Comments received on poems by Neville
Now That My Lady Is Gone
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
I duck as many reflections as I can but when one hits it hurts.
December 3rd, 2022 16:30
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
I duck as many reflections as I can but when one hits it hurts.
December 3rd, 2022 16:30
Now That My Lady Is Gone
Fay Slimm. said:
Honesty wins hands down in these few lines of truthful reflection - -- parting from loved ones my friend is and ever has been so so hard........ x
December 3rd, 2022 16:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Honesty wins hands down in these few lines of truthful reflection - -- parting from loved ones my friend is and ever has been so so hard........ x
December 3rd, 2022 16:05
Now That My Lady Is Gone
Bella Shepard said:
My dearest friend, a different person emerges and it takes time to get to know him. Be kind to him, comfort him, take good care of him because he is well worth it, and with patience, he will find the way to forgive himself, and even love the person he is. I\'ve been there, done that, and it is a journey worth taking.
December 3rd, 2022 14:49
Bella Shepard said:
My dearest friend, a different person emerges and it takes time to get to know him. Be kind to him, comfort him, take good care of him because he is well worth it, and with patience, he will find the way to forgive himself, and even love the person he is. I\'ve been there, done that, and it is a journey worth taking.
December 3rd, 2022 14:49
Now That My Lady Is Gone
dusk arising said:
Ouch! I bet you liked your self well enough before she appeared though. Look what she\'s done to you. There\'s a lot of it about.
December 3rd, 2022 13:34
dusk arising said:
Ouch! I bet you liked your self well enough before she appeared though. Look what she\'s done to you. There\'s a lot of it about.
December 3rd, 2022 13:34
So Long and Thanks for All the Fish
Goldfinch60 said:
Mat that fish be forever in your memory Dave.
Andy
December 3rd, 2022 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Mat that fish be forever in your memory Dave.
Andy
December 3rd, 2022 02:53
So Long and Thanks for All the Fish
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - Although a SF afficionado in the past I missed out on Hitchhiker\'s too.
BTW beyond the fond ending , which was kind and reasonable I felt, what was the cause of the ache?
December 2nd, 2022 23:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - Although a SF afficionado in the past I missed out on Hitchhiker\'s too.
BTW beyond the fond ending , which was kind and reasonable I felt, what was the cause of the ache?
December 2nd, 2022 23:45
So Long and Thanks for All the Fish
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - -- Space travel never being my thing I am not remembering much of that Guide to the Galaxy but am liking your take on the sad adieu to the babe who apparently gave you those fish - -- well maybe...x
December 2nd, 2022 16:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - -- Space travel never being my thing I am not remembering much of that Guide to the Galaxy but am liking your take on the sad adieu to the babe who apparently gave you those fish - -- well maybe...x
December 2nd, 2022 16:25
So Long and Thanks for All the Fish
Neil Higgins said:
Don\'t forget The Restaurant At The Far End Of The Universe.Nice fish to be had,I believe.
December 2nd, 2022 16:18
Neil Higgins said:
Don\'t forget The Restaurant At The Far End Of The Universe.Nice fish to be had,I believe.
December 2nd, 2022 16:18
So Long and Thanks for All the Fish
Bella Shepard said:
A fond farewell, witty and sweet. Got to catch up on Hitchhiker\'s. Good write!
December 2nd, 2022 14:51
Bella Shepard said:
A fond farewell, witty and sweet. Got to catch up on Hitchhiker\'s. Good write!
December 2nd, 2022 14:51
So Long and Thanks for All the Fish
Eugene S. said:
Sounds like you\'re acquainted with #42. Awesome sentiment, Awesome poem!
December 2nd, 2022 12:20
Eugene S. said:
Sounds like you\'re acquainted with #42. Awesome sentiment, Awesome poem!
