Comments received on poems by Neville
Sonnet
Doggerel Dave said:
A lovely effort, dragging me here under false pretenses, Neville. LOL
June 15th, 2024 06:23
Doggerel Dave said:
A lovely effort, dragging me here under false pretenses, Neville. LOL
June 15th, 2024 06:23
So Very Well Ink-Lined
Neilton said:
That\'s the magic of reading I believe! Great poem Neville!
June 15th, 2024 02:24
Neilton said:
That\'s the magic of reading I believe! Great poem Neville!
June 15th, 2024 02:24
Memories, Numbers and A Whole Heap of Love
Thad Wilk said:
Beautiful poem and
dedication..
Really pulls
On the heartstrings! ๐ข
So sorry for your loss..
Thanks for sharing
my friend...
Best regards. Thad
June 14th, 2024 20:24
Thad Wilk said:
Beautiful poem and
dedication..
Really pulls
On the heartstrings! ๐ข
So sorry for your loss..
Thanks for sharing
my friend...
Best regards. Thad
June 14th, 2024 20:24
Sucker Punched
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! ๐ฎ
A very captivating
poem and
story indeed!
A lesson learned
the hard way.. ๐๐
My pleasure to read!!
Best regards, peace โ๏ธ
Thad
June 13th, 2024 15:24
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! ๐ฎ
A very captivating
poem and
story indeed!
A lesson learned
the hard way.. ๐๐
My pleasure to read!!
Best regards, peace โ๏ธ
Thad
June 13th, 2024 15:24
So Very Well Ink-Lined
Goldfinch60 said:
We can certainly get lost in books Neville.
Andy
June 11th, 2024 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
We can certainly get lost in books Neville.
Andy
June 11th, 2024 01:38
So Very Well Ink-Lined
orchidee said:
I didn\'t hear a word of what your read to me in that hour - I was asleep! lol.
June 10th, 2024 07:43
orchidee said:
I didn\'t hear a word of what your read to me in that hour - I was asleep! lol.
June 10th, 2024 07:43
So Very Well Ink-Lined
Doggerel Dave said:
It\'s quite a time since I\'ve managed to immerse myself in a book like that, and while on one level I regret this, at least my beauty sleep ain\'t suffering....
Solid truth there, Neville - Thanks.
June 10th, 2024 02:44
Doggerel Dave said:
It\'s quite a time since I\'ve managed to immerse myself in a book like that, and while on one level I regret this, at least my beauty sleep ain\'t suffering....
Solid truth there, Neville - Thanks.
June 10th, 2024 02:44
So Very Well Ink-Lined
Tom Dylan said:
A great write, mate, and love the last lines. Cheers, Tom.
June 10th, 2024 02:24
Tom Dylan said:
A great write, mate, and love the last lines. Cheers, Tom.
June 10th, 2024 02:24
Just Like Those Stains in The Sky
Goldfinch60 said:
Was she looking up at the cracks while you were looking at the bed Neville. LOL
Andy
June 10th, 2024 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Was she looking up at the cracks while you were looking at the bed Neville. LOL
Andy
June 10th, 2024 01:23
Sucker Punched
sorenbarrett said:
One trial learning? Loved the unexpected ending.
June 9th, 2024 23:03
sorenbarrett said:
One trial learning? Loved the unexpected ending.
June 9th, 2024 23:03
Just Like Those Stains in The Sky
Doggerel Dave said:
I do not know, Neville. - repetitions in a complex wall paper design at a holiday boarding house always got me in - looked forward to it every year... may account somewhat for my almost fanatical adherence to rhymes
June 9th, 2024 20:11
Doggerel Dave said:
I do not know, Neville. - repetitions in a complex wall paper design at a holiday boarding house always got me in - looked forward to it every year... may account somewhat for my almost fanatical adherence to rhymes
June 9th, 2024 20:11
A Day Out in The Country
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful scene beset with such tragedy that did not need to be, but for ignorance. Well told my friend.
June 9th, 2024 10:54
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful scene beset with such tragedy that did not need to be, but for ignorance. Well told my friend.
June 9th, 2024 10:54
Unstruck
Bella Shepard said:
Breathtaking dear friend! I love the beautiful presentation of this poem, and the unstruck chord resonates throughout, in music of the heart.
June 9th, 2024 10:45
Bella Shepard said:
Breathtaking dear friend! I love the beautiful presentation of this poem, and the unstruck chord resonates throughout, in music of the heart.
June 9th, 2024 10:45
Just Like Those Stains in The Sky
Neilton said:
An amazing poem indeed! Excellent work Neville!
