Comments received on poems by Neville
For all Those Forgotten Girls Out There
Goldfinch60 said:
So much said in so few words Neville.
Andy
December 17th, 2022 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
So much said in so few words Neville.
Andy
December 17th, 2022 02:53
A Reflection Upon a Youth in Passing
Accidental Poet said:
And yet, another example of the future bumping into the past. But no other way to get to today. A fine write there N.
December 16th, 2022 18:23
Accidental Poet said:
And yet, another example of the future bumping into the past. But no other way to get to today. A fine write there N.
December 16th, 2022 18:23
For all Those Forgotten Girls Out There
Accidental Poet said:
And we all have a certain girl whom we\'ve never forgotten, eh N? Great little scribble Sir.
December 16th, 2022 18:09
Accidental Poet said:
And we all have a certain girl whom we\'ve never forgotten, eh N? Great little scribble Sir.
December 16th, 2022 18:09
For all Those Forgotten Girls Out There
Doggerel Dave said:
Well, You certainly do your best Nev, and no one can ask any more of you than that.....
December 16th, 2022 16:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Well, You certainly do your best Nev, and no one can ask any more of you than that.....
December 16th, 2022 16:29
For all Those Forgotten Girls Out There
L. B. Mek said:
reminds me of lyrics to songs like \'runaway girl\' by ludacris and mary j blige
and tupac\'s \'brenda\'s got a baby\'..
so poignant and thought provoking
at this time of year..
a great write Hyung
December 16th, 2022 05:51
L. B. Mek said:
reminds me of lyrics to songs like \'runaway girl\' by ludacris and mary j blige
and tupac\'s \'brenda\'s got a baby\'..
so poignant and thought provoking
at this time of year..
a great write Hyung
December 16th, 2022 05:51
A Reflection Upon a Youth in Passing
L. B. Mek said:
(this that accursed duality of life
we breathe in our demise
and blink forth to our end
in every treasured moment
alive...)
but ending\'s can offer solace
aside our laments and fear
it\'s a question of perspective
truly..
(so knee-cracking relatable Hyung
promise me a seat at your table
on that other side
of that six feet divide
and I\'ll promise to buy
an eternity of drinks!)
cheer\'s, to a life bravely Lived dear Poet
🍻😎
let\'s smile in defiance till that very last
with one eye open
and the other
lost within that embrace of remembrance
for why else did we strive to accumulate
all those sunrise and sunset, experiences
in our lives!
cheers 🍻
December 16th, 2022 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
(this that accursed duality of life
we breathe in our demise
and blink forth to our end
in every treasured moment
alive...)
but ending\'s can offer solace
aside our laments and fear
it\'s a question of perspective
truly..
(so knee-cracking relatable Hyung
promise me a seat at your table
on that other side
of that six feet divide
and I\'ll promise to buy
an eternity of drinks!)
cheer\'s, to a life bravely Lived dear Poet
🍻😎
let\'s smile in defiance till that very last
with one eye open
and the other
lost within that embrace of remembrance
for why else did we strive to accumulate
all those sunrise and sunset, experiences
in our lives!
cheers 🍻
December 16th, 2022 05:44
The Gardeness
L. B. Mek said:
(and how she plucked and mapped
curated a path to a blossoming garden
as life, by each others side
but he
was rooted to the weeds
that sculpted him, into the very man
she fell for...)
hence why tragedies, always make for best sellers
and Shakespeare reigns supreme
for all life
is a tragedy, waiting
to be captured in ink, everything else
is mere history and art...
(Brilliant!
dear Poet supreme
so loved the tone)
December 16th, 2022 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
(and how she plucked and mapped
curated a path to a blossoming garden
as life, by each others side
but he
was rooted to the weeds
that sculpted him, into the very man
she fell for...)
hence why tragedies, always make for best sellers
and Shakespeare reigns supreme
for all life
is a tragedy, waiting
to be captured in ink, everything else
is mere history and art...
(Brilliant!
dear Poet supreme
so loved the tone)
December 16th, 2022 05:34
Ukraine in Winter
L. B. Mek said:
and Defiantly! proud
long in-to Spring\'s gusts
may their flag be raised
fluttering and high
as I fear we\'ll still be hoping
and wishing, when Easter\'s festivities roll around...
an important write, thank you Hyung
December 16th, 2022 05:28
L. B. Mek said:
and Defiantly! proud
long in-to Spring\'s gusts
may their flag be raised
fluttering and high
as I fear we\'ll still be hoping
and wishing, when Easter\'s festivities roll around...
an important write, thank you Hyung
December 16th, 2022 05:28
From Inside This Box of Broken Mirrors
L. B. Mek said:
that itch
waiting for it to come and define
all that we\'ve built and hoped for..
