Comments received on poems by Neville
Underdog Days
Dove said:
Super Women with a cause
Miss Santa Claus
Deserves an applause
Finds a poet, A lover, Because...
Your probably sexy without flaws
March 5th, 2023 10:10
Dove said:
Super Women with a cause
Miss Santa Claus
Deserves an applause
Finds a poet, A lover, Because...
Your probably sexy without flaws
March 5th, 2023 10:10
Forget the Name Remember the Taste
Dove said:
Forget thy name, and remember the taste
of sweet rose petals caressing thine lips
The tongue may swallow in mortal haste
but a god, shall savor the flavor and not waste.... 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
March 5th, 2023 10:06
Dove said:
Forget thy name, and remember the taste
of sweet rose petals caressing thine lips
The tongue may swallow in mortal haste
but a god, shall savor the flavor and not waste.... 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
March 5th, 2023 10:06
Underdog Days
rhmn_7 said:
Just ask her then, I am sure there are enough reasons for her, for you..
March 5th, 2023 08:38
rhmn_7 said:
Just ask her then, I am sure there are enough reasons for her, for you..
March 5th, 2023 08:38
Forget the Name Remember the Taste
Doggerel Dave said:
Nice to give me a warning, Nev.... You will get no competitioon for her favours from me...One man\'s olfactory delight is this man\'s allergic reaction.... 😇!!!
March 5th, 2023 06:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Nice to give me a warning, Nev.... You will get no competitioon for her favours from me...One man\'s olfactory delight is this man\'s allergic reaction.... 😇!!!
March 5th, 2023 06:03
Forget the Name Remember the Taste
orchidee said:
And - KP has a certain pong about her, a wafting aroma!
March 5th, 2023 03:07
orchidee said:
And - KP has a certain pong about her, a wafting aroma!
March 5th, 2023 03:07
Forget the Name Remember the Taste
orchidee said:
Bergamot - Earl Grey Tea. Bleeuurggh!
Taste like drinking perfume. Not that I\'ve ever drank perfume! lol.
Some perfumes only make Fido and I sneeze or come out in a rash. Where\'s the rash? Swoon, I can\'t say! lol.
March 5th, 2023 03:07
orchidee said:
Bergamot - Earl Grey Tea. Bleeuurggh!
Taste like drinking perfume. Not that I\'ve ever drank perfume! lol.
Some perfumes only make Fido and I sneeze or come out in a rash. Where\'s the rash? Swoon, I can\'t say! lol.
March 5th, 2023 03:07
Underdog Days
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - PERHAPS That very last word shows natural confusion as questions are raised on being labeled ---- hmmm -- loved then are victims and losers - -- keep up the convincing that she saw you differently that female lover of underdogs mon ami - poetic craft at its absolute best...............x
March 4th, 2023 17:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - PERHAPS That very last word shows natural confusion as questions are raised on being labeled ---- hmmm -- loved then are victims and losers - -- keep up the convincing that she saw you differently that female lover of underdogs mon ami - poetic craft at its absolute best...............x
March 4th, 2023 17:05
Underdog Days
Bella Shepard said:
It sounds to me, that in you, she found an oasis. Good for her, good for you, good write dear friend!
March 4th, 2023 13:39
Bella Shepard said:
It sounds to me, that in you, she found an oasis. Good for her, good for you, good write dear friend!
March 4th, 2023 13:39
Underdog Days
orchidee said:
Cooeee again! \'Underdog?\' says Fido. There\'s no such thing to him! lol.
You beaten that egg yet?!
March 4th, 2023 12:52
orchidee said:
Cooeee again! \'Underdog?\' says Fido. There\'s no such thing to him! lol.
You beaten that egg yet?!
March 4th, 2023 12:52
Underdog Days
Christina8 said:
I really like this write....reminds me a bit of myself, always rooting for the underdog. But alas, your poem is great and makes ya think....C
March 4th, 2023 07:38
Christina8 said:
I really like this write....reminds me a bit of myself, always rooting for the underdog. But alas, your poem is great and makes ya think....C
March 4th, 2023 07:38
Underdog Days
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely for some other odd reason, Nev...😇
I know you like and encourage frivolity down here in the comments space ..but I do note and admire the structure of the works you put up on MPS... though I\'m sure that in the end they have a wider audience who don\'t bugger about as happens here....
March 4th, 2023 04:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely for some other odd reason, Nev...😇
I know you like and encourage frivolity down here in the comments space ..but I do note and admire the structure of the works you put up on MPS... though I\'m sure that in the end they have a wider audience who don\'t bugger about as happens here....
