Comments received on poems by Neville
That Afterwards Feeling
Parisab said:
The release and relief in a gentle and English fashion…
October 13th, 2023 02:18
Parisab said:
The release and relief in a gentle and English fashion…
October 13th, 2023 02:18
The Measure of a Single Year
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville and the older I get the shorter the years seem to become.
Andy
October 13th, 2023 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville and the older I get the shorter the years seem to become.
Andy
October 13th, 2023 01:05
The Measure of a Single Year
MendedFences27 said:
Someone once said, I think it was me, that, \"The only good year is the one in Yearning,\" for it gives tomorrow a reason to exist.
Your poem says, \"The making,\" and \"The length of a single year mean nothing.\" This is true as it is with all of time, what you do with it is all that matters. Loved this one. - Phil A.
October 12th, 2023 18:43
MendedFences27 said:
Someone once said, I think it was me, that, \"The only good year is the one in Yearning,\" for it gives tomorrow a reason to exist.
Your poem says, \"The making,\" and \"The length of a single year mean nothing.\" This is true as it is with all of time, what you do with it is all that matters. Loved this one. - Phil A.
October 12th, 2023 18:43
The Measure of a Single Year
SureshG said:
No, it means nothing
or is it
Yes, it means nothing
If I can’t even phrase it
It must mean NOTHING
You son ………………….
My brain is already scrambled!!!!
October 12th, 2023 08:03
SureshG said:
No, it means nothing
or is it
Yes, it means nothing
If I can’t even phrase it
It must mean NOTHING
You son ………………….
My brain is already scrambled!!!!
October 12th, 2023 08:03
The Measure of a Single Year
orchidee said:
That means next year I got an extra day with KP in leap year. Argghh! I won\'t survive it. lol.
October 12th, 2023 05:20
orchidee said:
That means next year I got an extra day with KP in leap year. Argghh! I won\'t survive it. lol.
October 12th, 2023 05:20
The Measure of a Single Year
LIZ said:
Every breath, every touch, all the kisses and the hugs!! Hard times, troubles, work and all...a lapse in time, an hour lost! The length means nothing...so we\'re told....but every moment....IS gold!! 😊😊😊 Just saying! 💜💜💜💜💜
October 12th, 2023 05:01
LIZ said:
Every breath, every touch, all the kisses and the hugs!! Hard times, troubles, work and all...a lapse in time, an hour lost! The length means nothing...so we\'re told....but every moment....IS gold!! 😊😊😊 Just saying! 💜💜💜💜💜
October 12th, 2023 05:01
The Measure of a Single Year
Teddy.15 said:
Hustle and bustle. I personally appreciate every day some are harder than others and some are simply wonderful. ❤️
October 12th, 2023 03:47
Teddy.15 said:
Hustle and bustle. I personally appreciate every day some are harder than others and some are simply wonderful. ❤️
October 12th, 2023 03:47
Me My Bro and A Chainsaw
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes Barbie should be beheaded.
Andy
October 12th, 2023 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes Barbie should be beheaded.
Andy
October 12th, 2023 01:16
Me My Bro and A Chainsaw
MendedFences27 said:
Was this before or after the visit to your local. Either way a topiary of \"Barbie\" never seems a good idea. Maybe if you could salvage the important parts and cover the rest with \"very cool pink clothing\" it might just be passable.
Why would you even attempt such a zany venture? Oh well, it made for a very humorous poem. - Phil A.
P.S. - At first, I envisioned a disaster of the proportions in Frost\'s \"Out, Out.\" thank God no one was injured. Or maybe it was just an episode of \"Only Fools and Horses.\"
October 11th, 2023 14:58
MendedFences27 said:
Was this before or after the visit to your local. Either way a topiary of \"Barbie\" never seems a good idea. Maybe if you could salvage the important parts and cover the rest with \"very cool pink clothing\" it might just be passable.
Why would you even attempt such a zany venture? Oh well, it made for a very humorous poem. - Phil A.
P.S. - At first, I envisioned a disaster of the proportions in Frost\'s \"Out, Out.\" thank God no one was injured. Or maybe it was just an episode of \"Only Fools and Horses.\"
October 11th, 2023 14:58
Me My Bro and A Chainsaw
LIZ said:
OH MY LORD! 😂😂😂😂😂 Neville!!! I just pictured barbie cut up in a lot of small pieces!! What a picture!! But ummmm...why did your bro have to get involved??? Although....nah never mind. LOL 💜💜💜
October 11th, 2023 07:55
LIZ said:
OH MY LORD! 😂😂😂😂😂 Neville!!! I just pictured barbie cut up in a lot of small pieces!! What a picture!! But ummmm...why did your bro have to get involved??? Although....nah never mind. LOL 💜💜💜
October 11th, 2023 07:55
Me My Bro and A Chainsaw
orchidee said:
Fido was OK until the last line, then he swooned! lol.
October 11th, 2023 07:17
orchidee said:
Fido was OK until the last line, then he swooned! lol.
