Comments received on poems by Neville
Briefly Interrupted by Sleep
Bella Shepard said:
Blessed sleep, do we ever get enough of it in our world today? Quantity and quality up for grabs. Wishing you peaceful sleep whenever you can grab it. Good write dear friend!
October 5th, 2023 14:49
Bella Shepard said:
Blessed sleep, do we ever get enough of it in our world today? Quantity and quality up for grabs. Wishing you peaceful sleep whenever you can grab it. Good write dear friend!
October 5th, 2023 14:49
Briefly Interrupted by Sleep
MendedFences27 said:
A traffic light of artful intent. We squeeze a moment here, a moment there, simply for the gratification of continuing on the journey of poetic expression. Sometimes we pause long enough to pen a few lines of truthfulness. - Phil A.
October 5th, 2023 11:52
MendedFences27 said:
A traffic light of artful intent. We squeeze a moment here, a moment there, simply for the gratification of continuing on the journey of poetic expression. Sometimes we pause long enough to pen a few lines of truthfulness. - Phil A.
October 5th, 2023 11:52
Briefly Interrupted by Sleep
Pop64 said:
Sleep, the intermission between our various acts. I really like the way you identify its brief but required action as it is part of our lives. Well done!
October 5th, 2023 05:24
Pop64 said:
Sleep, the intermission between our various acts. I really like the way you identify its brief but required action as it is part of our lives. Well done!
October 5th, 2023 05:24
Briefly Interrupted by Sleep
orchidee said:
Yes - is your work part of life, or is your life part of work? as one said somewhere. Might have been me said it originally - who knows. Doh!
You staggered back in amazement at the wit of that saying? 😁
October 5th, 2023 05:05
orchidee said:
Yes - is your work part of life, or is your life part of work? as one said somewhere. Might have been me said it originally - who knows. Doh!
You staggered back in amazement at the wit of that saying? 😁
October 5th, 2023 05:05
Briefly Interrupted by Sleep
Teddy.15 said:
LOL wonderful, a cap nap of poetry. Brilliant the imagery is fab. ❤️
October 5th, 2023 04:01
Teddy.15 said:
LOL wonderful, a cap nap of poetry. Brilliant the imagery is fab. ❤️
October 5th, 2023 04:01
Briefly Interrupted by Sleep
LIZ said:
I swear your titles are amazing!! \"This is not a turning point, a parking place or reversing bay\"-- sleep really does feel like ONE SECOND sometimes. And then, back to the grind it is!! We got this though!! 💜💜💜💜💜
October 5th, 2023 03:28
LIZ said:
I swear your titles are amazing!! \"This is not a turning point, a parking place or reversing bay\"-- sleep really does feel like ONE SECOND sometimes. And then, back to the grind it is!! We got this though!! 💜💜💜💜💜
October 5th, 2023 03:28
Briefly Interrupted by Sleep
arqios said:
Oh but are we allowed to U-turn here? I often wonder.
October 5th, 2023 03:25
arqios said:
Oh but are we allowed to U-turn here? I often wonder.
October 5th, 2023 03:25
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Neville, I was hooked from the beginning.
Andy
October 5th, 2023 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Neville, I was hooked from the beginning.
Andy
October 5th, 2023 01:12
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
Bobby O said:
So so si much here to capture without proper immersion dedicated and realistic interpretive skill so I humbly will admire and truly mean that it’s a piece that could be the whole syllabus for professorial to shed light to lessers inches by inch and still need extra time !!
October 5th, 2023 01:00
Bobby O said:
So so si much here to capture without proper immersion dedicated and realistic interpretive skill so I humbly will admire and truly mean that it’s a piece that could be the whole syllabus for professorial to shed light to lessers inches by inch and still need extra time !!
October 5th, 2023 01:00
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
MendedFences27 said:
A fantasy of the highest order. An amazing tale of sexual fulfillment with an air of futuristic opulence. \"Rainbow Rooms Incorporated,\" leaves much for the reader to ponder - What of all the other colors? - What are the rules? etc.
Loved the impersonal nature of the event. Loved the whole damn thing! - Phil A. -
October 4th, 2023 20:48
MendedFences27 said:
A fantasy of the highest order. An amazing tale of sexual fulfillment with an air of futuristic opulence. \"Rainbow Rooms Incorporated,\" leaves much for the reader to ponder - What of all the other colors? - What are the rules? etc.