I love the confessional theme
and yet your wording is so open
to interpretation and personalisation..
showcasing great skill, so well executed
thank you! dear cherished Poet
December 16th, 2022 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
that itch
waiting for it to come and define
all that we\'ve built and hoped for..
I love the confessional theme
and yet your wording is so open
to interpretation and personalisation..
showcasing great skill, so well executed
thank you! dear cherished Poet
December 16th, 2022 05:26
For all Those Forgotten Girls Out There
Fay Slimm. said:
A few lines of care and empathy mean so much to any forgotten ones whatever the gender -- - your heart in these words at this time of year Nev comes over so warmly for all the lonely.................x
December 16th, 2022 04:31
Fay Slimm. said:
A few lines of care and empathy mean so much to any forgotten ones whatever the gender -- - your heart in these words at this time of year Nev comes over so warmly for all the lonely.................x
December 16th, 2022 04:31
For all Those Forgotten Girls Out There
orchidee said:
I wish I could forget KP, even though I only see her 1% of the time in our marriage now! lol. I\'m horrible to her. heehee.
But there she is, on TV or in newspapers, etc. I don\'t notice any difference, It\'s as though she is with me 100% of the time. Doh!
Misogynist? Nope, I can\'t even spell the word without looking it up. You know Miss Hodge-Innist?
Do shut up now Orchi, says Fido. lol.
December 16th, 2022 04:23
orchidee said:
I wish I could forget KP, even though I only see her 1% of the time in our marriage now! lol. I\'m horrible to her. heehee.
But there she is, on TV or in newspapers, etc. I don\'t notice any difference, It\'s as though she is with me 100% of the time. Doh!
Misogynist? Nope, I can\'t even spell the word without looking it up. You know Miss Hodge-Innist?
Do shut up now Orchi, says Fido. lol.
December 16th, 2022 04:23
A Reflection Upon a Youth in Passing
Fay Slimm. said:
Just a thought after reading these few grieving lines Nev. - down through the ages ladies and some gents spent fortunes to by-pass signs of decline in shape and form - - yet beauty they say comes from inside not out and restores outer wrinkles to ageless glory - well methinks that\'s worth trying for someone who mourns passing youthdom. Oooh ( Hope this last word raises a smile ) ...............x
December 15th, 2022 10:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Just a thought after reading these few grieving lines Nev. - down through the ages ladies and some gents spent fortunes to by-pass signs of decline in shape and form - - yet beauty they say comes from inside not out and restores outer wrinkles to ageless glory - well methinks that\'s worth trying for someone who mourns passing youthdom. Oooh ( Hope this last word raises a smile ) ...............x
December 15th, 2022 10:50
A Reflection Upon a Youth in Passing
orchidee said:
Notice the appearance of Fido in my poem today? lol.
December 15th, 2022 07:12
orchidee said:
Notice the appearance of Fido in my poem today? lol.
December 15th, 2022 07:12
A Reflection Upon a Youth in Passing
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - the ageing process - tell me about it.......
Nah, don\'t remind me, Nev....
December 15th, 2022 03:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - the ageing process - tell me about it.......
Nah, don\'t remind me, Nev....
December 15th, 2022 03:39
A Reflection Upon a Youth in Passing
orchidee said:
Doh! Why bother we may say, if pessimistic. Why bother to be born, if we start to die from that day onwards?
There is more to it than that, positively, thankfully.
But I often remind KP of the negative aspect of this, to make her miserable. lol.
December 15th, 2022 03:20
orchidee said:
Doh! Why bother we may say, if pessimistic. Why bother to be born, if we start to die from that day onwards?
There is more to it than that, positively, thankfully.
But I often remind KP of the negative aspect of this, to make her miserable. lol.
December 15th, 2022 03:20
The Gardeness
orchidee said:
Did I meet her?! lol.
Can\'t I remember these lasses myself?
It\'s like the annoying someone who says \'Remind me about it in a week, will ya?\' Ain\'t they got a mind to remember it themselves? lol.
December 14th, 2022 11:28
orchidee said:
Did I meet her?! lol.
Can\'t I remember these lasses myself?
