Comments received on poems by Neville
Mused
LIZ said:
Ah nice! In the literary sense....that last verse, when you think you can\'t give anymore, inspiration takes over, and with one last breath, the poetic rhyme is complete! 💜
August 12th, 2023 03:27
LIZ said:
Ah nice! In the literary sense....that last verse, when you think you can\'t give anymore, inspiration takes over, and with one last breath, the poetic rhyme is complete! 💜
August 12th, 2023 03:27
Mused
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I muse over KP, but it\'s ghastly meditations! Pictures of trouts come to mind for some reason...... lol.
August 12th, 2023 02:06
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I muse over KP, but it\'s ghastly meditations! Pictures of trouts come to mind for some reason...... lol.
August 12th, 2023 02:06
Mused
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I\'m very amused let he or she run riot after all your muse is of course your bestest buddy! A fun read dear Nev, happy Saturday. 💖
August 12th, 2023 01:56
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I\'m very amused let he or she run riot after all your muse is of course your bestest buddy! A fun read dear Nev, happy Saturday. 💖
August 12th, 2023 01:56
Mused
Bobby O said:
I’m still wondering if the muse knew ahead or perhaps is qualified in an AI or maybe planned it all. Possible just preparing little by little so we won’t be let down. ??
August 12th, 2023 01:16
Bobby O said:
I’m still wondering if the muse knew ahead or perhaps is qualified in an AI or maybe planned it all. Possible just preparing little by little so we won’t be let down. ??
August 12th, 2023 01:16
A Moment of Enlightenment
Sunsetmet said:
This enlightened me with simplicity smile of lifted gravity Thanks so much
August 11th, 2023 15:11
Sunsetmet said:
This enlightened me with simplicity smile of lifted gravity Thanks so much
August 11th, 2023 15:11
A Thought For a Day
Christina8 said:
Hopefully every single day is special to many of us. Unfortunate to the ones suffering. Great thought for the day! x
August 11th, 2023 09:08
Christina8 said:
Hopefully every single day is special to many of us. Unfortunate to the ones suffering. Great thought for the day! x
August 11th, 2023 09:08
A Moment of Enlightenment
LIZ said:
Well, I do believe sometimes you have to sit still in order to create that state of consciousness, and start being guided by intuition. BUT, NOT 40 YEARS. LOL 🤣 Although it certainly feels that way. When that moment of enlightment happens, all bets are off. No wall means you can now create whatever you want. That\'s just how I look at it. Nice piece! 💜
August 11th, 2023 06:02
LIZ said:
Well, I do believe sometimes you have to sit still in order to create that state of consciousness, and start being guided by intuition. BUT, NOT 40 YEARS. LOL 🤣 Although it certainly feels that way. When that moment of enlightment happens, all bets are off. No wall means you can now create whatever you want. That\'s just how I look at it. Nice piece! 💜
August 11th, 2023 06:02
A Moment of Enlightenment
Teddy.15 said:
LOL ah but now the wall has come down. 🤗 🤣 💖
August 11th, 2023 03:14
Teddy.15 said:
LOL ah but now the wall has come down. 🤗 🤣 💖
August 11th, 2023 03:14
A Moment of Enlightenment
Doggerel Dave said:
Better late than never....I found Zen fun when I nibbled at it many moons ago, but moved on fairly quickly (probably says more about me than Zen...no not probably....)
August 11th, 2023 02:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Better late than never....I found Zen fun when I nibbled at it many moons ago, but moved on fairly quickly (probably says more about me than Zen...no not probably....)
August 11th, 2023 02:25
A Moment of Enlightenment
orchidee said:
I\'m omm\'ed and ahh\'ed over this - then said - Good write N.
August 11th, 2023 01:55
orchidee said:
I\'m omm\'ed and ahh\'ed over this - then said - Good write N.
August 11th, 2023 01:55
A Thought For a Day
LIZ said:
Yes, for someone, somewhere, always!! Love it!!! 💜
August 10th, 2023 18:40
LIZ said:
Yes, for someone, somewhere, always!! Love it!!! 💜
August 10th, 2023 18:40
A Thought For a Day
Parisab said:
So wise to partake in universal joy! Thanks for the reminder, poet friend…
August 10th, 2023 11:29
Parisab said:
So wise to partake in universal joy! Thanks for the reminder, poet friend…
August 10th, 2023 11:29
A Thought For a Day
orchidee said:
Since when did I have any special days after marrying KP?! lol.
August 10th, 2023 08:47
orchidee said:
Since when did I have any special days after marrying KP?! lol.
August 10th, 2023 08:47
A Thought For a Day
Teddy.15 said:
Should be the thought of the day. Yes wishing others well and being able to actually celebrate with them is simply a matter of reasonable behaviour although not all can do this. A wonderful thought 💖
August 10th, 2023 07:40
Teddy.15 said:
Should be the thought of the day. Yes wishing others well and being able to actually celebrate with them is simply a matter of reasonable behaviour although not all can do this. A wonderful thought 💖
August 10th, 2023 07:40
For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
Parisab said:
We can almost see you transform into a perfect image of a grandfather, gazing at your star’s big baby blue eyes. Thank you for these moving words!
August 10th, 2023 00:50
Parisab said:
We can almost see you transform into a perfect image of a grandfather, gazing at your star’s big baby blue eyes. Thank you for these moving words!
August 10th, 2023 00:50
For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
Bella Shepard said:
This is so beautifully and lovingly written, it would be impossible not to shed a tear of joy for you, which I happily did. God bless Astrid Wren, I know there will be no shortage of love for this little one. Enjoy every moment of being that proud Grandpa. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful event. Take care my friend.
