Comments received on poems by Neville
Fruit Salad Skies
L. B. Mek said:
worded as deliciously vivid
as every fruity spoonful bite
is, to imagine..
Brilliant!
(guess what i\'ll be having for lunch
yeah..
steak! n chips with me mushy peas
..what!
.. what? did you think)
😁
(oh and of course a fruit salad for dessert
duh!)
😎
yeah I\'m a failed comedian
but so what, I own it!
🍻
(thanks for putting up with me)
hope you n yours have a great week Hyung!
July 3rd, 2023 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
worded as deliciously vivid
as every fruity spoonful bite
is, to imagine..
Brilliant!
(guess what i\'ll be having for lunch
yeah..
steak! n chips with me mushy peas
..what!
.. what? did you think)
😁
(oh and of course a fruit salad for dessert
duh!)
😎
yeah I\'m a failed comedian
but so what, I own it!
🍻
(thanks for putting up with me)
hope you n yours have a great week Hyung!
July 3rd, 2023 04:52
Fruit Salad Skies
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Greedy KP wants to eat it all! lol.
July 3rd, 2023 03:49
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Greedy KP wants to eat it all! lol.
July 3rd, 2023 03:49
Fruit Salad Skies
moonwriting said:
I enjoy how you can read this in whatever order you feel like and it will somehow form a new image.
July 3rd, 2023 03:04
moonwriting said:
I enjoy how you can read this in whatever order you feel like and it will somehow form a new image.
July 3rd, 2023 03:04
Fruit Salad Skies
Teddy.15 said:
Stunning imagery, Nev, I believe that the UK has become somewhat tropical in the past couple of summers, can you believe that here in Italy the weather has become very British. A cherry on top of the summer trifle I\'d say. A lovely poem. ❤️
July 3rd, 2023 02:51
Teddy.15 said:
Stunning imagery, Nev, I believe that the UK has become somewhat tropical in the past couple of summers, can you believe that here in Italy the weather has become very British. A cherry on top of the summer trifle I\'d say. A lovely poem. ❤️
July 3rd, 2023 02:51
When the Limelight Sucks
Goldfinch60 said:
Those sparrows can be the light of the world Neville, spreading their light to everybody.
Andy
July 3rd, 2023 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Those sparrows can be the light of the world Neville, spreading their light to everybody.
Andy
July 3rd, 2023 02:18
Father
Goldfinch60 said:
His love will always be with you Neville as mine is for me.
Andy
July 3rd, 2023 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
His love will always be with you Neville as mine is for me.
Andy
July 3rd, 2023 02:12
Father
L. B. Mek said:
indeed they are, very rare
but one decent one in your life
can make up for a lifetime
of those accursed vultures..
(Brilliant!)
July 3rd, 2023 01:55
L. B. Mek said:
indeed they are, very rare
but one decent one in your life
can make up for a lifetime
of those accursed vultures..
(Brilliant!)
July 3rd, 2023 01:55
When the Limelight Sucks
L. B. Mek said:
humility\'s subtle ways
as my chosen lanes in life
it\'s ok if everyone soars above me
I\'ll wear the neck brace
as long as my feet remain grounded
and my ego, in-check...
(I read and learn, my wise friend)
love the imagery
(a timelessly in-season poetry, if you will)
lol
July 3rd, 2023 01:50
L. B. Mek said:
humility\'s subtle ways
as my chosen lanes in life
it\'s ok if everyone soars above me
I\'ll wear the neck brace
as long as my feet remain grounded
and my ego, in-check...
(I read and learn, my wise friend)
love the imagery
(a timelessly in-season poetry, if you will)
lol
July 3rd, 2023 01:50
Father
Bella Shepard said:
We all come into this world, equal at birth. It is what we go home to that makes all the difference. You are fortunate indeed dear friend, for a father who loved you and taught you well. He must have been a wonderful role model, for that goodness is there in all that you write, in the person that you are. I I\'m sure he is looking down and saying \"That\'s my boy, I\'m so proud\". God bless you both!
