Comments received on poems by Neville
No More Blues for These Tired Eyes
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Poignant, endearing, blue. A craftwork sir. May all be with your sight.
June 21st, 2023 12:23
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Poignant, endearing, blue. A craftwork sir. May all be with your sight.
June 21st, 2023 12:23
What is Wrong With This Tongue
orchidee said:
Nowt wrong with ya tongue in spouting some good lines again - welcome back! lol.
June 21st, 2023 10:34
orchidee said:
Nowt wrong with ya tongue in spouting some good lines again - welcome back! lol.
June 21st, 2023 10:34
What is Wrong With This Tongue
Jeffrey Weese said:
This poem is a skillful testament to the power of desire and the tangible emptiness left by an absent loved one, creating a deeply affecting and intensely intimate experience for the reader.
June 21st, 2023 07:36
Jeffrey Weese said:
This poem is a skillful testament to the power of desire and the tangible emptiness left by an absent loved one, creating a deeply affecting and intensely intimate experience for the reader.
June 21st, 2023 07:36
What is Wrong With This Tongue
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
Welcome back.
A wonderful surprise.
I’m wondering if you’re asking yourself,
“What about my poem?”
There’s a lot to unravel…
Laura🌻
June 21st, 2023 06:37
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
Welcome back.
A wonderful surprise.
I’m wondering if you’re asking yourself,
“What about my poem?”
There’s a lot to unravel…
Laura🌻
June 21st, 2023 06:37
Back in the Day
L. B. Mek said:
(our senses, may be
the most loyal thing about us
how
even after memory, begins to forget
a smell, can have us swimming
in scenes, reliving
that which we thought was lost to us
forever...)
simply Brilliant Hyung
dripping with melancholic realism
such a relatable read
June 19th, 2023 01:17
L. B. Mek said:
(our senses, may be
the most loyal thing about us
how
even after memory, begins to forget
a smell, can have us swimming
in scenes, reliving
that which we thought was lost to us
forever...)
simply Brilliant Hyung
dripping with melancholic realism
such a relatable read
June 19th, 2023 01:17
Himawari - Sunflower
L. B. Mek said:
\'He shone
and brightly so ..\'
indeed you do, oh graceful wordsmith
Beautiful imagery, such brevity
a deep, meaningful write
thank you! Hyung
June 12th, 2023 02:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'He shone
and brightly so ..\'
indeed you do, oh graceful wordsmith
Beautiful imagery, such brevity
a deep, meaningful write
thank you! Hyung
June 12th, 2023 02:41
No More Blues for These Tired Eyes
jarcher54 said:
We all need our occasional Neville fix... I\'m already getting the shakes. Love you man.
June 9th, 2023 02:05
jarcher54 said:
We all need our occasional Neville fix... I\'m already getting the shakes. Love you man.
June 9th, 2023 02:05
Uber Brides
Bella Shepard said:
I suppose the journey can determine the destination, whatever it may hold in store. A lovely, touching write my friend.
June 3rd, 2023 12:17
Bella Shepard said:
I suppose the journey can determine the destination, whatever it may hold in store. A lovely, touching write my friend.
June 3rd, 2023 12:17
No More Blues for These Tired Eyes
Parisab said:
Your words have the gift of sight,
May all your senses be right.
June 3rd, 2023 00:02
Parisab said:
Your words have the gift of sight,
May all your senses be right.
June 3rd, 2023 00:02
No More Blues for These Tired Eyes
L. B. Mek said:
dear Hope,
I write to renew my subscription
I tried shopping in-person, but the market stalls
are empty...
(your insights
are my introspection\'s
guiding mantra)
absolutely love this Hyung
beautiful in tone
and empathetic eloquence
May 29th, 2023 02:11
L. B. Mek said:
dear Hope,
I write to renew my subscription
I tried shopping in-person, but the market stalls
are empty...
(your insights
are my introspection\'s
guiding mantra)
absolutely love this Hyung
beautiful in tone
and empathetic eloquence
May 29th, 2023 02:11
Blame It On the Fall
rhmn_7 said:
Autumn is the most colorful time of the year and it does so by killing nature, so it deserves to be blamed :)
May 28th, 2023 15:54
rhmn_7 said:
Autumn is the most colorful time of the year and it does so by killing nature, so it deserves to be blamed :)
May 28th, 2023 15:54
No More Blues for These Tired Eyes
Bella Shepard said:
I googled NAAOIN, a condition I was not aware of, and am saddened to think that this has afflicted you. While your vision may be affected, your words are always strong and vibrant. God bless dear friend, hoping for the very best for you.
May 27th, 2023 13:47
Bella Shepard said:
I googled NAAOIN, a condition I was not aware of, and am saddened to think that this has afflicted you. While your vision may be affected, your words are always strong and vibrant. God bless dear friend, hoping for the very best for you.
May 27th, 2023 13:47
No More Blues for These Tired Eyes
Christina8 said:
Rather sad but intriguing write. I had hoped your eyes were better. Its one of our senses that a lot of folks take for granted.....not me! Wonderful write..x
May 27th, 2023 08:06
Christina8 said:
Rather sad but intriguing write. I had hoped your eyes were better. Its one of our senses that a lot of folks take for granted.....not me! Wonderful write..x
May 27th, 2023 08:06
No More Blues for These Tired Eyes
arqios said:
Prayers and warmest regards. I\'ve had problems as well on and off and it could be the hypertensive fluctuation as even my prescription lenses at such times are quite useless and even bothersome.
