Comments received on poems by sylviasearcher
Peace
Goldfinch60 said:
Super though very sad senryu. May you troubles see the light and all is well.
Let my eyes be clear,
Let my throbbing heart be pure.
Life is there for me.
March 6th, 2019 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Super though very sad senryu. May you troubles see the light and all is well.
Let my eyes be clear,
Let my throbbing heart be pure.
Life is there for me.
March 6th, 2019 01:04
Peace
Poetic Dan said:
.... I hope peace came after letting go of this, if not keep writing we are listening. Till the end
Much love and respect
March 5th, 2019 08:43
Poetic Dan said:
.... I hope peace came after letting go of this, if not keep writing we are listening. Till the end
Much love and respect
March 5th, 2019 08:43
Peace
Fay Slimm. said:
Each line of agony pierces this reader - a senryu. to end all sens. Sylvia.
March 5th, 2019 07:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Each line of agony pierces this reader - a senryu. to end all sens. Sylvia.
March 5th, 2019 07:40
In a Room
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh I love this romantic invite dear Sylvia - I can relate to each line.
March 4th, 2019 05:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh I love this romantic invite dear Sylvia - I can relate to each line.
March 4th, 2019 05:50
In a Room
Goldfinch60 said:
Very intriguing write that pulls me right in to it.
March 4th, 2019 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Very intriguing write that pulls me right in to it.
March 4th, 2019 01:32
In a Room
dusk arising said:
Your words reminded me very much of an affair i had with a lady in a chat room who lived across the ocean.
I wrote of a room and an ocean.
You create a desire to romance your words and create an adventure of love..... fascinating writing.
March 3rd, 2019 16:27
dusk arising said:
Your words reminded me very much of an affair i had with a lady in a chat room who lived across the ocean.
I wrote of a room and an ocean.
You create a desire to romance your words and create an adventure of love..... fascinating writing.
March 3rd, 2019 16:27
In a Room
Michael Edwards said:
Enigmatic (at least in my book) and as such an intriguing read - Love your style - love your poem.
March 3rd, 2019 14:19
Michael Edwards said:
Enigmatic (at least in my book) and as such an intriguing read - Love your style - love your poem.
March 3rd, 2019 14:19
Talk to me
Fay Slimm. said:
A tender gem of a hopeful write Sylvia - - its plea comes touches the heart.
March 3rd, 2019 02:42
Fay Slimm. said:
A tender gem of a hopeful write Sylvia - - its plea comes touches the heart.
March 3rd, 2019 02:42
Talk to me
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Sylvia, a long, long way from rubbish.
March 3rd, 2019 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Sylvia, a long, long way from rubbish.
March 3rd, 2019 02:06
Talk to me
Michael Edwards said:
Rubbish it aint - glad it was captured I enjoyed the read.
March 3rd, 2019 01:59
Michael Edwards said:
Rubbish it aint - glad it was captured I enjoyed the read.
March 3rd, 2019 01:59
Me and you, on and on...
Michael Edwards said:
Your words are spot on - the work of a true poet.
March 1st, 2019 12:28
Michael Edwards said:
Your words are spot on - the work of a true poet.
March 1st, 2019 12:28
Me and you, on and on...
Neville said:
there is nowt wrong with this write right..... enjoyed & then some .. N
March 1st, 2019 08:54
Neville said:
there is nowt wrong with this write right..... enjoyed & then some .. N
March 1st, 2019 08:54
Me and you, on and on...
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
We find a happiness even in sadness there is something wrong with us that is so right were are not much but we have words these mke us poets... want it or not
Another great exprssive write Sylvia
March 1st, 2019 07:38
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
We find a happiness even in sadness there is something wrong with us that is so right were are not much but we have words these mke us poets... want it or not
Another great exprssive write Sylvia
March 1st, 2019 07:38
Journey outside in
Goldfinch60 said:
Good true words here, we have all been along that wrong road but in time there will be a turning onto the right road leading to the light in life.
March 1st, 2019 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good true words here, we have all been along that wrong road but in time there will be a turning onto the right road leading to the light in life.
March 1st, 2019 01:50
Journey outside in
Neville said:
I feel as though I have been here before.. the same wrong road and crooked path.... with no idea where they lead, or where I am led....nice one.. N
February 28th, 2019 12:58
Neville said:
I feel as though I have been here before.. the same wrong road and crooked path.... with no idea where they lead, or where I am led....nice one.. N
February 28th, 2019 12:58
Journey outside in
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s been a day of some super writes here on MPS and this up there with them - bravo.
February 28th, 2019 11:09
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s been a day of some super writes here on MPS and this up there with them - bravo.
February 28th, 2019 11:09
Strange World
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes strange indeed.
On very old maps when they didn\'t know the world was round at the edge of the world was written \"HERE BE DRAGONS!\"
February 28th, 2019 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes strange indeed.
On very old maps when they didn\'t know the world was round at the edge of the world was written \"HERE BE DRAGONS!\"
February 28th, 2019 01:30
Strange World
Neville said:
tis a strange world indeed, and filled with strangers, some of whom become friends.... strange indeed.. I am just listening to Wolf Alice ... now that is strange too........... Neville
February 27th, 2019 05:50
Neville said:
tis a strange world indeed, and filled with strangers, some of whom become friends.... strange indeed.. I am just listening to Wolf Alice ... now that is strange too........... Neville
February 27th, 2019 05:50
Strange World
Michael Edwards said:
Not really sure what to make of it - but do you know what? - I really love it.
February 27th, 2019 03:24
Michael Edwards said:
Not really sure what to make of it - but do you know what? - I really love it.
February 27th, 2019 03:24
Colour my night
Fay Slimm. said:
What a fortunate unearthing of long-ago poems and this one Sylvia touches the heart with its colours of light and dark moods - -thanks for sharing it
February 26th, 2019 08:59
Fay Slimm. said:
What a fortunate unearthing of long-ago poems and this one Sylvia touches the heart with its colours of light and dark moods - -thanks for sharing it
February 26th, 2019 08:59
Colour my night
Neville said:
Well I for one am glad you unearthed these early words & which I have subsequently enjoyed... furthermore, I have been known to allow colours to shape my day.......... N
February 26th, 2019 08:15
Neville said:
Well I for one am glad you unearthed these early words & which I have subsequently enjoyed... furthermore, I have been known to allow colours to shape my day.......... N
February 26th, 2019 08:15
The Absence of Words
Neville said:
nihilism rules the day I see.. you need to start feeling... I hope you have since posting these words enjoyed..
February 26th, 2019 05:37
Neville said:
nihilism rules the day I see.. you need to start feeling... I hope you have since posting these words enjoyed..
February 26th, 2019 05:37
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