Comments received on poems by Neville
Charming
Bella Shepard said:
I suppose it\'s true that men typically only remember the last thing that they hear, or is it just selective. After having lived with one for 53 years I can also attest to the fact that they are attracted by shiny objects as well. lol. Just kidding, you are a treat in whatever you write dear friend.
April 15th, 2023 13:30
Bella Shepard said:
I suppose it\'s true that men typically only remember the last thing that they hear, or is it just selective. After having lived with one for 53 years I can also attest to the fact that they are attracted by shiny objects as well. lol. Just kidding, you are a treat in whatever you write dear friend.
April 15th, 2023 13:30
Charming
orchidee said:
I replied - not today, thank you! heehee.
But I said \'yes\' to KP - that charming, beautiful wife of mine. I\'ve not gone to specsavers, as you will notice! lol.
April 15th, 2023 08:09
orchidee said:
I replied - not today, thank you! heehee.
But I said \'yes\' to KP - that charming, beautiful wife of mine. I\'ve not gone to specsavers, as you will notice! lol.
April 15th, 2023 08:09
Still Calm, Safe and Free
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love be forever with you Neville.
Andy
April 15th, 2023 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love be forever with you Neville.
Andy
April 15th, 2023 00:37
Still Calm, Safe and Free
MendedFences27 said:
Well, I\'m digging deep here when I say that from mainly one word \"own,\" I sense the author is writing of his own birth. Also, the punctuation of the title
\"Still Calm, Safe and Free\" hints at personal feelings.
Those four words end up being treated separately in the context of the poem. I wonder of the significance they have to the author. I mean, why a \"windmill\" to define stillness? So, I\'m probably way off base, but that is what I sensed upon reading this. Greatly enjoyed. - Phil A.
April 14th, 2023 20:54
MendedFences27 said:
Well, I\'m digging deep here when I say that from mainly one word \"own,\" I sense the author is writing of his own birth. Also, the punctuation of the title
\"Still Calm, Safe and Free\" hints at personal feelings.
Those four words end up being treated separately in the context of the poem. I wonder of the significance they have to the author. I mean, why a \"windmill\" to define stillness? So, I\'m probably way off base, but that is what I sensed upon reading this. Greatly enjoyed. - Phil A.
April 14th, 2023 20:54
Still Calm, Safe and Free
arqios said:
Summer of \'67 that was a good vintage year.
April 14th, 2023 08:19
arqios said:
Summer of \'67 that was a good vintage year.
April 14th, 2023 08:19
Still Calm, Safe and Free
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem is a beautiful meditation on stillness, calmness, safety, and freedom. The use of vivid imagery and comparisons creates a sense of wonder and contemplation in the reader. Love this❤️
April 14th, 2023 03:37
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem is a beautiful meditation on stillness, calmness, safety, and freedom. The use of vivid imagery and comparisons creates a sense of wonder and contemplation in the reader. Love this❤️
April 14th, 2023 03:37
Under No Misconception
L. B. Mek said:
dear Suzy, court case floodgates have began worldwide;
those political vultures, have yet again profiteered
now those who were caught up in that political activism
hashtag tidal-wave of collective ignorance
find themselves entrenched
in those quicksand\'s of consequence, only
now, no one cares about their regrets or pain..
there must be a place worse than fantasy hell
for people who capitalise on the vulnerable
there must be, an entre galaxy dedicated to it
just for humanity\'s vile vultures
still
I hope those who are truly suffering with their identity
can find avenues of healing and counselling
(an important write, dear Poetess)
April 14th, 2023 03:16
L. B. Mek said:
dear Suzy, court case floodgates have began worldwide;
those political vultures, have yet again profiteered
now those who were caught up in that political activism
hashtag tidal-wave of collective ignorance
find themselves entrenched
in those quicksand\'s of consequence, only
now, no one cares about their regrets or pain..
there must be a place worse than fantasy hell
for people who capitalise on the vulnerable
there must be, an entre galaxy dedicated to it
just for humanity\'s vile vultures
still
I hope those who are truly suffering with their identity
can find avenues of healing and counselling
(an important write, dear Poetess)
April 14th, 2023 03:16
Beneath Her Pretty Dress
L. B. Mek said:
such intimacy of worded warmth
many a grand parent \'to be\'
would recognise your sentiments
(I\'m keeping everything crossed
that all goes well, Hyung!
