Comments received on poems by Neville
The Making of a Single Murmuration
L. B. Mek said:
(aligned, we\'re segregated
by invisible machinations
yet with every other thought
someone, somewhere is sharing
our frowning murmurations
and starling\'s in-flight
our only witness to these threads
of self-curated happenstance...)
such a deep write, Hyung
(I read and strive
to comprehend, learn and appreciate)
thank you!
September 1st, 2023 03:00
L. B. Mek said:
(aligned, we\'re segregated
by invisible machinations
yet with every other thought
someone, somewhere is sharing
our frowning murmurations
and starling\'s in-flight
our only witness to these threads
of self-curated happenstance...)
such a deep write, Hyung
(I read and strive
to comprehend, learn and appreciate)
thank you!
September 1st, 2023 03:00
Bang Goes Another Theory
L. B. Mek said:
and there is something
about seedless grapes
and Bill Gates
buying-up all the farms
then producing
commercial meat in laboratories...
yes, dear wise Poet
\'There is something electromagtastic,\'
\'about the destruction found in re-birth
and the proceeds of
artificially impregnated intelligence seeds ..\'
and sadly, very few like me
will ever truly comprehend
\' the enormity and asceticism\' of these most haunting foreshadowing
of our collective society\'s projection
upon a path of irreversible demise...
September 1st, 2023 02:47
L. B. Mek said:
and there is something
about seedless grapes
and Bill Gates
buying-up all the farms
then producing
commercial meat in laboratories...
yes, dear wise Poet
\'There is something electromagtastic,\'
\'about the destruction found in re-birth
and the proceeds of
artificially impregnated intelligence seeds ..\'
and sadly, very few like me
will ever truly comprehend
\' the enormity and asceticism\' of these most haunting foreshadowing
of our collective society\'s projection
upon a path of irreversible demise...
September 1st, 2023 02:47
On Returning to Gullworthy
LIZ said:
Sounds like even though you feel like you\'ve been away for years, you remember very vivid details! Took me on a trip for sure! But then again, you always do! I have to say, you\'re one of 3 people who always has me reaching for a dictionary. LOL-Thank you for the author comment. I feel like that was for my benefit 😁 I love how you play with words....most likely unintentional 💜
September 1st, 2023 02:37
LIZ said:
Sounds like even though you feel like you\'ve been away for years, you remember very vivid details! Took me on a trip for sure! But then again, you always do! I have to say, you\'re one of 3 people who always has me reaching for a dictionary. LOL-Thank you for the author comment. I feel like that was for my benefit 😁 I love how you play with words....most likely unintentional 💜
September 1st, 2023 02:37
On Returning to Gullworthy
Doggerel Dave said:
Man oh man, a rich word painting if I\'ve ever read one... almost lived there myself....
PS: The afghan must have lost it\'s distinctive olfactory properties by now, surely?
September 1st, 2023 01:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Man oh man, a rich word painting if I\'ve ever read one... almost lived there myself....
PS: The afghan must have lost it\'s distinctive olfactory properties by now, surely?
September 1st, 2023 01:57
On Returning to Gullworthy
Goldfinch60 said:
Betsy will always be there for you Neville, the characters in our life are never forgotten.
Andy
September 1st, 2023 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Betsy will always be there for you Neville, the characters in our life are never forgotten.
Andy
September 1st, 2023 01:44
Whatever Happened to Miriam
Goldfinch60 said:
Those meetings can filled with such emotion Neville and can therefore bring back both good and sad memories.
Andy
September 1st, 2023 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Those meetings can filled with such emotion Neville and can therefore bring back both good and sad memories.
Andy
September 1st, 2023 01:20
The Making of a Single Murmuration
Bobby O said:
I search out what you write because it has proven piece after piece to be interesting and thought provoking. It’s just right THERE.
September 1st, 2023 00:12
Bobby O said:
I search out what you write because it has proven piece after piece to be interesting and thought provoking. It’s just right THERE.
September 1st, 2023 00:12
Whatever Happened to Miriam
Bobby O said:
The vaguest direction I would put that down as victory. Might I guess that semi directional glance was her hinting that she has a fond memory that while not quite ready for a replay the fondness still touches her and it is privilege.
August 31st, 2023 23:54
Bobby O said:
The vaguest direction I would put that down as victory. Might I guess that semi directional glance was her hinting that she has a fond memory that while not quite ready for a replay the fondness still touches her and it is privilege.
