Comments received on poems by Neville
Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing
Goldfinch60 said:
Some things just so not change over the years but they may be hidden by othes Neveill.
Andy
December 16th, 2024 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Some things just so not change over the years but they may be hidden by othes Neveill.
Andy
December 16th, 2024 02:45
Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing
Dan Williams said:
So, just what is the stain concealing or revealing? Hmmm.
December 16th, 2024 00:55
Dan Williams said:
So, just what is the stain concealing or revealing? Hmmm.
December 16th, 2024 00:55
Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing
arqios said:
But the rug won’t stay up on a stained ceiling! So why not wear the cracks with pride, perhaps?
December 15th, 2024 18:24
arqios said:
But the rug won’t stay up on a stained ceiling! So why not wear the cracks with pride, perhaps?
December 15th, 2024 18:24
Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing
Cheeky Missy said:
Reality is a funny thing, isn\'t it? A few apertures for undesirable admittance can never quite trounce the more ghastly facts which cannot ever be denied, despite our best attempts. Murder may be rolled in a carpet and hauled away sans notice, as the urban legends say, yet Abel\'s blood is never as gone as the killer needs. Charmingly intriguing and excellently rendered with superb imagery and a deliciously haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 15th, 2024 14:54
Cheeky Missy said:
Reality is a funny thing, isn\'t it? A few apertures for undesirable admittance can never quite trounce the more ghastly facts which cannot ever be denied, despite our best attempts. Murder may be rolled in a carpet and hauled away sans notice, as the urban legends say, yet Abel\'s blood is never as gone as the killer needs. Charmingly intriguing and excellently rendered with superb imagery and a deliciously haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 15th, 2024 14:54
Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing
Doggerel Dave said:
Know this bloke (got his magnet card thingy on me fridge) will fix anything - no questions asked.......
December 15th, 2024 08:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Know this bloke (got his magnet card thingy on me fridge) will fix anything - no questions asked.......
December 15th, 2024 08:50
Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This gets a big, fat FAVED! And that\'s alliterative too. As it should be for a poem of such brilliance...and the title, paired with the poem...wow! 🤯 And, yes, the cracks in the apex never seem to leave, do they? If anything they grow wider! And the idea that what is a stain to us is coveted by our neighbors. Again 🤯 Just...wow! Well done, friend! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 07:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This gets a big, fat FAVED! And that\'s alliterative too. As it should be for a poem of such brilliance...and the title, paired with the poem...wow! 🤯 And, yes, the cracks in the apex never seem to leave, do they? If anything they grow wider! And the idea that what is a stain to us is coveted by our neighbors. Again 🤯 Just...wow! Well done, friend! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 07:45
Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing
Poetic Licence said:
It was a puzzle at first, now i have seen the light, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 15th, 2024 05:03
Poetic Licence said:
It was a puzzle at first, now i have seen the light, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 15th, 2024 05:03
Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing
sorenbarrett said:
I tried Neville, but my conscience wouldn’t allow it. This poem is far too good to go unfaved. The crack in my ceiling is showing light. The greater poet above is showing through. Far too many levels of metaphor are apparent in this poem. I bow to the greater light.
December 15th, 2024 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
I tried Neville, but my conscience wouldn’t allow it. This poem is far too good to go unfaved. The crack in my ceiling is showing light. The greater poet above is showing through. Far too many levels of metaphor are apparent in this poem. I bow to the greater light.
December 15th, 2024 04:49
Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing
sorenbarrett said:
Upstairs neighbor? Of course and so the crack and stain. A lovely piece of work here Neville and I\'m not talking of 25 years ago.
December 15th, 2024 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Upstairs neighbor? Of course and so the crack and stain. A lovely piece of work here Neville and I\'m not talking of 25 years ago.
December 15th, 2024 04:18
Afterwards #2
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I felt the poem convyed an universal paradoxical desire. We like to be chosen but being chosen could only happen if the person choosing was free. Once a relationship establishes the choice goes away. So setting someone free could start the cycle again. Right interpretation or wrong, I loved the poem!
December 14th, 2024 23:02
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I felt the poem convyed an universal paradoxical desire. We like to be chosen but being chosen could only happen if the person choosing was free. Once a relationship establishes the choice goes away. So setting someone free could start the cycle again. Right interpretation or wrong, I loved the poem!
December 14th, 2024 23:02
The Consequences of Failing to Prep
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem, my dear friend! Seriously, nothing can ever prepare you for parenthood, winter...or life, really. Poetically expressed with an artists touch! Well done, friend! 🌹👏
December 14th, 2024 10:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem, my dear friend! Seriously, nothing can ever prepare you for parenthood, winter...or life, really. Poetically expressed with an artists touch! Well done, friend! 🌹👏
December 14th, 2024 10:39
The Consequences of Failing to Prep
Poetic Licence said:
To much preparation can be to confusing, making the mistakes and amending is the best way to learn, enjoyable read Neville, Thank you
December 14th, 2024 05:56
Poetic Licence said:
To much preparation can be to confusing, making the mistakes and amending is the best way to learn, enjoyable read Neville, Thank you
December 14th, 2024 05:56
The Consequences of Failing to Prep
Doggerel Dave said:
Neva had God ferbids for which I am supremely grateful..........
..... I\'m gonna do an orchi and inscribe here: \'Good write N\'.
December 14th, 2024 05:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Neva had God ferbids for which I am supremely grateful..........
..... I\'m gonna do an orchi and inscribe here: \'Good write N\'.
