Comments received on poems by Neville
No Reason Required
orchidee said:
This is too much for me and KP. I mean, if I told you where she had a scar, I would swoon. And - have I seen it?! Woof, you can\'t tell anyone, says Fido. (it\'s a botox scar of course. lol).
March 25th, 2023 09:20
orchidee said:
This is too much for me and KP. I mean, if I told you where she had a scar, I would swoon. And - have I seen it?! Woof, you can\'t tell anyone, says Fido. (it\'s a botox scar of course. lol).
March 25th, 2023 09:20
Storked
Fay Slimm. said:
Welcome back Nev. The sight of white storks and their fat offspring makes compelling my first read of today .as is your perfectly penned scene of rooftop chimneys now used merely for nests -- an intriguing view of what skylines suggest to an experienced scribe. x
March 25th, 2023 04:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Welcome back Nev. The sight of white storks and their fat offspring makes compelling my first read of today .as is your perfectly penned scene of rooftop chimneys now used merely for nests -- an intriguing view of what skylines suggest to an experienced scribe. x
March 25th, 2023 04:40
Storked
MendedFences27 said:
Rooftop chimneys and stork nests against a mountain backdrop is quite the sight. Storks nesting therein, being spoiled by urban refuse, the whole vision is one of economic re-use of existing infrastructure. A delightful read. - Phil A.
March 24th, 2023 20:43
MendedFences27 said:
Rooftop chimneys and stork nests against a mountain backdrop is quite the sight. Storks nesting therein, being spoiled by urban refuse, the whole vision is one of economic re-use of existing infrastructure. A delightful read. - Phil A.
March 24th, 2023 20:43
A Travelling Man
L. B. Mek said:
thought this a timely read, seeing how you\'re on your travels again my friend
lol
hope all is well Hyung
March 13th, 2023 05:12
L. B. Mek said:
thought this a timely read, seeing how you\'re on your travels again my friend
lol
hope all is well Hyung
March 13th, 2023 05:12
In the Time it Takes to Say Goodbye
Dove said:
Love this one, course Im a sucker for rhymes.. Heartfelt sentiments,
for time passes so quickly
When I’m staring in your eyes
Just like a magician,
The minutes quickly go by
A quick caress and touch
Then it’s time to say goodbye
March 10th, 2023 09:41
Dove said:
Love this one, course Im a sucker for rhymes.. Heartfelt sentiments,
for time passes so quickly
When I’m staring in your eyes
Just like a magician,
The minutes quickly go by
A quick caress and touch
Then it’s time to say goodbye
March 10th, 2023 09:41
With Both Eyes Closed
Dove said:
Both eyes closed is when the mind doth indulge
Take in a whiff of imagination or desires…
Anyhow, I see your point .. Tis true
March 10th, 2023 09:32
Dove said:
Both eyes closed is when the mind doth indulge
Take in a whiff of imagination or desires…
Anyhow, I see your point .. Tis true
March 10th, 2023 09:32
Why Do I Love Thee
L. B. Mek said:
Elizabeth Browning is clapping loud
Poetic intimacy, worded so eloquent!
simply Beautiful, dear Poet supreme
March 10th, 2023 03:51
L. B. Mek said:
Elizabeth Browning is clapping loud
Poetic intimacy, worded so eloquent!
simply Beautiful, dear Poet supreme
March 10th, 2023 03:51
With Both Eyes Closed
Bella Shepard said:
Your words of wisdom are both comforting and so true dear friend. Thank you for this parting piece, and look forward to your return. Safe travels!
March 9th, 2023 13:41
Bella Shepard said:
Your words of wisdom are both comforting and so true dear friend. Thank you for this parting piece, and look forward to your return. Safe travels!
March 9th, 2023 13:41
With Both Eyes Closed
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem and I hope you have an awesome vacation!! Clearing the snow? Its like our seasons have switched!
March 8th, 2023 13:33
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem and I hope you have an awesome vacation!! Clearing the snow? Its like our seasons have switched!
March 8th, 2023 13:33
With Both Eyes Closed
Fay Slimm. said:
Closed eyes see more than we could imagine when all around groping in near insanity the world never sees simple wonders and awareness evolving - --- - - well that\'s how this intriguing message appears to me........x
March 8th, 2023 11:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Closed eyes see more than we could imagine when all around groping in near insanity the world never sees simple wonders and awareness evolving - --- - - well that\'s how this intriguing message appears to me........x
March 8th, 2023 11:07
With Both Eyes Closed
Doggerel Dave said:
Literal mind intrudes once more...Please elucidate the terminology for the less than sophisticated: i.e. define \'greater good\' and \'bettered\' in this context...
