Comments received on poems by Neville
Rough Justice
sorenbarrett said:
Many walk back that dusty trail and reopen the door to a flood of more casualties including themselves. Having once escaped bar the door and never turn back.
October 20th, 2024 06:22
sorenbarrett said:
Many walk back that dusty trail and reopen the door to a flood of more casualties including themselves. Having once escaped bar the door and never turn back.
October 20th, 2024 06:22
Rough Justice
Doggerel Dave said:
There’s a part of me which says ‘why worry? I will be out of here before the shit really hits the fan where I am now’
Also a part of me the non-religious, who can’t help speculating, says ‘what if’…..
October 20th, 2024 05:52
Doggerel Dave said:
There’s a part of me which says ‘why worry? I will be out of here before the shit really hits the fan where I am now’
Also a part of me the non-religious, who can’t help speculating, says ‘what if’…..
October 20th, 2024 05:52
Rough Justice
arqios said:
Making it out alive in one piece however tattered was the prime goal of ‘survival.’ These days we have tick-tock and such.
October 20th, 2024 04:17
arqios said:
Making it out alive in one piece however tattered was the prime goal of ‘survival.’ These days we have tick-tock and such.
October 20th, 2024 04:17
Rough Justice
Bobby O said:
Nice. Victors write the history books and drink the hidden cache’ of booze
Q E D!
October 20th, 2024 02:27
Bobby O said:
Nice. Victors write the history books and drink the hidden cache’ of booze
Q E D!
October 20th, 2024 02:27
Short Changed on A Long Greek Island
orchidee said:
Best not tell me the truth of it then. I will only swoon! lol.
October 19th, 2024 09:15
orchidee said:
Best not tell me the truth of it then. I will only swoon! lol.
October 19th, 2024 09:15
Short Changed on A Long Greek Island
arqios said:
How many bowls of olives 🫒 can one digest in the span of three weeks!
October 19th, 2024 07:04
arqios said:
How many bowls of olives 🫒 can one digest in the span of three weeks!
October 19th, 2024 07:04
Short Changed on A Long Greek Island
Doggerel Dave said:
Which island was it? (Ah, I know: a gentleman.....) but you never know....
October 19th, 2024 05:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Which island was it? (Ah, I know: a gentleman.....) but you never know....
October 19th, 2024 05:59
Short Changed on A Long Greek Island
sorenbarrett said:
At least no STD\'s or guilt, Loved the set up in the first stanza foreshadowing the outcome. This was later reinforced in the final stanza. I have in later years grown to like green olives but not those type of relationships. Loved the poem as well
October 19th, 2024 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
At least no STD\'s or guilt, Loved the set up in the first stanza foreshadowing the outcome. This was later reinforced in the final stanza. I have in later years grown to like green olives but not those type of relationships. Loved the poem as well
October 19th, 2024 05:20
Short Changed on A Long Greek Island
orchidee said:
I know the bit that\'s not true - it was apples, not olives! lol.
October 19th, 2024 02:50
orchidee said:
I know the bit that\'s not true - it was apples, not olives! lol.
October 19th, 2024 02:50
Gaea’s Garden
NafisaSB said:
oh wow, wish i could be like gea - i am at a total loss ometimes, and at others, sailing along smoothly
short but sweet..
October 19th, 2024 01:53
NafisaSB said:
oh wow, wish i could be like gea - i am at a total loss ometimes, and at others, sailing along smoothly
short but sweet..
October 19th, 2024 01:53
Deep Secrets
Goldfinch60 said:
Some secrets can be hidden forever Neville.
Andy
October 19th, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Some secrets can be hidden forever Neville.
Andy
October 19th, 2024 01:24
Deep Secrets
Doggerel Dave said:
As stated, it\'s the signature almost hidden away on a fine piece of art. You were lucky she was with you, enabled your riff ....sometimes...nah forget it - it was a long time ago...
October 18th, 2024 21:12
Doggerel Dave said:
As stated, it\'s the signature almost hidden away on a fine piece of art. You were lucky she was with you, enabled your riff ....sometimes...nah forget it - it was a long time ago...
October 18th, 2024 21:12
Deep Secrets
arqios said:
Brought me back to that one breakfast after, where the orchids on the pancakes 🥞 were edible! Good things tend to come in pairs!
October 18th, 2024 07:37
arqios said:
Brought me back to that one breakfast after, where the orchids on the pancakes 🥞 were edible! Good things tend to come in pairs!
October 18th, 2024 07:37
Deep Secrets
sorenbarrett said:
Errotic and sensual with great lines \"More perfect than an orchid smiling\" Such tactful yet vivid imagery gave way to the softest and tenderest loving ending so well put that it brought a smile to my face.