December 14th, 2024 05:13
The Consequences of Failing to Prep
sorenbarrett said:
Had my children early and that had its problems too. Too early or late in the season is not good for survival but they don\'t teach parenting in school and even if they did no one would pay attention. Maybe I missed that class. As for winter I\'m prepared but the snow\'s coming late this year. Loved the poem Neville
December 14th, 2024 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
Had my children early and that had its problems too. Too early or late in the season is not good for survival but they don\'t teach parenting in school and even if they did no one would pay attention. Maybe I missed that class. As for winter I\'m prepared but the snow\'s coming late this year. Loved the poem Neville
December 14th, 2024 04:41
The Consequences of Failing to Prep
teardrop said:
I can say I was unprepared a few times....lol at the time, it sucked. But worked out for the best at the end. Now I keep my guard up
hahaha. Great write and another good read.
December 14th, 2024 04:01
teardrop said:
I can say I was unprepared a few times....lol at the time, it sucked. But worked out for the best at the end. Now I keep my guard up
hahaha. Great write and another good read.
December 14th, 2024 04:01
The Consequences of Failing to Prep
cellinic said:
That\'s true, my friend, \"nothing and no one can prepare you, for parenthood, or for winter ..\" I fully agree with you, best wishes
December 14th, 2024 03:48
cellinic said:
That\'s true, my friend, \"nothing and no one can prepare you, for parenthood, or for winter ..\" I fully agree with you, best wishes
December 14th, 2024 03:48
The Consequences of Failing to Prep
orchidee said:
Good write N. Witty fido says \'To fail to prepare is to prepare to fail\'. Banjamin Franklin - though some sources say he didn\'t say it originally. In which case, probably Fido said it originally, he that fount of wisdom, knowing 99% of all there is to know, having an anthology of 5 million proverbs, witty sayings, etc!
Fido I mean, not me. lol.
Also \'To beat an egg is to have an egg beaten\'. (Eh? lol).
December 14th, 2024 03:32
orchidee said:
Good write N. Witty fido says \'To fail to prepare is to prepare to fail\'. Banjamin Franklin - though some sources say he didn\'t say it originally. In which case, probably Fido said it originally, he that fount of wisdom, knowing 99% of all there is to know, having an anthology of 5 million proverbs, witty sayings, etc!
Fido I mean, not me. lol.
Also \'To beat an egg is to have an egg beaten\'. (Eh? lol).
December 14th, 2024 03:32
The Consequences of Failing to Prep
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, we must just experience it as you cannot teach experience.
Andy
December 14th, 2024 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, we must just experience it as you cannot teach experience.
Andy
December 14th, 2024 02:54
The Consequences of Failing to Prep
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps I am being a simpleton, I felt the poem to be an eloquent portrayal of unexpected turn of events and how they catch us off guard, no matter how much we believe we are well prepared. Loved it
December 14th, 2024 02:39
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps I am being a simpleton, I felt the poem to be an eloquent portrayal of unexpected turn of events and how they catch us off guard, no matter how much we believe we are well prepared. Loved it
December 14th, 2024 02:39
Dementia’s Cruel Kiss
Bobby O said:
Love this. He enlightens and advises all to reassess what used to mean or what before solved or what to depend on.
December 14th, 2024 01:36
Bobby O said:
Love this. He enlightens and advises all to reassess what used to mean or what before solved or what to depend on.
December 14th, 2024 01:36
Afterwards #2
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels exhausting... hope he has the energy to see it through...... to wherever it may be....
December 13th, 2024 20:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels exhausting... hope he has the energy to see it through...... to wherever it may be....
December 13th, 2024 20:28
Afterwards #2
Parisab said:
This is Shakespeare being cheeky-love the imagery of “Dark as a drawer full of shadows folded…”
December 13th, 2024 15:51
Parisab said:
This is Shakespeare being cheeky-love the imagery of “Dark as a drawer full of shadows folded…”
December 13th, 2024 15:51
Afterwards #2
Friendship said:
Very well written, she took his heart and soul and used them both as a beacon and a guiding light to shine forth, truly lost she was so perfectly transformed
December 13th, 2024 14:53
Friendship said:
Very well written, she took his heart and soul and used them both as a beacon and a guiding light to shine forth, truly lost she was so perfectly transformed
December 13th, 2024 14:53
Afterwards #2
sorenbarrett said:
Just enough twist and turns in this folded drawer to give this poem, the interest of looking for that lost piece. Most lovely with great word choice.
December 13th, 2024 10:00
sorenbarrett said:
Just enough twist and turns in this folded drawer to give this poem, the interest of looking for that lost piece. Most lovely with great word choice.
December 13th, 2024 10:00
Afterwards #2
arqios said:
Hunter-gatherer… prisoner-jailer… the chase scene over and after….
December 13th, 2024 09:09
arqios said:
Hunter-gatherer… prisoner-jailer… the chase scene over and after….
December 13th, 2024 09:09
Afterwards #2
cellinic said:
This write is enigmatically tuned to my current mood and sources of inspiration. Best wishes and thanks
December 13th, 2024 04:35
cellinic said:
This write is enigmatically tuned to my current mood and sources of inspiration. Best wishes and thanks
December 13th, 2024 04:35
Afterwards #2
Poetic Licence said:
Bit of a puzzler for me today but i am still working on it, still enjoyed the read.
December 13th, 2024 03:37
Poetic Licence said:
Bit of a puzzler for me today but i am still working on it, still enjoyed the read.
December 13th, 2024 03:37
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