Comments received on poems by Neville
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orchidee said:
A fine write N which combines war \'naturally\' (through humans fighting each other) and Christianity.
November 10th, 2024 03:04
orchidee said:
A fine write N which combines war \'naturally\' (through humans fighting each other) and Christianity.
November 10th, 2024 03:04
Emophilia
Goldfinch60 said:
Falling in love again eh Neville? One dya it may happen and it will be the love of your life as it is for me.
Andy
November 10th, 2024 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Falling in love again eh Neville? One dya it may happen and it will be the love of your life as it is for me.
Andy
November 10th, 2024 02:42
Emophilia
Dan Williams said:
Yes, like me, an hour ago. Several times over fifty years. Nice work.
November 10th, 2024 01:13
Dan Williams said:
Yes, like me, an hour ago. Several times over fifty years. Nice work.
November 10th, 2024 01:13
Emophilia
MendedFences27 said:
Falling in love is not something one does quickly .... except that I did so. How soon? I swear instantaneously. So, I can connect with your poem\'s sentiment. \"I fell in love an hour ago,\" felt very familiar to me. The whole of your poem was more like a reminiscence. Loved it. - Phi A.
November 9th, 2024 21:29
MendedFences27 said:
Falling in love is not something one does quickly .... except that I did so. How soon? I swear instantaneously. So, I can connect with your poem\'s sentiment. \"I fell in love an hour ago,\" felt very familiar to me. The whole of your poem was more like a reminiscence. Loved it. - Phi A.
November 9th, 2024 21:29
Emophilia
Thad Wilk said:
Haaa!
You fell in love
with your psyche, sounds like! 🤪
Great fun read indeed!! 👍 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 9th, 2024 10:23
Thad Wilk said:
Haaa!
You fell in love
with your psyche, sounds like! 🤪
Great fun read indeed!! 👍 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 9th, 2024 10:23
Emophilia
orchidee said:
It wasn\'t an emo sort of marriage for KP and I. lol.
November 9th, 2024 10:09
orchidee said:
It wasn\'t an emo sort of marriage for KP and I. lol.
November 9th, 2024 10:09
Emophilia
Cassie58 said:
I shouldn’t laugh at this scenario, but I did. How positively exhausting to fall in love so easily and also mind blowing the difficult situations that could lead to. Far better being a control freak :) I liked Dave the Dawgs take, wot fine financial acumen he has :) Learned a new word today. Life long learning and all that.
November 9th, 2024 07:10
Cassie58 said:
I shouldn’t laugh at this scenario, but I did. How positively exhausting to fall in love so easily and also mind blowing the difficult situations that could lead to. Far better being a control freak :) I liked Dave the Dawgs take, wot fine financial acumen he has :) Learned a new word today. Life long learning and all that.
November 9th, 2024 07:10
Emophilia
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t need to spend time with Prof Google. I spends too much time in the company of... let\'s go with transference - \"start by telling me how much you
love me doc ..\" After that you can charge wot you like.....😜👍
November 9th, 2024 05:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t need to spend time with Prof Google. I spends too much time in the company of... let\'s go with transference - \"start by telling me how much you
love me doc ..\" After that you can charge wot you like.....😜👍
November 9th, 2024 05:21
Wilderness
Dan Williams said:
Worked outside most of my life, always look forward first cold, as much as for spring. Eh?
November 9th, 2024 01:04
Dan Williams said:
Worked outside most of my life, always look forward first cold, as much as for spring. Eh?
November 9th, 2024 01:04
Wilderness
Doggerel Dave said:
No fact you haven\'t disclosed there....like you locked yourself in your walk in fridge? Come on, fess up Neville...🙃
November 8th, 2024 18:42
Doggerel Dave said:
No fact you haven\'t disclosed there....like you locked yourself in your walk in fridge? Come on, fess up Neville...🙃
November 8th, 2024 18:42
Wilderness
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem,
deep, dark and poignant 😢
and eloquently
expressed throughout!! 💯
Thanks for sharing,
much enjoyed!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 8th, 2024 15:13
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem,
deep, dark and poignant 😢
and eloquently
expressed throughout!! 💯
Thanks for sharing,
much enjoyed!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 8th, 2024 15:13
Wilderness
MendedFences27 said:
Lost in the wilderness, of any sort, becomes a game of survival. In the winter, it is more dangerous. One must stay dry, seek shelter, find food. A lack of familiarity with one\'s surroundings compounds the danger. People are social animals requiring companionship. When left alone they feel depressed. That\'s what I got from your poem. It seemed more of an allegory to me. Much enjoyed reading this. - Phil A.