It\'s like the annoying someone who says \'Remind me about it in a week, will ya?\' Ain\'t they got a mind to remember it themselves? lol.
December 14th, 2022 11:28
The Gardeness
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well said, Neville.
I have found being left with the poem in time you are the better for it.
December 14th, 2022 09:33
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well said, Neville.
I have found being left with the poem in time you are the better for it.
December 14th, 2022 09:33
The Gardeness
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow mi amigo - - methinks -your well penned lady sounds very close perfection -- wildly free and with passion and patience - - what lusty male could want any more that that I must ask.............x
December 14th, 2022 05:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow mi amigo - - methinks -your well penned lady sounds very close perfection -- wildly free and with passion and patience - - what lusty male could want any more that that I must ask.............x
December 14th, 2022 05:44
The Gardeness
Doggerel Dave said:
Alas, Neville - alas...
\'Tis the way of gardens....or at least human relations...
..
December 14th, 2022 05:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Alas, Neville - alas...
\'Tis the way of gardens....or at least human relations...
..
December 14th, 2022 05:37
Ukraine in Winter
Doggerel Dave said:
Apposite reminder of a hideous situation existing while most of us enjoy the festive season, Nev.
December 13th, 2022 20:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Apposite reminder of a hideous situation existing while most of us enjoy the festive season, Nev.
December 13th, 2022 20:13
Ukraine in Winter
Bella Shepard said:
What is it in the human soul that will not allow us to succumb in the direst of situations. Is it faith, fervor, strength, a firm belief in what is truly right and wrong? You pay homage to all that binds us together dear poet in that wonderful last line.
December 13th, 2022 13:21
Bella Shepard said:
What is it in the human soul that will not allow us to succumb in the direst of situations. Is it faith, fervor, strength, a firm belief in what is truly right and wrong? You pay homage to all that binds us together dear poet in that wonderful last line.
December 13th, 2022 13:21
Ukraine in Winter
Fay Slimm. said:
Too easy indeed my friend to not only imagine but strive to seek further aid for these innocent victims of battling politics - -- a needed reminder indeed.............x
December 13th, 2022 08:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Too easy indeed my friend to not only imagine but strive to seek further aid for these innocent victims of battling politics - -- a needed reminder indeed.............x
December 13th, 2022 08:39
From Inside This Box of Broken Mirrors
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong emotive words Neville, I do hope that the mirrors soon get back together and bring light to your life.
Andy
December 13th, 2022 03:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong emotive words Neville, I do hope that the mirrors soon get back together and bring light to your life.
Andy
December 13th, 2022 03:00
From Inside This Box of Broken Mirrors
Doggerel Dave said:
This one really got to me, Nev. And while the temptation to give plain ordinary advice (I wouldn\'t dare!) is strong.......
I really do mean got to me...
December 12th, 2022 17:02
Doggerel Dave said:
This one really got to me, Nev. And while the temptation to give plain ordinary advice (I wouldn\'t dare!) is strong.......
I really do mean got to me...
December 12th, 2022 17:02
From Inside This Box of Broken Mirrors
orchidee said:
I\'m talking even more rubbish in me poem for today!
December 12th, 2022 12:18
orchidee said:
I\'m talking even more rubbish in me poem for today!
December 12th, 2022 12:18
From Inside This Box of Broken Mirrors
orchidee said:
Did I meet her? Why she smashing up all the mirrors? lol. Is she a relation of KP whose mirrors breaks as soon as she looks in them?! lol.
December 12th, 2022 12:17
orchidee said:
Did I meet her? Why she smashing up all the mirrors? lol. Is she a relation of KP whose mirrors breaks as soon as she looks in them?! lol.
December 12th, 2022 12:17
From Inside This Box of Broken Mirrors
Fay Slimm. said:
A stanza of maybe confession of blame before naming those broken promises mirrored in a fading relationship - - yes familiar complaints arise in this impressive verse Nev. - - - I give a wry smile at the last question asking when a seven year prophesy of resultant bad luck is going to end. Another smooth taste of your innate talent with word-usage here my clever friend............x
December 12th, 2022 10:55
Fay Slimm. said:
A stanza of maybe confession of blame before naming those broken promises mirrored in a fading relationship - - yes familiar complaints arise in this impressive verse Nev. - - - I give a wry smile at the last question asking when a seven year prophesy of resultant bad luck is going to end. Another smooth taste of your innate talent with word-usage here my clever friend............x
December 12th, 2022 10:55
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