Comments received on poems by Neville
Love Letters
orchidee said:
Another tale about me and KP. About 2 years married to her feels like 40 years of marriage to me! lol.
December 23rd, 2022 14:57
orchidee said:
Another tale about me and KP. About 2 years married to her feels like 40 years of marriage to me! lol.
December 23rd, 2022 14:57
Love Letters
Bella Shepard said:
A candle burns bright, as does the memory of every word indelibly written on the heart. Such a love never dies when we keep it alive. You tell a sad tale with such tenderness and compassion, beautifully done my friend!
December 23rd, 2022 13:36
Bella Shepard said:
A candle burns bright, as does the memory of every word indelibly written on the heart. Such a love never dies when we keep it alive. You tell a sad tale with such tenderness and compassion, beautifully done my friend!
December 23rd, 2022 13:36
Love Letters
L. B. Mek said:
\'it had always been known for
and even beyond there and further
through the remnants
of now faded lace curtains ..\'
the yearning in this tender write, is so poignant Hyung
(most of us
lack the belief to pray
this days
so we hide our hope
and whisper our wishes
to our heart\'s
collectively
title these as our lullaby\'s of life
when right by our side
another is doing the same
shoulder to shoulder
yearning for help, or
waiting to help
yet questing life, deaf
to each other\'s
words..
and this
be the fate for the lucky few
who find another
rest of us
are serenaded by lonesome\'s
hollowness
and told to accept, our lowly
place in fate\'s priorities
a population of 8 billion
where heroes are the minority
and born, victims
by the second, aplenty)
December 23rd, 2022 09:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'it had always been known for
and even beyond there and further
through the remnants
of now faded lace curtains ..\'
the yearning in this tender write, is so poignant Hyung
(most of us
lack the belief to pray
this days
so we hide our hope
and whisper our wishes
to our heart\'s
collectively
title these as our lullaby\'s of life
when right by our side
another is doing the same
shoulder to shoulder
yearning for help, or
waiting to help
yet questing life, deaf
to each other\'s
words..
and this
be the fate for the lucky few
who find another
rest of us
are serenaded by lonesome\'s
hollowness
and told to accept, our lowly
place in fate\'s priorities
a population of 8 billion
where heroes are the minority
and born, victims
by the second, aplenty)
December 23rd, 2022 09:41
Love Letters
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A good writing .. I can read the sadness in the words .. nicely expressed and I like the use of nature in this one
December 23rd, 2022 08:29
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A good writing .. I can read the sadness in the words .. nicely expressed and I like the use of nature in this one
December 23rd, 2022 08:29
Love Letters
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
Wonderful!
I could feel those words of the love letters in my heart.
December 23rd, 2022 07:21
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
Wonderful!
I could feel those words of the love letters in my heart.
December 23rd, 2022 07:21
Love Letters
Fay Slimm. said:
What a tenderly penned story your words conjour today of the sad wait for candles to light her man home and meanwhile reading love letters he perhaps wrote - - heart-warming indeed Nev, - - - - and so weird that we chose to post similar subjects again....................x
December 23rd, 2022 06:52
Fay Slimm. said:
What a tenderly penned story your words conjour today of the sad wait for candles to light her man home and meanwhile reading love letters he perhaps wrote - - heart-warming indeed Nev, - - - - and so weird that we chose to post similar subjects again....................x
December 23rd, 2022 06:52
Keep Each Seed Safe
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(even for those seeds, of idea and thought)
December 23rd, 2022 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(even for those seeds, of idea and thought)
December 23rd, 2022 05:59
Fear of Flying Solo
L. B. Mek said:
tough love
can only exist, if being formulated
within truly loving heart\'s
those brave enough, to let go
and hope their cherished ones
will return, when the time is right...
(simple does it best sometimes
no innuendo or abstract illusiveness
just words, depicting a truth
we all recognise, at a glance
executed with the practised skill
of a Poet, supreme!)
December 23rd, 2022 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
tough love
can only exist, if being formulated
within truly loving heart\'s
those brave enough, to let go
and hope their cherished ones
will return, when the time is right...
(simple does it best sometimes
no innuendo or abstract illusiveness
just words, depicting a truth
we all recognise, at a glance
executed with the practised skill
of a Poet, supreme!)