May 27th, 2023 07:57
arqios said:
Prayers and warmest regards. I\'ve had problems as well on and off and it could be the hypertensive fluctuation as even my prescription lenses at such times are quite useless and even bothersome.
May 27th, 2023 07:57
No More Blues for These Tired Eyes
Bobby O said:
There is not a response that first visit trite. I would freaking hate if forced into that compromise. My best thoughts sent in your direction and and my best energy trained to future blessed with all repair.
May 27th, 2023 05:47
Bobby O said:
There is not a response that first visit trite. I would freaking hate if forced into that compromise. My best thoughts sent in your direction and and my best energy trained to future blessed with all repair.
May 27th, 2023 05:47
Blame It On the Fall
Christina8 said:
Yes, autumn is the perfect scapegoat as the impending doom of winter is near....x
May 26th, 2023 06:47
Christina8 said:
Yes, autumn is the perfect scapegoat as the impending doom of winter is near....x
May 26th, 2023 06:47
At Least to the Moon and Back
Christina8 said:
Absolutely beautiful and I\'m sure heartfelt. Great poem!!
May 26th, 2023 06:42
Christina8 said:
Absolutely beautiful and I\'m sure heartfelt. Great poem!!
May 26th, 2023 06:42
Uber Brides
Christina8 said:
Clever poem, N! IDK how people can have such marriages but they are probably just as fast as an Uber!
May 26th, 2023 06:41
Christina8 said:
Clever poem, N! IDK how people can have such marriages but they are probably just as fast as an Uber!
May 26th, 2023 06:41
Uber Brides
L. B. Mek said:
love, an Uber ride
we never want to end
whatever the price...
(a wonderful shorty, Hyung
a dip in-to urban fantasy)
May 26th, 2023 02:23
L. B. Mek said:
love, an Uber ride
we never want to end
whatever the price...
(a wonderful shorty, Hyung
a dip in-to urban fantasy)
May 26th, 2023 02:23
At Least to the Moon and Back
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(many a poetic mind
will live, these words
come summer\'s end
and holiday escapades
revert
back, to that daily grind
where hugs and shared
smiles
afford us, those anchors
we grasp
to survive our life\'s winters)
poetic brevity, encased
in your masterful subtlety
my friend
May 26th, 2023 02:19
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(many a poetic mind
will live, these words
come summer\'s end
and holiday escapades
revert
back, to that daily grind
where hugs and shared
smiles
afford us, those anchors
we grasp
to survive our life\'s winters)
poetic brevity, encased
in your masterful subtlety
my friend
May 26th, 2023 02:19
Blame It On the Fall
L. B. Mek said:
it\'s that enticing lull of crunch
beneath our feet
that melancholic duality of beauty
vying for our affection
while we witness that bronzing
of a year\'s last hurrah
season..
tugs at those embers, in our hearts
where we try to keep alive
that we know, we can never reverse
to how it was, before...
(love this, I so relate
dear Poet supreme)
May 26th, 2023 02:12
L. B. Mek said:
it\'s that enticing lull of crunch
beneath our feet
that melancholic duality of beauty
vying for our affection
while we witness that bronzing
of a year\'s last hurrah
season..
tugs at those embers, in our hearts
where we try to keep alive
that we know, we can never reverse
to how it was, before...
(love this, I so relate
dear Poet supreme)
May 26th, 2023 02:12
Unfortunately Yours
L. B. Mek said:
such a wonderful title
\'parting is such sweet sorrow\'
comes to mind, when reading
these fine words my friend
love the tone n flow
May 26th, 2023 02:06
L. B. Mek said:
such a wonderful title
\'parting is such sweet sorrow\'
comes to mind, when reading
these fine words my friend
love the tone n flow
May 26th, 2023 02:06
Uber Brides
orchidee said:
I thought this was about you waiting for a bus - the No.7 bus. Destination!
May 26th, 2023 01:58
orchidee said:
I thought this was about you waiting for a bus - the No.7 bus. Destination!
May 26th, 2023 01:58
Uber Brides
Goldfinch60 said:
Your destination is there for you both to complete in love Neville.
Andy
May 26th, 2023 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Your destination is there for you both to complete in love Neville.
Andy
May 26th, 2023 01:51
Uber Brides
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem serves as a poignant reminder of the enduring power of human resilience and the need for genuine, lasting connections in an ever-changing world.
May 26th, 2023 01:25
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem serves as a poignant reminder of the enduring power of human resilience and the need for genuine, lasting connections in an ever-changing world.
May 26th, 2023 01:25
At Least to the Moon and Back
Bella Shepard said:
What could be more beautiful than undying love? Simply and eleglantly written!
May 25th, 2023 13:09
Bella Shepard said:
What could be more beautiful than undying love? Simply and eleglantly written!
May 25th, 2023 13:09
At Least to the Moon and Back
arqios said:
Now that is really something to always go back to!
May 25th, 2023 08:35
arqios said:
Now that is really something to always go back to!
May 25th, 2023 08:35
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