Comments received on poems by Neville



At Seventeen or Thereabouts
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant ...you bring back memories.

April 23rd, 2024 19:24

At Seventeen or Thereabouts
Accidental Poet said:

aah yes, the days of wine and roses forever our go to memories of our youth. Wonderful write here N. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘

April 23rd, 2024 09:57

At Seventeen or Thereabouts
Cassie58 said:

Whatโ€™s not to like here. The choice of music is timeless and certainly my cup of tea. Got the vinyl and Iโ€™m gonna play it today. Seventeen, those were the days my friend. I briefly returned there and enjoyed the visit. Happy Tuesday Neville ๐Ÿด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐Ÿด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐Ÿด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ

April 23rd, 2024 08:26

At Seventeen or Thereabouts
Jerry Reynolds said:

Ahh, seventeen. I remember it so well that I did it five times.

April 23rd, 2024 07:03

At Seventeen or Thereabouts
Doggerel Dave said:

Can\'t suppress the cough - three skins yes...five? Gotta share with too many folks to maintain the kind of exclusivity I\'d like. And we were getting so close earlier too........

April 23rd, 2024 06:50

At Seventeen or Thereabouts
Tom Dylan said:

Love this. You really paint the picture. And Dark Side is one of the greatest albums of all time.

April 23rd, 2024 02:41

At Seventeen or Thereabouts
orchidee said:

KP rolls some decent roll-ups fags. I could call her Fag Ash Lil! lol.

April 23rd, 2024 02:15

Lemon Lined Streets
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

April 22nd, 2024 19:32

Lemon Lined Streets
Alan R said:

Just one word, Italia โค๏ธ๐ŸŒฑ

April 22nd, 2024 17:05

Lemon Lined Streets
Jerry Reynolds said:

Beautiful imagery Neville. LOve this poem.

April 22nd, 2024 14:20

Lemon Lined Streets
Accidental Poet said:

I confess to many younger days riding my bike all over town N. That rear view mirror never disappoints. Great write. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘

April 22nd, 2024 06:59

Lemon Lined Streets
Doggerel Dave said:

Pneumatic tyres then, Neville? ๐Ÿ˜‚

April 22nd, 2024 06:47

Lemon Lined Streets
orchidee said:

A fine write N.
KP likes streets lined with b...... you knows it! lol

April 22nd, 2024 02:10

Lemon Lined Streets
Cassie58 said:

We are a long time dead. This poem speaks to me about making the most of life. This imagery makes me smile. I see an older bloke in his Leviโ€™s acting like a kid. Let that inner child out. Speed on cobbled stones on a bike, I ask you. I like the lemon trees for their symbolism. Have an easy Monday Neville.

April 22nd, 2024 02:01

Lemon Lined Streets
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful times remembered of times brought to today Neville.

Andy

April 22nd, 2024 01:54

Lemon Lined Streets
Teddy.15 said:

Sounds like a southern Italian street to me and how very romantic. I\'m not going to lie this romantic muse is my favourite of yours. ๐ŸŒน

April 22nd, 2024 01:41

Uncommon Good Scents
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Neville, that smell will always be there for you.

Andy

April 22nd, 2024 00:51

Uncommon Good Scents
Teddy.15 said:

My dear Nev, absolutely gorgeous, I can\'t help thinking this is about your beautiful mum, who ever it be it\'s simply gorgeous. ๐ŸŒน

April 21st, 2024 16:05

Uncommon Good Scents
Doggerel Dave said:

You would have more than a passing knowledge, Neville of the way the olfactory organs take a smell and transmit it to the brain (or something like that)
All I know is that smells long ago experienced, when re-presented evoke incredibly rich memories.
So on that basis youโ€™ve given us a rich piece of poetic memorabilia.


April 21st, 2024 06:48

Uncommon Good Scents
Cassie58 said:

What beautiful poetry you write Neville. Make sure the sun shines on you today.

April 21st, 2024 03:56

Uncommon Good Scents
2781 said:

3:24

April 21st, 2024 03:32

Uncommon Good Scents
orchidee said:

Good write N.
Yes, I sense KP\'s presence. She wears Eau de Trout! lol.

April 21st, 2024 03:07

Uncommon Good Scents
Accidental Poet said:

Such as it is when love is in the air. Great write N. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘

April 21st, 2024 02:25

Uncommon Good Scents
Alan R said:

Very elegant!

April 21st, 2024 02:05

It Took Three Coats
Goldfinch60 said:

I don\'t feel the cold much so I may put one jacket on over my short sleeved shirt occasionally Neville.

Andy

April 21st, 2024 01:23

It Took Three Coats
Accidental Poet said:

Just when I thought it was warming up. BRRRR. ๐Ÿฅถ

April 20th, 2024 09:04

It Took Three Coats
Teddy.15 said:

Metaphorically beautiful, I still have a coat my dear mum gave me years ago. This is beautiful dear Nev. ๐ŸŒน

April 20th, 2024 08:36

It Took Three Coats
Cassie58 said:

Nothing like cuddling under coats to keep you warm in freezing weather. We have been spoiled with central heating. Yes I remember ice on window panes and coats on top of blankets. That was one of my Nanโ€™s tricks. Your poem though is about young love. You must have been captivated a great deal to wear that Moroccan thingy that crawled:) Neville your nostalgic writes are ace. Happy Saturday to you and yours.

April 20th, 2024 06:52

It Took Three Coats
orchidee said:

Good write N.
Someone - you knows her - wears 3 coats/layers of botox! lol. More like 30 layers.

April 20th, 2024 06:42

It Took Three Coats
2781 said:

It\'s turned cold today, I wore my new 2nd hand leather jacket,
Shouldn\'t have worn it to the mall though.

April 20th, 2024 05:05



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