Comments received on poems by Neville
Gooder than Good Even
Fay Slimm. said:
Naught can be gooder than memories of closeness between two like minds even for a few moments - regretting that would be an insanity - - or so methinks. - - Am loving your offering of pure neologism..........x
April 12th, 2022 03:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Naught can be gooder than memories of closeness between two like minds even for a few moments - regretting that would be an insanity - - or so methinks. - - Am loving your offering of pure neologism..........x
April 12th, 2022 03:15
Even Sadder than That Even
Rozina said:
This really tugs at the heartstrings. Heartbreaking.
April 11th, 2022 16:59
Rozina said:
This really tugs at the heartstrings. Heartbreaking.
April 11th, 2022 16:59
Even Sadder than That Even
Fay Slimm. said:
The saddest of sights is ravaged children which your concerned words capture on heaps of rubble to remind readers of the sheer desperation of those found after fire and death
- -- bewildered and weeping young faces do indeed need living and caring doctors and nurses - - shame on leaders unworthy of a new world of peace.................x
April 11th, 2022 10:44
Fay Slimm. said:
The saddest of sights is ravaged children which your concerned words capture on heaps of rubble to remind readers of the sheer desperation of those found after fire and death
- -- bewildered and weeping young faces do indeed need living and caring doctors and nurses - - shame on leaders unworthy of a new world of peace.................x
April 11th, 2022 10:44
Even Sadder than That Even
Christina8 said:
This is a magnificent poem, Neville. Magnificent but terribly sad.I can\'t even watch the news anymore. Hopefully some day the world will know peace. Fantastic job!
April 11th, 2022 09:45
Christina8 said:
This is a magnificent poem, Neville. Magnificent but terribly sad.I can\'t even watch the news anymore. Hopefully some day the world will know peace. Fantastic job!
April 11th, 2022 09:45
Even Sadder than That Even
Rocky Lagou said:
Great job. Currently our world is drowning in the evilness that is humankind. I pray for better days. Amazing and touching poem.
April 11th, 2022 08:35
Rocky Lagou said:
Great job. Currently our world is drowning in the evilness that is humankind. I pray for better days. Amazing and touching poem.
April 11th, 2022 08:35
Even Sadder than That Even
L. B. Mek said:
\'So now listen voyeur\'
this line
this break of poetic voice
this brave, artistry!
is why I\'m a proud fan
dear Poet, Supreme!
(as-ever
I read and learn)
and yes, at times
I too, have to fight
those enraged tears
from submerging my reality
into, utter despair..
April 11th, 2022 06:27
L. B. Mek said:
\'So now listen voyeur\'
this line
this break of poetic voice
this brave, artistry!
is why I\'m a proud fan
dear Poet, Supreme!
(as-ever
I read and learn)
and yes, at times
I too, have to fight
those enraged tears
from submerging my reality
into, utter despair..
April 11th, 2022 06:27
Even Sadder than That Even
dusk arising said:
The ruin of the roots of beauty itself cries in your words today. For what shall we build upon the ruined lifes but more opportunities for the human spirit to reveal how vile it can be. Like atwisting knife between the ribs of our hopes for brotherly love and world peace.
A timely thought provoking piece Neville (please have a peep at \"premonition\" i posted on the 8th april). Our peace loving achilles heel is tweaked into anger.
April 11th, 2022 05:34
dusk arising said:
The ruin of the roots of beauty itself cries in your words today. For what shall we build upon the ruined lifes but more opportunities for the human spirit to reveal how vile it can be. Like atwisting knife between the ribs of our hopes for brotherly love and world peace.
A timely thought provoking piece Neville (please have a peep at \"premonition\" i posted on the 8th april). Our peace loving achilles heel is tweaked into anger.
