Comments received on poems by Neville
Amaterasu
Jerry Reynolds said:
Looking directly at a Goddess is tricky business.
I prefer a side glance. Well done, Neville.
November 21st, 2024 10:34
Jerry Reynolds said:
Looking directly at a Goddess is tricky business.
I prefer a side glance. Well done, Neville.
November 21st, 2024 10:34
Amaterasu
arqios said:
Let’s take a dive into deep waters for a brief moment: Inner vision is a profound ability to perceive and internalize moments of transcendent beauty and significance beyond the physical realm. It allows us to capture the ethereal essence of experiences, transforming them into deeply personal, spiritual reflections that resonate within our soul. This inward gaze, like that of the observer of Amaterasu, embraces an interplay of light and shadow, presence and absence, revealing the eternal and divine within fleeting moments of our lives. Or perhaps she was just so dazzling so as to effect such a meditation.
November 21st, 2024 06:09
arqios said:
Let’s take a dive into deep waters for a brief moment: Inner vision is a profound ability to perceive and internalize moments of transcendent beauty and significance beyond the physical realm. It allows us to capture the ethereal essence of experiences, transforming them into deeply personal, spiritual reflections that resonate within our soul. This inward gaze, like that of the observer of Amaterasu, embraces an interplay of light and shadow, presence and absence, revealing the eternal and divine within fleeting moments of our lives. Or perhaps she was just so dazzling so as to effect such a meditation.
November 21st, 2024 06:09
Amaterasu
sorenbarrett said:
The Shinto sun goddess one of the three precious children. The moon and the storm may make a mist as well. Beautifully written, Neville.
November 21st, 2024 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
The Shinto sun goddess one of the three precious children. The moon and the storm may make a mist as well. Beautifully written, Neville.
November 21st, 2024 04:18
Amaterasu
orchidee said:
Well, you can\'t mean KP, unless you mean radiance of old trouts! lol
November 21st, 2024 03:42
orchidee said:
Well, you can\'t mean KP, unless you mean radiance of old trouts! lol
November 21st, 2024 03:42
Amaterasu
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh! Rendered with a strong and lively poignancy which transports the dainty imagery beautifully adorning it to heights that leave me nearly gasping for a breath from the heady indulgence, ah, where hast thou taken me dear writer? Thank you very much for sharing.
November 21st, 2024 02:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh! Rendered with a strong and lively poignancy which transports the dainty imagery beautifully adorning it to heights that leave me nearly gasping for a breath from the heady indulgence, ah, where hast thou taken me dear writer? Thank you very much for sharing.
November 21st, 2024 02:44
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NafisaSB said:
such a powerful message in just three lines.
hats off to your creativity
November 21st, 2024 02:27
NafisaSB said:
such a powerful message in just three lines.
hats off to your creativity
November 21st, 2024 02:27
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Cheeky Missy said:
Delicate as the morsels which compose the snow and prettily rendered with a haunting poignancy and excellent imagery, me likes right well. Thank you for sharing.
November 21st, 2024 02:13
Cheeky Missy said:
Delicate as the morsels which compose the snow and prettily rendered with a haunting poignancy and excellent imagery, me likes right well. Thank you for sharing.
November 21st, 2024 02:13
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Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll go with the snow - or rather not.
Homeless? a careless society.
November 20th, 2024 08:58
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll go with the snow - or rather not.
Homeless? a careless society.
November 20th, 2024 08:58
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Homelessness is awful, and as we get to this time of year, it is deadly. Thank you for these brief, but powerful words! ❤️
November 20th, 2024 07:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Homelessness is awful, and as we get to this time of year, it is deadly. Thank you for these brief, but powerful words! ❤️
November 20th, 2024 07:40
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arqios said:
…snails in the snow 🐌 what an image! The sentiment echoes in the soul. Winter is not a season to be destitute.
November 20th, 2024 05:38
arqios said:
…snails in the snow 🐌 what an image! The sentiment echoes in the soul. Winter is not a season to be destitute.
November 20th, 2024 05:38
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sorenbarrett said:
Neville the subtlety of the third line is amazing broken homes for snails that are now homeless. Simply lovely.
