Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
salisbury steak tv dinner
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s never as advertised. Even the lowliest T.V. dinner can breach the walls built between us. Mix it all together and it\'s stew. The world is a T.V, dinner with Billions of compartments and it is inevitable that they shall mix. So. now what do I do with my Mac & Cheese?
A very interesting poem that caught my imagination. Thank you for that. - Phil A.
January 29th, 2019 15:23
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s never as advertised. Even the lowliest T.V. dinner can breach the walls built between us. Mix it all together and it\'s stew. The world is a T.V, dinner with Billions of compartments and it is inevitable that they shall mix. So. now what do I do with my Mac & Cheese?
A very interesting poem that caught my imagination. Thank you for that. - Phil A.
January 29th, 2019 15:23
eyes that cast
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write Jon. Indifference can be so painful.
January 29th, 2019 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write Jon. Indifference can be so painful.
January 29th, 2019 02:04
eyes that cast
magic_in_the_pages said:
Honestly this really spoke to me. It’s gorgeous.
January 28th, 2019 20:23
magic_in_the_pages said:
Honestly this really spoke to me. It’s gorgeous.
January 28th, 2019 20:23
the rain
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Like this Jon clever how the form expands like the sublect
BRAVO!
January 27th, 2019 16:51
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Like this Jon clever how the form expands like the sublect
BRAVO!
January 27th, 2019 16:51
running away
Goldfinch60 said:
The wiles of people can be so confusing at times.
January 27th, 2019 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
The wiles of people can be so confusing at times.
January 27th, 2019 02:41
Circe/Medusa Tag Team
Neville said:
Not entirely sure why, but I really like this, cheers..
December 14th, 2018 07:09
Neville said:
Not entirely sure why, but I really like this, cheers..
December 14th, 2018 07:09
looking for the end of the rainbow
Lorna said:
Perfectly lovely.... and the perfect song to go with it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V1bFr2SWP1I
December 11th, 2018 07:43
Lorna said:
Perfectly lovely.... and the perfect song to go with it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V1bFr2SWP1I
December 11th, 2018 07:43
looking for the end of the rainbow
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, those times together are worth more than gold.
December 11th, 2018 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, those times together are worth more than gold.
December 11th, 2018 01:34
hamlet - deleted scenes #4
MissileOfUncertainty said:
This is so honest and brutal. It makes me think and I like that. It’s also short enough to keep my attention. At times less is more. Thanks for sharing.
December 5th, 2018 00:10
MissileOfUncertainty said:
This is so honest and brutal. It makes me think and I like that. It’s also short enough to keep my attention. At times less is more. Thanks for sharing.
December 5th, 2018 00:10
plastic dinosaurs
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Great write and it\'s so true..I totally get what you mean
November 21st, 2018 06:41
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Great write and it\'s so true..I totally get what you mean
November 21st, 2018 06:41
plastic dinosaurs
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Great write and it\'s so true..I totally get what you mean
November 21st, 2018 06:41
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Great write and it\'s so true..I totally get what you mean
November 21st, 2018 06:41
no more sandwiches
Lorna said:
Such sweet sentiment Jon - my husband has this awful disease although he still maintains his core personality with all his might!
November 8th, 2018 04:58
Lorna said:
Such sweet sentiment Jon - my husband has this awful disease although he still maintains his core personality with all his might!
November 8th, 2018 04:58
no more sandwiches
Goldfinch60 said:
This really strikes home Jon. My wife has dementia and she too cannot make sandwiches or do any other cooking. she cannot make a cup of tea or coffee any more - it is too dangerous.
Dementia is a pain the proverbial and there is no cure for it - it can only get worse. I feel for your friend .
November 8th, 2018 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
This really strikes home Jon. My wife has dementia and she too cannot make sandwiches or do any other cooking. she cannot make a cup of tea or coffee any more - it is too dangerous.
Dementia is a pain the proverbial and there is no cure for it - it can only get worse. I feel for your friend .