December 2nd, 2022 12:20
Just Another Shot in The Dark
L. B. Mek said:
for me, Hyung
the saddest part
is the betrayal that lingers
long after the traumas has been overcome bravely,
that\'s what makes it so hard to trust again
because we all judge the threat levels we encounter
but when we choose to entrust our safety
to another we deem, worthy
and that\'s taken advantage of
so mercilessly
for merely seconds of depraved gratification...
it breaks our capacity to trust
those we may deem, as safe in the future
and poisons our connections with people irreversibly...
and perpetrators barely get years as sentence for such crimes
while survivors spend a lifetime dealing with it
🤬🤬🤬
(and we say \'stay safe, be aware\'
but of who, strangers?
when its the people around us
that usually plot or opportunistically
act out such despicable acts)
this is why I can never do your profession
the empath in me will end-up a vigilante mass murderer
December 2nd, 2022 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
for me, Hyung
the saddest part
is the betrayal that lingers
long after the traumas has been overcome bravely,
that\'s what makes it so hard to trust again
because we all judge the threat levels we encounter
but when we choose to entrust our safety
to another we deem, worthy
and that\'s taken advantage of
so mercilessly
for merely seconds of depraved gratification...
it breaks our capacity to trust
those we may deem, as safe in the future
and poisons our connections with people irreversibly...
and perpetrators barely get years as sentence for such crimes
while survivors spend a lifetime dealing with it
🤬🤬🤬
(and we say \'stay safe, be aware\'
but of who, strangers?
when its the people around us
that usually plot or opportunistically
act out such despicable acts)
this is why I can never do your profession
the empath in me will end-up a vigilante mass murderer
December 2nd, 2022 04:52
Ten Years After
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(nothing, is scorched into memory like the wrath
of the one, you once trusted with all your heart...)
December 2nd, 2022 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(nothing, is scorched into memory like the wrath
of the one, you once trusted with all your heart...)
December 2nd, 2022 04:38
That Last Time Look
L. B. Mek said:
(breakup\'s need to be confronted
while wearing bullet proof jackets
just like, setting sail comes with life jacket access
for those left behind...)
yeah, been there got the t-shirt
n try as I might, years later
I can\'t get that regret to wash out...
thank you! Hyung
for me this was somewhat therapeutic to read
and respond to
December 2nd, 2022 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
(breakup\'s need to be confronted
while wearing bullet proof jackets
just like, setting sail comes with life jacket access
for those left behind...)
yeah, been there got the t-shirt
n try as I might, years later
I can\'t get that regret to wash out...
thank you! Hyung
for me this was somewhat therapeutic to read
and respond to
December 2nd, 2022 04:35
Ten Years After
Aradhya said:
A moment together is far more valuable than an eternity apart and such a memory accompanies one for life and perhaps beyond. Because it\'s a connection between souls and forever embedded in the heart. Time passes yet it\'s a moment frozen in time. A beautiful sentiment told in lovely verse Neville. Loved this!❤
December 1st, 2022 16:04
Aradhya said:
A moment together is far more valuable than an eternity apart and such a memory accompanies one for life and perhaps beyond. Because it\'s a connection between souls and forever embedded in the heart. Time passes yet it\'s a moment frozen in time. A beautiful sentiment told in lovely verse Neville. Loved this!❤
December 1st, 2022 16:04
Just Another Shot in The Dark
Aradhya said:
I found this so very hauntingly beautiful. A bit intriguing too as the safe haven is dark, as mostly such a place is associated with light and brightness. Darkness gives the feeling of uncertainty, unknownness, and a racing heart(just my thoughts), which makes your words all the more interesting. And the repetition makes the feelings of grief more poignant. Sometimes darkness is far more peaceful and healing than a brilliant hues of light. Perhaps the darkness is because of being afraid of reality?
Anyways, this felt very sincere to me and I absolutely loved it!
December 1st, 2022 15:35
Aradhya said:
I found this so very hauntingly beautiful. A bit intriguing too as the safe haven is dark, as mostly such a place is associated with light and brightness. Darkness gives the feeling of uncertainty, unknownness, and a racing heart(just my thoughts), which makes your words all the more interesting. And the repetition makes the feelings of grief more poignant. Sometimes darkness is far more peaceful and healing than a brilliant hues of light. Perhaps the darkness is because of being afraid of reality?
Anyways, this felt very sincere to me and I absolutely loved it!
