Comments received on poems by Neville
The Simple Art of Wondering
Caring dove said:
A nice writing like your words ))
Couldn’t imagine missing the sky or the sea .. nature is too beautiful
I think we’d be lost confused and very sad without that
June 30th, 2023 00:48
Caring dove said:
A nice writing like your words ))
Couldn’t imagine missing the sky or the sea .. nature is too beautiful
I think we’d be lost confused and very sad without that
June 30th, 2023 00:48
Zilch Seeking Oblivion Surfers
Bobby O said:
That’s a good way to describe total bewilderment. I imagine most visit that state on occasion but to extend that to a nothingness drives that kerfluffle into a spiritual realm , which of course can be argued as pure logic. But, as an aside, would that have provided insight, in that momentary glimpse , as to what’s the next station? The next subway stop? Could you hint if there’s gonna be lots of beautiful women,? Just asking for a friend v
June 30th, 2023 00:48
Bobby O said:
That’s a good way to describe total bewilderment. I imagine most visit that state on occasion but to extend that to a nothingness drives that kerfluffle into a spiritual realm , which of course can be argued as pure logic. But, as an aside, would that have provided insight, in that momentary glimpse , as to what’s the next station? The next subway stop? Could you hint if there’s gonna be lots of beautiful women,? Just asking for a friend v
June 30th, 2023 00:48
Where No Mirrors Are Required
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I love the open ended finishing... it does not always have to be the full story, a flash at times is good enough to let the mind finish its own... Totally taken by the title as well. Your poetic outlook is remarkable, N. Beautiful one!
June 29th, 2023 08:16
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I love the open ended finishing... it does not always have to be the full story, a flash at times is good enough to let the mind finish its own... Totally taken by the title as well. Your poetic outlook is remarkable, N. Beautiful one!
June 29th, 2023 08:16
Psithurism Interludes
orchidee said:
It\'s all right for some folks having psithurisms! lol
I\'ve gone nutty - a course said - maybe people should be called \'person-technology hybrids\'.
Then it got dafter: \'This sofa could have its own personality\'.
They\'ll put me in padded cell soon, reading that rubbish!
June 29th, 2023 03:59
orchidee said:
It\'s all right for some folks having psithurisms! lol
I\'ve gone nutty - a course said - maybe people should be called \'person-technology hybrids\'.
Then it got dafter: \'This sofa could have its own personality\'.
They\'ll put me in padded cell soon, reading that rubbish!
June 29th, 2023 03:59
Psithurism Interludes
Teddy.15 said:
And this my friend is a really beautiful poem. ❤️
June 29th, 2023 03:39
Teddy.15 said:
And this my friend is a really beautiful poem. ❤️
June 29th, 2023 03:39
Where No Mirrors Are Required
Christina8 said:
They never noticed the mirrors...loved that....very well written poem!
June 28th, 2023 11:37
Christina8 said:
They never noticed the mirrors...loved that....very well written poem!
June 28th, 2023 11:37
Where No Mirrors Are Required
orchidee said:
A slightly swoony poem here?! heehee.
June 28th, 2023 06:41
orchidee said:
A slightly swoony poem here?! heehee.
June 28th, 2023 06:41
Where No Mirrors Are Required
Neville said:
made me smile bigly so ya did miss VB 🌷🌹🌺thank you :)
June 28th, 2023 02:35
Neville said:
made me smile bigly so ya did miss VB 🌷🌹🌺thank you :)
June 28th, 2023 02:35
Where No Mirrors Are Required
Caring dove said:
The idea of a table ‘ feeling ‘empty .. your writing makes me think of those things being in the background , being ‘ invisible ‘ and uncared for .. they are so intent on each other that nothing else matters to them
Liked your writing )
June 28th, 2023 02:34
Caring dove said:
The idea of a table ‘ feeling ‘empty .. your writing makes me think of those things being in the background , being ‘ invisible ‘ and uncared for .. they are so intent on each other that nothing else matters to them
Liked your writing )
June 28th, 2023 02:34
When Thinking Upon a Lemon Tree
Kinsey Peterson said:
lemon has always been a word that inspires memory for me- why? absolutely no idea, but your poem has me reminiscing. love it as usual
June 27th, 2023 13:21
Kinsey Peterson said:
lemon has always been a word that inspires memory for me- why? absolutely no idea, but your poem has me reminiscing. love it as usual
June 27th, 2023 13:21
When Thinking Upon a Lemon Tree
Teddy.15 said:
Reminds me of the south of italy, lemons galore 🤗
June 27th, 2023 12:16
Teddy.15 said:
Reminds me of the south of italy, lemons galore 🤗
June 27th, 2023 12:16
When Thinking Upon a Lemon Tree
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
When I see…
When I read…
About lemons…
Or lemon trees…
I think of Capri…
Capri…
…part of my dolce vita.❣️
Laura🌻
June 27th, 2023 09:52
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
When I see…
When I read…
About lemons…
Or lemon trees…
I think of Capri…
Capri…
…part of my dolce vita.❣️
Laura🌻
June 27th, 2023 09:52
When Thinking Upon a Lemon Tree
Christina8 said:
Not much left to the imagination my friend, but very descriptive. I like it!
June 27th, 2023 02:17
Christina8 said:
Not much left to the imagination my friend, but very descriptive. I like it!
