Comments received on poems by Neville
As Free As a Proverbial Bird
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem\'s conclusion suggests that true freedom may not be found in the absence of constraints, but in the ability to transcend them and move beyond the limits of our physical existence.
April 18th, 2023 11:06
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem\'s conclusion suggests that true freedom may not be found in the absence of constraints, but in the ability to transcend them and move beyond the limits of our physical existence.
April 18th, 2023 11:06
As Free As a Proverbial Bird
MendedFences27 said:
Someone once said, when asked about his commitments, \"I\'m retired, I don\'t have commitments.\" Sort of aligns with your sense of freedom. We don\'t truly want to be \"birds\" (short life span) but to enjoy their freedom of flight. Well expressed and relevant. - Phil A.
April 18th, 2023 10:27
MendedFences27 said:
Someone once said, when asked about his commitments, \"I\'m retired, I don\'t have commitments.\" Sort of aligns with your sense of freedom. We don\'t truly want to be \"birds\" (short life span) but to enjoy their freedom of flight. Well expressed and relevant. - Phil A.
April 18th, 2023 10:27
In So Few Words Gone
Christina8 said:
I could take the meaning of the poem several ways and I think you are just gone, as in leaving. I\'m so glad you\'ll be back!!
April 18th, 2023 06:02
Christina8 said:
I could take the meaning of the poem several ways and I think you are just gone, as in leaving. I\'m so glad you\'ll be back!!
April 18th, 2023 06:02
As Free As a Proverbial Bird
Christina8 said:
Very nice, be free as a bird on your trip! Safe flight!
April 18th, 2023 06:00
Christina8 said:
Very nice, be free as a bird on your trip! Safe flight!
April 18th, 2023 06:00
As Free As a Proverbial Bird
Accidental Poet said:
As you fly away in said business trip, take care and this may now know you will be missed with anticipated return of our fine feathered friend. 🐦
April 18th, 2023 05:28
Accidental Poet said:
As you fly away in said business trip, take care and this may now know you will be missed with anticipated return of our fine feathered friend. 🐦
April 18th, 2023 05:28
As Free As a Proverbial Bird
Goldfinch60 said:
Fly on into the glory of life Neville.
See you in a week (and a day?)
Andy
April 18th, 2023 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Fly on into the glory of life Neville.
See you in a week (and a day?)
Andy
April 18th, 2023 01:48
In So Few Words Gone
MendedFences27 said:
Sounds like a bitter end to a relationship, by text no less. Your poem paints a clear image of one anxious to get out of town, and hopeful to leave behind a bit of bitterness. Love that he wants her to look in the mirror. A bit of reflection never hurts. - Phil A.
April 17th, 2023 15:55
MendedFences27 said:
Sounds like a bitter end to a relationship, by text no less. Your poem paints a clear image of one anxious to get out of town, and hopeful to leave behind a bit of bitterness. Love that he wants her to look in the mirror. A bit of reflection never hurts. - Phil A.
April 17th, 2023 15:55
In So Few Words Gone
arqios said:
Sounds like having to drop something and be farthest away possible from ground zero!
April 17th, 2023 08:59
arqios said:
Sounds like having to drop something and be farthest away possible from ground zero!
April 17th, 2023 08:59
In So Few Words Gone
Accidental Poet said:
Gone and Neville I sincerely hope are exclusive of each other. 😉
April 17th, 2023 08:26
Accidental Poet said:
Gone and Neville I sincerely hope are exclusive of each other. 😉
April 17th, 2023 08:26
In So Few Words Gone
orchidee said:
Ohh, why do I turn up sometimes to comment, and talk rubbish?! There are some educated comments here. What would I know about them?! lol.
April 17th, 2023 05:40
orchidee said:
Ohh, why do I turn up sometimes to comment, and talk rubbish?! There are some educated comments here. What would I know about them?! lol.
April 17th, 2023 05:40
In So Few Words Gone
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"In So Few Words Gone\" is a beautifully crafted poem that explores the themes of legacy, memory, and mortality.
April 17th, 2023 05:00
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"In So Few Words Gone\" is a beautifully crafted poem that explores the themes of legacy, memory, and mortality.
April 17th, 2023 05:00
In So Few Words Gone
L. B. Mek said:
\'compelled
to stand before
your great
grandmothers
tall cheval mirror
and read
each word aloud ..
Louder
than a whisper
or indeed
a prayer even ..\'
pulls at those empathy heartstrings
even devoid of full clarity to meaning
the electric intimacy and sparkling imagery
insures these words resonate, deep
brilliantly executed, Hyung
(I read and learn)
April 17th, 2023 02:42
L. B. Mek said:
\'compelled
to stand before
your great
grandmothers
tall cheval mirror
and read
each word aloud ..
