Comments received on poems by Neville
Just for us Lemons
spilleronsheet said:
What clever words you chose
Mingling relationships as lemon
Yet I could find my lemonade
Well even lemons brought an advice
Lemons are truly refreshing
We make lemonades and lemon marmalade
Lingering is the taste of the lemons in my garden in my thoughts
And remembering the friendships that were as lemonades
Stronger with age
April 15th, 2022 04:30
spilleronsheet said:
What clever words you chose
Mingling relationships as lemon
Yet I could find my lemonade
Well even lemons brought an advice
Lemons are truly refreshing
We make lemonades and lemon marmalade
Lingering is the taste of the lemons in my garden in my thoughts
And remembering the friendships that were as lemonades
Stronger with age
April 15th, 2022 04:30
Just for us Lemons
Fay Slimm. said:
Tart is the sour lover who rejects gentle sweetness - -- hope she reads this and feels some bitter regret.
April 15th, 2022 04:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Tart is the sour lover who rejects gentle sweetness - -- hope she reads this and feels some bitter regret.
April 15th, 2022 04:19
Spare a Moment for These Words
Lauraš» said:
Dear Neville,
Iām looking forward to add your seventh anthology to the other six. I like your ālittle scribbleā as the forward and Iām partial to
āThe Mending of a Broken Manā as the title.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
April 15th, 2022 00:40
Lauraš» said:
Dear Neville,
Iām looking forward to add your seventh anthology to the other six. I like your ālittle scribbleā as the forward and Iām partial to
āThe Mending of a Broken Manā as the title.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
April 15th, 2022 00:40
Spare a Moment for These Words
Goldfinch60 said:
I always sip your words Neville and get the right taste of them.
Andy
April 15th, 2022 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
I always sip your words Neville and get the right taste of them.
Andy
April 15th, 2022 00:32
Spare a Moment for These Words
Michael Edwards said:
Chasing a Broken man - no it doesn\'t sound inviting too sombre. Mending a Broken Light - mmm. Chasing a Broken Light. Stick eith Chasing Light.
April 14th, 2022 14:20
Michael Edwards said:
Chasing a Broken man - no it doesn\'t sound inviting too sombre. Mending a Broken Light - mmm. Chasing a Broken Light. Stick eith Chasing Light.
April 14th, 2022 14:20
Spare a Moment for These Words
spilleronsheet said:
A pleasure to read your lines as friend
A pleasure to appreciate the clever lines as an audience
A pleasure will be to put hands on book of yours
Both titles are very interesting
Itās hard for me to choose
Special in their own way
But I would like one āChasing Lightā as well
Publish both dear Neville
April 14th, 2022 12:05
spilleronsheet said:
A pleasure to read your lines as friend
A pleasure to appreciate the clever lines as an audience
A pleasure will be to put hands on book of yours
Both titles are very interesting
Itās hard for me to choose
Special in their own way
But I would like one āChasing Lightā as well
Publish both dear Neville
April 14th, 2022 12:05
Spare a Moment for These Words
Rocky Lagou said:
Really nice and neat. Sometimes poetry really could just be chugged like liquid, it\'s quite fascinating.
April 14th, 2022 08:29
Rocky Lagou said:
Really nice and neat. Sometimes poetry really could just be chugged like liquid, it\'s quite fascinating.
April 14th, 2022 08:29
Spare a Moment for These Words
Christina8 said:
I vote for chasing light but it depends on the subject matter I suppose. Fantastic write, N!
April 14th, 2022 07:46
Christina8 said:
I vote for chasing light but it depends on the subject matter I suppose. Fantastic write, N!