November 8th, 2018 01:56
[ pouring out the ashes ]
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, meet you in eternity.
October 14th, 2018 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, meet you in eternity.
October 14th, 2018 00:52
At the Gym
Goldfinch60 said:
I thought of going to a gym once; I went a lay down in a darkened room until the feeling wore off.
This type of action can happen in many other ways, good observation.
October 13th, 2018 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
I thought of going to a gym once; I went a lay down in a darkened room until the feeling wore off.
This type of action can happen in many other ways, good observation.
October 13th, 2018 00:38
the
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Thanks Jon great thoughts
Autumn is a time for reflection mourn the summer pepare to face the winter like waiting for old age
Bravo!
October 8th, 2018 05:21
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Thanks Jon great thoughts
Autumn is a time for reflection mourn the summer pepare to face the winter like waiting for old age
Bravo!
October 8th, 2018 05:21
the talking of it is over
Quemis said:
This is like a perfect circle drawn in the sand.
Simple, visual, powerful.
I like it.
October 4th, 2018 15:23
Quemis said:
This is like a perfect circle drawn in the sand.
Simple, visual, powerful.
I like it.
October 4th, 2018 15:23
dew on a dead leaf
sylviasearcher said:
Sad image, but when the leaf falls to the floor and becomes part of the earth which nourishes the tree. It will become endless.
September 25th, 2018 07:18
sylviasearcher said:
Sad image, but when the leaf falls to the floor and becomes part of the earth which nourishes the tree. It will become endless.
September 25th, 2018 07:18
moon
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I onna put that on the back of a T shirt and walk around with a blobde wig
Glad I found your work!
September 19th, 2018 16:01
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I onna put that on the back of a T shirt and walk around with a blobde wig
Glad I found your work!
September 19th, 2018 16:01
one day
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Wonderful depiction of the seniment Jon love the last line very powerful
September 19th, 2018 15:57
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Wonderful depiction of the seniment Jon love the last line very powerful
September 19th, 2018 15:57
Moonroof
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well captured Jon sounds like a what if moment... quite beautifully sad
Thank you for sharing
September 19th, 2018 15:30
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well captured Jon sounds like a what if moment... quite beautifully sad
Thank you for sharing
September 19th, 2018 15:30
hollow dreams
The Gifted One said:
That short beautiful reflection packed so much emotions. Very nicely written.
The Gifted One
September 15th, 2018 17:47
The Gifted One said:
That short beautiful reflection packed so much emotions. Very nicely written.
The Gifted One
September 15th, 2018 17:47
orange drops through gauze
Crystal Hope said:
your description was outstanding on this piece. Well done work!
September 2nd, 2018 20:00
Crystal Hope said:
your description was outstanding on this piece. Well done work!
September 2nd, 2018 20:00
walking barefoot in the grass
ExistentialSarah said:
I feel like this one is going to rattle around in my brain for a while, in a good way, until I can find personal application. \"Young answers to old Lies\". Why is that so profound to me? Maybe because...as simple as the grass beneath our feet, experiences and sensations on a basic human level...we can so easily get lost in our own complicated headspace. We forget to connect to the things that are just...solid and real. There are more than a few \"lies\" of perception, negatively held, dysfunctional beliefs, that I have to overturn with new insights in order to find peace.
August 26th, 2018 10:31
ExistentialSarah said:
I feel like this one is going to rattle around in my brain for a while, in a good way, until I can find personal application. \"Young answers to old Lies\". Why is that so profound to me? Maybe because...as simple as the grass beneath our feet, experiences and sensations on a basic human level...we can so easily get lost in our own complicated headspace. We forget to connect to the things that are just...solid and real. There are more than a few \"lies\" of perception, negatively held, dysfunctional beliefs, that I have to overturn with new insights in order to find peace.
August 26th, 2018 10:31
after a hive is destroyed
Michael Edwards said:
An enjoyable read that says a lot.
August 24th, 2018 00:34
Michael Edwards said:
An enjoyable read that says a lot.
August 24th, 2018 00:34
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