October 18th, 2024 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
Errotic and sensual with great lines \"More perfect than an orchid smiling\" Such tactful yet vivid imagery gave way to the softest and tenderest loving ending so well put that it brought a smile to my face.
October 18th, 2024 05:18
Deep Secrets
orchidee said:
How come you know my \'dark horse\' adventures? - orchid(ee)! lol.
October 18th, 2024 02:59
orchidee said:
How come you know my \'dark horse\' adventures? - orchid(ee)! lol.
October 18th, 2024 02:59
The Repatriation of Shards
Goldfinch60 said:
Thay whole will be there Neville once we start talking to each other
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Andy
October 18th, 2024 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Thay whole will be there Neville once we start talking to each other
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Andy
October 18th, 2024 01:15
The Repatriation of Shards
Doggerel Dave said:
Your words evoke memories of English cathedrals which I love. One of my many inconsistencies would be that I have not a sliver of religiosity in me….
Thanks for the prompted recollection of visits past, Neville.
October 17th, 2024 18:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Your words evoke memories of English cathedrals which I love. One of my many inconsistencies would be that I have not a sliver of religiosity in me….
Thanks for the prompted recollection of visits past, Neville.
October 17th, 2024 18:05
The Repatriation of Shards
MendedFences27 said:
Once bright and shining as part of a stained-glass window high on the walls of a cathedral, now dark and graying, fallen and broken \"shards.\" Sorry, but it happens and there is no going back. There are only memories of what was, which is all well and good, but it\'s better to keep on making new memories, together.
Lots of imagery here with \"mullioned windows,\" \"ancient book written in tongues,\" and \"magnificent mosques, temples, and cathedrals.\" It all adds up to aging. I find it best to keep looking ahead.
LOL....This poem, to me, harkens to olden times to portray a life on the far side of the hill. Or, as the old saying goes, \"Not to worry, you can still chase women.... Downhill.
October 17th, 2024 12:09
MendedFences27 said:
Once bright and shining as part of a stained-glass window high on the walls of a cathedral, now dark and graying, fallen and broken \"shards.\" Sorry, but it happens and there is no going back. There are only memories of what was, which is all well and good, but it\'s better to keep on making new memories, together.
Lots of imagery here with \"mullioned windows,\" \"ancient book written in tongues,\" and \"magnificent mosques, temples, and cathedrals.\" It all adds up to aging. I find it best to keep looking ahead.
LOL....This poem, to me, harkens to olden times to portray a life on the far side of the hill. Or, as the old saying goes, \"Not to worry, you can still chase women.... Downhill.
October 17th, 2024 12:09
The Repatriation of Shards
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
a terrific poem!!,💯
Fantastic imagery
and captivating
word choices throughout! 👍
Much enjoyed my friend!🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 17th, 2024 09:51
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
a terrific poem!!,💯
Fantastic imagery
and captivating
word choices throughout! 👍
Much enjoyed my friend!🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 17th, 2024 09:51
The Repatriation of Shards
sorenbarrett said:
Ahh the remnants of past glory now covered in dust, to be what we once were and be remembered, the aim of us all
October 17th, 2024 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
Ahh the remnants of past glory now covered in dust, to be what we once were and be remembered, the aim of us all
October 17th, 2024 05:52
The Repatriation of Shards
arqios said:
A mystical connection bridged by what we know and what was known however relegated to reliquaries, somewhere in forgetfulness clues sparkle under our very noses!
October 17th, 2024 05:51
arqios said:
A mystical connection bridged by what we know and what was known however relegated to reliquaries, somewhere in forgetfulness clues sparkle under our very noses!
October 17th, 2024 05:51
Pants
arqios said:
It’s all the rage it seems more so with the low waisted over-pants lol!
October 17th, 2024 04:24
arqios said:
It’s all the rage it seems more so with the low waisted over-pants lol!
October 17th, 2024 04:24
Just As Sunsets
Bobby O said:
Ok , so I imagine there is a visual of orange triangular shrinking fading luminous segment but you’re sneaky so I believe the togethered cuddle with smiling minds drifting toward comfortable and warm is both of you are still engaged with the energy of recent intimacy and wantonly enjoying every joule of its after glow.
Just Sayin’ !
October 16th, 2024 08:39
Bobby O said:
Ok , so I imagine there is a visual of orange triangular shrinking fading luminous segment but you’re sneaky so I believe the togethered cuddle with smiling minds drifting toward comfortable and warm is both of you are still engaged with the energy of recent intimacy and wantonly enjoying every joule of its after glow.
Just Sayin’ !
October 16th, 2024 08:39
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