August 9th, 2023 13:48
Bella Shepard said:
This is so beautifully and lovingly written, it would be impossible not to shed a tear of joy for you, which I happily did. God bless Astrid Wren, I know there will be no shortage of love for this little one. Enjoy every moment of being that proud Grandpa. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful event. Take care my friend.
August 9th, 2023 13:48
For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
Christina8 said:
That was a very touching write for your new granddaughter. Cannot congratulate you enough, dear friend!
August 9th, 2023 08:36
Christina8 said:
That was a very touching write for your new granddaughter. Cannot congratulate you enough, dear friend!
August 9th, 2023 08:36
For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
Teddy.15 said:
So very touching, it\'s unconditional love, and it\'s just what you deserve, every day Astrid will grow and in a couple of months she will start giggling, that\'s when I fear I shall lose my poetry friend lol , Nev you just can\'t get enough of a new born I know I\'ve spent my life looking after them, so many stages and it\'s always different when we are a family member looking in as we can have all the fun and then go home! Even though knowing you it\'s hard too leave each day 🤗 enjoy this marvelous moment as you already know how fast they grow up. I know you are without doubt the best popps she could ever have. 💖
August 9th, 2023 04:10
Teddy.15 said:
So very touching, it\'s unconditional love, and it\'s just what you deserve, every day Astrid will grow and in a couple of months she will start giggling, that\'s when I fear I shall lose my poetry friend lol , Nev you just can\'t get enough of a new born I know I\'ve spent my life looking after them, so many stages and it\'s always different when we are a family member looking in as we can have all the fun and then go home! Even though knowing you it\'s hard too leave each day 🤗 enjoy this marvelous moment as you already know how fast they grow up. I know you are without doubt the best popps she could ever have. 💖
August 9th, 2023 04:10
For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
LIZ said:
Awww so beautiful! And Astrid Wren is such a pretty name!!! Congrats!!! 💜
August 9th, 2023 02:27
LIZ said:
Awww so beautiful! And Astrid Wren is such a pretty name!!! Congrats!!! 💜
August 9th, 2023 02:27
For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I say\' Hi, Astrid, erm, KP!\' Not really. lol
Me two cats cry through their whiskers when they see her. They are scared of trouts. lol.
August 9th, 2023 02:11
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I say\' Hi, Astrid, erm, KP!\' Not really. lol
Me two cats cry through their whiskers when they see her. They are scared of trouts. lol.
August 9th, 2023 02:11
For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing ) so nicely expressed . 🙂
August 9th, 2023 02:10
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing ) so nicely expressed . 🙂
August 9th, 2023 02:10
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
Parisab said:
She met your most vital need (for bread) I can’t begin to imagine the power of symbolism-“I saw her clearly edged” on the (church like) stained glass imagery-I see holy, maternal, and sensual represented by the same woman-This is one of my favorites of your body of work…
August 9th, 2023 00:38
Parisab said:
She met your most vital need (for bread) I can’t begin to imagine the power of symbolism-“I saw her clearly edged” on the (church like) stained glass imagery-I see holy, maternal, and sensual represented by the same woman-This is one of my favorites of your body of work…
August 9th, 2023 00:38
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem\'s simplicity belies its complex layers of meaning, making it a touching exploration of human connection and the significance of seemingly ordinary .
August 8th, 2023 20:37
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem\'s simplicity belies its complex layers of meaning, making it a touching exploration of human connection and the significance of seemingly ordinary .
August 8th, 2023 20:37
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
Christina8 said:
Nice double entendre!! Hungry indeed!x
August 8th, 2023 19:34
Christina8 said:
Nice double entendre!! Hungry indeed!x
August 8th, 2023 19:34
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
Bella Shepard said:
Sounds like a recipe to tempt the taste buds, in more ways than one. Soft and gentle, it makes one sigh. Lovely dear friend!
August 8th, 2023 15:11
Bella Shepard said:
Sounds like a recipe to tempt the taste buds, in more ways than one. Soft and gentle, it makes one sigh. Lovely dear friend!
August 8th, 2023 15:11
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
MendedFences27 said:
You shouldn\'t fool around while baking, that\'s how you get Munchkins.
I felt there was a lightheartedness to this poem. It brought a smile to my face and brightened an otherwise rainy day. It also sparked my appetite. - Phil A.
August 8th, 2023 09:15
MendedFences27 said:
You shouldn\'t fool around while baking, that\'s how you get Munchkins.
I felt there was a lightheartedness to this poem. It brought a smile to my face and brightened an otherwise rainy day. It also sparked my appetite. - Phil A.
August 8th, 2023 09:15
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
Sunsetmet said:
Lovely your writing lights me up it shines thanks
August 8th, 2023 09:13
Sunsetmet said:
Lovely your writing lights me up it shines thanks
August 8th, 2023 09:13
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
Jerry Reynolds said:
You lusty devil.
Well written, Neville.
August 8th, 2023 08:20
Jerry Reynolds said:
You lusty devil.
Well written, Neville.
August 8th, 2023 08:20
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
orchidee said:
Yes, KP said she would like some flowers in her hair, so I tipped a bag of flour over her! lol. My nastiness to her never stops. Well, she deserves it. lol.
August 8th, 2023 01:49
orchidee said:
Yes, KP said she would like some flowers in her hair, so I tipped a bag of flour over her! lol. My nastiness to her never stops. Well, she deserves it. lol.
August 8th, 2023 01:49
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
Teddy.15 said:
So very beautifully described dear Nev, baked to perfection. 💖
August 8th, 2023 01:31
Teddy.15 said:
So very beautifully described dear Nev, baked to perfection. 💖
August 8th, 2023 01:31
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