Comments received on poems by Neville
Because It Felt Right at The Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Everything goes back in time Neville and putting them in the right place brings a relief to all.
Andy
December 24th, 2024 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Everything goes back in time Neville and putting them in the right place brings a relief to all.
Andy
December 24th, 2024 02:47
When it All Seemed to Fit
Poetic Licence said:
And may there be a time again, good read
December 24th, 2024 02:39
Poetic Licence said:
And may there be a time again, good read
December 24th, 2024 02:39
When it All Seemed to Fit
arqios said:
Lit and dovetailing! Now there’s a sight to behold, well… better to be entangled in than be a peeper tommer…
December 24th, 2024 02:28
arqios said:
Lit and dovetailing! Now there’s a sight to behold, well… better to be entangled in than be a peeper tommer…
December 24th, 2024 02:28
Because It Felt Right at The Time
Cheeky Missy said:
And thus we see the triumph of sheer feelings in the justification of all manner items under discussion, in this particular case, some religious edifice was the resting place for a copy of the Scriptures and a book of poetry. Nevermind whose ejaculations were codified in poetic form, they were laid to rest in some religious edifice. Fascinating and beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a haunting, tantalizing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 23rd, 2024 19:56
Cheeky Missy said:
And thus we see the triumph of sheer feelings in the justification of all manner items under discussion, in this particular case, some religious edifice was the resting place for a copy of the Scriptures and a book of poetry. Nevermind whose ejaculations were codified in poetic form, they were laid to rest in some religious edifice. Fascinating and beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a haunting, tantalizing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 23rd, 2024 19:56
Because It Felt Right at The Time
Bella Shepard said:
Some tributes that are very personal cannot be explained, just felt. Beautiful my friend!
December 23rd, 2024 17:35
Bella Shepard said:
Some tributes that are very personal cannot be explained, just felt. Beautiful my friend!
December 23rd, 2024 17:35
Because It Felt Right at The Time
Michael Edwards said:
Its something I could see myself doing - maybe because I\'m atheist and would have no use for them but maybe also becuase I respect thase that do and human nature requires us all to put back into society
December 23rd, 2024 16:49
Michael Edwards said:
Its something I could see myself doing - maybe because I\'m atheist and would have no use for them but maybe also becuase I respect thase that do and human nature requires us all to put back into society
December 23rd, 2024 16:49
Because It Felt Right at The Time
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Grief is a funny bedfellow and dictates we do things and go through rituals that don’t always make much sense, but often bring healing. Well done, friend, in expressing that! The late poet, and God, are smiling, imho! Well done, Neville! 🌹👏❤️🩹
December 23rd, 2024 09:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Grief is a funny bedfellow and dictates we do things and go through rituals that don’t always make much sense, but often bring healing. Well done, friend, in expressing that! The late poet, and God, are smiling, imho! Well done, Neville! 🌹👏❤️🩹
December 23rd, 2024 09:56
Because It Felt Right at The Time
sorenbarrett said:
All things return to their origin and no less here. In that cycle there is a sense of completion. Then in metaphor it becomes all of our old beliefs that we shed and return to its place of origin leaving them by the old symbols of faith. Deep and heavy the words covering this grave of thoughts Neville
December 23rd, 2024 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
All things return to their origin and no less here. In that cycle there is a sense of completion. Then in metaphor it becomes all of our old beliefs that we shed and return to its place of origin leaving them by the old symbols of faith. Deep and heavy the words covering this grave of thoughts Neville
December 23rd, 2024 04:07
Because It Felt Right at The Time
Poetic Licence said:
This was an interesting read for me, i cannot make out if done out of resignation or respect, enjoyed the read
December 23rd, 2024 03:12
Poetic Licence said:
This was an interesting read for me, i cannot make out if done out of resignation or respect, enjoyed the read
December 23rd, 2024 03:12
Because It Felt Right at The Time
arqios said:
A proper sending off always makes us feel better, no matter the tradition followed. It’s a kind of closure wrapped together with respect and love. At least that’s the way it seems. Thanks for sharing.
December 23rd, 2024 02:52
arqios said:
A proper sending off always makes us feel better, no matter the tradition followed. It’s a kind of closure wrapped together with respect and love. At least that’s the way it seems. Thanks for sharing.
December 23rd, 2024 02:52
Like Butterflies in Snowstorms
Cheeky Missy said:
I shall feign a sense of wisdom not erst wont to be in view and refrain from begging the finer details pertaining to this particular stanza, though half fainting with curiosity. Why, why, why on earth my brother\'s book of [--] Jokes You Can\'t Resist was dredged up by your choice imagery, I can\'t guess, the blank white page portraying ghosts in a snowstorm roasting marshmallows too vividly before me oddly. Okay, enough of such rambling. Beautifully rendered with excellently evocative imagery and a heartbreaking poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 22nd, 2024 15:05
Cheeky Missy said:
I shall feign a sense of wisdom not erst wont to be in view and refrain from begging the finer details pertaining to this particular stanza, though half fainting with curiosity. Why, why, why on earth my brother\'s book of [--] Jokes You Can\'t Resist was dredged up by your choice imagery, I can\'t guess, the blank white page portraying ghosts in a snowstorm roasting marshmallows too vividly before me oddly. Okay, enough of such rambling. Beautifully rendered with excellently evocative imagery and a heartbreaking poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 22nd, 2024 15:05
Signs of The Times x5
Bella Shepard said:
Your compassion and understanding are ever present in your words, and they are truly appreciated, particularly at this time of disillusionment in the world, and in my country. Thank you my friend, I\'m so glad to be back among those who care. Peace & Love!
