Comments received on poems by Neville
From Inside This Box of Broken Mirrors
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong emotive words Neville, I do hope that the mirrors soon get back together and bring light to your life.
Andy
December 13th, 2022 03:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong emotive words Neville, I do hope that the mirrors soon get back together and bring light to your life.
Andy
December 13th, 2022 03:00
From Inside This Box of Broken Mirrors
Doggerel Dave said:
This one really got to me, Nev. And while the temptation to give plain ordinary advice (I wouldn\'t dare!) is strong.......
I really do mean got to me...
December 12th, 2022 17:02
Doggerel Dave said:
This one really got to me, Nev. And while the temptation to give plain ordinary advice (I wouldn\'t dare!) is strong.......
I really do mean got to me...
December 12th, 2022 17:02
From Inside This Box of Broken Mirrors
orchidee said:
I\'m talking even more rubbish in me poem for today!
December 12th, 2022 12:18
orchidee said:
I\'m talking even more rubbish in me poem for today!
December 12th, 2022 12:18
From Inside This Box of Broken Mirrors
orchidee said:
Did I meet her? Why she smashing up all the mirrors? lol. Is she a relation of KP whose mirrors breaks as soon as she looks in them?! lol.
December 12th, 2022 12:17
orchidee said:
Did I meet her? Why she smashing up all the mirrors? lol. Is she a relation of KP whose mirrors breaks as soon as she looks in them?! lol.
December 12th, 2022 12:17
From Inside This Box of Broken Mirrors
Fay Slimm. said:
A stanza of maybe confession of blame before naming those broken promises mirrored in a fading relationship - - yes familiar complaints arise in this impressive verse Nev. - - - I give a wry smile at the last question asking when a seven year prophesy of resultant bad luck is going to end. Another smooth taste of your innate talent with word-usage here my clever friend............x
December 12th, 2022 10:55
Fay Slimm. said:
A stanza of maybe confession of blame before naming those broken promises mirrored in a fading relationship - - yes familiar complaints arise in this impressive verse Nev. - - - I give a wry smile at the last question asking when a seven year prophesy of resultant bad luck is going to end. Another smooth taste of your innate talent with word-usage here my clever friend............x
December 12th, 2022 10:55
Mr Perpendicular
L. B. Mek said:
lol
I do hate it when a burger is served all lopsided and bent out of shape...
as in our meaning, being mistaken
for the lacking obvious
it takes all sorts really, how dare they assume
we cared enough to rhyme for a reason
sometimes, we do it because it feels good
and that\'s a heavenly excuse!
you\'ll now i\'m right, by you inability
to prove me wrong
the end.
lol
(you\'ve earned half your sainthood by putting up with me nonsense
so I\'m claiming credit
aside my gratitude, dear friend)
🍻😎🤦♀️🤷♂️😌😁
December 12th, 2022 01:08
L. B. Mek said:
lol
I do hate it when a burger is served all lopsided and bent out of shape...
as in our meaning, being mistaken
for the lacking obvious
it takes all sorts really, how dare they assume
we cared enough to rhyme for a reason
sometimes, we do it because it feels good
and that\'s a heavenly excuse!
you\'ll now i\'m right, by you inability
to prove me wrong
the end.
lol
(you\'ve earned half your sainthood by putting up with me nonsense
so I\'m claiming credit
aside my gratitude, dear friend)
🍻😎🤦♀️🤷♂️😌😁
December 12th, 2022 01:08
When Size is Not Everything
Bella Shepard said:
Size here is definitely proportional to content, and content here is quite explosive. Ooooh!
December 11th, 2022 13:59
Bella Shepard said:
Size here is definitely proportional to content, and content here is quite explosive. Ooooh!
December 11th, 2022 13:59
Mr Perpendicular
Bella Shepard said:
Did he by any chance teach geometry? Under paid, and under appreciated, I can see why he may sell his soul for a cheeseburger, I think.
December 11th, 2022 13:32
Bella Shepard said:
Did he by any chance teach geometry? Under paid, and under appreciated, I can see why he may sell his soul for a cheeseburger, I think.
December 11th, 2022 13:32
Mr Perpendicular
Fay Slimm. said:
Meaningful though this this three-liner be Nev. I must confess Mr. P. with his hard times leaves my clueless mind speechless - -- must be too many ice cubes in my lunch-time rum - or summat......x hic x
December 11th, 2022 09:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Meaningful though this this three-liner be Nev. I must confess Mr. P. with his hard times leaves my clueless mind speechless - -- must be too many ice cubes in my lunch-time rum - or summat......x hic x
December 11th, 2022 09:42
Mr Perpendicular
Doggerel Dave said:
....Or a solution .... maybe...perhaps...
With absolute certainty I\'d say that sometimes it\'s just too bloody hard, Nev.
December 11th, 2022 04:16
Doggerel Dave said:
....Or a solution .... maybe...perhaps...
