Comments received on poems by Neville
Once I Felt Like a Sky Hungry Kite
arqios said:
Oh to be in flight! The kite 🪁 was designed to be🙏🏻🕊️
February 20th, 2025 05:01
arqios said:
Oh to be in flight! The kite 🪁 was designed to be🙏🏻🕊️
February 20th, 2025 05:01
Portrait of A Wild Garden
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Neville
Nice And Witty
February 20th, 2025 04:29
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Neville
Nice And Witty
February 20th, 2025 04:29
Playing With Words
Goldfinch60 said:
She will find her way in your words as we all do Neville.
Andy
February 19th, 2025 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
She will find her way in your words as we all do Neville.
Andy
February 19th, 2025 02:54
Playing With Words
MendedFences27 said:
Love wrapped in poetry. Metaphors that are a metaphor. He and she involved in the \"silly old game.\" Maybe it\'s the way she \"looks,, walks, or \"plays\" That gets the \"Game\" started, and it ends at the end of your last line. Oh my, what a joy. Loved it, - Phil A.
February 18th, 2025 12:39
MendedFences27 said:
Love wrapped in poetry. Metaphors that are a metaphor. He and she involved in the \"silly old game.\" Maybe it\'s the way she \"looks,, walks, or \"plays\" That gets the \"Game\" started, and it ends at the end of your last line. Oh my, what a joy. Loved it, - Phil A.
February 18th, 2025 12:39
Playing With Words
Thomas W Case said:
A word salad of love. Excellent work, my friend.
February 18th, 2025 11:30
Thomas W Case said:
A word salad of love. Excellent work, my friend.
February 18th, 2025 11:30
Playing With Words
A B said:
Adorable in its playfulness. Intimate, and rhythmic ...blurs love, language, and interpretations beautifully.
February 18th, 2025 06:31
A B said:
Adorable in its playfulness. Intimate, and rhythmic ...blurs love, language, and interpretations beautifully.
February 18th, 2025 06:31
Playing With Words
Doggerel Dave said:
\'snot the destination, \'s the journey wot counts....
February 18th, 2025 06:10
Doggerel Dave said:
\'snot the destination, \'s the journey wot counts....
February 18th, 2025 06:10
Playing With Words
orchidee said:
Good write N. Ohh, let\'s wax metaphorical!
February 18th, 2025 06:04
orchidee said:
Good write N. Ohh, let\'s wax metaphorical!
February 18th, 2025 06:04
Playing With Words
Poetic Licence said:
A very entertaining write exploring do we look to much into what people have said or do we not value them when we should, or we just take them at face value and get on with our life, enjoyed the read
February 18th, 2025 05:30
Poetic Licence said:
A very entertaining write exploring do we look to much into what people have said or do we not value them when we should, or we just take them at face value and get on with our life, enjoyed the read
February 18th, 2025 05:30
Playing With Words
sorenbarrett said:
How titillating, word play, like foreplay excites with expectations, seductively luring one in with mental masturbation. Oops too much too fast . A fun but also deep probe at how much should we read into things. Find myself guilty of this all the time I think I may be doing it now.
February 18th, 2025 05:24
sorenbarrett said:
How titillating, word play, like foreplay excites with expectations, seductively luring one in with mental masturbation. Oops too much too fast . A fun but also deep probe at how much should we read into things. Find myself guilty of this all the time I think I may be doing it now.
February 18th, 2025 05:24
Playing With Words
arqios said:
My sentiments exactly… either too serious or held in so little regard, hardly ever just right on the words that I spout… it’s much like the art and skill of reading a room… but graced by poetry’s loom. 🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 05:04
arqios said:
My sentiments exactly… either too serious or held in so little regard, hardly ever just right on the words that I spout… it’s much like the art and skill of reading a room… but graced by poetry’s loom. 🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 05:04
Playing With Words
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Neville
A Nice Metaphor
Is A Sweet Journey
In Itself
February 18th, 2025 05:02
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Neville
A Nice Metaphor
Is A Sweet Journey
In Itself
February 18th, 2025 05:02
How Many More Planets
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Neville
Succinct With SunShine
February 18th, 2025 04:59
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Neville
Succinct With SunShine
February 18th, 2025 04:59
Insatiated (A Neologism for Our Times)
Goldfinch60 said:
It will be sated in time Neville.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
It will be sated in time Neville.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 02:57
Insatiated (A Neologism for Our Times)
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes, we just can\'t get enough of the blood, sweat, and tears. Ain\'t love grand. - Phil A.