December 23rd, 2022 05:58
Keep Each Seed Safe
Goldfinch60 said:
May all children born come into a wonderful world Neville and then be treated like the angels they are.
Andy
December 23rd, 2022 02:30
Goldfinch60 said:
May all children born come into a wonderful world Neville and then be treated like the angels they are.
Andy
December 23rd, 2022 02:30
Keep Each Seed Safe
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful prayer for the beauty of creating life. You have given profound reverence to this wonder of procreation, just as it should be. Excellent dear friend.
December 22nd, 2022 16:26
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful prayer for the beauty of creating life. You have given profound reverence to this wonder of procreation, just as it should be. Excellent dear friend.
December 22nd, 2022 16:26
Keep Each Seed Safe
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nice writing )) I have a twin sister .. and twins can feel very close . It’s nice to have someone who truly understands me and is similar in many ways
December 22nd, 2022 06:49
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nice writing )) I have a twin sister .. and twins can feel very close . It’s nice to have someone who truly understands me and is similar in many ways
December 22nd, 2022 06:49
Keep Each Seed Safe
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a tender reminder Nev. - - the miracle of combined reproduction so alluringly penned with your usual care. It could it be too for all those expecting twins. - maybe
December 22nd, 2022 06:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a tender reminder Nev. - - the miracle of combined reproduction so alluringly penned with your usual care. It could it be too for all those expecting twins. - maybe
December 22nd, 2022 06:42
Fear of Flying Solo
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sensitive write Neville.
Andy
December 22nd, 2022 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sensitive write Neville.
Andy
December 22nd, 2022 02:23
Fear of Flying Solo
Bella Shepard said:
I see love, commitment, selflessness all wrapped up in this touching poem. The willingness to sacrifice for the good of another, whatever the cost, is true devotion. Beautifully written dear friend.
December 21st, 2022 14:38
Bella Shepard said:
I see love, commitment, selflessness all wrapped up in this touching poem. The willingness to sacrifice for the good of another, whatever the cost, is true devotion. Beautifully written dear friend.
December 21st, 2022 14:38
Fear of Flying Solo
orchidee said:
Doh! None of this applies to me and KP. I let her fly solo whenever she wants. I never hardly see her these days anyway! lol.
December 21st, 2022 11:12
orchidee said:
Doh! None of this applies to me and KP. I let her fly solo whenever she wants. I never hardly see her these days anyway! lol.
December 21st, 2022 11:12
Fear of Flying Solo
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m torn apart by this one, Nev.
On one hand I have an absolute conviction that he should have his way without question.
But, but, but maybe, just maybe........
December 21st, 2022 06:49
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m torn apart by this one, Nev.
On one hand I have an absolute conviction that he should have his way without question.
But, but, but maybe, just maybe........
December 21st, 2022 06:49
Fear of Flying Solo
Fay Slimm. said:
Love\'s effect shines deeply in this sensitive write on how to guide loved ones through the flight of finality. - - a truly potent read Nev.........x
December 21st, 2022 05:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Love\'s effect shines deeply in this sensitive write on how to guide loved ones through the flight of finality. - - a truly potent read Nev.........x
December 21st, 2022 05:27
As a Matter of Fact It’s a Fact
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville.
All the best for you Neville.
Andy
December 21st, 2022 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville.
All the best for you Neville.
Andy
December 21st, 2022 02:19
As a Matter of Fact It’s a Fact
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot\'s a Christmas card (never send \'em - is that why I don\'t get any?)
Facebook ? A mirror in book form? All news to me......
December 20th, 2022 05:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot\'s a Christmas card (never send \'em - is that why I don\'t get any?)
Facebook ? A mirror in book form? All news to me......