June 9th, 2024 10:38
Neilton said:
An amazing poem indeed! Excellent work Neville!
June 9th, 2024 10:38
Perfect By Chance
Bella Shepard said:
By retracing our steps we find a logical explanation for what has come to pass. What a lovely word \"Chance\" can be when in the end it leads Kismet. Beautifully short, but oh so beautiful.
June 9th, 2024 10:37
Bella Shepard said:
By retracing our steps we find a logical explanation for what has come to pass. What a lovely word \"Chance\" can be when in the end it leads Kismet. Beautifully short, but oh so beautiful.
June 9th, 2024 10:37
Just Like Those Stains in The Sky
sorenbarrett said:
I have spent thousands of hours with Rorschach cards but not nearly as many as with clouds or grain in wood. Neville this poem is great in its view of how we impose on ambiguous items our own interpretations. I have found this most true of poems as well as intended meaning becomes distorted or reinterpreted in unintended ways in others minds. A great write Neville
June 9th, 2024 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
I have spent thousands of hours with Rorschach cards but not nearly as many as with clouds or grain in wood. Neville this poem is great in its view of how we impose on ambiguous items our own interpretations. I have found this most true of poems as well as intended meaning becomes distorted or reinterpreted in unintended ways in others minds. A great write Neville
June 9th, 2024 04:33
Just Like Those Stains in The Sky
orchidee said:
I knows Rorschach. He didn\'t live very long, sadly.
June 9th, 2024 03:34
orchidee said:
I knows Rorschach. He didn\'t live very long, sadly.
June 9th, 2024 03:34
Memories, Numbers and A Whole Heap of Love
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
KP never leaves me - boohoo I say - not in sadness, but in agony that she stays! lol.
June 8th, 2024 12:55
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
KP never leaves me - boohoo I say - not in sadness, but in agony that she stays! lol.
June 8th, 2024 12:55
Memories, Numbers and A Whole Heap of Love
sorenbarrett said:
Memories are all we have to take along with us. All Sanyasis in life, beggars with only our memories to carry. A most beautiful tribute Neville
June 8th, 2024 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
Memories are all we have to take along with us. All Sanyasis in life, beggars with only our memories to carry. A most beautiful tribute Neville
June 8th, 2024 05:14
Memories, Numbers and A Whole Heap of Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute Neville.
Andy
June 8th, 2024 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute Neville.
Andy
June 8th, 2024 02:11
Sucker Punched
Goldfinch60 said:
One must be very careful where one places their hands Neville.
Andy
June 8th, 2024 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
One must be very careful where one places their hands Neville.
Andy
June 8th, 2024 01:49
Sucker Punched
Doggerel Dave said:
Yep I got one of them, possibly slightly (but not much) lighter. A lesson learnt very early. The current permission/consent movement is still trying to catch up!
June 7th, 2024 23:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Yep I got one of them, possibly slightly (but not much) lighter. A lesson learnt very early. The current permission/consent movement is still trying to catch up!
June 7th, 2024 23:56
Sucker Punched
Thomas W Case said:
Lol. Hysterical. I\'m dealing with writer\'s groups, far far away and they have that kind of reaction and I didn\'t even touch them there. Lol
June 7th, 2024 11:36
Thomas W Case said:
Lol. Hysterical. I\'m dealing with writer\'s groups, far far away and they have that kind of reaction and I didn\'t even touch them there. Lol
June 7th, 2024 11:36
Sucker Punched
orchidee said:
Woof! Now you\'ve been and done it, say Fido to me.
I wasn\'t offended. How dare I delete your comments except unwittingly. lol. Sincere apologies, grovel, grovel, and all that guff!
June 7th, 2024 10:51
orchidee said:
Woof! Now you\'ve been and done it, say Fido to me.
I wasn\'t offended. How dare I delete your comments except unwittingly. lol. Sincere apologies, grovel, grovel, and all that guff!
June 7th, 2024 10:51
Sucker Punched
orchidee said:
Oops, deleted your comment somehow - your reply to me - while trying to delete an empty \'comments\' box of my own.
You commented something like \'I don\'t want to \'go there\'.
Who can bear it! lol.
June 7th, 2024 10:50
orchidee said:
Oops, deleted your comment somehow - your reply to me - while trying to delete an empty \'comments\' box of my own.
You commented something like \'I don\'t want to \'go there\'.
Who can bear it! lol.
June 7th, 2024 10:50
Sucker Punched
Christina8 said:
Ow, guess you\'ve learned a lesson there....very good write!
June 7th, 2024 09:28
Christina8 said:
Ow, guess you\'ve learned a lesson there....very good write!
June 7th, 2024 09:28
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