Loved the impersonal nature of the event. Loved the whole damn thing! - Phil A. -
October 4th, 2023 20:48
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
Bella Shepard said:
What a strange and magical room, where passions abound, and appetites quenched through the miracle of a credit card. A thrilling story, brilliant imagery, and as always, your incredible style.
October 4th, 2023 12:58
Bella Shepard said:
What a strange and magical room, where passions abound, and appetites quenched through the miracle of a credit card. A thrilling story, brilliant imagery, and as always, your incredible style.
October 4th, 2023 12:58
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
Pop64 said:
Damn! This is a story, a compilation of a setting, cast, subject, finale, it had it all! Exciting? Yes, all built up to a remarkable climax and an ending that revealed the truth of the white room. Marvelous work!
October 4th, 2023 07:40
Pop64 said:
Damn! This is a story, a compilation of a setting, cast, subject, finale, it had it all! Exciting? Yes, all built up to a remarkable climax and an ending that revealed the truth of the white room. Marvelous work!
October 4th, 2023 07:40
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
Teddy.15 said:
An extraordinary piece here the imagery I hope never to see inside that white room. Fabulous Neville. A beautiful ending kudos on all the imagery. ❤️
October 4th, 2023 05:34
Teddy.15 said:
An extraordinary piece here the imagery I hope never to see inside that white room. Fabulous Neville. A beautiful ending kudos on all the imagery. ❤️
October 4th, 2023 05:34
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I can\'t remember which one it was:
Was KP wet and windswept cos I left her outdoors in a storm?
OR did we arrive too late at the Rainbow Rooms, cos I put our watches back 3 hours on purpose?! heehee.
It\'s nutty adventures ya know. 😁
October 4th, 2023 04:25
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I can\'t remember which one it was:
Was KP wet and windswept cos I left her outdoors in a storm?
OR did we arrive too late at the Rainbow Rooms, cos I put our watches back 3 hours on purpose?! heehee.
It\'s nutty adventures ya know. 😁
October 4th, 2023 04:25
Barely Heard Through All The Whispers
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville, old lovers are never forgotten.
Andy
October 4th, 2023 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville, old lovers are never forgotten.
Andy
October 4th, 2023 00:55
Barely Heard Through All The Whispers
Bobby O said:
When love appeared I was surprised. But then I re thought , it’s typical of you to hold the important impact for that perfect moment. Abracadabra !!
October 3rd, 2023 21:23
Bobby O said:
When love appeared I was surprised. But then I re thought , it’s typical of you to hold the important impact for that perfect moment. Abracadabra !!
October 3rd, 2023 21:23
Barely Heard Through All The Whispers
Christina8 said:
I like where you are headed with this....so things like \"more please\" and other things I cannot utter here. A very good write if I do say so myself!
October 3rd, 2023 13:43
Christina8 said:
I like where you are headed with this....so things like \"more please\" and other things I cannot utter here. A very good write if I do say so myself!
October 3rd, 2023 13:43
Barely Heard Through All The Whispers
Lorenz said:
inspired whispers
concerto for a voice.
October 3rd, 2023 06:00
Lorenz said:
inspired whispers
concerto for a voice.
October 3rd, 2023 06:00
Barely Heard Through All The Whispers
LIZ said:
Mmmmm \"Between one old forbidden lover and another\", naughty whispers?
\"I can’t wait to have you”...for example? Am I close at all?? 💜
October 3rd, 2023 02:47
LIZ said:
Mmmmm \"Between one old forbidden lover and another\", naughty whispers?
\"I can’t wait to have you”...for example? Am I close at all?? 💜
October 3rd, 2023 02:47
Barely Heard Through All The Whispers
orchidee said:
Good write N,
I grew a moustache, so that KP would think she is kissing a dead caterpillar. Well, when I kiss her, not often, it\'s like kissing an old trout! lol.
October 3rd, 2023 02:26
orchidee said:
Good write N,
I grew a moustache, so that KP would think she is kissing a dead caterpillar. Well, when I kiss her, not often, it\'s like kissing an old trout! lol.