February 17th, 2025 20:13
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes, we just can\'t get enough of the blood, sweat, and tears. Ain\'t love grand. - Phil A.
February 17th, 2025 20:13
Insatiated (A Neologism for Our Times)
Doggerel Dave said:
Comprehendfully poetimagery (I tried... when I found out wot a neologism woz...)
February 17th, 2025 18:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Comprehendfully poetimagery (I tried... when I found out wot a neologism woz...)
February 17th, 2025 18:17
Insatiated (A Neologism for Our Times)
sorenbarrett said:
Isn\'t that what poetry is know for? Creating new words, how many did Shakespeare create? Sometimes one can not get enough of a good thing. A very nicely worded poem with great lines from the very first sentence that sets the tone and is so nicely enriched and completed in the last line. This poem has no loose ends. Very nice Neville
February 17th, 2025 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
Isn\'t that what poetry is know for? Creating new words, how many did Shakespeare create? Sometimes one can not get enough of a good thing. A very nicely worded poem with great lines from the very first sentence that sets the tone and is so nicely enriched and completed in the last line. This poem has no loose ends. Very nice Neville
February 17th, 2025 09:15
Insatiated (A Neologism for Our Times)
Poetic Licence said:
That is a write that has made this old mind stop and think, and that makes it enjoyable to read
February 17th, 2025 08:58
Poetic Licence said:
That is a write that has made this old mind stop and think, and that makes it enjoyable to read
February 17th, 2025 08:58
Insatiated (A Neologism for Our Times)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful neologism. Well done, my friend. Cheers! 🍻
February 17th, 2025 08:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful neologism. Well done, my friend. Cheers! 🍻
February 17th, 2025 08:52
Insatiated (A Neologism for Our Times)
arqios said:
Love neologisms! They keep language alive and up to date!
February 17th, 2025 08:51
arqios said:
Love neologisms! They keep language alive and up to date!
February 17th, 2025 08:51
Some Things She Once Said
Goldfinch60 said:
Life can be like this on occasions Neville but eventually it all works out fine.
Andy
February 17th, 2025 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Life can be like this on occasions Neville but eventually it all works out fine.
Andy
February 17th, 2025 02:16
Sussing the Pot Plant
Parisab said:
Gardens always help the marriage grow, especially when looking through the “new French windows”-delightful imagery
February 16th, 2025 23:00
Parisab said:
Gardens always help the marriage grow, especially when looking through the “new French windows”-delightful imagery
February 16th, 2025 23:00
Some Things She Once Said
Cassie58 said:
I felt two people here brought together in unusual circumstances, both needing a tender loving touch. Some things aren’t meant to be, but they can leave beautiful memories in their wake. Lovely.
February 16th, 2025 13:08
Cassie58 said:
I felt two people here brought together in unusual circumstances, both needing a tender loving touch. Some things aren’t meant to be, but they can leave beautiful memories in their wake. Lovely.
February 16th, 2025 13:08
Some Things She Once Said
MendedFences27 said:
A love lost through the circumstances of separation. The distance serving as a guardian against entanglement. Still, it lingers in the heart and rises up in the words of the poet. Loved it. - Phil A.
February 16th, 2025 11:16
MendedFences27 said:
A love lost through the circumstances of separation. The distance serving as a guardian against entanglement. Still, it lingers in the heart and rises up in the words of the poet. Loved it. - Phil A.
February 16th, 2025 11:16
Some Things She Once Said
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sometimes distance is necessary and healthy. Wonderfully written, my friend. 👏
February 16th, 2025 11:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sometimes distance is necessary and healthy. Wonderfully written, my friend. 👏
February 16th, 2025 11:04
Some Things She Once Said
orchidee said:
I wish KP would say - I\'m emigrating to Australia! lol.
February 16th, 2025 10:38
orchidee said:
I wish KP would say - I\'m emigrating to Australia! lol.
February 16th, 2025 10:38
Some Things She Once Said
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense of distance is healthy also consideration of the child taken into account, but more than anything i get the sense of one wanting it to be more than the other was willing to give, probably wrong, but a very enjoyable and interesting read
February 16th, 2025 05:59
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense of distance is healthy also consideration of the child taken into account, but more than anything i get the sense of one wanting it to be more than the other was willing to give, probably wrong, but a very enjoyable and interesting read
February 16th, 2025 05:59
Some Things She Once Said
arqios said:
Life’s complications! Somehow we manage to live and move on. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 16th, 2025 05:14
arqios said:
Life’s complications! Somehow we manage to live and move on. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 16th, 2025 05:14
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