August 31st, 2023 23:54
Whatever Happened to Miriam
Bella Shepard said:
The Miriam I found was the sister of Moses, and the beautiful story of her well. Your lady must be quite remarkable by comparison. Your verse rich, and delightful. Thank you dear friend.
August 31st, 2023 14:31
Bella Shepard said:
The Miriam I found was the sister of Moses, and the beautiful story of her well. Your lady must be quite remarkable by comparison. Your verse rich, and delightful. Thank you dear friend.
August 31st, 2023 14:31
Whatever Happened to Miriam
Parisab said:
This brief encounter needs no introduction-I am sure she saw that you appreciate her beauty and labor-thanks for the write-
August 31st, 2023 09:28
Parisab said:
This brief encounter needs no introduction-I am sure she saw that you appreciate her beauty and labor-thanks for the write-
August 31st, 2023 09:28
Whatever Happened to Miriam
orchidee said:
Just call me Miriam (in disguise). lol.
August 31st, 2023 07:34
orchidee said:
Just call me Miriam (in disguise). lol.
August 31st, 2023 07:34
Whatever Happened to Miriam
Doggerel Dave said:
Dunno what the final score was in the exchange above, but a quick scan of biblical and torah references didn\'t yield much info either.... lack of both water and nakedness...
August 31st, 2023 04:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Dunno what the final score was in the exchange above, but a quick scan of biblical and torah references didn\'t yield much info either.... lack of both water and nakedness...
August 31st, 2023 04:52
Whatever Happened to Miriam
LIZ said:
Absolutely! But you might have to turn me in the right direction. That\'s why I said my mind\'s all over the place. 😆 now I\'m thinking about Miriam and the Nile. Lord help me! But all in all, the experience seems to me like a moment of bliss. I\'m in my feminine energy at the moment so....help? 😉 💜
August 31st, 2023 03:59
LIZ said:
Absolutely! But you might have to turn me in the right direction. That\'s why I said my mind\'s all over the place. 😆 now I\'m thinking about Miriam and the Nile. Lord help me! But all in all, the experience seems to me like a moment of bliss. I\'m in my feminine energy at the moment so....help? 😉 💜
August 31st, 2023 03:59
Whatever Happened to Miriam
LIZ said:
Isn\'t cornucopia known as the horn of plenty...or something like that? At first, I was like....who is this Miriam person...and you saw her naked? Nah! 😆 But the title made me think of the transgender Miriam Rivera who died years ago. My mind\'s all over the place! Thank you for that...LOL. 💜
August 31st, 2023 03:13
LIZ said:
Isn\'t cornucopia known as the horn of plenty...or something like that? At first, I was like....who is this Miriam person...and you saw her naked? Nah! 😆 But the title made me think of the transgender Miriam Rivera who died years ago. My mind\'s all over the place! Thank you for that...LOL. 💜
August 31st, 2023 03:13
The Making of a Single Murmuration
Bella Shepard said:
A secret orchard, a murmuration of starlings, for they are the only ones that do this, is as unique as this beautiful poem. You have described a visual treat and brought it to life, line by line. This has to be read aloud, for the syllables drip from the tongue like honey.
August 30th, 2023 14:58
Bella Shepard said:
A secret orchard, a murmuration of starlings, for they are the only ones that do this, is as unique as this beautiful poem. You have described a visual treat and brought it to life, line by line. This has to be read aloud, for the syllables drip from the tongue like honey.
August 30th, 2023 14:58
The Making of a Single Murmuration
Caring dove said:
Lovely way with words .. I liked reading your poem )
August 30th, 2023 10:29
Caring dove said:
Lovely way with words .. I liked reading your poem )
August 30th, 2023 10:29
The Making of a Single Murmuration
Doggerel Dave said:
Did they nick your fruit? A coordinated attack?
August 30th, 2023 06:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Did they nick your fruit? A coordinated attack?
