote it very nicely!
Like the line \'Stormy spheres...\' (there is a little typo, huger instead of hunger, and another little one on the last line you instead of you, but no big deal!)
October 31st, 2017 11:14
Life
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., never thought of a friend this way, but you said it beautifully!
October 30th, 2017 20:16
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., never thought of a friend this way, but you said it beautifully!
October 30th, 2017 20:16
Life
orchidee said:
A fine write MEM. I\'ve never seen any sense in boxing - two people bashing each other about, leading to brain-damage in severe cases. I suppose they do it for the money. Otherwise it seems a complete waste of time to me!
October 30th, 2017 10:58
orchidee said:
A fine write MEM. I\'ve never seen any sense in boxing - two people bashing each other about, leading to brain-damage in severe cases. I suppose they do it for the money. Otherwise it seems a complete waste of time to me!
October 30th, 2017 10:58
Gluttony
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., I am married to a Chinese woman where love goes through the stomach! We don\'t waste food, but hell yes, bring on the gluttony!
Fun poem, like it a lot!
October 29th, 2017 01:20
FredPeyer said:
M.E.M., I am married to a Chinese woman where love goes through the stomach! We don\'t waste food, but hell yes, bring on the gluttony!
Fun poem, like it a lot!
October 29th, 2017 01:20
Pride
orchidee said:
Ahh, good write to get 7 lines, each with 7 words! And similar to what Cat says, \"I\" is in the centre of PRIDE. Erm, so it in sIn too. Hmmm.
October 27th, 2017 13:36
orchidee said:
Ahh, good write to get 7 lines, each with 7 words! And similar to what Cat says, \"I\" is in the centre of PRIDE. Erm, so it in sIn too. Hmmm.
October 27th, 2017 13:36
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