Comments received on poems by Neville



Gaea’s Garden   
Dan Williams said:

Gaea rules. This is what I answer when asked what religion I am. Short but sweet.

October 6th, 2024 00:16

Gitanes
Dan Williams said:

Also means Blondes, Ottawa, and burgers. Your use is much better.

October 6th, 2024 00:14

Gaea’s Garden   
MendedFences27 said:

And so it is. Life, Death, Rebirth. A lot said in few words. The power of poetry. - Phil A.

October 5th, 2024 15:32

Gaea’s Garden   
Tony36 said:

Excellent

October 5th, 2024 12:30

Gaea’s Garden   
2781 said:

There\'s always hope!

October 5th, 2024 10:57

Gaea’s Garden   
orchidee said:

Gaea - same as Gaia?
I saw a big globe thingy named \'Gaia\'.

October 5th, 2024 08:29

Gitanes
sorenbarrett said:

Errotic yet as ephemeral as that smoke from the cigarette while the noir feel seems to linger long after. Very nicely done Neville

October 5th, 2024 06:17

Gaea’s Garden   
sorenbarrett said:

Ingeniously put Uranus being born of Gaea earth from earth so to speak became parent with her to other gods. The never ending circle born from nothing or chaos both mother and wife whe has no end. Yes indeed the seasons are a continual resurrection. Nicely done Neville

October 5th, 2024 06:00

Gitanes
Goldfinch60 said:

I smoked them many many years ago Neville.

Andy

October 5th, 2024 01:43

Gitanes
Thomas W Case said:

Very scenic. Reminds me of Waits or Cohen.

October 4th, 2024 16:08

Gitanes
orchidee said:

Good write N.

October 4th, 2024 10:08

Barely Touching
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words Neville, those petticoats do get in the way sometimes.

Andy

October 4th, 2024 01:22

The Reason Why Colours Make Out
NafisaSB said:

a true masterpiece- your words just fell in the right places and created this beautiful vision. keep it coming..

October 3rd, 2024 22:30

Barely Touching
orchidee said:

I might swoon if you explain the poem in more detail. lol.

October 3rd, 2024 13:56

Barely Touching
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 3rd, 2024 09:22

The Reason Why Colours Make Out
Goldfinch60 said:

Superb words Neville and so very true.

Andy

October 3rd, 2024 01:05

The Reason Why Colours Make Out
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 2nd, 2024 13:31

The Reason Why Colours Make Out
Accidental Poet said:

Oh, if all mornings could birth so brilliantly. A masterful write N. 😁👍

October 2nd, 2024 09:04

The Reason Why Colours Make Out
Jerry Reynolds said:

Oh, dear Neville, you wake the painter in me with that one.

October 2nd, 2024 08:46

The Reason Why Colours Make Out
sorenbarrett said:

Beautifully crafted both the imagery and the subtle rhyme within. It began softly and emerged itself as the dawn with glowing soft colors. Very nice

October 2nd, 2024 04:41

The Reason Why Colours Make Out
orchidee said:

Good write N.

October 2nd, 2024 03:25

Irksome Quandaries
Goldfinch60 said:

Infinity is at the end of the road Neville.

Andy

October 1st, 2024 01:41

Irksome Quandaries
MendedFences27 said:

The closer you get to the end, the more infinity looms like a precipice. The only evidence along the continuum lies buried in the graveyards.
As best I could I attempted to answer your question, raised in your poem. I doubt it will be of much help, because it is obvious.
Unless of course. the continuum is the evidence. - Thank you for provoking my thoughts, - Phil A.

September 30th, 2024 10:04

Irksome Quandaries
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

September 30th, 2024 09:27

Irksome Quandaries
Doggerel Dave said:

Have you heard of psychosis, perchance? During my adolescence I pondered this, and had to claw myself back to mundane reality all by my self.... Sorry, Neville - no laughs here.

September 30th, 2024 07:14

Calling the Bluff
Tom Dylan said:

This one made me smile, Neville. There was almost an Eastwood \'Go ahead, make my day,\' ending. Loved it.

September 30th, 2024 06:38

Irksome Quandaries
orchidee said:

It\'s all right for some, having irksome quandaries. Are they good to have?!
I\'m talking rubbish again. lol.

September 30th, 2024 05:54

Irksome Quandaries
sorenbarrett said:

That picture doesn\'t fit into my three dimentional mind, My guess is it lies off the continuum. But then who am I to say, never was much good at math

September 30th, 2024 05:37

Calling the Bluff
Goldfinch60 said:

Protection perfect eh Neville? I do have a Swiss Army knife. LOL

Andy

September 30th, 2024 02:18

Calling the Bluff
Dan Williams said:

I almost hesitate to say in this judgmental world, but I am also armed to the teeth. Better to have it and not need it...

September 30th, 2024 00:38



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