October 3rd, 2023 02:26
Barely Heard Through All The Whispers
Teddy.15 said:
Well I would hope that its \"I love you\" but then again I\'m a romantic teddy lol ❤️
October 3rd, 2023 00:38
Teddy.15 said:
Well I would hope that its \"I love you\" but then again I\'m a romantic teddy lol ❤️
October 3rd, 2023 00:38
The Map
orchidee said:
And - you got that map? where ya going? when will ya back? And will ya have time to even get there, after wasting time reading my daft questions! lol.
October 2nd, 2023 11:56
orchidee said:
And - you got that map? where ya going? when will ya back? And will ya have time to even get there, after wasting time reading my daft questions! lol.
October 2nd, 2023 11:56
The Map
L. B. Mek said:
\'When we lived on
small talk,
free love and so
very much
laughter we often
ached all day ..\'
but that six-pack laughter legacy
of those good times you shared
remains, beneath life\'s fat debris
should chance ever afford you
a reason, to do a few sit-ups
in anticipation of love, revisiting
again...
I am such a a spoilt fan, dear Poet supreme
Thank you! Hyung
(Hope you and yours have a peaceful week) 🍻
October 2nd, 2023 04:25
L. B. Mek said:
\'When we lived on
small talk,
free love and so
very much
laughter we often
ached all day ..\'
but that six-pack laughter legacy
of those good times you shared
remains, beneath life\'s fat debris
should chance ever afford you
a reason, to do a few sit-ups
in anticipation of love, revisiting
again...
I am such a a spoilt fan, dear Poet supreme
Thank you! Hyung
(Hope you and yours have a peaceful week) 🍻
October 2nd, 2023 04:25
Talk About Stupid
L. B. Mek said:
many a perfume company
have to take accountability
for their manslaughter
of shattered hearts, all over the world
...
\'and that\'s all
I will say bout thaaaaat\'
in the wise words of Gump
October 2nd, 2023 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
many a perfume company
have to take accountability
for their manslaughter
of shattered hearts, all over the world
...
\'and that\'s all
I will say bout thaaaaat\'
in the wise words of Gump
October 2nd, 2023 04:15
The Dance of Overshadowed Children
L. B. Mek said:
brilliantly executed Hyung
it\'s sobering how centuries later
your words mirror and shatter
those heart-breaking words
of Elizabeth browning:
\'Do ye hear the children weeping, O my brothers,
Ere the sorrow comes with years ?
They are leaning their young heads against their mothers, —
And that cannot stop their tears.\'
(from \'The cry of the Children\')
I can find a way, to come to terms
with that thread of genesis causality
as our reality
if, our cruel universe
would just
leave the Children alone!!!!!!!!
it is the most morbid of perverse
to hurt something so fragile
and pure of heart
I will NEVER, EVER understand...
(I hope that brave smiling princess
and her parents are holding-on strong..
always in my thoughts)
October 2nd, 2023 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
brilliantly executed Hyung
it\'s sobering how centuries later
your words mirror and shatter
those heart-breaking words
of Elizabeth browning:
\'Do ye hear the children weeping, O my brothers,
Ere the sorrow comes with years ?
They are leaning their young heads against their mothers, —
And that cannot stop their tears.\'
(from \'The cry of the Children\')
I can find a way, to come to terms
with that thread of genesis causality
as our reality
if, our cruel universe
would just
leave the Children alone!!!!!!!!
it is the most morbid of perverse
to hurt something so fragile
and pure of heart
I will NEVER, EVER understand...
(I hope that brave smiling princess
and her parents are holding-on strong..
always in my thoughts)
October 2nd, 2023 04:12
The Map
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a shame those times never lasted Neville, I do hope they do one day.
Andy
October 2nd, 2023 03:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a shame those times never lasted Neville, I do hope they do one day.
Andy
October 2nd, 2023 03:27
The Map
Teddy.15 said:
Pulling on my heart strings dearest Nev. This is beautiful and so emotional of lost love. ❤️
October 2nd, 2023 03:25
Teddy.15 said:
Pulling on my heart strings dearest Nev. This is beautiful and so emotional of lost love. ❤️
October 2nd, 2023 03:25
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