With absolute certainty I\'d say that sometimes it\'s just too bloody hard, Nev.
December 11th, 2022 04:16
When Size is Not Everything
sorenbarrett said:
The best gifts come in small packages (sometimes). A great play on words and a great message.
December 10th, 2022 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
The best gifts come in small packages (sometimes). A great play on words and a great message.
December 10th, 2022 08:43
When Size is Not Everything
Goldfinch60 said:
Well that\'s one way I suppose.
Andy
December 10th, 2022 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Well that\'s one way I suppose.
Andy
December 10th, 2022 02:51
When Size is Not Everything
Kinsey Peterson said:
I cannot distinguish if this is an angry or lighthearted poem and I honestly prefer it that way. Good work Neville.
December 9th, 2022 09:56
Kinsey Peterson said:
I cannot distinguish if this is an angry or lighthearted poem and I honestly prefer it that way. Good work Neville.
December 9th, 2022 09:56
When Size is Not Everything
Doggerel Dave said:
Shows to go just how unwithit I am - thought the Prof G would blow something or go into meltdown if i presented \'mindgasm\' for clarification..... but I ain\'t no psychiatrist...🙂
December 9th, 2022 08:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Shows to go just how unwithit I am - thought the Prof G would blow something or go into meltdown if i presented \'mindgasm\' for clarification..... but I ain\'t no psychiatrist...🙂
December 9th, 2022 08:21
When Size is Not Everything
Fay Slimm. said:
Tiny is often likeable and gigantic can be mind-blowing but climaxing with your inventive \"mindgasms\" made me smile. - -- Such an orgasmic ending methinks to that beguiling title mon ami................x
December 9th, 2022 07:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Tiny is often likeable and gigantic can be mind-blowing but climaxing with your inventive \"mindgasms\" made me smile. - -- Such an orgasmic ending methinks to that beguiling title mon ami................x
December 9th, 2022 07:48
When Size is Not Everything
arqios said:
...messing with the mind, now that\'s no small feat!
December 9th, 2022 06:56
arqios said:
...messing with the mind, now that\'s no small feat!
December 9th, 2022 06:56
When Size is Not Everything
L. B. Mek said:
(yeah...
like when a misplaced, well positioned
word
is enough to wreck a honeymoon\'s fairy-tale
and curate a lifetime of nightmares...!)
I fear nothing
like the mind of a human..
not for its insidious potency
but for its capacity of haphazard ignorance
detonating, emotional weapons of mass
depression
indifferently, clumsily
then hands on lips, shrieking:
\'\'an oopsy daisy i never meant to, really...\'\'
(Brilliant!
dear Poet supreme
Brilliant!)
December 9th, 2022 06:13
L. B. Mek said:
(yeah...
like when a misplaced, well positioned
word
is enough to wreck a honeymoon\'s fairy-tale
and curate a lifetime of nightmares...!)
I fear nothing
like the mind of a human..
not for its insidious potency
but for its capacity of haphazard ignorance
detonating, emotional weapons of mass
depression
indifferently, clumsily
then hands on lips, shrieking:
\'\'an oopsy daisy i never meant to, really...\'\'
(Brilliant!
dear Poet supreme
Brilliant!)
December 9th, 2022 06:13
When Size is Not Everything
orchidee said:
I thought I might swoon at the title. lol.
December 9th, 2022 05:26
orchidee said:
I thought I might swoon at the title. lol.
December 9th, 2022 05:26
What an Appetite for Attention She Had
L. B. Mek said:
to be a shadow
within
a relationship
is a curse
I wouldn\'t wish upon my worst...
but wise Poet
those perpetuated
societal mechanism\'s that cultivate
such personas, truly amaze me
like how
as a child, everyone gravitates
for the cute kid
pinches cheeks, worshiping those gifted
smiling gurgles
and that kid grows-up thinking
this is reality, for everyone
forever and ever, daily
then comes the drop-off
now that child is left to swim alone
compensate for that missing attention
and here comes adulthoods trappings
and now hollywood is the mecca
for the good looking
with fck\'d up childhoods...
(still
the shattered hearts they leave in their wake
is neither forgivable or comprehensible;
my survival\'s avoidance trick
after burning me fingers on aesthetics
is to seek empathy in the eyes
of the one i dare
to entrust with my fragile heart
above intellect or anything else...)
sorry for ranting again, a great write dear Poet
so relatable
December 9th, 2022 03:58
L. B. Mek said:
to be a shadow
within
a relationship
is a curse
I wouldn\'t wish upon my worst...
but wise Poet
those perpetuated
societal mechanism\'s that cultivate
such personas, truly amaze me
like how
as a child, everyone gravitates
for the cute kid
pinches cheeks, worshiping those gifted
smiling gurgles
and that kid grows-up thinking
this is reality, for everyone
forever and ever, daily
then comes the drop-off
now that child is left to swim alone
compensate for that missing attention
and here comes adulthoods trappings
and now hollywood is the mecca
for the good looking
with fck\'d up childhoods...