April 14th, 2022 07:46
Spare a Moment for These Words
Fay Slimm. said:
Am never afraid to spare more than a moment for your extraordinary work mon ami - -- - best of wishes for your next published book - I rather favour Chasing Light.............x
April 14th, 2022 07:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Am never afraid to spare more than a moment for your extraordinary work mon ami - -- - best of wishes for your next published book - I rather favour Chasing Light.............x
April 14th, 2022 07:00
Spare a Moment for These Words
L. B. Mek said:
I await, Hyung
thank you! for the great news
its made my week..
as for recommending a title
may I propose, the title to this
subtly, enticing write
I think
I\'d be drawn to the humble confidence
in a book of poetry, titled:
\'Spend a moment for these words\'
speaks to the authors intentions
so succinctly and with such sincerity!
(that\'s my 2 cents - worth
yeah, I know
there\'s a reason its valued
at almost, free)
lol
all the best, dear Poet
April 14th, 2022 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
I await, Hyung
thank you! for the great news
its made my week..
as for recommending a title
may I propose, the title to this
subtly, enticing write
I think
I\'d be drawn to the humble confidence
in a book of poetry, titled:
\'Spend a moment for these words\'
speaks to the authors intentions
so succinctly and with such sincerity!
(that\'s my 2 cents - worth
yeah, I know
there\'s a reason its valued
at almost, free)
lol
all the best, dear Poet
April 14th, 2022 05:03
Spare a Moment for These Words
dusk arising said:
..... and find within, what meaning you will for everything meaningful resides in you already.
.
ho-hum... just a thought
April 14th, 2022 04:06
dusk arising said:
..... and find within, what meaning you will for everything meaningful resides in you already.
.
ho-hum... just a thought
April 14th, 2022 04:06
Spare a Moment for These Words
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
You already have poems published in a book ? Someone once suggested that I should try publishing some of mine .. but I prefer just sharing them on the internet . Well done on getting your poems or writings published )
April 14th, 2022 02:47
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
You already have poems published in a book ? Someone once suggested that I should try publishing some of mine .. but I prefer just sharing them on the internet . Well done on getting your poems or writings published )
April 14th, 2022 02:47
Spare a Moment for These Words
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like the title ā chasing light ā just my opinion . ))
April 14th, 2022 02:46
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like the title ā chasing light ā just my opinion . ))
April 14th, 2022 02:46
Spare a Moment for These Words
orchidee said:
You broken? You all fallen in a heap? Can we repair you with superglue?
Good write N. I don\'t know which title I would choose.
April 14th, 2022 02:20
orchidee said:
You broken? You all fallen in a heap? Can we repair you with superglue?
Good write N. I don\'t know which title I would choose.
April 14th, 2022 02:20
Before it Hurts Too Much to See
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Neville.
Andy
April 14th, 2022 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Neville.
Andy
April 14th, 2022 01:19
Before it Hurts Too Much to See
Michael Edwards said:
loads of punch in a small serving - super.................
April 13th, 2022 14:24
Michael Edwards said:
loads of punch in a small serving - super.................
April 13th, 2022 14:24
Gooder than Good Even
spilleronsheet said:
Thatās a bunch of intelligent lines
So witty dear Neville
Awaiting more neologisms to encounter
It got more gooder and gooder as I read more from you
April 13th, 2022 13:01
spilleronsheet said:
Thatās a bunch of intelligent lines
So witty dear Neville
Awaiting more neologisms to encounter
It got more gooder and gooder as I read more from you
April 13th, 2022 13:01
Before it Hurts Too Much to See
spilleronsheet said:
An intense romance, a sincere love and tragic ending
You made a tragic movie
Bringing tears to eyes
A fine and emotive work dear Neville
April 13th, 2022 12:54
spilleronsheet said:
An intense romance, a sincere love and tragic ending
You made a tragic movie
Bringing tears to eyes
A fine and emotive work dear Neville
April 13th, 2022 12:54
Before it Hurts Too Much to See
Fay Slimm. said:
Saddest of subjects this five line prayerful appeal for one final look at who love has gifted to one losing sight will bring a great lump to the throat and a tear to the eye of any reader -- a more than emotive write my friend.........x
April 13th, 2022 08:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Saddest of subjects this five line prayerful appeal for one final look at who love has gifted to one losing sight will bring a great lump to the throat and a tear to the eye of any reader -- a more than emotive write my friend.........x
April 13th, 2022 08:00
Gooder than Good Even
Rocky Lagou said:
So so lovely! I\'m definitely all for neologisms in poetry as I feel there are times when we just can\'t express what we want via regular speech. I\'ve used them in the past and even seminal poets like Gwendolyn Brooks have also used them. Thanks for this amazing sentiment,
April 13th, 2022 07:54
Rocky Lagou said:
So so lovely! I\'m definitely all for neologisms in poetry as I feel there are times when we just can\'t express what we want via regular speech. I\'ve used them in the past and even seminal poets like Gwendolyn Brooks have also used them. Thanks for this amazing sentiment,
April 13th, 2022 07:54
Gooder than Good Even
Rozina said:
Learnt another new word here, neologism. The most goodest of all? Thinking of all sorts of words now......