November 20th, 2024 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
Neville the subtlety of the third line is amazing broken homes for snails that are now homeless. Simply lovely.
November 20th, 2024 05:31
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Cassie58 said:
It is a travesty that anyone is living on the streets. When the temperatures drop it is a nightmare for those poor souls. I am also thinking about some of our pensioners who will freeze in their own homes because they can’t afford to heat them. All stuff that could easily be rectified by a government that cares about the welfare of its own people. Your brevity here creates much thought and many images Neville. A lonely existence. Have a good Wednesday Neville.
November 20th, 2024 04:13
Cassie58 said:
It is a travesty that anyone is living on the streets. When the temperatures drop it is a nightmare for those poor souls. I am also thinking about some of our pensioners who will freeze in their own homes because they can’t afford to heat them. All stuff that could easily be rectified by a government that cares about the welfare of its own people. Your brevity here creates much thought and many images Neville. A lonely existence. Have a good Wednesday Neville.
November 20th, 2024 04:13
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orchidee said:
Homeless is horrid at any time of year, we know, but more so in winter.
November 20th, 2024 03:20
orchidee said:
Homeless is horrid at any time of year, we know, but more so in winter.
November 20th, 2024 03:20
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Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
great haiku, thoughts too!
artfully expressed thank you
your message so true~
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 19th, 2024 19:28
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
great haiku, thoughts too!
artfully expressed thank you
your message so true~
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 19th, 2024 19:28
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Faved! Not culling, but this poem! Horrifying what we humans are capable of. So much is said here in only 17 syllables. Excellent haiku! 🙏🖤❤️🖤
November 19th, 2024 14:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Faved! Not culling, but this poem! Horrifying what we humans are capable of. So much is said here in only 17 syllables. Excellent haiku! 🙏🖤❤️🖤
November 19th, 2024 14:41
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arqios said:
The first definition is a rough enough affair to involve the second. Doesn’t get prettier or better… sure a third use will be out and about sooner than we can imagine….
November 19th, 2024 04:18
arqios said:
The first definition is a rough enough affair to involve the second. Doesn’t get prettier or better… sure a third use will be out and about sooner than we can imagine….
November 19th, 2024 04:18
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sorenbarrett said:
A piercing, haunting haiku. It shakes one soul and muddies one’s thoughts at the waterhole of coexistence. Very nicely written
November 19th, 2024 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
A piercing, haunting haiku. It shakes one soul and muddies one’s thoughts at the waterhole of coexistence. Very nicely written
November 19th, 2024 04:03
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Cassie58 said:
Great word play herd/heard
The visuals are graphic, I didn’t just see elephants. I saw whales and genocide too. And the noise, …….
Imagery has always been important to me in poetry to convey thoughts and feelings. You nailed this one. Brevity can open up so much thought.
The whole subject matter is repugnant, but it needs to be talked about to stop it happening. Brilliant
November 19th, 2024 04:01
Cassie58 said:
Great word play herd/heard
The visuals are graphic, I didn’t just see elephants. I saw whales and genocide too. And the noise, …….
Imagery has always been important to me in poetry to convey thoughts and feelings. You nailed this one. Brevity can open up so much thought.
The whole subject matter is repugnant, but it needs to be talked about to stop it happening. Brilliant
November 19th, 2024 04:01
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orchidee said:
Yes, terrible, same with badgers and other creatures too.
November 19th, 2024 03:23
orchidee said:
Yes, terrible, same with badgers and other creatures too.
November 19th, 2024 03:23
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Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville, culling for pleasure or profit is despicable.
Andy
November 19th, 2024 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville, culling for pleasure or profit is despicable.
Andy
November 19th, 2024 02:42
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Doggerel Dave said:
A lengthy post would not cover this as immediately and comprehensively as your haiku and title has. A gut wrench in seventeen syllables. Faved of course, Neville.
November 19th, 2024 02:27
Doggerel Dave said:
A lengthy post would not cover this as immediately and comprehensively as your haiku and title has. A gut wrench in seventeen syllables. Faved of course, Neville.
November 19th, 2024 02:27
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