Comments received on poems by Neville
Too Many Maybe’s
L. B. Mek said:
I like perhaps over maybe
one foot out of the door
if they ask me to come in
i can cut my leg off
save some of me from the ensuing
inevitability
I am weary of full tables
and laughter full smiles
hunger scenes seem more natural
less questions needed
like, who died to gift us this
restaurant silver
like
why that waiter is limping
one legged like me
like
maybe, it\'s those
with perhaps holes of self
who can feel life\'s
gust of wind blades...
yeah
I\'m with you Hyung..
save your maybe\'s
I\'ll stay by the gutter of perhaps
save myself a few body blows...
September 22nd, 2023 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
I like perhaps over maybe
one foot out of the door
if they ask me to come in
i can cut my leg off
save some of me from the ensuing
inevitability
I am weary of full tables
and laughter full smiles
hunger scenes seem more natural
less questions needed
like, who died to gift us this
restaurant silver
like
why that waiter is limping
one legged like me
like
maybe, it\'s those
with perhaps holes of self
who can feel life\'s
gust of wind blades...
yeah
I\'m with you Hyung..
save your maybe\'s
I\'ll stay by the gutter of perhaps
save myself a few body blows...
September 22nd, 2023 04:17
Accumulations
LIZ said:
Neville, Neville, Neville!! UFFFFF! Changing the narrative.....after everything....after the pile of....experiences...all of it...it\'s used to create...that special One! 💜
September 22nd, 2023 03:34
LIZ said:
Neville, Neville, Neville!! UFFFFF! Changing the narrative.....after everything....after the pile of....experiences...all of it...it\'s used to create...that special One! 💜
September 22nd, 2023 03:34
Accumulations
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I read this a few times and each time it got more and more fabulous although she sounds like a man eater i do love the last stanza, nothing wrong with changing history makes it all a bit more exciting. I had a chuckle darling Nev. ❤️
September 22nd, 2023 03:14
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I read this a few times and each time it got more and more fabulous although she sounds like a man eater i do love the last stanza, nothing wrong with changing history makes it all a bit more exciting. I had a chuckle darling Nev. ❤️
September 22nd, 2023 03:14
Accumulations
orchidee said:
I don\'t wanna bring any more trouts into the world with KP - the last line of your poem! 😁
September 22nd, 2023 02:17
orchidee said:
I don\'t wanna bring any more trouts into the world with KP - the last line of your poem! 😁
September 22nd, 2023 02:17
Upon Those Words She Chose to Leave Behind
Goldfinch60 said:
Words can be so decimating to one\'s mind Neville and can be forever with us, I hope they do not stay.
Andy
September 22nd, 2023 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Words can be so decimating to one\'s mind Neville and can be forever with us, I hope they do not stay.
Andy
September 22nd, 2023 00:39
Upon Those Words She Chose to Leave Behind
MendedFences27 said:
Sounds like the final conquest of them all, \"While quaffing each last drop of them,\" \" I squeeze that last drop of poison in.\" Vengeance is sweet. Is there anything to be gained by this action or is it just a craving? A dark tale of desired retribution. - Phil A.
September 21st, 2023 11:24
MendedFences27 said:
Sounds like the final conquest of them all, \"While quaffing each last drop of them,\" \" I squeeze that last drop of poison in.\" Vengeance is sweet. Is there anything to be gained by this action or is it just a craving? A dark tale of desired retribution. - Phil A.
September 21st, 2023 11:24
Upon Those Words She Chose to Leave Behind
Doggerel Dave said:
My goodness golly gosh they must\'ve solved it for you above (if indeed there were anything needed to be solved or for that matter resolved), The freedom which must now cloak your shoulders in lieu of the abreactive state which lead to this confession.... ist gut? (don\'t push it, pal - I don\'t speak no uther lingo but Anglo sort of...)....
September 21st, 2023 04:55
Doggerel Dave said:
My goodness golly gosh they must\'ve solved it for you above (if indeed there were anything needed to be solved or for that matter resolved), The freedom which must now cloak your shoulders in lieu of the abreactive state which lead to this confession.... ist gut? (don\'t push it, pal - I don\'t speak no uther lingo but Anglo sort of...)....