April 11th, 2022 05:34
Even Sadder than That Even
spilleronsheet said:
A poetry
A message of resurrection I seek
There you lay those magnificent lines
So well inked with blue describing the red that coloured the world canvas
Hope I see in the prose
Happen to believe to the belief of yours
A new world with a virtue called peace
April 11th, 2022 04:41
spilleronsheet said:
A poetry
A message of resurrection I seek
There you lay those magnificent lines
So well inked with blue describing the red that coloured the world canvas
Hope I see in the prose
Happen to believe to the belief of yours
A new world with a virtue called peace
April 11th, 2022 04:41
Why
Rozina said:
Unanswerable by the victims and others. But the main culprit knows why.
April 11th, 2022 01:07
Rozina said:
Unanswerable by the victims and others. But the main culprit knows why.
April 11th, 2022 01:07
Why
spilleronsheet said:
A thought provoking question
That awakes me in my deep sleep
Further to it a very intriguing poetry
So well matching with the recent times
I can hear the voices of so many who are marginalised
Very well worded dear Neville
April 10th, 2022 14:39
spilleronsheet said:
A thought provoking question
That awakes me in my deep sleep
Further to it a very intriguing poetry
So well matching with the recent times
I can hear the voices of so many who are marginalised
Very well worded dear Neville
April 10th, 2022 14:39
Why
Fay Slimm. said:
The horror of war\'s vile effect is brought to the fore by your experience when trying to enter the field of its victims dear Nev - -- your verse speaks its own clearly captured message of no answers to Why - -- - -- yet we must go on asking - -- - heartbreaking indeed this first read of my belated return to M.P.S. ..................x
April 10th, 2022 03:47
Fay Slimm. said:
The horror of war\'s vile effect is brought to the fore by your experience when trying to enter the field of its victims dear Nev - -- your verse speaks its own clearly captured message of no answers to Why - -- - -- yet we must go on asking - -- - heartbreaking indeed this first read of my belated return to M.P.S. ..................x
April 10th, 2022 03:47
Why
Poetic Dan said:
To many thoughts for this piece of art, so I\'ll just thank you for sharing your heart!
Take care
April 10th, 2022 02:07
Poetic Dan said:
To many thoughts for this piece of art, so I\'ll just thank you for sharing your heart!
Take care
April 10th, 2022 02:07
Why
L. B. Mek said:
I imagine
all children, Victims
of war
can relate, verbatim
to every word in your poem
dear Poet Supreme!
how you capture, the true horror
in the eyes, and voice
of lost, innocence
and beleaguered, mindsets
where a childhoods, precious
naivety has been, warped
far - far, too soon
to that sinister, world
of adulthoods, wanton cruelty...
April 7th, 2022 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
I imagine
all children, Victims
of war
can relate, verbatim
to every word in your poem
dear Poet Supreme!
how you capture, the true horror
in the eyes, and voice
of lost, innocence
and beleaguered, mindsets
where a childhoods, precious
naivety has been, warped
far - far, too soon
to that sinister, world
of adulthoods, wanton cruelty...
April 7th, 2022 03:45
Why
orchidee said:
Why? \'God knows\' as the saying goes, usually said out of resignation, but true words.
An extract from my nutty \'Meanwhile....\' jottings: \'Why did I start singing, and cause so much misery to millions?!\' heehee.
April 7th, 2022 02:06
orchidee said:
Why? \'God knows\' as the saying goes, usually said out of resignation, but true words.
An extract from my nutty \'Meanwhile....\' jottings: \'Why did I start singing, and cause so much misery to millions?!\' heehee.
April 7th, 2022 02:06
Why
Crowns4Christ said:
How sad, I don\'t think that question can ever be answered
April 6th, 2022 17:19
Crowns4Christ said:
How sad, I don\'t think that question can ever be answered
April 6th, 2022 17:19
The Mending of a Very Broken Man
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I’ve read your penned words a few times…very interesting. My take on this is that your poem is not about a man and/or a woman at all. Depending on the reader, a poem may have many interpretations. More often than not, your poems do lend themselves to that.