July 2nd, 2023 12:02
Bella Shepard said:
We all come into this world, equal at birth. It is what we go home to that makes all the difference. You are fortunate indeed dear friend, for a father who loved you and taught you well. He must have been a wonderful role model, for that goodness is there in all that you write, in the person that you are. I I\'m sure he is looking down and saying \"That\'s my boy, I\'m so proud\". God bless you both!
July 2nd, 2023 12:02
Father
Poetic Dan said:
As someone who has no true image, I see you just like this!
I could not say the same for my own father but hope I inspire some of this from my own child.
Thank you for sharing
Always a pleasure
July 2nd, 2023 11:45
Poetic Dan said:
As someone who has no true image, I see you just like this!
I could not say the same for my own father but hope I inspire some of this from my own child.
Thank you for sharing
Always a pleasure
July 2nd, 2023 11:45
Father
orchidee said:
Will ya admit it\'s a brilliant tile for me (maybe) next poem? Dunno how I would have thought of it without the title of your poem here. Doh!
July 2nd, 2023 04:07
orchidee said:
Will ya admit it\'s a brilliant tile for me (maybe) next poem? Dunno how I would have thought of it without the title of your poem here. Doh!
July 2nd, 2023 04:07
When the Limelight Sucks
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Birdlife and nature\'s limelight is how I read it. It shone different from that vantage point. An insightful read this was Nev. 🙏🏼
July 2nd, 2023 02:54
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Birdlife and nature\'s limelight is how I read it. It shone different from that vantage point. An insightful read this was Nev. 🙏🏼
July 2nd, 2023 02:54
Father
orchidee said:
Ohhh, you praise me too much - a fine poem about me! heehee.
You have inspired me with a fantastically original title for one of me next poems: \'Mother\'. lol.
July 2nd, 2023 02:17
orchidee said:
Ohhh, you praise me too much - a fine poem about me! heehee.
You have inspired me with a fantastically original title for one of me next poems: \'Mother\'. lol.
July 2nd, 2023 02:17
Father
Christina8 said:
truly beautiful....what else can I say? I am jealous of this awe inspiring man, cannot say my experience was the same.....C
July 2nd, 2023 01:59
Christina8 said:
truly beautiful....what else can I say? I am jealous of this awe inspiring man, cannot say my experience was the same.....C
July 2nd, 2023 01:59
When the Limelight Sucks
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh so neat.
\'Got that right Neville; I like to travel incognito whenever possible...... get a smidgin of paranoia when the local café remembers my name.
Note to Teddy above: Nah - Kookas are good \'uns except that their laugh doesn\'t appear to be in response to my rapier wit, rather taking the piss. Lorikeets are much more delinquent...
July 1st, 2023 20:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh so neat.
\'Got that right Neville; I like to travel incognito whenever possible...... get a smidgin of paranoia when the local café remembers my name.
Note to Teddy above: Nah - Kookas are good \'uns except that their laugh doesn\'t appear to be in response to my rapier wit, rather taking the piss. Lorikeets are much more delinquent...
July 1st, 2023 20:17
When the Limelight Sucks
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I would never want to be a kookaburra, apparently they are very naughty. I do enjoy your love of birds dear Nev 🤗
July 1st, 2023 12:37
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I would never want to be a kookaburra, apparently they are very naughty. I do enjoy your love of birds dear Nev 🤗
July 1st, 2023 12:37
When the Limelight Sucks
Christina8 said:
I liked your authors note...that this was not entirely true. I bet you do love at least a hint of the limelight. Not a bad thing at all. I did enjoy your poem!
July 1st, 2023 07:42
Christina8 said:
I liked your authors note...that this was not entirely true. I bet you do love at least a hint of the limelight. Not a bad thing at all. I did enjoy your poem!
July 1st, 2023 07:42
When the Limelight Sucks
Caring dove said:
Nice writing )) I guess it can be difficult to have so much attention on you ..
Sparrows always look like friendly birds
July 1st, 2023 01:46
Caring dove said:
Nice writing )) I guess it can be difficult to have so much attention on you ..