June 27th, 2023 02:17
When Thinking Upon a Lemon Tree
Michael Edwards said:
I do enjoy a lemon dressing - or in this case undressing. Nice one Neville.
June 27th, 2023 01:49
Michael Edwards said:
I do enjoy a lemon dressing - or in this case undressing. Nice one Neville.
June 27th, 2023 01:49
When Thinking Upon a Lemon Tree
orchidee said:
That lemon tree made me swoon, with the goings-on underneath it. Or were ya in the tree top?! lol.
June 27th, 2023 01:46
orchidee said:
That lemon tree made me swoon, with the goings-on underneath it. Or were ya in the tree top?! lol.
June 27th, 2023 01:46
Just Desserts and No Pudding
Kinsey Peterson said:
i feel as though there is a story behind this that we are not seeing- i\'m curious what the love thinks about what occured :))
You know it\'s a good poem when someone wants to turn it into a story.
June 26th, 2023 14:14
Kinsey Peterson said:
i feel as though there is a story behind this that we are not seeing- i\'m curious what the love thinks about what occured :))
You know it\'s a good poem when someone wants to turn it into a story.
June 26th, 2023 14:14
Just Desserts and No Pudding
Teddy.15 said:
LOL there is a huge irony I get from your words, no winners in love that\'s for sure. ❤️ Sometimes just sour grapes. Wonderfully written.
June 26th, 2023 10:54
Teddy.15 said:
LOL there is a huge irony I get from your words, no winners in love that\'s for sure. ❤️ Sometimes just sour grapes. Wonderfully written.
June 26th, 2023 10:54
Just Desserts and No Pudding
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem....so descriptive and brings such fun times to mind.....Great one
June 26th, 2023 06:50
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem....so descriptive and brings such fun times to mind.....Great one
June 26th, 2023 06:50
Just Desserts and No Pudding
L. B. Mek said:
just desserts, eh?
too much sweetness, as a curse
rotting our teeth and emboldening
our love handles..
lol
loving the wordplay, a great write Hyung
a fun read as well
(or maybe that\'s just me)
June 26th, 2023 03:02
L. B. Mek said:
just desserts, eh?
too much sweetness, as a curse
rotting our teeth and emboldening
our love handles..
lol
loving the wordplay, a great write Hyung
a fun read as well
(or maybe that\'s just me)
June 26th, 2023 03:02
Dembe’s Dust
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(experiences enrich our perspectives
add depths to our empathy pools
we ink what we see, but
outsider eyes
rarely truly see
or want, to see
that song and dance of defiance
in those now, cagelss veins
spitting that rotten feeling
like a Maya Angelou, daring poem
forced to witness Time change
and yet generation after generation
is still
dusting that crimson soaked dirt
forced to rely
on the generosity of those
that resemble the very people
who crippled a continent
and raped its lands, so the west
can sit on those high seats
deigning to offer their charity
while ignoring the very blood
on those hands, they keep
so pristine and washed clean...)
June 26th, 2023 02:56
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(experiences enrich our perspectives
add depths to our empathy pools
we ink what we see, but
outsider eyes
rarely truly see
or want, to see
that song and dance of defiance
in those now, cagelss veins
spitting that rotten feeling
like a Maya Angelou, daring poem
forced to witness Time change
and yet generation after generation
is still
dusting that crimson soaked dirt
forced to rely
on the generosity of those
that resemble the very people
who crippled a continent
and raped its lands, so the west
can sit on those high seats
deigning to offer their charity
while ignoring the very blood
on those hands, they keep
so pristine and washed clean...)
June 26th, 2023 02:56
Little Flower
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(nature\'s beauty, cut short
by cruelty of life\'s poetry
or a heart, pricked by thorns
yet gentle as rose petals
poetic form as a caging
of reality\'s artistic chaos
syllables, handcuffed
so our creativity may soar
...free)
June 26th, 2023 02:45
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(nature\'s beauty, cut short
by cruelty of life\'s poetry
or a heart, pricked by thorns
yet gentle as rose petals
poetic form as a caging
of reality\'s artistic chaos
syllables, handcuffed
so our creativity may soar
...free)
June 26th, 2023 02:45
Just Desserts and No Pudding
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I \'tasted\' KP. Tasted like an old trout! Well, looked like one anyway. heehee.
June 26th, 2023 01:30
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I \'tasted\' KP. Tasted like an old trout! Well, looked like one anyway. heehee.
June 26th, 2023 01:30
At Least to the Moon and Back
Caring dove said:
Lovely gentle words ) I like your poem 🙂 nice mention of birds and nature in this
June 26th, 2023 01:22
Caring dove said:
Lovely gentle words ) I like your poem 🙂 nice mention of birds and nature in this
June 26th, 2023 01:22
Just Desserts and No Pudding
Goldfinch60 said:
True love is very much like that Neville, that ecstasy over every portion is so wonderful.
Andy
June 26th, 2023 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
True love is very much like that Neville, that ecstasy over every portion is so wonderful.
Andy
June 26th, 2023 01:01
Dembe’s Dust
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
Very interesting and informative. Your comments helped in understanding your well crafted poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura 🙏🏻
June 25th, 2023 10:33
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
Very interesting and informative. Your comments helped in understanding your well crafted poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura 🙏🏻
June 25th, 2023 10:33
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