Comments received on poems by sylviasearcher
The Outcast
sylviasearcher said:
You are definitely not pathetic. I certainly didn’t mean that.
It’s just this one is about disillusionment. If it could be otherwise, I’d rather it I’m sure.
Maybe Tomorrow or tomorrow or tomorrow ⭐️
February 22nd, 2019 09:51
sylviasearcher said:
You are definitely not pathetic. I certainly didn’t mean that.
It’s just this one is about disillusionment. If it could be otherwise, I’d rather it I’m sure.
Maybe Tomorrow or tomorrow or tomorrow ⭐️
February 22nd, 2019 09:51
The Outcast
Michael Edwards said:
Having read this once I feel it deserves another read to fully appreciate it - I will return.
February 22nd, 2019 06:26
Michael Edwards said:
Having read this once I feel it deserves another read to fully appreciate it - I will return.
February 22nd, 2019 06:26
The Outcast
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful message in this tragic account Sylvia - told with fervour it makes unforgettable reading.
February 22nd, 2019 06:05
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful message in this tragic account Sylvia - told with fervour it makes unforgettable reading.
February 22nd, 2019 06:05
The Outcast
Neville said:
I have this incredible feeling of deja vu ..... it makes me feel a little uncomfortable.. I think I know where it is coming from, but just can\'t be certain... there is an uneasy certainty here.... certainly well writ and my fave artist listened to twice while working my way down the page... what more could a fan want..... Neville
February 22nd, 2019 05:24
Neville said:
I have this incredible feeling of deja vu ..... it makes me feel a little uncomfortable.. I think I know where it is coming from, but just can\'t be certain... there is an uneasy certainty here.... certainly well writ and my fave artist listened to twice while working my way down the page... what more could a fan want..... Neville
February 22nd, 2019 05:24
The Outcast
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
...and she feeds him tea and oranges that come all the way from China...
Powerful Sylvia dark and pwerful Great write
February 22nd, 2019 05:01
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
...and she feeds him tea and oranges that come all the way from China...
Powerful Sylvia dark and pwerful Great write
February 22nd, 2019 05:01
Spring
Neville said:
these words are so good, I wanna wrap em up and keep them in an inside pocket.... there is indeed a spring like warmth on this page... Neville
February 22nd, 2019 04:08
Neville said:
these words are so good, I wanna wrap em up and keep them in an inside pocket.... there is indeed a spring like warmth on this page... Neville
February 22nd, 2019 04:08
Spring
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good romantic write.Spring is here in your words.
February 22nd, 2019 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good romantic write.Spring is here in your words.
February 22nd, 2019 01:48
Spring
dusk arising said:
Falling in love will bring you into blossom.... a radiance.
When my ex was carrying our kids she looked wonderfully healthy and had a glow about her, magical.
February 21st, 2019 10:15
dusk arising said:
Falling in love will bring you into blossom.... a radiance.
When my ex was carrying our kids she looked wonderfully healthy and had a glow about her, magical.
February 21st, 2019 10:15
Spring
Fay Slimm. said:
So romantic these well written words Sylvia. I love the sliding form of the style you chose.
February 21st, 2019 09:56
Fay Slimm. said:
So romantic these well written words Sylvia. I love the sliding form of the style you chose.
February 21st, 2019 09:56
Taken
Goldfinch60 said:
This is very good and so much better when read out aloud. Beautiful.
February 21st, 2019 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
This is very good and so much better when read out aloud. Beautiful.
February 21st, 2019 01:53
Taken
SerenWise said:
beautifully written, nice use of language and rhymes :)
February 20th, 2019 16:52
SerenWise said:
beautifully written, nice use of language and rhymes :)
February 20th, 2019 16:52
Taken
Neville said:
I know that feeling, I know that need..
you just proved yourself worthy of having the letters p.o.e. t. behind your name.. bravo ... N
February 20th, 2019 06:56
Neville said:
I know that feeling, I know that need..
you just proved yourself worthy of having the letters p.o.e. t. behind your name.. bravo ... N
February 20th, 2019 06:56
Unfeeling
orchidee said:
And yet \'nothing\' is \'some-thing\' in itself, Yes?! Unless it\'s some sort of annihilation, or non-existence?