September 21st, 2023 04:55
Upon Those Words She Chose to Leave Behind
LIZ said:
Wow!!! A little dark Neville! I love it! And, so true....some words can cut your heart, leaving you bleeding all over the place!! Can make the strongest person bend! That damn poison! 💜
September 21st, 2023 03:31
LIZ said:
Wow!!! A little dark Neville! I love it! And, so true....some words can cut your heart, leaving you bleeding all over the place!! Can make the strongest person bend! That damn poison! 💜
September 21st, 2023 03:31
Upon Those Words She Chose to Leave Behind
Teddy.15 said:
Words can surely hurt dear Nev. Sometimes stay inside us for a very long time, until they no longer ring in our ears. 💖
September 21st, 2023 02:30
Teddy.15 said:
Words can surely hurt dear Nev. Sometimes stay inside us for a very long time, until they no longer ring in our ears. 💖
September 21st, 2023 02:30
When Last Seen She Was Holding on Tightly
Neville said:
Thank you Max and without wishing to repeat my self, the answer is yes .. 😎🍷cheers 👍
September 20th, 2023 07:51
Neville said:
Thank you Max and without wishing to repeat my self, the answer is yes .. 😎🍷cheers 👍
September 20th, 2023 07:51
When Last Seen She Was Holding on Tightly
orchidee said:
Ahh, so you\'ve met KP, and she told you one of her adventures. lol.
September 20th, 2023 02:04
orchidee said:
Ahh, so you\'ve met KP, and she told you one of her adventures. lol.
September 20th, 2023 02:04
When Last Seen She Was Holding on Tightly
Goldfinch60 said:
Heave away indeed Neville.
\"Show a leg!\"
Andy
September 20th, 2023 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Heave away indeed Neville.
\"Show a leg!\"
Andy
September 20th, 2023 01:51
Too Many Maybe’s
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe that perhaps will be with you soon Neville.
Andy
September 20th, 2023 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe that perhaps will be with you soon Neville.
Andy
September 20th, 2023 01:14
When Last Seen She Was Holding on Tightly
Teddy.15 said:
Some how I\'m visioning New York Sounds like fleet week, when the sailors come home to visit. ❤️
September 20th, 2023 01:03
Teddy.15 said:
Some how I\'m visioning New York Sounds like fleet week, when the sailors come home to visit. ❤️
September 20th, 2023 01:03
When Last Seen She Was Holding on Tightly
Doggerel Dave said:
Oo arr Jim, she be knowing what t\'is all about - look, the evidence be in her arrrms...
If she goes with \'em she won\'t have much use for her attire...could I have it ? (You never know your luck in a big city come Saturday night....)
Definitely smelt the salt and fresh breeze there, Neville.
September 20th, 2023 00:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Oo arr Jim, she be knowing what t\'is all about - look, the evidence be in her arrrms...
If she goes with \'em she won\'t have much use for her attire...could I have it ? (You never know your luck in a big city come Saturday night....)
Definitely smelt the salt and fresh breeze there, Neville.
September 20th, 2023 00:33
Too Many Maybe’s
Christina8 said:
This is a cute little shortie. Perhaps I like it a lot!
September 19th, 2023 08:03
Christina8 said:
This is a cute little shortie. Perhaps I like it a lot!
September 19th, 2023 08:03
Too Many Maybe’s
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot\'s this - a confessional?
You laying on a couch while another trickcyclist listens intently (or however youse do it........)
Worth a ponder, though.....
September 19th, 2023 04:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot\'s this - a confessional?
You laying on a couch while another trickcyclist listens intently (or however youse do it........)
Worth a ponder, though.....
September 19th, 2023 04:35
Too Many Maybe’s
LIZ said:
Perhaps.....the answer has always been right in front of your eyes!! 💜
September 19th, 2023 03:36
LIZ said:
Perhaps.....the answer has always been right in front of your eyes!! 💜
September 19th, 2023 03:36
Too Many Maybe’s
Bobby O said:
Like he could carry all that indecision but he had no chance to haul it.
September 19th, 2023 02:20
Bobby O said:
Like he could carry all that indecision but he had no chance to haul it.
September 19th, 2023 02:20
Too Many Maybe’s
orchidee said:
Maybe, perhaps, possibly, not sure, could be, hmm, bit doubtful, can\'t be certain, etc, blah, blah, that this is a good write N. Enough waffling from me!
September 19th, 2023 01:49
orchidee said:
Maybe, perhaps, possibly, not sure, could be, hmm, bit doubtful, can\'t be certain, etc, blah, blah, that this is a good write N. Enough waffling from me!