(still
the shattered hearts they leave in their wake
is neither forgivable or comprehensible;
my survival\'s avoidance trick
after burning me fingers on aesthetics
is to seek empathy in the eyes
of the one i dare
to entrust with my fragile heart
above intellect or anything else...)
sorry for ranting again, a great write dear Poet
so relatable
December 9th, 2022 03:58
Hidden
Doggerel Dave said:
Irony, ain\'t it?
PS: searched \'pantomime\' in relation to poetry....glad it only rated a \'maybe\'....
December 9th, 2022 01:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Irony, ain\'t it?
PS: searched \'pantomime\' in relation to poetry....glad it only rated a \'maybe\'....
December 9th, 2022 01:23
Hidden
SureshG said:
So absolutely true, great depth in them those few words
December 7th, 2022 19:32
SureshG said:
So absolutely true, great depth in them those few words
December 7th, 2022 19:32
Hidden
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, Neville.
They are slippery little devils though.
December 5th, 2022 16:30
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, Neville.
They are slippery little devils though.
December 5th, 2022 16:30
Hidden
Bella Shepard said:
Moments we conceal, and choose not to reveal, but hold onto with zeal and a sly smile. Captivating my friend!
December 5th, 2022 14:32
Bella Shepard said:
Moments we conceal, and choose not to reveal, but hold onto with zeal and a sly smile. Captivating my friend!
December 5th, 2022 14:32
Hidden
arqios said:
The reveal, voluntarily or otherwise, and later the resulting silent knowing, the open secret, secret still.
December 5th, 2022 06:39
arqios said:
The reveal, voluntarily or otherwise, and later the resulting silent knowing, the open secret, secret still.
December 5th, 2022 06:39
Hidden
L. B. Mek said:
(eye to eye, promises
covertly playful whispers
all is fair, in craving thoughts
and imagined fantasies
till
we seek reality\'s, sensations...)
it\'s all fun n games
till drinks are involved
then tis all
\'but it meant nothing dear\'
confessions
and spilt tears over a moments
foolish choices
but then society, as whole
claps and laughs, like heartbreaks
are Christmas pantomime punchlines
and we all learn to move on
like betrayal is a pill, everyone learns to swallow
so no reason to endlessly, wallow
(erm
so maybe I\'ve still got some issue to be resolved
... maybe)
lol
December 5th, 2022 06:14
L. B. Mek said:
(eye to eye, promises
covertly playful whispers
all is fair, in craving thoughts
and imagined fantasies
till
we seek reality\'s, sensations...)
it\'s all fun n games
till drinks are involved
then tis all
\'but it meant nothing dear\'
confessions
and spilt tears over a moments
foolish choices
but then society, as whole
claps and laughs, like heartbreaks
are Christmas pantomime punchlines
and we all learn to move on
like betrayal is a pill, everyone learns to swallow
so no reason to endlessly, wallow
(erm
so maybe I\'ve still got some issue to be resolved
... maybe)
lol
December 5th, 2022 06:14
Hidden
orchidee said:
Liking this N and not an e\'ermore in sight! It\'s \'alway\' that\'s a problem. Don\'t publishers realise it\'s poetic, and that poetry is, erm, poetic?! It does not always have to be \'always\'.
End of waffle or guff, or rabbiting on!
December 5th, 2022 06:08
orchidee said:
Liking this N and not an e\'ermore in sight! It\'s \'alway\' that\'s a problem. Don\'t publishers realise it\'s poetic, and that poetry is, erm, poetic?! It does not always have to be \'always\'.
End of waffle or guff, or rabbiting on!
December 5th, 2022 06:08
Hidden
Fay Slimm. said:
The thrill of hiding those special moments and hoping nobody else notices is expertly captured in these three beguilingly short lines - - I see that like me you like the word Covert mon ami...........................x.
December 5th, 2022 05:45
Fay Slimm. said:
The thrill of hiding those special moments and hoping nobody else notices is expertly captured in these three beguilingly short lines - - I see that like me you like the word Covert mon ami...........................x.
December 5th, 2022 05:45
What an Appetite for Attention She Had
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.. it\'s like you just plucked Real moments in my life for me to see, I\'d never be afraid to admit but one would have to asked...
This honestly was fantastic and some what ( for me) an idea of the in depth life you have lived to write the way you do.
Thanks for sharing
Much peace and respect
December 4th, 2022 16:29
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.. it\'s like you just plucked Real moments in my life for me to see, I\'d never be afraid to admit but one would have to asked...
This honestly was fantastic and some what ( for me) an idea of the in depth life you have lived to write the way you do.
Thanks for sharing
Much peace and respect
December 4th, 2022 16:29
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