Comments received on poems by Neville
Me My Bro and A Chainsaw
MendedFences27 said:
Was this before or after the visit to your local. Either way a topiary of \"Barbie\" never seems a good idea. Maybe if you could salvage the important parts and cover the rest with \"very cool pink clothing\" it might just be passable.
Why would you even attempt such a zany venture? Oh well, it made for a very humorous poem. - Phil A.
P.S. - At first, I envisioned a disaster of the proportions in Frost\'s \"Out, Out.\" thank God no one was injured. Or maybe it was just an episode of \"Only Fools and Horses.\"
October 11th, 2023 14:58
MendedFences27 said:
Was this before or after the visit to your local. Either way a topiary of \"Barbie\" never seems a good idea. Maybe if you could salvage the important parts and cover the rest with \"very cool pink clothing\" it might just be passable.
Why would you even attempt such a zany venture? Oh well, it made for a very humorous poem. - Phil A.
P.S. - At first, I envisioned a disaster of the proportions in Frost\'s \"Out, Out.\" thank God no one was injured. Or maybe it was just an episode of \"Only Fools and Horses.\"
October 11th, 2023 14:58
Me My Bro and A Chainsaw
LIZ said:
OH MY LORD! 😂😂😂😂😂 Neville!!! I just pictured barbie cut up in a lot of small pieces!! What a picture!! But ummmm...why did your bro have to get involved??? Although....nah never mind. LOL 💜💜💜
October 11th, 2023 07:55
LIZ said:
OH MY LORD! 😂😂😂😂😂 Neville!!! I just pictured barbie cut up in a lot of small pieces!! What a picture!! But ummmm...why did your bro have to get involved??? Although....nah never mind. LOL 💜💜💜
October 11th, 2023 07:55
Me My Bro and A Chainsaw
orchidee said:
Fido was OK until the last line, then he swooned! lol.
October 11th, 2023 07:17
orchidee said:
Fido was OK until the last line, then he swooned! lol.
October 11th, 2023 07:17
No Contest
Bobby O said:
So true. I used to play tournament Table Tennis and on occasion find played that claimed to have never lost. I knew immediately they had no chance to beat me because if they didn’t respect the game enough to search out and find their “level” then they preferred the comfort of fiction
October 11th, 2023 06:42
Bobby O said:
So true. I used to play tournament Table Tennis and on occasion find played that claimed to have never lost. I knew immediately they had no chance to beat me because if they didn’t respect the game enough to search out and find their “level” then they preferred the comfort of fiction
October 11th, 2023 06:42
Me My Bro and A Chainsaw
Bobby O said:
I did smile at the finish and really like how equal and aligned it placed Topiary and Barbie. Other than you and the catalyst that mixes in your mind that logical equanimity would be left forever undiscovered.
October 11th, 2023 06:28
Bobby O said:
I did smile at the finish and really like how equal and aligned it placed Topiary and Barbie. Other than you and the catalyst that mixes in your mind that logical equanimity would be left forever undiscovered.
October 11th, 2023 06:28
Me My Bro and A Chainsaw
Teddy.15 said:
LOL oh my dear Nev, you haven\'t lost your sense of humour my friend, it is well and truly stuck inside you. ❤️ ere I never liked Barbie either, chainsaw away LoL
October 11th, 2023 03:44
Teddy.15 said:
LOL oh my dear Nev, you haven\'t lost your sense of humour my friend, it is well and truly stuck inside you. ❤️ ere I never liked Barbie either, chainsaw away LoL
October 11th, 2023 03:44
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
Teddy.15 said:
Powerful. Not much of a loss though is it Nev. You are free ❤️
October 11th, 2023 02:37
Teddy.15 said:
Powerful. Not much of a loss though is it Nev. You are free ❤️
October 11th, 2023 02:37
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
Goldfinch60 said:
Betrayal can be found in many ways Neville.
Andy
October 11th, 2023 02:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Betrayal can be found in many ways Neville.
Andy
October 11th, 2023 02:32
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
Bella Shepard said:
All I can say is \"What goes around...comes around\", and it sounds like the offending party is more than deserving. Take care dear friend, you deserve way better!
October 10th, 2023 14:53
Bella Shepard said:
All I can say is \"What goes around...comes around\", and it sounds like the offending party is more than deserving. Take care dear friend, you deserve way better!
October 10th, 2023 14:53
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
MendedFences27 said:
If one was blind, they could feel more about a person than they could while sighted. A blind person hears more and, honestly, they feel more in the spoken word.
Loved your poem. It was honest and to the point. - Phil A.
October 10th, 2023 14:20
MendedFences27 said:
If one was blind, they could feel more about a person than they could while sighted. A blind person hears more and, honestly, they feel more in the spoken word.
Loved your poem. It was honest and to the point. - Phil A.
October 10th, 2023 14:20
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
orchidee said:
KP won\'t be ashamed, she will just get more publicity. Doh! Her outlook is \'me, me, me!;
October 10th, 2023 13:30
orchidee said:
KP won\'t be ashamed, she will just get more publicity. Doh! Her outlook is \'me, me, me!;
October 10th, 2023 13:30
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
LIZ said:
Need me to F somebody up? 😡 Damn! This is oozing annoyance and disrespect!! Not having it! 💜💜💜
October 10th, 2023 08:41
LIZ said:
Need me to F somebody up? 😡 Damn! This is oozing annoyance and disrespect!! Not having it! 💜💜💜
October 10th, 2023 08:41
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
Christina8 said:
It doesn\'t take eyes to see betrayal and other feelings. I hope that person feels remorse...x
October 10th, 2023 08:26
Christina8 said:
It doesn\'t take eyes to see betrayal and other feelings. I hope that person feels remorse...x
October 10th, 2023 08:26
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
Natalie Gladmir said:
I see how it boiled in your soul. It\'s a pity that this person will never be ashamed. Or maybe I\'m wrong.