April 12th, 2022 18:17
Rozina said:
Learnt another new word here, neologism. The most goodest of all? Thinking of all sorts of words now......
April 12th, 2022 18:17
Gooder than Good Even
Pearcemelville å ę said:
easy rhyme moment in time
creates a natural pause
even made me smile
April 12th, 2022 15:00
Pearcemelville å ę said:
easy rhyme moment in time
creates a natural pause
even made me smile
April 12th, 2022 15:00
Gooder than Good Even
MendedFences27 said:
\"by a mile and a smile,\" and a half! Does that mean this is Neopoetic. Thoroughly enjoyed this one. Just to entertain for \"a moment in time\" is all we can expect. Great write. - Phil A.
April 12th, 2022 11:28
MendedFences27 said:
\"by a mile and a smile,\" and a half! Does that mean this is Neopoetic. Thoroughly enjoyed this one. Just to entertain for \"a moment in time\" is all we can expect. Great write. - Phil A.
April 12th, 2022 11:28
Gooder than Good Even
Christina8 said:
This is one of your \"goodest\" poems...Wonderful write dear N!
April 12th, 2022 08:27
Christina8 said:
This is one of your \"goodest\" poems...Wonderful write dear N!
April 12th, 2022 08:27
Gooder than Good Even
L. B. Mek said:
or even gooder than that, dear Poet
much, much
gooder, than any level of good
you realise..
all we can do, is thank you
for sharing your genius
and gifting us, so much poetic
enjoyment
April 12th, 2022 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
or even gooder than that, dear Poet
much, much
gooder, than any level of good
you realise..
all we can do, is thank you
for sharing your genius
and gifting us, so much poetic
enjoyment
April 12th, 2022 05:45
Gooder than Good Even
orchidee said:
Good write N. I\'ve not met many neologisms myself. Does the Co-op sell them?! lol.
April 12th, 2022 05:21
orchidee said:
Good write N. I\'ve not met many neologisms myself. Does the Co-op sell them?! lol.
April 12th, 2022 05:21
Gooder than Good Even
dusk arising said:
I\'m still flinching at curiouser and curiouser but if betterest ever comes along i\'m out of here.
When something for us is \'gooder than good\' then it tickles our ego to hope that it will be remembered as such by that person too. But it took your finesse to state it so well.
April 12th, 2022 05:01
dusk arising said:
I\'m still flinching at curiouser and curiouser but if betterest ever comes along i\'m out of here.
When something for us is \'gooder than good\' then it tickles our ego to hope that it will be remembered as such by that person too. But it took your finesse to state it so well.
April 12th, 2022 05:01
Gooder than Good Even
Paul Bell said:
You can\'t get better than, gooder, maybe super gooder.
I\'ll be spending my day now looking for neologisms and just being annoying to people.
April 12th, 2022 04:54
Paul Bell said:
You can\'t get better than, gooder, maybe super gooder.
I\'ll be spending my day now looking for neologisms and just being annoying to people.
April 12th, 2022 04:54
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