Louder
than a whisper
or indeed
a prayer even ..\'
pulls at those empathy heartstrings
even devoid of full clarity to meaning
the electric intimacy and sparkling imagery
insures these words resonate, deep
brilliantly executed, Hyung
(I read and learn)
April 17th, 2023 02:42
Bucket List
L. B. Mek said:
(this, a poetic recipe for overcoming
that ephemerality in our harsh reality)
Brilliant!
dear Poet supreme
April 17th, 2023 02:36
L. B. Mek said:
(this, a poetic recipe for overcoming
that ephemerality in our harsh reality)
Brilliant!
dear Poet supreme
April 17th, 2023 02:36
Charming
L. B. Mek said:
lol
an invitation is what i \'choose\' to hear...
we men, can be so brilliantly simple
\'survival mindset, 101\'
(thanks for the chuckle Hyung)
April 17th, 2023 02:33
L. B. Mek said:
lol
an invitation is what i \'choose\' to hear...
we men, can be so brilliantly simple
\'survival mindset, 101\'
(thanks for the chuckle Hyung)
April 17th, 2023 02:33
In So Few Words Gone
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
Ahh, part of my farewell speech to KP, this is. I\'ve packed me bags; I\'ve had enough! lol. How will I get anywhere? She\'s had all me dosh for botox!
April 17th, 2023 02:19
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
Ahh, part of my farewell speech to KP, this is. I\'ve packed me bags; I\'ve had enough! lol. How will I get anywhere? She\'s had all me dosh for botox!
April 17th, 2023 02:19
Charming
Doggerel Dave said:
😂That all relational disputes could be resolved so simply.....
April 16th, 2023 20:41
Doggerel Dave said:
😂That all relational disputes could be resolved so simply.....
April 16th, 2023 20:41
Bucket List
Doggerel Dave said:
And it\'s a yes from me!
Let us know as you go.....
April 16th, 2023 20:16
Doggerel Dave said:
And it\'s a yes from me!
Let us know as you go.....
April 16th, 2023 20:16
Beneath Her Pretty Dress
Dove said:
Well, pray tell if you left it to the imagination.
But alas, the beauty of a blossoming womb.
I hope she has a great and easy birth.
April 16th, 2023 15:29
Dove said:
Well, pray tell if you left it to the imagination.
But alas, the beauty of a blossoming womb.
I hope she has a great and easy birth.
April 16th, 2023 15:29
Bucket List
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully said dear friend. Life is each moment and each moment is precious, to be lived and savored. The saddest reflection is \"I wish I had, but never found the time\". The time is there, we just need the courage to seize it.
April 16th, 2023 13:07
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully said dear friend. Life is each moment and each moment is precious, to be lived and savored. The saddest reflection is \"I wish I had, but never found the time\". The time is there, we just need the courage to seize it.
April 16th, 2023 13:07
Bucket List
MendedFences27 said:
Live life to the fullest!! Retirement is meant to be happy times. So go ahead, do whatever brings you joy. A great expression of the dilemma in retiring or rather, your statement of dealing with it. Greatly enjoyed. - Phil A.
April 16th, 2023 12:07
MendedFences27 said:
Live life to the fullest!! Retirement is meant to be happy times. So go ahead, do whatever brings you joy. A great expression of the dilemma in retiring or rather, your statement of dealing with it. Greatly enjoyed. - Phil A.
April 16th, 2023 12:07
Charming
Christina8 said:
This is well penned and hilarious! Hope you had a blast....x
April 16th, 2023 08:55
Christina8 said:
This is well penned and hilarious! Hope you had a blast....x
April 16th, 2023 08:55
Bucket List
Christina8 said:
great poem and great thoughts here...As I cross things off my bucket list I seem to add more, do you do that? Fantastic....we only have a short time here and it sounds like you are making the best of it....x
April 16th, 2023 08:54
Christina8 said:
great poem and great thoughts here...As I cross things off my bucket list I seem to add more, do you do that? Fantastic....we only have a short time here and it sounds like you are making the best of it....x
April 16th, 2023 08:54
Bucket List
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds good to me N. Cover all the bases by leaving all options on the table. 😉
April 16th, 2023 06:35
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds good to me N. Cover all the bases by leaving all options on the table. 😉
April 16th, 2023 06:35
Bucket List
Fay Slimm. said:
Life approached full on whatever the state or the passing of years is my motto too mi amigo- -- pausing for ageing never was on any good bucket list. Loving the honesty in these few lines though.........x
April 16th, 2023 05:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Life approached full on whatever the state or the passing of years is my motto too mi amigo- -- pausing for ageing never was on any good bucket list. Loving the honesty in these few lines though.........x
April 16th, 2023 05:59
Bucket List
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Neville, always do what feels good at the time as that time may not come again.
Andy
April 16th, 2023 03:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Neville, always do what feels good at the time as that time may not come again.
Andy
April 16th, 2023 03:36
Bucket List
orchidee said:
I was going to write a poem of this title, but I kicked the bucket instead. lol.
April 16th, 2023 02:44
orchidee said:
I was going to write a poem of this title, but I kicked the bucket instead. lol.
April 16th, 2023 02:44
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