Comments received on poems by Neville
The Most Perfect Love
Bella Shepard said:
As the song says \"Love is a many Splendored thing\", and you have captured the essence of it so beautifully in this poem. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.
January 1st, 2023 12:06
Bella Shepard said:
As the song says \"Love is a many Splendored thing\", and you have captured the essence of it so beautifully in this poem. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.
January 1st, 2023 12:06
The Most Perfect Love
Fay Slimm. said:
The perfection of loving relationships so expertly here captured brings me near tears - - a sigh of a read for the first day of new year - -thanks most dearly for sharing these lines Nev.
January 1st, 2023 06:23
Fay Slimm. said:
The perfection of loving relationships so expertly here captured brings me near tears - - a sigh of a read for the first day of new year - -thanks most dearly for sharing these lines Nev.
January 1st, 2023 06:23
When We Were Hot
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nice writing .. especially like the last line ‘ furnace bright ‘ that’s lovely
December 31st, 2022 17:01
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nice writing .. especially like the last line ‘ furnace bright ‘ that’s lovely
December 31st, 2022 17:01
When We Were Hot
Bella Shepard said:
\"Hot and furnace bright\", what could be more wonderful. To have such memories kept within the mind and heart, is to have a place where one does not grow old, and love is forever young. Beautiful my dear friend.
December 31st, 2022 15:23
Bella Shepard said:
\"Hot and furnace bright\", what could be more wonderful. To have such memories kept within the mind and heart, is to have a place where one does not grow old, and love is forever young. Beautiful my dear friend.
December 31st, 2022 15:23
When We Were Hot
arqios said:
The hotness takes on a variant characteristic at other life stages. But those ones in the memory bank they are the golden recollections.
December 31st, 2022 05:41
arqios said:
The hotness takes on a variant characteristic at other life stages. But those ones in the memory bank they are the golden recollections.
December 31st, 2022 05:41
When We Were Hot
orchidee said:
Hot? Fido is about to save me from a swoon! lol.
December 31st, 2022 03:03
orchidee said:
Hot? Fido is about to save me from a swoon! lol.
December 31st, 2022 03:03
What Wasted Words They Proved Themselves to Be
Goldfinch60 said:
I often wonder what happened to the words I did not use Neville.
Andy
December 31st, 2022 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
I often wonder what happened to the words I did not use Neville.
Andy
December 31st, 2022 02:53
When We Were Hot
Goldfinch60 said:
Those days will never be forgotten Neville.
Andy
December 31st, 2022 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Those days will never be forgotten Neville.
Andy
December 31st, 2022 02:45
When We Were Hot
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah those were the days mon ami eh ? - - - nothing like love to keep winter at bay and you pen the heat of it to sheer perfection.
December 31st, 2022 01:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah those were the days mon ami eh ? - - - nothing like love to keep winter at bay and you pen the heat of it to sheer perfection.
December 31st, 2022 01:10
What a Bloody Waste
Bella Shepard said:
The tragic irony of this poem, is that it highlights the absurdity of life. Here is a prime example, well written dear friend.
December 30th, 2022 17:49
Bella Shepard said:
The tragic irony of this poem, is that it highlights the absurdity of life. Here is a prime example, well written dear friend.
December 30th, 2022 17:49
What Wasted Words They Proved Themselves to Be
Fay Slimm. said:
Your verse says it plainly to scribes who steal words or lines. Words when written have a life of their own and if authentic will attract most readers - applause for your last lines especially Nev - poets who plagiarise certainly do not deserve disciples............x
December 30th, 2022 17:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Your verse says it plainly to scribes who steal words or lines. Words when written have a life of their own and if authentic will attract most readers - applause for your last lines especially Nev - poets who plagiarise certainly do not deserve disciples............x
December 30th, 2022 17:34
What Wasted Words They Proved Themselves to Be
orchidee said:
To incur wrath of poets, go plagiarising.... A guy even had the nerve to post his own pic alongside a poem he nicked!
Poets responses were generally on the lines of: \'You (*&^^$£@!^%$\'}[&\'
Don\'t translate that, says Fido!
December 30th, 2022 06:47
orchidee said:
To incur wrath of poets, go plagiarising.... A guy even had the nerve to post his own pic alongside a poem he nicked!
Poets responses were generally on the lines of: \'You (*&^^$£@!^%$\'}[&\'
Don\'t translate that, says Fido!
December 30th, 2022 06:47
What a Bloody Waste
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a sad tale Neville, has the lady been troubled after this?
Andy
December 30th, 2022 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a sad tale Neville, has the lady been troubled after this?
Andy
December 30th, 2022 02:51
What a Bloody Waste
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - what a shocking and tragic account of growing numbers who attempt the same end and so often today bring it off - -except for those who live to tell their tale eh ? - -- I am left sighing deeply at your final lines Nev.
December 29th, 2022 10:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - what a shocking and tragic account of growing numbers who attempt the same end and so often today bring it off - -except for those who live to tell their tale eh ? - -- I am left sighing deeply at your final lines Nev.
December 29th, 2022 10:53
From the Cradle to a Grave
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope the credits in my life show others the way Neville.
Andy
December 29th, 2022 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope the credits in my life show others the way Neville.