August 30th, 2023 06:24
Once Upon Her Night Scented Garden
Dove said:
A beautiful piece to sway my heart. The smells of flowers permeate through my senses, my eyes can imagine the beauty before you. .. Awesome job. Hope your vision is better
August 30th, 2023 06:01
Dove said:
A beautiful piece to sway my heart. The smells of flowers permeate through my senses, my eyes can imagine the beauty before you. .. Awesome job. Hope your vision is better
August 30th, 2023 06:01
The Making of a Single Murmuration
LIZ said:
Mmmm.....an invitation? Like starlings do? I\'m guessing you\'ve seen it, because it would be hard to describe if you haven\'t. They protect each other! Loved this! 💜
August 30th, 2023 02:01
LIZ said:
Mmmm.....an invitation? Like starlings do? I\'m guessing you\'ve seen it, because it would be hard to describe if you haven\'t. They protect each other! Loved this! 💜
August 30th, 2023 02:01
The Making of a Single Murmuration
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Can ya beat some murmurisation?! :)
August 30th, 2023 01:40
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Can ya beat some murmurisation?! :)
August 30th, 2023 01:40
Bang Goes Another Theory
Bella Shepard said:
You evoke in this poem a feeling I struggle to put into words, unsettling and worthy of contemplation. We constantly hunger for more, but never truly know what that might be. It leaves an empty feeling amidst all that we discard. I may be way off, but I so loved the mental exercise. This poem leaves me right on the cusp of a thought....... This is superb!
August 29th, 2023 13:17
Bella Shepard said:
You evoke in this poem a feeling I struggle to put into words, unsettling and worthy of contemplation. We constantly hunger for more, but never truly know what that might be. It leaves an empty feeling amidst all that we discard. I may be way off, but I so loved the mental exercise. This poem leaves me right on the cusp of a thought....... This is superb!
August 29th, 2023 13:17
Bang Goes Another Theory
Doggerel Dave said:
Hope springs eternal......so it just can continue to.......
Yep - no doubt about it....I\'ve checked again.....
August 29th, 2023 08:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Hope springs eternal......so it just can continue to.......
Yep - no doubt about it....I\'ve checked again.....
August 29th, 2023 08:29
Bang Goes Another Theory
LIZ said:
Yes, I do get the magnitude of it, and how much discipline it takes. As always, your title is killer!! Nice!💜
August 29th, 2023 06:42
LIZ said:
Yes, I do get the magnitude of it, and how much discipline it takes. As always, your title is killer!! Nice!💜
August 29th, 2023 06:42
Bang Goes Another Theory
orchidee said:
It\'s OK for some with their ampules - can ya beat them?
I\'m talking utter nonsense - no change there then, 99% of the time! lol.
August 29th, 2023 02:01
orchidee said:
It\'s OK for some with their ampules - can ya beat them?
I\'m talking utter nonsense - no change there then, 99% of the time! lol.
August 29th, 2023 02:01
A Slice of Sky
Goldfinch60 said:
But Autumn, my favourite time of the year, comes first.
Andy
Enjoy yourself up t\'north.
August 25th, 2023 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
But Autumn, my favourite time of the year, comes first.
Andy
Enjoy yourself up t\'north.
August 25th, 2023 02:24
A Slice of Sky
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, my wise friend
we must cherish
that gifted nature aesthetic
in our now of verdant sublime
and rainbow winged skies...
as far too soon
it will be grey, brooding clouds
once again..
still variety, does add to flavour
in life
August 25th, 2023 01:29
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, my wise friend
we must cherish
that gifted nature aesthetic
in our now of verdant sublime
and rainbow winged skies...
as far too soon
it will be grey, brooding clouds
once again..
still variety, does add to flavour
in life
August 25th, 2023 01:29
Mused
L. B. Mek said:
probably the reason why dead poet\'s reign..
your Time will come, dear Poet supreme!
glad I get to say, i knew him before
they gave him his flowers, belatedly..
soar high my friend, till
you block out their sun
and force them
to acknowledge your humanitarian
legacy
and your poetry\'s, timeless poignancy
August 25th, 2023 01:25
L. B. Mek said:
probably the reason why dead poet\'s reign..
your Time will come, dear Poet supreme!
glad I get to say, i knew him before
they gave him his flowers, belatedly..
soar high my friend, till
you block out their sun
and force them
to acknowledge your humanitarian
legacy
and your poetry\'s, timeless poignancy
August 25th, 2023 01:25
A Moment of Enlightenment
L. B. Mek said:
lol
zen in, zen out
karate kid\'s got nothing
on a poet, sincere
(thanks for the chuckle)
August 25th, 2023 01:20
L. B. Mek said:
lol
zen in, zen out
karate kid\'s got nothing
on a poet, sincere
(thanks for the chuckle)
August 25th, 2023 01:20
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