and a champagne on ice, you know
to help you celebrate
as the thoughtful friend i am, lol)
🙏😎🍾
April 14th, 2023 03:04
L. B. Mek said:
such intimacy of worded warmth
many a grand parent \'to be\'
would recognise your sentiments
(I\'m keeping everything crossed
that all goes well, Hyung!
and a champagne on ice, you know
to help you celebrate
as the thoughtful friend i am, lol)
🙏😎🍾
April 14th, 2023 03:04
Suspended Between Mirrors
L. B. Mek said:
my mythology mind, reaches for Echo and Narcissus
mirage, linkages
my love of Keats takes me to his Lamia verses
\'\'Fast by the springs where she to bathe was wont,
And in those meads where sometime she might haunt,
Were strewn rich gifts, unknown to any Muse,
Though Fancy\'s casket were unlock\'d to choose.
Ah, what a world of love was at her feet!\'\'
(yet, when all rapture of reactionary immediacy
finds in me a portal to serene, thought
I must take heed and realise, once more
dear Poet supreme
it be your words and poetry, alone
that stir me to realms of poetic ecstasy)
and thus I thank ye, with utmost sincerity
(lol
forgive my egotistical foolery Hyung
I just loved your poem)
April 14th, 2023 02:58
L. B. Mek said:
my mythology mind, reaches for Echo and Narcissus
mirage, linkages
my love of Keats takes me to his Lamia verses
\'\'Fast by the springs where she to bathe was wont,
And in those meads where sometime she might haunt,
Were strewn rich gifts, unknown to any Muse,
Though Fancy\'s casket were unlock\'d to choose.
Ah, what a world of love was at her feet!\'\'
(yet, when all rapture of reactionary immediacy
finds in me a portal to serene, thought
I must take heed and realise, once more
dear Poet supreme
it be your words and poetry, alone
that stir me to realms of poetic ecstasy)
and thus I thank ye, with utmost sincerity
(lol
forgive my egotistical foolery Hyung
I just loved your poem)
April 14th, 2023 02:58
Still Calm, Safe and Free
Fay Slimm. said:
A tender look back to a special year when, from your delicately chosen comparisons - - maybe -- - a much loved new born appeared -- -- well only my guess of course - -- but such a beautiful feel to this read my dear friend............x
April 14th, 2023 02:49
Fay Slimm. said:
A tender look back to a special year when, from your delicately chosen comparisons - - maybe -- - a much loved new born appeared -- -- well only my guess of course - -- but such a beautiful feel to this read my dear friend............x
April 14th, 2023 02:49
Still Calm, Safe and Free
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Was it \'67 that I married KP? I dunno. Seems like hundreds of years ago, as time is NOT going quickly, as I\'m NOT enjoying myself - to reverse that saying! lol.
Now me next poem - \'Each day an agony (with KP)!\'
April 14th, 2023 02:16
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Was it \'67 that I married KP? I dunno. Seems like hundreds of years ago, as time is NOT going quickly, as I\'m NOT enjoying myself - to reverse that saying! lol.
Now me next poem - \'Each day an agony (with KP)!\'
April 14th, 2023 02:16
Beneath Her Pretty Dress
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that grandchild will be showered with love Neville.
Andy
April 14th, 2023 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that grandchild will be showered with love Neville.
Andy
April 14th, 2023 00:53
Under No Misconception
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Suzy which I agree with, in all my long life I have always tried to treat everybody with respect no matter what sexual orientation they may or may not be.
Andy
April 14th, 2023 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Suzy which I agree with, in all my long life I have always tried to treat everybody with respect no matter what sexual orientation they may or may not be.
Andy
April 14th, 2023 00:41
Under No Misconception
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"Under No Misconception\" is a thought-provoking and well-crafted poem that invites the reader to reflect on the meaning and value of parenthood, family, and intentionality.
April 13th, 2023 16:41
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"Under No Misconception\" is a thought-provoking and well-crafted poem that invites the reader to reflect on the meaning and value of parenthood, family, and intentionality.
April 13th, 2023 16:41
Under No Misconception
orchidee said:
I never gets any \'excitement\' or any of its connotations anyway. And Fido certainly don\'t let me have any \'ardour\'. He says it\'s not good for me and KP to have ardour. lol.
April 13th, 2023 11:56
orchidee said:
I never gets any \'excitement\' or any of its connotations anyway. And Fido certainly don\'t let me have any \'ardour\'. He says it\'s not good for me and KP to have ardour. lol.