Enjoy the break, Nev - if you are close to snowbound, to beat a retreat seems strategic....
March 8th, 2023 08:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Literal mind intrudes once more...Please elucidate the terminology for the less than sophisticated: i.e. define \'greater good\' and \'bettered\' in this context...
Enjoy the break, Nev - if you are close to snowbound, to beat a retreat seems strategic....
March 8th, 2023 08:12
With Both Eyes Closed
Goldfinch60 said:
The greater good is for each individual to assess Neville.
Enjoy your break.
Andy
March 8th, 2023 03:45
Goldfinch60 said:
The greater good is for each individual to assess Neville.
Enjoy your break.
Andy
March 8th, 2023 03:45
With Both Eyes Closed
L. B. Mek said:
(blind Hope, for those of us
who dream, eyes Wide shut!)
a lovely read & message Hyung
March 8th, 2023 03:07
L. B. Mek said:
(blind Hope, for those of us
who dream, eyes Wide shut!)
a lovely read & message Hyung
March 8th, 2023 03:07
In the Time it Takes to Say Goodbye
L. B. Mek said:
I fear, Hyung
few
will realise the depths
of yearning, hidden
in this most, affecting
work, their loss..
thank you!
such a tender poem n wording of ache
\'the fifty shades of sincerity\'s, poetic angst\'
(in Time
aching, wondrous memories
all that we\'ll have left, while
it Takes
poetic bravery, to word our discontent
to this distortion of sensation;
our heart\'s, convinced
we\'re but days removed from
that idyllic, scene
until, an untimely mirror
reminds us, its all a past
we can hardly picture...)
March 8th, 2023 03:04
L. B. Mek said:
I fear, Hyung
few
will realise the depths
of yearning, hidden
in this most, affecting
work, their loss..
thank you!
such a tender poem n wording of ache
\'the fifty shades of sincerity\'s, poetic angst\'
(in Time
aching, wondrous memories
all that we\'ll have left, while
it Takes
poetic bravery, to word our discontent
to this distortion of sensation;
our heart\'s, convinced
we\'re but days removed from
that idyllic, scene
until, an untimely mirror
reminds us, its all a past
we can hardly picture...)
March 8th, 2023 03:04
With Both Eyes Closed
orchidee said:
I\'ve not got both eyes closed yet. I\'m still working out how to blink with one eye. Eh??
This is how I spend me \'sad\' life, on things like that! lol.
March 8th, 2023 02:52
orchidee said:
I\'ve not got both eyes closed yet. I\'m still working out how to blink with one eye. Eh??
This is how I spend me \'sad\' life, on things like that! lol.
March 8th, 2023 02:52
In the Time it Takes to Say Goodbye
Fay Slimm. said:
Am glad the time it took to note the lilt in this lively ode giving me another view of crafted rhyming. Quietly insightful this piece of gentle erotica Nev.....x
March 7th, 2023 14:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Am glad the time it took to note the lilt in this lively ode giving me another view of crafted rhyming. Quietly insightful this piece of gentle erotica Nev.....x
March 7th, 2023 14:33
In the Time it Takes to Say Goodbye
Doggerel Dave said:
In the time it takes to read your poem, I got me a good rhythm going....
Enjoyed, Nev.
March 7th, 2023 07:52
Doggerel Dave said:
In the time it takes to read your poem, I got me a good rhythm going....
Enjoyed, Nev.
March 7th, 2023 07:52
In the Time it Takes to Say Goodbye
orchidee said:
Erm, if \'goodbye\' is the hardest word, I will say \'hello\' to ya! lol.
I\'ve swooned now - stanza 4. heehee.
March 7th, 2023 03:15
orchidee said:
Erm, if \'goodbye\' is the hardest word, I will say \'hello\' to ya! lol.
I\'ve swooned now - stanza 4. heehee.
March 7th, 2023 03:15
In Less Than the Blink of Two Eyes Perhaps
Doggerel Dave said:
Yep - Nice to have me.... too late ; I\'ll start earlier next time....
March 6th, 2023 16:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Yep - Nice to have me.... too late ; I\'ll start earlier next time....