December 20th, 2022 05:50
As a Matter of Fact It’s a Fact
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha -- Well that is so true when you put it like that - - and here was I thinking its more likely the postal strike this year - -- so here\'s wishing you season\'s best too via the net my dear friend...............x
December 20th, 2022 04:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha -- Well that is so true when you put it like that - - and here was I thinking its more likely the postal strike this year - -- so here\'s wishing you season\'s best too via the net my dear friend...............x
December 20th, 2022 04:44
The Things One Remembers
L. B. Mek said:
get well soon, Hyung
being drowned in tissue stuffed red noses
and watery, rubbed purple eyes
is the worst
at this festive time of year
still, it does help
that you can always take an extra sip or two
of the strong stuff
you know... purely for medicinal reasons
\'ahem\'
(and I always wanted to visit a traditional cookout place in the south
a place where they sale kilos of bright red flavoured softshell fish in plastic bags
and hickory smoked, everything)
lol
December 19th, 2022 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
get well soon, Hyung
being drowned in tissue stuffed red noses
and watery, rubbed purple eyes
is the worst
at this festive time of year
still, it does help
that you can always take an extra sip or two
of the strong stuff
you know... purely for medicinal reasons
\'ahem\'
(and I always wanted to visit a traditional cookout place in the south
a place where they sale kilos of bright red flavoured softshell fish in plastic bags
and hickory smoked, everything)
lol
December 19th, 2022 04:34
On the Verge of Another New Year
L. B. Mek said:
as much a prayer, as a poem of awareness
Amen!
may fate afford as much kindness
to those
most in need of a little reprieve...
bless your kind heart, Hyung
a sentiment empathetically worded, at this challenging time of year
December 19th, 2022 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
as much a prayer, as a poem of awareness
Amen!
may fate afford as much kindness
to those
most in need of a little reprieve...
bless your kind heart, Hyung
a sentiment empathetically worded, at this challenging time of year
December 19th, 2022 04:26
On the Verge of Another New Year
Doggerel Dave said:
I doubt any Xmas card publisher would buy it, Nev (you may have to keep your day job for a while yet), but it certainly has a certain resonance for me.
December 19th, 2022 02:30
Doggerel Dave said:
I doubt any Xmas card publisher would buy it, Nev (you may have to keep your day job for a while yet), but it certainly has a certain resonance for me.
December 19th, 2022 02:30
The Things One Remembers
Doggerel Dave said:
Cheering the crawfish, Nev - Glad the delirium has dissipated.
December 18th, 2022 17:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Cheering the crawfish, Nev - Glad the delirium has dissipated.
December 18th, 2022 17:38
The Things One Remembers
Fay Slimm. said:
Well they say sweat of infection releases strange dreams Nev.. You well pen here what delirium produces - True or not I\'m glad that poor crawfish proved viral heat can be cruelly hot..............x
December 18th, 2022 07:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Well they say sweat of infection releases strange dreams Nev.. You well pen here what delirium produces - True or not I\'m glad that poor crawfish proved viral heat can be cruelly hot..............x
December 18th, 2022 07:14
The Things One Remembers
orchidee said:
I remember - I was delirious too. When KP was home for a week - an actual whole week! I never see her hardly now in person. lol.
December 18th, 2022 05:38
orchidee said:
I remember - I was delirious too. When KP was home for a week - an actual whole week! I never see her hardly now in person. lol.
December 18th, 2022 05:38
On the Verge of Another New Year
Bella Shepard said:
Maybe we just start the new year with an act of kindness or love and see where it can take us? I sometimes fantasize that if the whole of mankind did a kind act all at the same time it could change the world. You strike at the conscience dear friend, right where we need to be hit. Bravo!
December 17th, 2022 15:46
Bella Shepard said:
Maybe we just start the new year with an act of kindness or love and see where it can take us? I sometimes fantasize that if the whole of mankind did a kind act all at the same time it could change the world. You strike at the conscience dear friend, right where we need to be hit. Bravo!
December 17th, 2022 15:46
On the Verge of Another New Year
Accidental Poet said:
Here\'s to Happy Holidays and a bright and Happy New Year to you and all N.
December 17th, 2022 10:39
Accidental Poet said:
Here\'s to Happy Holidays and a bright and Happy New Year to you and all N.
December 17th, 2022 10:39
On the Verge of Another New Year
Fay Slimm. said:
Your well rhymed lines strike the right chords better than any media reports my caring friend - - how sad the same hopeless conditions many folk face will remain as another new year approaches - -- a a potent write...........x
December 17th, 2022 07:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Your well rhymed lines strike the right chords better than any media reports my caring friend - - how sad the same hopeless conditions many folk face will remain as another new year approaches - -- a a potent write...........x
December 17th, 2022 07:55
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