December 22nd, 2024 13:55
Bella Shepard said:
Your compassion and understanding are ever present in your words, and they are truly appreciated, particularly at this time of disillusionment in the world, and in my country. Thank you my friend, I\'m so glad to be back among those who care. Peace & Love!
December 22nd, 2024 13:55
Signs of The Times x5
Doggerel Dave said:
Thems the times alright and sorry I\'ve got to hurry I\'ve got to pack.......
December 21st, 2024 19:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Thems the times alright and sorry I\'ve got to hurry I\'ve got to pack.......
December 21st, 2024 19:51
Signs of The Times x5
Cheeky Missy said:
If, indeed, we\'d signed onto this, we\'d have no excuse for breathing, says me. Aptly rendered in such delightfully tasteful tercet stanzas capably conveying the essence of now, with such excellent imagery and humor to boot, we thanks thee for sharing, good Sir.
December 21st, 2024 15:50
Cheeky Missy said:
If, indeed, we\'d signed onto this, we\'d have no excuse for breathing, says me. Aptly rendered in such delightfully tasteful tercet stanzas capably conveying the essence of now, with such excellent imagery and humor to boot, we thanks thee for sharing, good Sir.
December 21st, 2024 15:50
Signs of The Times x5
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hear hear! And I love the alliteration! Well done my friend. 👏
December 21st, 2024 13:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hear hear! And I love the alliteration! Well done my friend. 👏
December 21st, 2024 13:33
Signs of The Times x5
rhmn_7 said:
You already got me in the first stanza, where do we sign up?
December 21st, 2024 07:54
rhmn_7 said:
You already got me in the first stanza, where do we sign up?
December 21st, 2024 07:54
Signs of The Times x5
Poetic Licence said:
we never read the small print in any contract we sign up to, this a reminder that maybe we should, Enjoyed the read.
December 21st, 2024 06:27
Poetic Licence said:
we never read the small print in any contract we sign up to, this a reminder that maybe we should, Enjoyed the read.
December 21st, 2024 06:27
Signs of The Times x5
arqios said:
Hey Neville, this poem offers a poignant and insightful commentary on the complexities of contemporary life. Through a series of vivid snapshots, you address various societal and personal issues, inviting readers to reflect on their own experiences and relationships. Glad our poetry and interactions bring all that into some manageable form. First responders do need bolstering, on a side note.
December 21st, 2024 06:03
arqios said:
Hey Neville, this poem offers a poignant and insightful commentary on the complexities of contemporary life. Through a series of vivid snapshots, you address various societal and personal issues, inviting readers to reflect on their own experiences and relationships. Glad our poetry and interactions bring all that into some manageable form. First responders do need bolstering, on a side note.
December 21st, 2024 06:03
Signs of The Times x5
cellinic said:
A very nice and poetic statement/ reflection. best wishes, my friend!
December 21st, 2024 05:47
cellinic said:
A very nice and poetic statement/ reflection. best wishes, my friend!
December 21st, 2024 05:47
Signs of The Times x5
sorenbarrett said:
The less control we have over our world the more we seek to control others. Another poem from the pen of a philosopher and so true it is.
December 21st, 2024 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
The less control we have over our world the more we seek to control others. Another poem from the pen of a philosopher and so true it is.
December 21st, 2024 04:13
Signs of The Times x5
orchidee said:
Teh first one sounds like someone that if you say \'hello\' to them, he (or she) will punch you on the nose and say \'What do ya mean hello; what you up to; why you speaking to me?\' (lol).
December 21st, 2024 03:34
orchidee said:
Teh first one sounds like someone that if you say \'hello\' to them, he (or she) will punch you on the nose and say \'What do ya mean hello; what you up to; why you speaking to me?\' (lol).
December 21st, 2024 03:34
Quick Fingers
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! I can just see them fangers now, a ghastly yellow-green hue to their customary shade and the nails what shoulda warned him, but failed. Beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 20th, 2024 16:00
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! I can just see them fangers now, a ghastly yellow-green hue to their customary shade and the nails what shoulda warned him, but failed. Beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 20th, 2024 16:00
Quick Fingers
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A brilliant study in superficialty, or at least that\'s what I felt. Please correct me if I was way off. Loved it
December 19th, 2024 11:14
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A brilliant study in superficialty, or at least that\'s what I felt. Please correct me if I was way off. Loved it
December 19th, 2024 11:14
A Hand Full of Ashes
teardrop said:
Sorry for feel grief, Your words express it well.
December 19th, 2024 06:23
teardrop said:
Sorry for feel grief, Your words express it well.
December 19th, 2024 06:23
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