December 1st, 2022 15:35
Just Another Shot in The Dark
MendedFences27 said:
\'When there\'s no one else and nowhere to go,\" only then do you wish to \"lay there\" with her. And why a \"secret room?\" I was a bit confused, and also lost by the \"V\", but that\'s probably a good thing.
If this is a plain old statement of love, then it is beautiful. If it\'s a specific kind of love, then I am lost.
Forgive me if this sounds confusing, it\'s because I am. - Phil A.
December 1st, 2022 13:33
MendedFences27 said:
\'When there\'s no one else and nowhere to go,\" only then do you wish to \"lay there\" with her. And why a \"secret room?\" I was a bit confused, and also lost by the \"V\", but that\'s probably a good thing.
If this is a plain old statement of love, then it is beautiful. If it\'s a specific kind of love, then I am lost.
Forgive me if this sounds confusing, it\'s because I am. - Phil A.
December 1st, 2022 13:33
Ten Years After
Kinsey Peterson said:
We may not remember numbers, but we remember words. Yours are particularly touching and help to embed the muse in time for the rest of eternity. Thank you.
December 1st, 2022 11:44
Kinsey Peterson said:
We may not remember numbers, but we remember words. Yours are particularly touching and help to embed the muse in time for the rest of eternity. Thank you.
December 1st, 2022 11:44
Just Another Shot in The Dark
Kinsey Peterson said:
This is beautiful. I only wish I had a secret room and someone to lie beside me. Thank you for the poem Neville.
December 1st, 2022 11:21
Kinsey Peterson said:
This is beautiful. I only wish I had a secret room and someone to lie beside me. Thank you for the poem Neville.
December 1st, 2022 11:21
Just Another Shot in The Dark
orchidee said:
I\'m understanding the message in this - but meanwhile - in the dark? Put a light on?! heehee.
December 1st, 2022 08:46
orchidee said:
I\'m understanding the message in this - but meanwhile - in the dark? Put a light on?! heehee.
December 1st, 2022 08:46
Just Another Shot in The Dark
dusk arising said:
we all have our secret/sacred places of dreamsville... our safe haven
December 1st, 2022 08:09
dusk arising said:
we all have our secret/sacred places of dreamsville... our safe haven
December 1st, 2022 08:09
Just Another Shot in The Dark
arqios said:
Indeed for each and every person this may be applicable on both parts.
December 1st, 2022 07:09
arqios said:
Indeed for each and every person this may be applicable on both parts.
December 1st, 2022 07:09
Just Another Shot in The Dark
Fay Slimm. said:
It meets very well Nev and the two verse repetition adds to its pitiful poignance...x
December 1st, 2022 06:54
Fay Slimm. said:
It meets very well Nev and the two verse repetition adds to its pitiful poignance...x
December 1st, 2022 06:54
Just Another Shot in The Dark
Fay Slimm. said:
Pathos issues from every line here - and from the title too -- the feeling of being abused goes so sadly deep into the psyche . - -- a relatable write for both genders methinks Nev.....x
December 1st, 2022 05:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Pathos issues from every line here - and from the title too -- the feeling of being abused goes so sadly deep into the psyche . - -- a relatable write for both genders methinks Nev.....x
December 1st, 2022 05:29
Ten Years After
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like love at first sight to me N.
At reading your title, I\'d thought this was going to be about the rock band Ten Years After. But I was still not disappointed.
November 30th, 2022 18:46
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like love at first sight to me N.
At reading your title, I\'d thought this was going to be about the rock band Ten Years After. But I was still not disappointed.
November 30th, 2022 18:46
Ten Years After
Bella Shepard said:
An encounter, seared upon the mind, not easily forgotten. Though time may dim the details, the impact remains and serves to comfort. So well versed dear friend.
November 30th, 2022 10:53
Bella Shepard said:
An encounter, seared upon the mind, not easily forgotten. Though time may dim the details, the impact remains and serves to comfort. So well versed dear friend.
November 30th, 2022 10:53
Ten Years After
Doggerel Dave said:
The residue, since the data so obviously redundant....but such residue........
November 30th, 2022 06:23
Doggerel Dave said:
The residue, since the data so obviously redundant....but such residue........
November 30th, 2022 06:23
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