October 11th, 2023 07:17
No Contest
Bobby O said:
So true. I used to play tournament Table Tennis and on occasion find played that claimed to have never lost. I knew immediately they had no chance to beat me because if they didn’t respect the game enough to search out and find their “level” then they preferred the comfort of fiction
October 11th, 2023 06:42
Bobby O said:
So true. I used to play tournament Table Tennis and on occasion find played that claimed to have never lost. I knew immediately they had no chance to beat me because if they didn’t respect the game enough to search out and find their “level” then they preferred the comfort of fiction
October 11th, 2023 06:42
Me My Bro and A Chainsaw
Bobby O said:
I did smile at the finish and really like how equal and aligned it placed Topiary and Barbie. Other than you and the catalyst that mixes in your mind that logical equanimity would be left forever undiscovered.
October 11th, 2023 06:28
Bobby O said:
I did smile at the finish and really like how equal and aligned it placed Topiary and Barbie. Other than you and the catalyst that mixes in your mind that logical equanimity would be left forever undiscovered.
October 11th, 2023 06:28
Me My Bro and A Chainsaw
Teddy.15 said:
LOL oh my dear Nev, you haven\'t lost your sense of humour my friend, it is well and truly stuck inside you. ❤️ ere I never liked Barbie either, chainsaw away LoL
October 11th, 2023 03:44
Teddy.15 said:
LOL oh my dear Nev, you haven\'t lost your sense of humour my friend, it is well and truly stuck inside you. ❤️ ere I never liked Barbie either, chainsaw away LoL
October 11th, 2023 03:44
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
Teddy.15 said:
Powerful. Not much of a loss though is it Nev. You are free ❤️
October 11th, 2023 02:37
Teddy.15 said:
Powerful. Not much of a loss though is it Nev. You are free ❤️
October 11th, 2023 02:37
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
Goldfinch60 said:
Betrayal can be found in many ways Neville.
Andy
October 11th, 2023 02:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Betrayal can be found in many ways Neville.
Andy
October 11th, 2023 02:32
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
Bella Shepard said:
All I can say is \"What goes around...comes around\", and it sounds like the offending party is more than deserving. Take care dear friend, you deserve way better!
October 10th, 2023 14:53
Bella Shepard said:
All I can say is \"What goes around...comes around\", and it sounds like the offending party is more than deserving. Take care dear friend, you deserve way better!
October 10th, 2023 14:53
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
MendedFences27 said:
If one was blind, they could feel more about a person than they could while sighted. A blind person hears more and, honestly, they feel more in the spoken word.
Loved your poem. It was honest and to the point. - Phil A.
October 10th, 2023 14:20
MendedFences27 said:
If one was blind, they could feel more about a person than they could while sighted. A blind person hears more and, honestly, they feel more in the spoken word.
Loved your poem. It was honest and to the point. - Phil A.
October 10th, 2023 14:20
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
orchidee said:
KP won\'t be ashamed, she will just get more publicity. Doh! Her outlook is \'me, me, me!;
October 10th, 2023 13:30
orchidee said:
KP won\'t be ashamed, she will just get more publicity. Doh! Her outlook is \'me, me, me!;
October 10th, 2023 13:30
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
LIZ said:
Need me to F somebody up? 😡 Damn! This is oozing annoyance and disrespect!! Not having it! 💜💜💜
October 10th, 2023 08:41
LIZ said:
Need me to F somebody up? 😡 Damn! This is oozing annoyance and disrespect!! Not having it! 💜💜💜
October 10th, 2023 08:41
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
Christina8 said:
It doesn\'t take eyes to see betrayal and other feelings. I hope that person feels remorse...x
October 10th, 2023 08:26
Christina8 said:
It doesn\'t take eyes to see betrayal and other feelings. I hope that person feels remorse...x
October 10th, 2023 08:26
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
Natalie Gladmir said:
I see how it boiled in your soul. It\'s a pity that this person will never be ashamed. Or maybe I\'m wrong.
October 10th, 2023 05:31
Natalie Gladmir said:
I see how it boiled in your soul. It\'s a pity that this person will never be ashamed. Or maybe I\'m wrong.
October 10th, 2023 05:31
No Contest
Goldfinch60 said:
We all struggle sometimes but we always find a way to move on Neville.
Andy
October 10th, 2023 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
We all struggle sometimes but we always find a way to move on Neville.
Andy
October 10th, 2023 01:44
The Rape of the Wreck Known As M257
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful descriptive words Neville.
Andy
October 10th, 2023 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful descriptive words Neville.
Andy
October 10th, 2023 01:42
The Sense of Something Before it is Something
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb words Neville, in time all will be found.
Andy
October 10th, 2023 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb words Neville, in time all will be found.
Andy
October 10th, 2023 01:30
Scammed
MendedFences27 said:
\"Hypocrisy, selfishness, and lies,\" way too much these days. Whatever happened to morals. Maybe we all need to do more than wish and hope, maybe then this will end, and maybe yours is the first step in the right direction. A great statement of truth. - Phil A.
October 9th, 2023 15:03
MendedFences27 said:
\"Hypocrisy, selfishness, and lies,\" way too much these days. Whatever happened to morals. Maybe we all need to do more than wish and hope, maybe then this will end, and maybe yours is the first step in the right direction. A great statement of truth. - Phil A.
October 9th, 2023 15:03
Scammed
Christina8 said:
Preach! There is definitely too much hypocrisy and lies these days..although I am lucky not to count myself among those being scammed. Great piece!
October 9th, 2023 11:59
Christina8 said:
Preach! There is definitely too much hypocrisy and lies these days..although I am lucky not to count myself among those being scammed. Great piece!
October 9th, 2023 11:59
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