Comments received on poems by sylviasearcher
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Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Sylvia, so much within those few words, that is the beauty of 5-7-5s.
March 29th, 2019 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Sylvia, so much within those few words, that is the beauty of 5-7-5s.
March 29th, 2019 02:23
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Michael Edwards said:
Nice one Sylvia - great use of language - enigmatic and intriguing.
March 29th, 2019 02:13
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one Sylvia - great use of language - enigmatic and intriguing.
March 29th, 2019 02:13
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Goldfinch60 said:
What a powerful write, these types of poems are important to us and need writing and need to be seen by others to understand the hurt and despair that can be within us.
Thank you for sharing your words and thoughts Sylvia.
March 29th, 2019 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
What a powerful write, these types of poems are important to us and need writing and need to be seen by others to understand the hurt and despair that can be within us.
Thank you for sharing your words and thoughts Sylvia.
March 29th, 2019 01:42
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Sunshinefalling said:
I enjoyed it. Leave me to my peace. Thanks for sharing.
March 28th, 2019 23:47
Sunshinefalling said:
I enjoyed it. Leave me to my peace. Thanks for sharing.
March 28th, 2019 23:47
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Fay Slimm. said:
Agree wholeheartedly with Neville\'s comment on the total injustice to those who bear heavy loads of abuse. Hoping this is not from experience dear Sylvia but if so hats off to you for describing such undeserved guilt and the feelings of freedom when left alone. Thank you dear lady for sharing this write on a powerful subject.
March 28th, 2019 05:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Agree wholeheartedly with Neville\'s comment on the total injustice to those who bear heavy loads of abuse. Hoping this is not from experience dear Sylvia but if so hats off to you for describing such undeserved guilt and the feelings of freedom when left alone. Thank you dear lady for sharing this write on a powerful subject.
March 28th, 2019 05:07
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Neville said:
No one, whoever they might be has the right to make another feel this way... it happens tho of course, and well done to you for both acknowledging the fact and drawing our attention to it so adeptly .... Nevile
March 28th, 2019 04:51
Neville said:
No one, whoever they might be has the right to make another feel this way... it happens tho of course, and well done to you for both acknowledging the fact and drawing our attention to it so adeptly .... Nevile
March 28th, 2019 04:51
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Poetic Dan said:
Wow... I felt such pain and power at the same time. Thank you for this heartfelt write, I slowly wipe the tears from my eyes.
March 28th, 2019 03:51
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... I felt such pain and power at the same time. Thank you for this heartfelt write, I slowly wipe the tears from my eyes.
March 28th, 2019 03:51
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Goldfinch60 said:
Very good positive write, we all fail sometimes but having the strength to find the will to carry on is vital or a fulfilling way ahead
March 28th, 2019 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good positive write, we all fail sometimes but having the strength to find the will to carry on is vital or a fulfilling way ahead
March 28th, 2019 01:40
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Fay Slimm. said:
An ache for love could not have been written better dear Sylvia.
March 27th, 2019 12:37
Fay Slimm. said:
An ache for love could not have been written better dear Sylvia.
March 27th, 2019 12:37
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Michael Edwards said:
Dusk is right - so uplifting and brings hope and promise in contrast to much posted work. Fine as ever Fay.
March 27th, 2019 09:44
Michael Edwards said:
Dusk is right - so uplifting and brings hope and promise in contrast to much posted work. Fine as ever Fay.
March 27th, 2019 09:44
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Poetic Dan said:
Wow. Took me to many places and at the end you made me shiver. Deep in thought now, than you kindly my dear
March 27th, 2019 09:05
Poetic Dan said:
Wow. Took me to many places and at the end you made me shiver. Deep in thought now, than you kindly my dear
March 27th, 2019 09:05
No more shelter
Neville said:
I dont know how I managed to miss this... am glad tho I retraced my steps and doubled back... I used to love jumping in and splashing in puddles.. its been a long time since I did that... rain walking can still be fun , so I may just go looking for a puddle or two next time it pours down... thrashing and thwacking sound like fun too.... Neville
March 27th, 2019 07:30
Neville said:
I dont know how I managed to miss this... am glad tho I retraced my steps and doubled back... I used to love jumping in and splashing in puddles.. its been a long time since I did that... rain walking can still be fun , so I may just go looking for a puddle or two next time it pours down... thrashing and thwacking sound like fun too.... Neville
March 27th, 2019 07:30
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Neville said:
Just as Mr. Kipling is said to make exceedingly good cakes.. you have penned an exceedingly good poem here...... a most enjoyable read and true.... Neville
March 27th, 2019 07:16
Neville said:
Just as Mr. Kipling is said to make exceedingly good cakes.. you have penned an exceedingly good poem here...... a most enjoyable read and true.... Neville
March 27th, 2019 07:16
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dusk arising said:
Ah yes the hope that we shall be remembered with positive thoughts. So rare but such a genuine desire from a true lover.
To often here in MPS we see te exact opposite.
Lovely writing which conveyed thoughts i had not been able to put into words myself....
March 27th, 2019 05:11
dusk arising said:
Ah yes the hope that we shall be remembered with positive thoughts. So rare but such a genuine desire from a true lover.
To often here in MPS we see te exact opposite.
Lovely writing which conveyed thoughts i had not been able to put into words myself....
