Comments received on poems by Neville



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Bobby O said:

Thus the origin of those glasses ?

February 8th, 2024 06:04

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Tom C Dylan said:

An intriguing idea, mate. All about the mirrors. Very well written as always. Cheers, Tom.

February 8th, 2024 05:28

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Teddy.15 said:

lol 🤣 I bet it would be worse if it was upside down dear Nev. Mirrors have a lot to answer for. You made me chuckle 🤭

February 8th, 2024 04:46

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Doggerel Dave said:

😇The brain (and I\'m fully aware that I\'m trying to teach grannie to suck eggs here, Neville) interprets the world as it will....My mirror shows me a young fella (no older than 35) with a broad grin and all the optimism in the world...You\'d have a word for that - I do believe it begins with \'D\', but I\'m happy with that.....

February 8th, 2024 03:53

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orchidee said:

As I say, I got no mirrors to look into now - KP looked in them, and they all smashed. lol. They couldn\'t bear the sight of trouts.

February 8th, 2024 03:19

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Goldfinch60 said:

You only ever see the reverse of yourself in the mirror Neville. LOL

Andy

February 8th, 2024 02:41

Ouroboros
Goldfinch60 said:

\"Round like a circle in a spiral, like a wheel within a wheel
Never ending or beginning on an ever spinning reel
Like a snowball down a mountain, or a carnival balloon
Like a carousel that\'s turning running rings around the moon
Like a clock whose hands are sweeping past the minutes of its face
And the world is like an apple whirling silently in space
Like the circles that you find in the windmills of your mind!\"

Andy

February 8th, 2024 02:23

Ouroboros
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

February 7th, 2024 19:39

Ouroboros
Bobby O said:

I like it and I’m wondering if that perfect circle referred to a wrapped around tail? Or is it imagery of other??

February 7th, 2024 18:27

Ouroboros
Doggerel Dave said:

Oh you mean
https://marscampers.com.au/explore-mars-campers/hoop-snakes-the-worlds-deadliest-snake/

February 7th, 2024 08:03

Ouroboros
Teddy.15 said:

My muse has skipped over to your house Nev. Wow che emozione ❤️❤️❤️❤️

February 7th, 2024 05:57

Ouroboros
orchidee said:

I l looked up that bit of \'French\' - Ouro-wotsit.
KP will eat her own tail. But it won\'t help me. She will still have her botox face left at the end! lol.

February 7th, 2024 03:02

At The End of The Line
Goldfinch60 said:

I will leave a question mark Neville won\'t I ?

Andy

February 7th, 2024 02:46

Sorry
Neville said:



Thank you again my very dearest of Cassie\'s .. Neville

February 7th, 2024 02:45

Sorry
Cassie58 said:

The hardest word for some and yet when said with conviction, the most powerful of all. Ghosts and guilt, what a combination. A car wreck if not handled with care. Thought provoking brevity here Neville. Sorry a five letter word that can move mountains. Your brevity shows much wisdom my friend.

February 7th, 2024 02:25

At The End of The Line
Bella Shepard said:

Words of wisdom! Three thought filled lines that delve deeply into the core of who we are. A wonderful reflection!

February 6th, 2024 17:13

At The End of The Line
orchidee said:

It must be 3 dots, not 2. It\'s all very technical. lol.

February 6th, 2024 14:47

At The End of The Line
Thomas W Case said:

A legacy would be nice. Lol. Great work N.

February 6th, 2024 12:11

At The End of The Line
Doggerel Dave said:

You are only causing confusion here Neville; the end of the line is a full stop...... and it\'s been nice being around for a long time, but all good things must come to an

February 6th, 2024 08:33

At The End of The Line
Accidental Poet said:

well this is a no brainer, I\'ll leave behind Orchi singing \"Days of Wine and Roses\". 🙄 Well penned N.

February 6th, 2024 08:10

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Tom C Dylan said:

What a thought-provoking little poem. Brilliantly done, Neville.

February 6th, 2024 03:20

At The End of The Line
orchidee said:

Those ... dots imply more words to come.
At the end of the line I get off the train. Doh! But I buy KP a one-way ticket to Australia. lol.

February 6th, 2024 03:18

At The End of The Line
Alan R said:

Strong

February 6th, 2024 03:16

At The End of The Line
Teddy.15 said:

Hopefully some fond memories for who we spent our time with. ❤️

February 6th, 2024 03:15

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Goldfinch60 said:

Those moistened lips are obviously ready to quench your thirst Neville - and my it ever be so.

Andy

February 6th, 2024 02:36

Spillage
Bella Shepard said:

Wow! I\'d say the imagery is explosive, I sincerely hope that everything came out all right. Cheekily delightful you naughty boy!

February 5th, 2024 15:51

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Thomas W Case said:

Very relatable.

February 5th, 2024 10:13

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orchidee said:

Ahh a poem about KP.... bloated.... lol.

February 5th, 2024 08:43

Famine
Garth Rakumakoe said:

When famine walks the land. Brought to life so vividly, by your pen sir. A moving piece.

February 5th, 2024 08:32

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Accidental Poet said:

And someone needs a room with a
door to lock. 🙄

February 5th, 2024 07:02



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