Comments received on poems by Neville
Calling the Bluff
Dan Williams said:
I almost hesitate to say in this judgmental world, but I am also armed to the teeth. Better to have it and not need it...
September 30th, 2024 00:38
Dan Williams said:
I almost hesitate to say in this judgmental world, but I am also armed to the teeth. Better to have it and not need it...
September 30th, 2024 00:38
Calling the Bluff
Doggerel Dave said:
Paranoia perpetuates protectiveness prodigiously providing proactively piled ‘ponry. Please add the ‘wea’ only when fully provided.
September 29th, 2024 20:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Paranoia perpetuates protectiveness prodigiously providing proactively piled ‘ponry. Please add the ‘wea’ only when fully provided.
September 29th, 2024 20:32
Calling the Bluff
Accidental Poet said:
Well since you asked, there is a immature delusional maniac running for the office only someone of mature competence is allowed to enter. Have taser, straight jacket and men in white coats ready for acquisition. 🙄
September 29th, 2024 19:27
Accidental Poet said:
Well since you asked, there is a immature delusional maniac running for the office only someone of mature competence is allowed to enter. Have taser, straight jacket and men in white coats ready for acquisition. 🙄
September 29th, 2024 19:27
Remembering An Orange Room
sorenbarrett said:
Dark, sad and haunting casting a shadow over the landscape. Whether personal or not I felt it.
September 29th, 2024 16:55
sorenbarrett said:
Dark, sad and haunting casting a shadow over the landscape. Whether personal or not I felt it.
September 29th, 2024 16:55
Calling the Bluff
orchidee said:
Sounds like someone that one would say \'Hello\' to, and get the reply \'What do ya mean hello? I will punch ya on the nose for saying that!\'\'
September 29th, 2024 11:24
orchidee said:
Sounds like someone that one would say \'Hello\' to, and get the reply \'What do ya mean hello? I will punch ya on the nose for saying that!\'\'
September 29th, 2024 11:24
Calling the Bluff
Cheeky Missy said:
Having watched all the 007 flicks, yes, you Brits would say that. Since there\'s always more than one way to skin a cat, I think I\'ll leave it at that. Sweetly rendered in to the point brevity with fascinatingly telling details and a none too subtle poignancy, thank you very much for sharing.
September 29th, 2024 09:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Having watched all the 007 flicks, yes, you Brits would say that. Since there\'s always more than one way to skin a cat, I think I\'ll leave it at that. Sweetly rendered in to the point brevity with fascinatingly telling details and a none too subtle poignancy, thank you very much for sharing.
September 29th, 2024 09:19
Calling the Bluff
Jerry Reynolds said:
I am out of range. But I will watch it for sure. I had a chuckle over that one, Neville
September 29th, 2024 08:27
Jerry Reynolds said:
I am out of range. But I will watch it for sure. I had a chuckle over that one, Neville
September 29th, 2024 08:27
Calling the Bluff
sorenbarrett said:
I hear just a bit of touchiness in this. I better measure my words well in this comment and may already have stepped over my bounds. I always sleep with a machete under my pillow, just in case
September 29th, 2024 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
I hear just a bit of touchiness in this. I better measure my words well in this comment and may already have stepped over my bounds. I always sleep with a machete under my pillow, just in case
September 29th, 2024 06:53
Clean Sheets
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Neville but love takes it beyond not being loved.
Andy
September 29th, 2024 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Neville but love takes it beyond not being loved.
Andy
September 29th, 2024 01:27
Clean Sheets
Doggerel Dave said:
It’s like you tore a page out of my nonexistent diary:
Regular visits, always clean sheets.. Good with zero emotional commitment. Then one Saturday another male already there. Coffie round well used kitchen table inherited from her mother. All cool. He seemed like good guy. Same language of origin; obvious empathy between. Left after coffee. Perhaps all he knew of me was a casual neighbor passing the time of day……. Best wishes to her, she was lovely.
September 28th, 2024 17:37
Doggerel Dave said:
It’s like you tore a page out of my nonexistent diary:
Regular visits, always clean sheets.. Good with zero emotional commitment. Then one Saturday another male already there. Coffie round well used kitchen table inherited from her mother. All cool. He seemed like good guy. Same language of origin; obvious empathy between. Left after coffee. Perhaps all he knew of me was a casual neighbor passing the time of day……. Best wishes to her, she was lovely.
September 28th, 2024 17:37
Clean Sheets
Jerry Reynolds said:
A beautiful image, Neville. How I loved those summer days.
September 28th, 2024 09:21
Jerry Reynolds said:
A beautiful image, Neville. How I loved those summer days.