March 6th, 2023 16:41
In Less Than the Blink of Two Eyes Perhaps
Christina8 said:
Such an emotional write! Time goes by entirely too quickly, doesn\'t it? I think it is brilliant! Saved to my favs...C
March 6th, 2023 06:56
Christina8 said:
Such an emotional write! Time goes by entirely too quickly, doesn\'t it? I think it is brilliant! Saved to my favs...C
March 6th, 2023 06:56
In Less Than the Blink of Two Eyes Perhaps
Fay Slimm. said:
Full of appealing metaphor this verse of lament for more time than a blink when together - -- yes mon ami --- mem\'ries seem all that it leaves - - such an emotive read..................x
March 6th, 2023 04:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Full of appealing metaphor this verse of lament for more time than a blink when together - -- yes mon ami --- mem\'ries seem all that it leaves - - such an emotive read..................x
March 6th, 2023 04:54
In Less Than the Blink of Two Eyes Perhaps
L. B. Mek said:
deity or happenstance\'s chance
what ever designed our heart\'s
had too much trust, in us
since it forgot to include that turnstile
swing door, valves
for all those, who visit our life
convincing us
they\'ll be by our side, forevermore
but yet disappear, in but a blink...
tis why
my cherished friend, fool that I am
force you, to put up
with my overzealous ways
and cringe worthy words
for
life\'s bitter aftertaste, has thought me
to never take \'a tomorrow\'
for granted
(I read and learn, dear wise Poet)
March 6th, 2023 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
deity or happenstance\'s chance
what ever designed our heart\'s
had too much trust, in us
since it forgot to include that turnstile
swing door, valves
for all those, who visit our life
convincing us
they\'ll be by our side, forevermore
but yet disappear, in but a blink...
tis why
my cherished friend, fool that I am
force you, to put up
with my overzealous ways
and cringe worthy words
for
life\'s bitter aftertaste, has thought me
to never take \'a tomorrow\'
for granted
(I read and learn, dear wise Poet)
March 6th, 2023 04:16
Forget the Name Remember the Taste
L. B. Mek said:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tiXBuoa5otQ
March 6th, 2023 04:08
L. B. Mek said:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tiXBuoa5otQ
March 6th, 2023 04:08
Underdog Days
L. B. Mek said:
so happy you\'ve found yours Hyung
a most worthy dedication
such a sweet read
(it takes but one, to accept us
with all our fallible faults, bared naked
our ugly, mercifully acknowledged
forgiven and caressed
by a knowing gaze and an Aurora
smile...)
March 6th, 2023 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
so happy you\'ve found yours Hyung
a most worthy dedication
such a sweet read
(it takes but one, to accept us
with all our fallible faults, bared naked
our ugly, mercifully acknowledged
forgiven and caressed
by a knowing gaze and an Aurora
smile...)
March 6th, 2023 04:04
In Less Than the Blink of Two Eyes Perhaps
orchidee said:
Yes, two eyes - how can we blink with just one eye and not with the other eye?! Unless we only got one eye of course - call me Nelson.
I must know these things! lol.
March 6th, 2023 03:24
orchidee said:
Yes, two eyes - how can we blink with just one eye and not with the other eye?! Unless we only got one eye of course - call me Nelson.
I must know these things! lol.
March 6th, 2023 03:24
In Less Than the Blink of Two Eyes Perhaps
Goldfinch60 said:
May those two eyes remain open soon Neville.
Andy
March 6th, 2023 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
May those two eyes remain open soon Neville.
Andy
March 6th, 2023 02:42
Forget the Name Remember the Taste
Fay Slimm. said:
There\'s something special about a meal with a lover and the flavour stays forever as does the scent of intimate perfume - -- writ to rouse mem\'ries is this bit of reflection - -- love it propitiously - - - and more............. x
March 5th, 2023 16:30
Fay Slimm. said:
There\'s something special about a meal with a lover and the flavour stays forever as does the scent of intimate perfume - -- writ to rouse mem\'ries is this bit of reflection - -- love it propitiously - - - and more............. x
March 5th, 2023 16:30
Forget the Name Remember the Taste
Christina8 said:
Oh i love the scent of bergamot!! Something so sexy about this write...the most powerful is the sense of smell, isn\'t it? But to remember one\'s taste is divine......love this!!
March 5th, 2023 10:14
Christina8 said:
Oh i love the scent of bergamot!! Something so sexy about this write...the most powerful is the sense of smell, isn\'t it? But to remember one\'s taste is divine......love this!!
March 5th, 2023 10:14
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