Sparrows always look like friendly birds
July 1st, 2023 01:46
When the Limelight Sucks
Parisab said:
Are channeling Taylor Swift? I’m sure that she is lost cause for fame-or we’re talking about the other swift’s-either way I like the theme around the potency of the limelight
July 1st, 2023 01:04
Parisab said:
Are channeling Taylor Swift? I’m sure that she is lost cause for fame-or we’re talking about the other swift’s-either way I like the theme around the potency of the limelight
July 1st, 2023 01:04
Zilch Seeking Oblivion Surfers
Christina8 said:
Whatever it was, I hope it was good! Lovely poem, N!
June 30th, 2023 07:17
Christina8 said:
Whatever it was, I hope it was good! Lovely poem, N!
June 30th, 2023 07:17
Zilch Seeking Oblivion Surfers
L. B. Mek said:
a little like sleep
devoid of dreams
i can, but presume..
perhaps something, like
a graveyard devoid of names..
or maybe, it\'s where
memories we forget, congregate
to lament, their ill-fated
nothingness, despite being once
being so pivotal to our worth..
(lol
how I do go-on eh my friend
but alas what do i know
still a lovely, thought provoking
read, thank you! Hyung)
June 30th, 2023 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
a little like sleep
devoid of dreams
i can, but presume..
perhaps something, like
a graveyard devoid of names..
or maybe, it\'s where
memories we forget, congregate
to lament, their ill-fated
nothingness, despite being once
being so pivotal to our worth..
(lol
how I do go-on eh my friend
but alas what do i know
still a lovely, thought provoking
read, thank you! Hyung)
June 30th, 2023 04:13
Psithurism Interludes
L. B. Mek said:
whispering to my poetic fate
I summon what courage i have
to express these feelings I cherish
symmetry, in that ideal I seek
between your steps within grace
and my ambition to become
that person in your life, entrusted
with your joy and satisfaction,
I won\'t be so bold as to guarantee
I\'ll just invite you
to share this dream with me
and pray you\'ll afford me
the opportunity to showcase
this love for you, i carry
encased in all the hope i can
manifest, my dear
June 30th, 2023 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
whispering to my poetic fate
I summon what courage i have
to express these feelings I cherish
symmetry, in that ideal I seek
between your steps within grace
and my ambition to become
that person in your life, entrusted
with your joy and satisfaction,
I won\'t be so bold as to guarantee
I\'ll just invite you
to share this dream with me
and pray you\'ll afford me
the opportunity to showcase
this love for you, i carry
encased in all the hope i can
manifest, my dear
June 30th, 2023 04:00
Where No Mirrors Are Required
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(when love triumphs over
those guaranteed losses
as longevity\'s, curse)
June 30th, 2023 03:52
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(when love triumphs over
those guaranteed losses
as longevity\'s, curse)
June 30th, 2023 03:52
When Thinking Upon a Lemon Tree
L. B. Mek said:
that lemon tinged, risqué
of poetry\'s sensuality... lol
(somehow
bright colours and enticing scents
tend to anchor us to our memories)
wonderfully executed Hyung
I relate (although maybe not
the lemon tree part, my life\'s
never been that idyllic.. lol)
June 30th, 2023 03:50
L. B. Mek said:
that lemon tinged, risqué
of poetry\'s sensuality... lol
(somehow
bright colours and enticing scents
tend to anchor us to our memories)
wonderfully executed Hyung
I relate (although maybe not
the lemon tree part, my life\'s
never been that idyllic.. lol)
June 30th, 2023 03:50
Zilch Seeking Oblivion Surfers
orchidee said:
Oh woe, I don\'t exist hardly at all now, having married KP! It\'s all \'me, me, me\'. That\'s all she ever says - not to me, but to herself lol. I reply to her \'old trout!\'.
June 30th, 2023 02:13
orchidee said:
Oh woe, I don\'t exist hardly at all now, having married KP! It\'s all \'me, me, me\'. That\'s all she ever says - not to me, but to herself lol. I reply to her \'old trout!\'.
June 30th, 2023 02:13
Someplace Where There Are Whales
Caring dove said:
Nice writing )) never seen a dolphin .. or been near to one .. they are lovely tho
June 30th, 2023 00:51
Caring dove said:
Nice writing )) never seen a dolphin .. or been near to one .. they are lovely tho
June 30th, 2023 00:51
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