September 28th, 2024 09:21
Remembering An Orange Room
FrasMac said:
appreciate the emotional impact, just the way I like a poem to leave me feeling
September 28th, 2024 01:44
FrasMac said:
appreciate the emotional impact, just the way I like a poem to leave me feeling
September 28th, 2024 01:44
Remembering An Orange Room
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Neville ending with such sadness. Great write.
Andy
September 28th, 2024 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Neville ending with such sadness. Great write.
Andy
September 28th, 2024 01:16
Remembering An Orange Room
Dan Williams said:
The heartache is wonderfully expressed. Good job.
September 27th, 2024 13:13
Dan Williams said:
The heartache is wonderfully expressed. Good job.
September 27th, 2024 13:13
Remembering An Orange Room
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP turned orange - too much suntan stuff?! lol.
September 27th, 2024 11:12
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP turned orange - too much suntan stuff?! lol.
September 27th, 2024 11:12
Remembering An Orange Room
Cheeky Missy said:
Correct me iffen I\'m mistaken, but the reference specifically to an orange room seems reminiscent of the \'60\'s or \'70\'s, rendering this delightful tribute to former days all the more winsome. Frankly, having considered it further I\'m reminded of my long since departed adopted grandmother\'s house-- the walls were a rather garrish purple and green. That aside, this is beautifully rendered with a gently haunting poignancy and excellent details. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 27th, 2024 08:36
Cheeky Missy said:
Correct me iffen I\'m mistaken, but the reference specifically to an orange room seems reminiscent of the \'60\'s or \'70\'s, rendering this delightful tribute to former days all the more winsome. Frankly, having considered it further I\'m reminded of my long since departed adopted grandmother\'s house-- the walls were a rather garrish purple and green. That aside, this is beautifully rendered with a gently haunting poignancy and excellent details. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 27th, 2024 08:36
Remembering An Orange Room
Accidental Poet said:
Ahh, but at least you have the memories. 🌹
September 27th, 2024 08:35
Accidental Poet said:
Ahh, but at least you have the memories. 🌹
September 27th, 2024 08:35
Remembering An Orange Room
Jerry Reynolds said:
A beautiful love story, Neville. The tragic twist did not take away its sweetness. Well, done.
September 27th, 2024 07:15
Jerry Reynolds said:
A beautiful love story, Neville. The tragic twist did not take away its sweetness. Well, done.
September 27th, 2024 07:15
Thinking Back on Polly
sorenbarrett said:
The things that we don\'t know until too late and how they make changes in things that could have been or things that become. Sad story my friend a bit haunting.
September 26th, 2024 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
The things that we don\'t know until too late and how they make changes in things that could have been or things that become. Sad story my friend a bit haunting.
September 26th, 2024 07:54
Thinking Back on Polly
Cassie58 said:
Remembering Polly, and also introducing her tragically short life to your readers. It is hard to comprehend sometimes just how cruel life can be. You lost a lovely young friend before she had time to fully bloom. This morning, another young boy 15 years old was knifed to death. More devastated family and friends. Dear Neville, a most poignant write. On a school bus. ……..A rose from me 🌹
September 26th, 2024 07:22
Cassie58 said:
Remembering Polly, and also introducing her tragically short life to your readers. It is hard to comprehend sometimes just how cruel life can be. You lost a lovely young friend before she had time to fully bloom. This morning, another young boy 15 years old was knifed to death. More devastated family and friends. Dear Neville, a most poignant write. On a school bus. ……..A rose from me 🌹
September 26th, 2024 07:22
A Different Kettle of Fish
Tom Dylan said:
Completely agree, Neville. Things have moved on so quickly, but not for the better. A fine write.
September 26th, 2024 06:14
Tom Dylan said:
Completely agree, Neville. Things have moved on so quickly, but not for the better. A fine write.
September 26th, 2024 06:14
Thinking Back on Polly
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - can\'t do it when it is early and too raw.
September 26th, 2024 06:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - can\'t do it when it is early and too raw.
September 26th, 2024 06:07
Thinking Back on Polly
Doggerel Dave said:
This a case study, Neville? When ‘sliding doors’ becomes a matter of life or death, then it is more than even a tragedy.
September 26th, 2024 05:37
Doggerel Dave said:
This a case study, Neville? When ‘sliding doors’ becomes a matter of life or death, then it is more than even a tragedy.
September 26th, 2024 05:37
A Different Kettle of Fish
sorenbarrett said:
I wonder it our ancesters spoke of the times before fire? I often look back on (those days) and just feel happy that I was able to live them. I got the feeling Neville and have to agree
September 25th, 2024 20:40
sorenbarrett said:
I wonder it our ancesters spoke of the times before fire? I often look back on (those days) and just feel happy that I was able to live them. I got the feeling Neville and have to agree
September 25th, 2024 20:40
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