Comments received on poems by sylviasearcher



Odd Number
Michael Edwards said:

A certain sadness in this poem which reads so well.

March 22nd, 2019 16:36

Your Face
Fay Slimm. said:

This will go into my favourites - it has to be one of your best my friend.

March 22nd, 2019 05:10

Your Face
Neville said:

How utterly delightful, if you dont mind me saying.... Neville

March 22nd, 2019 05:06

Your Face
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write Sylvia, so positive.

March 22nd, 2019 01:11

Your Face
Nicholas Browning said:

A lovely write, Syl. I enjoyed the concept, as it is unique in a careful and explicit manner.


March 21st, 2019 16:40

Your Face
Michael Edwards said:

It does indeed flow - fine work Sylvia.

March 21st, 2019 11:55

Your Face
whisperingquill said:

Excellent flow, rhythm, and message

Definitely one of my favorites from you. πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ’«πŸ’«πŸ’« smooth and enriching

March 21st, 2019 10:45

A human need?
Poetic Dan said:

Nothing or just truth of self beautiful read but felt a tortured mind, maybe yours maybe mine ;)
No matter what friend, we\'ll be just fine!

March 20th, 2019 05:52

A human need?
Goldfinch60 said:

We all wear different masks in differing occasions, who actually sees the real me.

March 19th, 2019 16:14

A human need?
Michael Edwards said:

Put your brain into gear - so much to think about - great write that invites you to engage.

March 19th, 2019 16:11

A human need?
Nicholas Browning said:

\"Reflect on my reflections.\" That statement sums it all up.
I\'ve got a saying that goes a little like this, \"The only things you know about me are the things that I let you know.\"
A mysterious read, I enjoyed it.

March 19th, 2019 14:21

No more shelter
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write, walking in the rain can be so edifying.

\"Life isn\'t about waiting for the storm to pass...It\'s about learning to dance in the rain. \"

March 17th, 2019 01:43

No more shelter
Nicholas Browning said:

\"Make me feel and set me free.\"
That\'s a nice line.
I walk through the rain sometimes, only when I have to think though.
Nice read, Syl.

March 16th, 2019 14:34

No more shelter
SerenWise said:

beautifully written, lovely imagery

March 16th, 2019 12:46

No more shelter
Michael Edwards said:

Feeling decidedly damp after this precipitous read - great poem - great structure.

March 16th, 2019 10:44

No more shelter
Fay Slimm. said:

Fantastic structure and powerfully written this first class verse has to be one of your best Sylvia - a heart-tugging read - - and now in my faves.

March 16th, 2019 05:39

Seamless Dreams
Michael Edwards said:

Super read - dreams are like a Dali painting just wish i had his skills.

March 15th, 2019 16:38

Seamless Dreams
Nicholas Browning said:

I try to grasp many things as I sleep and as I dream. Things I know that will never come to pass in the ream of the living. It\'s kind of reassuring to know that someone is enthralling me to hold on to the things I think I dislike about myself. Forever the dreamer.
Thanks for this.

March 15th, 2019 15:48

Seamless Dreams
Mil57Man said:

Wonderfully done. Dreams, things unseen with endless living streams. Continue to dream.

March 15th, 2019 10:19

Perhaps
SerenWise said:

Nicely written!

March 14th, 2019 10:19

Perhaps
Goldfinch60 said:

Perhaps? Maybe? Do it or you will always wonder. Good one sylvia.

March 14th, 2019 01:07

Perhaps
Nicholas Browning said:

This touches on a principle that I\'m well versed in. It\'s easy to see in most of the young people today. All humans are lustful, but do the ends justify the means if a one night stand is simply \"For the thrill of it?\" I\'m not sure. I haven\'t figured it out yet. I did enjoy the poetry though. It got my cogs turning again.

March 13th, 2019 04:30

Perhaps
dusk arising said:

Needed to be written. So many of us have similar daydreams about fantasy partners. I think you capture this well.

March 13th, 2019 04:09

Perhaps
Michael Edwards said:

Go on why not - I have no need for frames or crutches (as yet) but I find it harder getting out of a chair (knees not what they once were) but I\'m fine lying down . lol

March 13th, 2019 03:37

Perhaps
Neville said:

Maybe, maybe... certainly much enjoyed... Neville

March 13th, 2019 03:28

Escape
Michael Edwards said:

A dark write but I detect the seedlings of hope sending roots in the desolate fields.

March 12th, 2019 14:33

Escape
Neville said:

an interesting post.. more than just a tad dark around the edges... and crying out to be set free... maybe...

March 12th, 2019 09:58

In a Room
Neville said:

I dont know how or why I came to miss these words when first posted... at least I found them now.. and much enjoyed they are too..... Neville

March 11th, 2019 07:55

The Lady who Leapt
Neville said:

Well crafted and darkly so with hauntingly sinister overtones and chilling undercurrents ... contemporary yet with a classical flavour and feel...... Neville

March 6th, 2019 07:55

The Lady who Leapt
Goldfinch60 said:

May your dreams flow in beauty and wonder as do your words.

March 6th, 2019 04:27



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