March 27th, 2019 05:11
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dusk arising said:
The ocean will do as the ocean does. It cares not for your consciousness nor your heartbeat.
Your three lines have such power that they bring a vision of unlearned cruelty the naive will learn much to their cost should they trust in an ocean for judgement.
Reality strikes.
March 26th, 2019 19:59
dusk arising said:
The ocean will do as the ocean does. It cares not for your consciousness nor your heartbeat.
Your three lines have such power that they bring a vision of unlearned cruelty the naive will learn much to their cost should they trust in an ocean for judgement.
Reality strikes.
March 26th, 2019 19:59
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MendedFences27 said:
Avoid the Ocean
it\'s a sea of motion
lurking to claim you.
Powerful and thought provoking. The Sea has enormous powers, one of which is intoxication. It can lure people to destruction. A great write. - Phil - A.
March 26th, 2019 14:25
MendedFences27 said:
Avoid the Ocean
it\'s a sea of motion
lurking to claim you.
Powerful and thought provoking. The Sea has enormous powers, one of which is intoxication. It can lure people to destruction. A great write. - Phil - A.
March 26th, 2019 14:25
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Fay Slimm. said:
Short but saying all it ought - the sea has so much to answer for Sylvia.
March 26th, 2019 05:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Short but saying all it ought - the sea has so much to answer for Sylvia.
March 26th, 2019 05:56
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Neville said:
You cant beat a bit of brevity.. with loads of salt that is... makes everything taste so much better... N
March 26th, 2019 05:15
Neville said:
You cant beat a bit of brevity.. with loads of salt that is... makes everything taste so much better... N
March 26th, 2019 05:15
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Nicholas Browning said:
Feel the ocean tide,
As it sweeps, and lays to rest,
Your body, and mine.
A lovely write, Syl.
AND OMFG TWENTY ONE PILOTS
You\'re kinda cool, you know that?
March 26th, 2019 04:36
Nicholas Browning said:
Feel the ocean tide,
As it sweeps, and lays to rest,
Your body, and mine.
A lovely write, Syl.
AND OMFG TWENTY ONE PILOTS
You\'re kinda cool, you know that?
March 26th, 2019 04:36
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Goldfinch60 said:
She wakes in Awe,
The ocean frees her to love.
Her heart is now free.
March 26th, 2019 03:53
Goldfinch60 said:
She wakes in Awe,
The ocean frees her to love.
Her heart is now free.
March 26th, 2019 03:53
Lucid Dreaming/ I become Captain Marvel in my Sleep
Nicholas Browning said:
Good old bit of Coldplay to add that little spice!
A nice little write, Syl.
March 25th, 2019 18:59
Nicholas Browning said:
Good old bit of Coldplay to add that little spice!
A nice little write, Syl.
March 25th, 2019 18:59
Lucid Dreaming/ I become Captain Marvel in my Sleep
Neville said:
Although I found these words initially a little disjointed.. I found the underlying theme quite captivating... you might very easily have been referring to a number of experiences.. including outer body experiences like astral flight or projection.... There now.. that feels better N
March 25th, 2019 14:33
Neville said:
Although I found these words initially a little disjointed.. I found the underlying theme quite captivating... you might very easily have been referring to a number of experiences.. including outer body experiences like astral flight or projection.... There now.. that feels better N
March 25th, 2019 14:33
Lucid Dreaming/ I become Captain Marvel in my Sleep
orchidee said:
Good write Captain! You\'ll be Wonder Woman too, and Supergirl!
March 25th, 2019 14:32
orchidee said:
Good write Captain! You\'ll be Wonder Woman too, and Supergirl!
March 25th, 2019 14:32
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Fay Slimm. said:
An ache of a read Sylvia - the ferment of sadness follows along every line as love still powers memory despite our intentions. Saved this one for further reading.
March 23rd, 2019 13:53
Fay Slimm. said:
An ache of a read Sylvia - the ferment of sadness follows along every line as love still powers memory despite our intentions. Saved this one for further reading.
March 23rd, 2019 13:53
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Neville said:
It would be very easy to get lost in these words... and that is another compliment 2 - 0 up to me... Good Afternoon
March 23rd, 2019 10:50
Neville said:
It would be very easy to get lost in these words... and that is another compliment 2 - 0 up to me... Good Afternoon
March 23rd, 2019 10:50
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Fractured Dreams said:
Lovely read, you are so descriptive in your writing. I enjoyed the flow of this
March 23rd, 2019 09:23
Fractured Dreams said:
Lovely read, you are so descriptive in your writing. I enjoyed the flow of this
March 23rd, 2019 09:23
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Lauraš» said:
Sylvia,
A great read!
Your writings are interesting and intriguing!
I love this line...
āBecause poetry is fantasy and truth is all aloneā
~Laura~
March 23rd, 2019 04:29
Lauraš» said:
Sylvia,
A great read!
Your writings are interesting and intriguing!
I love this line...
āBecause poetry is fantasy and truth is all aloneā
~Laura~
March 23rd, 2019 04:29
Odd Number
Nicholas Browning said:
It\'s quite clever, I\'ll say. It does emanate an aura of solemn stature, for sure.
March 22nd, 2019 23:41
Nicholas Browning said:
It\'s quite clever, I\'ll say. It does emanate an aura of solemn stature, for sure.
March 22nd, 2019 23:41
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