October 10th, 2023 05:31
Natalie Gladmir said:
I see how it boiled in your soul. It\'s a pity that this person will never be ashamed. Or maybe I\'m wrong.
October 10th, 2023 05:31
No Contest
Goldfinch60 said:
We all struggle sometimes but we always find a way to move on Neville.
Andy
October 10th, 2023 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
We all struggle sometimes but we always find a way to move on Neville.
Andy
October 10th, 2023 01:44
The Rape of the Wreck Known As M257
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful descriptive words Neville.
Andy
October 10th, 2023 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful descriptive words Neville.
Andy
October 10th, 2023 01:42
The Sense of Something Before it is Something
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb words Neville, in time all will be found.
Andy
October 10th, 2023 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb words Neville, in time all will be found.
Andy
October 10th, 2023 01:30
Scammed
MendedFences27 said:
\"Hypocrisy, selfishness, and lies,\" way too much these days. Whatever happened to morals. Maybe we all need to do more than wish and hope, maybe then this will end, and maybe yours is the first step in the right direction. A great statement of truth. - Phil A.
October 9th, 2023 15:03
MendedFences27 said:
\"Hypocrisy, selfishness, and lies,\" way too much these days. Whatever happened to morals. Maybe we all need to do more than wish and hope, maybe then this will end, and maybe yours is the first step in the right direction. A great statement of truth. - Phil A.
October 9th, 2023 15:03
Scammed
Christina8 said:
Preach! There is definitely too much hypocrisy and lies these days..although I am lucky not to count myself among those being scammed. Great piece!
October 9th, 2023 11:59
Christina8 said:
Preach! There is definitely too much hypocrisy and lies these days..although I am lucky not to count myself among those being scammed. Great piece!
October 9th, 2023 11:59
Scammed
L. B. Mek said:
It\'s all a scamm
we knew it at first arrival
that\'s why we screeched loud
and had ourselves a real good cry
(your words voiced my
mood of impotent rage
Hyung)
hope you n yours have a peaceful week, cherished Poet
(my 🙏 especially with the young ones)
🍻 cheers my friend, to you for being YOU!
October 9th, 2023 03:53
L. B. Mek said:
It\'s all a scamm
we knew it at first arrival
that\'s why we screeched loud
and had ourselves a real good cry
(your words voiced my
mood of impotent rage
Hyung)
hope you n yours have a peaceful week, cherished Poet
(my 🙏 especially with the young ones)
🍻 cheers my friend, to you for being YOU!
October 9th, 2023 03:53
No Contest
L. B. Mek said:
they call it a fence
I call it my survival rope
they call it running
I call it seeing another day
they call it scared
I call it wise..
(still each to their own
an eye for an eye
is a great way to live
in a world
blinded by hate..)
October 9th, 2023 02:06
L. B. Mek said:
they call it a fence
I call it my survival rope
they call it running
I call it seeing another day
they call it scared
I call it wise..
(still each to their own
an eye for an eye
is a great way to live
in a world
blinded by hate..)
October 9th, 2023 02:06
The Rape of the Wreck Known As M257
L. B. Mek said:
I have seen a few abandoned wrecks
trains and ships, in my time
always a tinge of dramatic sorrow
in the scene
and the lost past it conveyed to me..
yet, still
it\'s the abandon human faces
at the bus stops, supermarkets
and shuffling along bravely
on those busy highstreets
that give me nightmares
and remind me
of what awaits, most of us
at that cruel twist of fate
in our days of laboured breath
dim minds
and yet, still inside
is that caged child
wishing.. hoping.. regretting
waiting...
(simply BRILIANT Hyung
you already know how much
I love your subtle writes!!)
thank you, this has made my morning
October 9th, 2023 02:02
L. B. Mek said:
I have seen a few abandoned wrecks
trains and ships, in my time
always a tinge of dramatic sorrow
in the scene
and the lost past it conveyed to me..
yet, still
it\'s the abandon human faces
at the bus stops, supermarkets
and shuffling along bravely
on those busy highstreets
that give me nightmares
and remind me
of what awaits, most of us
at that cruel twist of fate
in our days of laboured breath
dim minds
and yet, still inside
is that caged child
wishing.. hoping.. regretting
waiting...
(simply BRILIANT Hyung
you already know how much
I love your subtle writes!!)
thank you, this has made my morning
October 9th, 2023 02:02
No Contest
MendedFences27 said:
Choose your battles wisely, so as not to taste the bitterness of defeat. Seems like a plan, if everyone else agrees to lose. Maybe some things are best left to their natural outcomes.
A very thought provoking poem. It stirs the reader to ponder many things; Wisdom, conquest, winning, losing, self, empathy, and morality. I believe you\'ll get varied opinions on this one. - Phil A.
October 8th, 2023 15:38
MendedFences27 said:
Choose your battles wisely, so as not to taste the bitterness of defeat. Seems like a plan, if everyone else agrees to lose. Maybe some things are best left to their natural outcomes.
A very thought provoking poem. It stirs the reader to ponder many things; Wisdom, conquest, winning, losing, self, empathy, and morality. I believe you\'ll get varied opinions on this one. - Phil A.
October 8th, 2023 15:38
No Contest
Bella Shepard said:
I think I would say, the battles you pick in life should be worth the effort. Very thought provoking of you my friend.
October 8th, 2023 13:52
Bella Shepard said:
I think I would say, the battles you pick in life should be worth the effort. Very thought provoking of you my friend.
October 8th, 2023 13:52
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