April 13th, 2023 11:56
Under No Misconception
arqios said:
Been thinking of late about generations and such. Our lines of succession will end within 2 more generations, that\'s including cousins and nieces.
April 13th, 2023 09:25
arqios said:
Been thinking of late about generations and such. Our lines of succession will end within 2 more generations, that\'s including cousins and nieces.
April 13th, 2023 09:25
Under No Misconception
Christina8 said:
Very good and thoughtful poem. Yes, we have that issue in the old US of A but now they are letting children decide what they want to be and not letting parents know....a topic that is hot right now. I also am not bigoted, have a lot of gay and bi friends and family but children is a whole nother issue...x
April 13th, 2023 06:34
Christina8 said:
Very good and thoughtful poem. Yes, we have that issue in the old US of A but now they are letting children decide what they want to be and not letting parents know....a topic that is hot right now. I also am not bigoted, have a lot of gay and bi friends and family but children is a whole nother issue...x
April 13th, 2023 06:34
Under No Misconception
Fay Slimm. said:
How busy in bed - or out- that old fella and his gal must have been -- Wow - eighteen is surely a record - --. the\" dont knows\" I agree are coming out in scores of late but like ee I know a few and have no probs. at all with fluid genders \'cept those switched on a whim. p.s. - - there sure is no Sue about you who will ever be Nev. to me...........x
April 13th, 2023 03:59
Fay Slimm. said:
How busy in bed - or out- that old fella and his gal must have been -- Wow - eighteen is surely a record - --. the\" dont knows\" I agree are coming out in scores of late but like ee I know a few and have no probs. at all with fluid genders \'cept those switched on a whim. p.s. - - there sure is no Sue about you who will ever be Nev. to me...........x
April 13th, 2023 03:59
Beneath Her Pretty Dress
Fay Slimm. said:
Dear Sir Grandpop - - Meant to state that July is a proper girt month in which to be dropped - well at least that\'s what Cornish sages say.........x
April 12th, 2023 13:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Dear Sir Grandpop - - Meant to state that July is a proper girt month in which to be dropped - well at least that\'s what Cornish sages say.........x
April 12th, 2023 13:39
Beneath Her Pretty Dress
Accidental Poet said:
Bright ideas grow into little bouncing bundle of joys. Congrats Grandad. 👼
April 12th, 2023 08:03
Accidental Poet said:
Bright ideas grow into little bouncing bundle of joys. Congrats Grandad. 👼
April 12th, 2023 08:03
Beneath Her Pretty Dress
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem\'s themes of hidden beauty and the complexity of human nature are conveyed through a conversational tone that creates an intimate connection between the poet and the reader.
April 12th, 2023 07:00
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem\'s themes of hidden beauty and the complexity of human nature are conveyed through a conversational tone that creates an intimate connection between the poet and the reader.
April 12th, 2023 07:00
Beneath Her Pretty Dress
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a bundle of penned love for an as yet unborn but specially welcome new family member from a happy Grandad - -this is a write Nev. that your daughter will always treasure....x
April 12th, 2023 06:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a bundle of penned love for an as yet unborn but specially welcome new family member from a happy Grandad - -this is a write Nev. that your daughter will always treasure....x
April 12th, 2023 06:52
Beneath Her Pretty Dress
Lorna said:
All better now N? Congratulations and then some Granpappy........
April 12th, 2023 04:56
Lorna said:
All better now N? Congratulations and then some Granpappy........
April 12th, 2023 04:56
Beneath Her Pretty Dress
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
If you had not explained this, I would comment a \'bright idea\' of....... I never go there with KP, it would bring on a swoon! lol.
April 12th, 2023 02:50
orchidee said:
Good write Neville.
If you had not explained this, I would comment a \'bright idea\' of....... I never go there with KP, it would bring on a swoon! lol.
April 12th, 2023 02:50
Suspended Between Mirrors
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love be a reality instead of images Neville.
Andy
April 12th, 2023 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love be a reality instead of images Neville.
Andy
April 12th, 2023 01:26
Suspended Between Mirrors
Bella Shepard said:
Ah, be careful what you wish for. I can only assume that his heart\'s desire fulfilled, he died a happy man. Sad, but beautifully told dear friend.
April 11th, 2023 13:55
Bella Shepard said:
Ah, be careful what you wish for. I can only assume that his heart\'s desire fulfilled, he died a happy man. Sad, but beautifully told dear friend.
April 11th, 2023 13:55
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