November 8th, 2024 13:48
MendedFences27 said:
Lost in the wilderness, of any sort, becomes a game of survival. In the winter, it is more dangerous. One must stay dry, seek shelter, find food. A lack of familiarity with one\'s surroundings compounds the danger. People are social animals requiring companionship. When left alone they feel depressed. That\'s what I got from your poem. It seemed more of an allegory to me. Much enjoyed reading this. - Phil A.
November 8th, 2024 13:48
Wilderness
sorenbarrett said:
Neville this reminds me of the story to build a fire. It has a cold feel to it and the metaphor as well feels cold. I like it quite a bit, even though I don’t like cold weather anymore.
November 8th, 2024 12:52
sorenbarrett said:
Neville this reminds me of the story to build a fire. It has a cold feel to it and the metaphor as well feels cold. I like it quite a bit, even though I don’t like cold weather anymore.
November 8th, 2024 12:52
Wilderness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Boy do I know this feeling.The juxtaposition between the paint and beauty in the winter brilliantly bolsters this wonderful emote! Great job, my friend! 🖤❤️🖤👏🌹
November 8th, 2024 11:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Boy do I know this feeling.The juxtaposition between the paint and beauty in the winter brilliantly bolsters this wonderful emote! Great job, my friend! 🖤❤️🖤👏🌹
November 8th, 2024 11:55
Glimpsed
Cassie58 said:
May that little girl’s eyes always sparkle and catch the light in life wherever it is, and may her Grandfather have many opportunities to witness it. Prisms dancing are so beautiful. Refracted light on glass shards always memorable. Such a visual delight Neville.
November 8th, 2024 03:53
Cassie58 said:
May that little girl’s eyes always sparkle and catch the light in life wherever it is, and may her Grandfather have many opportunities to witness it. Prisms dancing are so beautiful. Refracted light on glass shards always memorable. Such a visual delight Neville.
November 8th, 2024 03:53
Glimpsed
Goldfinch60 said:
May those prisms of light always dance in your life Neville.
Andy
November 8th, 2024 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
May those prisms of light always dance in your life Neville.
Andy
November 8th, 2024 02:43
Glimpsed
Cheeky Missy said:
What, forsooth, is it about light, glittering, flickering, twinkling in whatever medium, that draws the eye and soul almost with a gasp of excitement? But it forever does. The elusive female observed, breathtaken for a moment in that glance translates into a deeper instance of reflection. Fascinating and intriguing, charming and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery, this tantalizes. Thank you for sharing.
November 7th, 2024 20:26
Cheeky Missy said:
What, forsooth, is it about light, glittering, flickering, twinkling in whatever medium, that draws the eye and soul almost with a gasp of excitement? But it forever does. The elusive female observed, breathtaken for a moment in that glance translates into a deeper instance of reflection. Fascinating and intriguing, charming and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery, this tantalizes. Thank you for sharing.
November 7th, 2024 20:26
Glimpsed
MendedFences27 said:
Funny how, when something changes color we all become amazed. Refracted light like in a rainbow or here in your \"bottles\" can light up someone\'s eyes. It\'s a scene well painted by you. I loved \" prisms dancing.\" - Phil A.
November 7th, 2024 18:48
MendedFences27 said:
Funny how, when something changes color we all become amazed. Refracted light like in a rainbow or here in your \"bottles\" can light up someone\'s eyes. It\'s a scene well painted by you. I loved \" prisms dancing.\" - Phil A.
November 7th, 2024 18:48
Glimpsed
Doggerel Dave said:
Exactly so.
The view from my kitchen window (breakfast) sans palms, sky distant, foreground corrugated roof. Over eight years assembly a carefully curated line of bottles (not one screw top) block the corrugations, while they play patterns through the glass…….. her eyes have yet to light up…might have traded her in if she hadn’t other virtues……
November 7th, 2024 07:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Exactly so.
The view from my kitchen window (breakfast) sans palms, sky distant, foreground corrugated roof. Over eight years assembly a carefully curated line of bottles (not one screw top) block the corrugations, while they play patterns through the glass…….. her eyes have yet to light up…might have traded her in if she hadn’t other virtues……
November 7th, 2024 07:24
Glimpsed
arqios said:
Anything bright and shiny has its distinct appeal, even polished chrome and stainless steel.
November 7th, 2024 06:52
arqios said:
Anything bright and shiny has its distinct appeal, even polished chrome and stainless steel.
November 7th, 2024 06:52
Glimpsed
sorenbarrett said:
The pairing ot the lighting up of her eyes with the glints from the bottles no accident, Synchronicity Jung felt was a force of equal validity to causation. I ching as valid as probability. What on the surface may seem casual may be causal. Just babeling Neville
November 7th, 2024 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
The pairing ot the lighting up of her eyes with the glints from the bottles no accident, Synchronicity Jung felt was a force of equal validity to causation. I ching as valid as probability. What on the surface may seem casual may be causal. Just babeling Neville
November 7th, 2024 04:10
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