March 4th, 2023 04:03
Underdog Days
orchidee said:
Good write N. I wish KP had not chosen me, and that I had not said \'yes\' to her! Doh!
March 4th, 2023 03:28
orchidee said:
Good write N. I wish KP had not chosen me, and that I had not said \'yes\' to her! Doh!
March 4th, 2023 03:28
Underdog Days
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have oddities in ourselves that others latch onto Neville.
Andy
March 4th, 2023 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have oddities in ourselves that others latch onto Neville.
Andy
March 4th, 2023 02:50
Checking In
Dove said:
Mascara, haven\'t seen that in years...
🌷🌷🌷🌷
March 4th, 2023 01:30
Dove said:
Mascara, haven\'t seen that in years...
🌷🌷🌷🌷
March 4th, 2023 01:30
Almost Without Purpose
Dove said:
Lovely poem, there\'s always a purpose, but god gave us a mind to solve it, lol
Now whether we want to marinate the tiniest of specks, or the cries of the wild is up to our imagination.
March 4th, 2023 01:27
Dove said:
Lovely poem, there\'s always a purpose, but god gave us a mind to solve it, lol
Now whether we want to marinate the tiniest of specks, or the cries of the wild is up to our imagination.
March 4th, 2023 01:27
When the Walls Were Magnolia
Dove said:
Lilac & Cream, and love letters,
such beautiful imagery....
March 4th, 2023 01:21
Dove said:
Lilac & Cream, and love letters,
such beautiful imagery....
March 4th, 2023 01:21
Almost Without Purpose
MendedFences27 said:
Everything in life has a reason and a purpose, everything else are the idiosyncrasies of their existence. Take for instance, humankind.
A very deep thought expressed her in this poem, and I agree completely with your conclusion.
March 3rd, 2023 22:46
MendedFences27 said:
Everything in life has a reason and a purpose, everything else are the idiosyncrasies of their existence. Take for instance, humankind.
A very deep thought expressed her in this poem, and I agree completely with your conclusion.
March 3rd, 2023 22:46
Almost Without Purpose
Bella Shepard said:
You pose quite a quandry my friend. Perhaps the purpose of something, which seems purposeless, lies hidden in the purpose of something else....? Everything seems ultimately linked somehow. You provide a poem to feast upon here.
March 3rd, 2023 16:38
Bella Shepard said:
You pose quite a quandry my friend. Perhaps the purpose of something, which seems purposeless, lies hidden in the purpose of something else....? Everything seems ultimately linked somehow. You provide a poem to feast upon here.
March 3rd, 2023 16:38
Almost Without Purpose
arqios said:
And the acid that eats through the paintwork and such. We are at the mercy of the elements and its agencies.
March 3rd, 2023 08:31
arqios said:
And the acid that eats through the paintwork and such. We are at the mercy of the elements and its agencies.
March 3rd, 2023 08:31
Almost Without Purpose
Christina8 said:
I agree with so many comments before mine...but I know someday we\'ll have the reason for the purpose.I also agree with your last statement about some things having barely no purpose at all.....x
March 3rd, 2023 06:59
Christina8 said:
I agree with so many comments before mine...but I know someday we\'ll have the reason for the purpose.I also agree with your last statement about some things having barely no purpose at all.....x
March 3rd, 2023 06:59
Almost Without Purpose
sorenbarrett said:
So much philosophy in this write. Yes, almost is the key word. It is from our perspective that we see. From the bug\'s point of view we may have almost no purpose.
March 3rd, 2023 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
So much philosophy in this write. Yes, almost is the key word. It is from our perspective that we see. From the bug\'s point of view we may have almost no purpose.
March 3rd, 2023 06:18
Almost Without Purpose
L. B. Mek said:
\'maybe ignored and unheard ..\'
what is Purpose
in the face of such widespread
Ignorance
to the suffering, we all choose
as a background, ambience
to our plagued, existence
(such a vivid distillation
of paradox complexities
in our human condition;
a scene, as parable
words as subtle coaxing
of whatever humane, we still harbour
a Poem, to contemplate
cherish and revisit)
brilliantly executed!
I bow to your superior talent, dear Poet supreme
March 3rd, 2023 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
\'maybe ignored and unheard ..\'
what is Purpose
in the face of such widespread
Ignorance
to the suffering, we all choose
as a background, ambience
to our plagued, existence
(such a vivid distillation
of paradox complexities
in our human condition;
a scene, as parable
words as subtle coaxing
of whatever humane, we still harbour
a Poem, to contemplate
cherish and revisit)
brilliantly executed!