February 18th, 2019 11:17
orchidee said:
And yet \'nothing\' is \'some-thing\' in itself, Yes?! Unless it\'s some sort of annihilation, or non-existence?
February 18th, 2019 11:17
Unfeeling
Neville said:
it is hard to describe how these words made me feel.. other than empty, or lost .. not for myself.. but for all those who are yet to find them and still feel nothing... N
February 18th, 2019 10:39
Neville said:
it is hard to describe how these words made me feel.. other than empty, or lost .. not for myself.. but for all those who are yet to find them and still feel nothing... N
February 18th, 2019 10:39
Pebble
Fay Slimm. said:
An amazing write Sylvia - - that special pebble is available to warm every heart and pocket so long as it is really searched for......... I found mine moon ago....... thanks my friend for this reminder.
February 16th, 2019 17:10
Fay Slimm. said:
An amazing write Sylvia - - that special pebble is available to warm every heart and pocket so long as it is really searched for......... I found mine moon ago....... thanks my friend for this reminder.
February 16th, 2019 17:10
Pebble
Goldfinch60 said:
I too keep a stone, it is a white stone from Iona.
February 16th, 2019 16:05
Goldfinch60 said:
I too keep a stone, it is a white stone from Iona.
February 16th, 2019 16:05
Pebble
SerenWise said:
This is stunningly written... I can really relate to it as well. Nicely done!
February 16th, 2019 14:21
SerenWise said:
This is stunningly written... I can really relate to it as well. Nicely done!
February 16th, 2019 14:21
Pebble
Neville said:
sometimes, maybe once in every while or every now and then, without so much as conscious thought or effort.. we just know... and when that does happens, for a moment at least, everything just seems to come together.. keep that pebble with you sylviasearcher...
February 16th, 2019 12:07
Neville said:
sometimes, maybe once in every while or every now and then, without so much as conscious thought or effort.. we just know... and when that does happens, for a moment at least, everything just seems to come together.. keep that pebble with you sylviasearcher...
February 16th, 2019 12:07
Blurry Face
Neville said:
Great title, great poem which brings out the artist in ya and a final stanza to die for .. metaphorically speaking of course... Neville
February 16th, 2019 09:30
Neville said:
Great title, great poem which brings out the artist in ya and a final stanza to die for .. metaphorically speaking of course... Neville
February 16th, 2019 09:30
Escaping Midnight Solitude
Neville said:
These words may well have been written many years ago, or even today.. they are difficult to date, the only clue I can find is, most of your recent posts have a more mature feel.. Having said that, I feel privileged to have been exposed to some of your good memories of a feeling I hope you may still have and if you dont, at least some that you previously recall that ya had... N
February 15th, 2019 08:23
Neville said:
These words may well have been written many years ago, or even today.. they are difficult to date, the only clue I can find is, most of your recent posts have a more mature feel.. Having said that, I feel privileged to have been exposed to some of your good memories of a feeling I hope you may still have and if you dont, at least some that you previously recall that ya had... N
February 15th, 2019 08:23
The School Bully
Goldfinch60 said:
As wtith most bullys they are cowards, i have found that apathy towards them is a great weapon.
February 15th, 2019 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
As wtith most bullys they are cowards, i have found that apathy towards them is a great weapon.
February 15th, 2019 01:39
The School Bully
Neville said:
this was simply crying out to be said.. well said
February 14th, 2019 05:33
Neville said:
this was simply crying out to be said.. well said
February 14th, 2019 05:33
The School Bully
sylviasearcher said:
https://www.cypcs.org.uk/ufiles/No-Safe-Place.pdf
February 14th, 2019 04:34
sylviasearcher said:
https://www.cypcs.org.uk/ufiles/No-Safe-Place.pdf
February 14th, 2019 04:34
End
Neville said:
the punctuation in this, set it apart
short, sharp and powerful as any kidney punch...
February 7th, 2019 12:59
Neville said:
the punctuation in this, set it apart
short, sharp and powerful as any kidney punch...
February 7th, 2019 12:59
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