Andy
December 29th, 2022 02:47
From the Cradle to a Grave
Fay Slimm. said:
Quite understandable questions Nev. when life offers so little time to so many -- - waiting with hope at heart seems the best way too an enjoyable experience of cradle to grave - - methinks...........x
December 28th, 2022 10:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Quite understandable questions Nev. when life offers so little time to so many -- - waiting with hope at heart seems the best way too an enjoyable experience of cradle to grave - - methinks...........x
December 28th, 2022 10:53
From the Cradle to a Grave
orchidee said:
Ain\'t no credit for KP, except botox! lol.
December 28th, 2022 05:58
orchidee said:
Ain\'t no credit for KP, except botox! lol.
December 28th, 2022 05:58
So What Does Your Father Do
Goldfinch60 said:
My dad worked in local government and was one of Natures Gentleman who brought the love of live and the love of music to my life.
Andy
December 28th, 2022 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
My dad worked in local government and was one of Natures Gentleman who brought the love of live and the love of music to my life.
Andy
December 28th, 2022 01:30
So What Does Your Father Do
Fay Slimm. said:
My father was a radio boffin who owned a few shops but we never saw much of him - - my Mum worked with deciphering numbers and shone in her field of (pre-computer) Comptometer programming- - -never saw much of her either so brother and I were Grandma reared - -- - oooh hope I haven\'t gone way off your question - -- memories come flooding at this time of year ................x.
December 27th, 2022 13:31
Fay Slimm. said:
My father was a radio boffin who owned a few shops but we never saw much of him - - my Mum worked with deciphering numbers and shone in her field of (pre-computer) Comptometer programming- - -never saw much of her either so brother and I were Grandma reared - -- - oooh hope I haven\'t gone way off your question - -- memories come flooding at this time of year ................x.
December 27th, 2022 13:31
Taken From the Diary of a Contented Man
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, being a happy man is so fulfilling.
Andy
December 27th, 2022 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, being a happy man is so fulfilling.
Andy
December 27th, 2022 02:21
Taken From the Diary of a Contented Man
Accidental Poet said:
Well, if you did die here and today, you\'d be going out at the top of your game N. But I think we\'d all like you to stick around a while longer. 😜
December 26th, 2022 17:40
Accidental Poet said:
Well, if you did die here and today, you\'d be going out at the top of your game N. But I think we\'d all like you to stick around a while longer. 😜
December 26th, 2022 17:40
Taken From the Diary of a Contented Man
Bella Shepard said:
Very wisely put my friend. Sometimes it seems that happiness creeps up on you, taps you on the shoulder and says \"This is real, embrace it\". So glad that you are in that good place and you\'ve shared this lovely thought.
December 26th, 2022 13:54
Bella Shepard said:
Very wisely put my friend. Sometimes it seems that happiness creeps up on you, taps you on the shoulder and says \"This is real, embrace it\". So glad that you are in that good place and you\'ve shared this lovely thought.
December 26th, 2022 13:54
Taken From the Diary of a Contented Man
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Meanwhile - Oh, I\'m not contented. I\'m tormented here with KP! lol.
December 26th, 2022 11:03
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Meanwhile - Oh, I\'m not contented. I\'m tormented here with KP! lol.
December 26th, 2022 11:03
Taken From the Diary of a Contented Man
Fay Slimm. said:
A lovely read. - -- Truth is no fluke and contentment is shown to mean a lot in these diary lines ending with engaging humour - - wishing similar happiness to you and to your readers throughout the new year to come dear amigo...........x
December 26th, 2022 08:36
Fay Slimm. said:
A lovely read. - -- Truth is no fluke and contentment is shown to mean a lot in these diary lines ending with engaging humour - - wishing similar happiness to you and to your readers throughout the new year to come dear amigo...........x
December 26th, 2022 08:36
Somewhere Else Maybe
Bella Shepard said:
I would say that the meaning of your poem seems obvious. However, the meaning of that meaning, which I\'m sure for you is particularly meaningful, is not as obvious and therefore less meaningful to me. That being said, it sounds a bit naughty and delicious.
December 24th, 2022 16:27
Bella Shepard said:
I would say that the meaning of your poem seems obvious. However, the meaning of that meaning, which I\'m sure for you is particularly meaningful, is not as obvious and therefore less meaningful to me. That being said, it sounds a bit naughty and delicious.
December 24th, 2022 16:27
Somewhere Else Maybe
Fay Slimm. said:
Somewhere in this read it occurred to me clearly - romantic and gently erotic - -- well maybe said I - viewed it again and thought just the same
Well mon ami call me norty but I can see your well penned gem of beguile only one way.
December 24th, 2022 10:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Somewhere in this read it occurred to me clearly - romantic and gently erotic - -- well maybe said I - viewed it again and thought just the same
Well mon ami call me norty but I can see your well penned gem of beguile only one way.
December 24th, 2022 10:29
Somewhere Else Maybe
orchidee said:
Fido won\'t let me have the \'swoony\' version of this! lol.
December 24th, 2022 04:57
orchidee said:
Fido won\'t let me have the \'swoony\' version of this! lol.
December 24th, 2022 04:57
Love Letters
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotion riddled words Neville.
Andy
December 24th, 2022 03:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotion riddled words Neville.
Andy
December 24th, 2022 03:04
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