September 19th, 2023 01:49
Too Many Maybe’s
Teddy.15 said:
Perhaps in fact I am sure this is Beautiful. ❤️
September 19th, 2023 01:45
Teddy.15 said:
Perhaps in fact I am sure this is Beautiful. ❤️
September 19th, 2023 01:45
Mary
Bella Shepard said:
It seems the aftermath of tragedy, in which this mysterious Mary dwells. A quiet reflection and perhaps renewal of hope? You treat this with kind, gentle hands and mold it beautifully.
September 18th, 2023 14:39
Bella Shepard said:
It seems the aftermath of tragedy, in which this mysterious Mary dwells. A quiet reflection and perhaps renewal of hope? You treat this with kind, gentle hands and mold it beautifully.
September 18th, 2023 14:39
Mary
Neville said:
Thanks for taking time to consider these stacked words Phil your visits and ongoing encouragement are always welcome and appreciated .. Neville
September 18th, 2023 11:49
Neville said:
Thanks for taking time to consider these stacked words Phil your visits and ongoing encouragement are always welcome and appreciated .. Neville
September 18th, 2023 11:49
Mary
MendedFences27 said:
Mede me think of a recovering war-torn village or city church. Some can find belief in any form when survival is at stake. A very succinct presentation of images and leaving behind the question of faith.
\"an extra penny in the collection box\" - brings us all back down to Earth. Faith is what you make it. - Phil A.
September 18th, 2023 11:34
MendedFences27 said:
Mede me think of a recovering war-torn village or city church. Some can find belief in any form when survival is at stake. A very succinct presentation of images and leaving behind the question of faith.
\"an extra penny in the collection box\" - brings us all back down to Earth. Faith is what you make it. - Phil A.
September 18th, 2023 11:34
Mary
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m going for context (I\'m in a contextual mood today)... Wasn\'t (broken windows) just after the dissolution of the monasteries or something, was it........??
September 18th, 2023 04:56
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m going for context (I\'m in a contextual mood today)... Wasn\'t (broken windows) just after the dissolution of the monasteries or something, was it........??
September 18th, 2023 04:56
Down in The Hold
Neville said:
I am near overcome with gratitude Mek thank you brother and then some .. Neville
September 18th, 2023 04:10
Neville said:
I am near overcome with gratitude Mek thank you brother and then some .. Neville
September 18th, 2023 04:10
When All Said and Done it’s All Over
Neville said:
External influences infiltrated my pen .. thanks again my friend 😎👍
September 18th, 2023 04:05
Neville said:
External influences infiltrated my pen .. thanks again my friend 😎👍
September 18th, 2023 04:05
Mary
Bobby O said:
Held fast tween
grey space
and golden rays ..
What a great way to paint an image. Just like King Kong, you got it goin on!
September 18th, 2023 03:16
Bobby O said:
Held fast tween
grey space
and golden rays ..
What a great way to paint an image. Just like King Kong, you got it goin on!
September 18th, 2023 03:16
Mary
L. B. Mek said:
wording!
a thousand people write the same story
but rarely
deliver it with the distilled brevity and eloquence
of a True poet, like you:
\'Held fast tween
grey space
and golden rays ..
Those that
yet survived
to shine
through broken
stained glass\'
Thank you! what Poetic treats you served this morning..
(hope you n yours have a peaceful week Hyung
my thoughts are with her 🙏)
September 18th, 2023 02:45
L. B. Mek said:
wording!
a thousand people write the same story
but rarely
deliver it with the distilled brevity and eloquence
of a True poet, like you:
\'Held fast tween
grey space
and golden rays ..
Those that
yet survived
to shine
through broken
stained glass\'
Thank you! what Poetic treats you served this morning..
(hope you n yours have a peaceful week Hyung
my thoughts are with her 🙏)
September 18th, 2023 02:45
Mary
LIZ said:
Ah Neville! I don\'t know whether this is derived from a personal memory or, just an observation. Regardless, it took me to church!! I don\'t know why. By the way, that\'s my mom\'s name! 💜
September 18th, 2023 02:40
LIZ said:
Ah Neville! I don\'t know whether this is derived from a personal memory or, just an observation. Regardless, it took me to church!! I don\'t know why. By the way, that\'s my mom\'s name! 💜
September 18th, 2023 02:40
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