I bow to your superior talent, dear Poet supreme
March 3rd, 2023 05:20
Agnes of God
L. B. Mek said:
\'it\'s entirely about, all
the her\'s\'
see, we need only
visit
our Hellenic mythology
ancestry
to realise, just how many times
that \'trope\'
(Semele\'s nightmare
to Zeus\'s
\'thigh\' birthed child, Dionysus
ring a bell, to anyone...?)
has been used, and abused
by storytellers
across the history of humanity
makes you, think
if all story, is based
on some partial, component
of our everyday, REALITY
how many, mother\'s
were subjected, to such ill-fated
n highly, ignorant
societal abuses, for writer\'s
to assume, we would all
relate
so easily...
March 3rd, 2023 05:12
L. B. Mek said:
\'it\'s entirely about, all
the her\'s\'
see, we need only
visit
our Hellenic mythology
ancestry
to realise, just how many times
that \'trope\'
(Semele\'s nightmare
to Zeus\'s
\'thigh\' birthed child, Dionysus
ring a bell, to anyone...?)
has been used, and abused
by storytellers
across the history of humanity
makes you, think
if all story, is based
on some partial, component
of our everyday, REALITY
how many, mother\'s
were subjected, to such ill-fated
n highly, ignorant
societal abuses, for writer\'s
to assume, we would all
relate
so easily...
March 3rd, 2023 05:12
Let’s Not Forget Syria #2
L. B. Mek said:
\'just how many dreams
that cost ..\'
Nature, has a most callous way
of reminding us
just how precious, life truly is
(my thoughts go out to all
who\'ve suffered
and the many that lost their lives)
a worthy write, Hyung
thank you!
March 3rd, 2023 05:01
L. B. Mek said:
\'just how many dreams
that cost ..\'
Nature, has a most callous way
of reminding us
just how precious, life truly is
(my thoughts go out to all
who\'ve suffered
and the many that lost their lives)
a worthy write, Hyung
thank you!
March 3rd, 2023 05:01
Leftovers
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!
(be it a single, memory
revisiting at an imperfectly
timely, moment
or that picture, we walk past
time n again
yet this one moment, we stop
to consider, choosing
to allow the pain and remember
or
those remnant, belongings
decades later
that somehow, still feel
warm, to the touch
as if, just yesterday
they were in the hands
of the one, we so dearly wish
was still by our side...)
March 3rd, 2023 04:56
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!
(be it a single, memory
revisiting at an imperfectly
timely, moment
or that picture, we walk past
time n again
yet this one moment, we stop
to consider, choosing
to allow the pain and remember
or
those remnant, belongings
decades later
that somehow, still feel
warm, to the touch
as if, just yesterday
they were in the hands
of the one, we so dearly wish
was still by our side...)
March 3rd, 2023 04:56
Almost Without Purpose
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - -- natural questions Nev. - - the mystery of Purpose so simply and honestly penned . - --- The word - Almost in your chosen title puts these things in perspective for me when thinking of reasons for life\'s unquestionable varieties of sights and sounds - --- we know nothing yet but one day I\'m sure you agree we will find all the answers......x
March 3rd, 2023 04:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - -- natural questions Nev. - - the mystery of Purpose so simply and honestly penned . - --- The word - Almost in your chosen title puts these things in perspective for me when thinking of reasons for life\'s unquestionable varieties of sights and sounds - --- we know nothing yet but one day I\'m sure you agree we will find all the answers......x
March 3rd, 2023 04:09
Almost Without Purpose
Doggerel Dave said:
Q&A: What is the last thing which passes through the insect’s mind as it hits the windscreen? Answer: its bum. (an oldie but a goldie)
So much fine detail everywhere…but the sum totality is what provides our reality….Nev…😇
March 3rd, 2023 03:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Q&A: What is the last thing which passes through the insect’s mind as it hits the windscreen? Answer: its bum. (an oldie but a goldie)
So much fine detail everywhere…but the sum totality is what provides our reality….Nev…😇
March 3rd, 2023 03:33
Almost Without Purpose
orchidee said:
Yep, me marriage to KP has barely a reason, and almost, no purpose at all. Well, I can\'t think of any reason or purpose. I\'ve not got the foggiest! lol.
March 3rd, 2023 03:06
orchidee said:
Yep, me marriage to KP has barely a reason, and almost, no purpose at all. Well, I can\'t think of any reason or purpose. I\'ve not got the foggiest! lol.
March 3rd, 2023 03:06
Almost Without Purpose
Goldfinch60 said:
Every things has a purpose in life Neville, some we just do nit understand.
Andy
March 3rd, 2023 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Every things has a purpose in life Neville, some we just do nit understand.
Andy
March 3rd, 2023 02:44
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