Laura🌻
April 4th, 2022 14:06
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I’ve read your penned words a few times…very interesting. My take on this is that your poem is not about a man and/or a woman at all. Depending on the reader, a poem may have many interpretations. More often than not, your poems do lend themselves to that.
Laura🌻
April 4th, 2022 14:06
The Mending of a Very Broken Man
Goldfinch60 said:
That healing can work both ways and is so important in a true relationship.
Andy
April 4th, 2022 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
That healing can work both ways and is so important in a true relationship.
Andy
April 4th, 2022 00:15
The Mending of a Very Broken Man
Accidental Poet said:
Let no man be so broken that he can\'t be mended. 😉
April 3rd, 2022 09:47
Accidental Poet said:
Let no man be so broken that he can\'t be mended. 😉
April 3rd, 2022 09:47
The Mending of a Very Broken Man
Christina8 said:
Very nice write N! Sexy too! ...C
April 3rd, 2022 09:28
Christina8 said:
Very nice write N! Sexy too! ...C
April 3rd, 2022 09:28
The Mending of a Very Broken Man
dusk arising said:
I\'ve reversed the roles a couple of times but never met (yet) one so obligingly caring.
Initially i thought you were going to be writing about a boat (first six lines).
April 3rd, 2022 08:14
dusk arising said:
I\'ve reversed the roles a couple of times but never met (yet) one so obligingly caring.
Initially i thought you were going to be writing about a boat (first six lines).
April 3rd, 2022 08:14
Zen Tree
SureshG said:
we forget that it is alive, from a single blade of grass, to a mighty oak.
It is the essential and eminent source of life, physically and spiritually, that Zen Tree of yours, that gently sways in the invisible breeze.
April 2nd, 2022 10:03
SureshG said:
we forget that it is alive, from a single blade of grass, to a mighty oak.
It is the essential and eminent source of life, physically and spiritually, that Zen Tree of yours, that gently sways in the invisible breeze.
April 2nd, 2022 10:03
Let us Not Forget Syria
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(one political family\'s, obsession
and an entire nation, left
in utter devastation...
I\'ll never forgive Blair
for tainting us all,
a true act of cowardly
Judas-esque, Venality!
making us all, unwilling perpetrators
of such a heinous
tyrannically wilful, disregard
for life..)
April 1st, 2022 06:12
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(one political family\'s, obsession
and an entire nation, left
in utter devastation...
I\'ll never forgive Blair
for tainting us all,
a true act of cowardly
Judas-esque, Venality!
making us all, unwilling perpetrators
of such a heinous
tyrannically wilful, disregard
for life..)
April 1st, 2022 06:12
Dirty Water
L. B. Mek said:
our H2O crisis, encapsulated
within such scarce, poignant words
poetry\'s aesthetics, reflecting
its empathetic message
yes, indeed
it will be our children
picking up
consequences: hefty Bill..
(heartachingly, depressing
to know this is our reality
despite all our progress)
an important write, dear Poet
April 1st, 2022 06:04
L. B. Mek said:
our H2O crisis, encapsulated
within such scarce, poignant words
poetry\'s aesthetics, reflecting
its empathetic message
yes, indeed
it will be our children
picking up
consequences: hefty Bill..
(heartachingly, depressing
to know this is our reality
despite all our progress)
an important write, dear Poet
April 1st, 2022 06:04
Let us Not Forget Syria
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A poignant piece of writing. We shall pray for all who are suffering…
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
March 31st, 2022 16:17
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A poignant piece of writing. We shall pray for all who are suffering…
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
March 31st, 2022 16:17
Let us Not Forget Syria
Paul Bell said:
Probably add a few more countries to that list. Sadly, Ukraine affects us financially, so we dwell on it more and more.
March 31st, 2022 13:39
Paul Bell said:
Probably add a few more countries to that list. Sadly, Ukraine affects us financially, so we dwell on it more and more.
March 31st, 2022 13:39
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