Comments received on poems by Neville



On Contemplating the Sound of A Lone Tree Falling
Cassie58 said:

How sad for the lonely tree. I like the idea of loved ones being close at hand when breathing your last. I have such an affinity with trees, I swear I heard this one Neville. A tree hugger first and foremost.

May 9th, 2024 02:40

On Contemplating the Sound of A Lone Tree Falling
Goldfinch60 said:

That contemplation in life takes us to so many places Neville.

Andy

May 9th, 2024 01:44

On Contemplating the Sound of A Lone Tree Falling
orchidee said:

KP stamps her foot loudly when I don\'t give her botox money. She throws her toys out of the pram! lol.

May 9th, 2024 01:27

On Contemplating the Sound of A Lone Tree Falling
Accidental Poet said:

It\'s not whether the tree makes a sound, but that the tree lived. šŸ˜ŠšŸ‘

May 9th, 2024 00:44

On Contemplating the Sound of A Lone Tree Falling
Doggerel Dave said:

This is false advertising in my reckoning, Neville.
\'On Contemplating the Sound of A Lone Foot Falling Gently\' would be much more descriptive of the situation\'s essence here.
Don\'t worry, I\'m always keeping an ear out for the tree....all seems peaceful to me.....šŸ¦»

May 9th, 2024 00:32

Donā€™t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
Bella Shepard said:

Profoundly clueless\" comes to mind, an aberration in neurology? Makes you wonder how much there is still to be learned about the human brain, and perhaps how little of it we control. Such an appropriate write my friend, for they seem to be coming out of the woodwork these days.

May 8th, 2024 14:59

Donā€™t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
Cassie58 said:

Oh my goodness. I hope she is seeking help and that you have never had to experience such painful vitriol yourself Neville. That word ā€œrepentā€ just sends the shivers down my spine. Yes, some just like to inflict pain.

May 8th, 2024 11:58

Donā€™t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
orchidee said:

Cooeee, I\'m still here.....yet. I would be! lol.

May 8th, 2024 10:44

Donā€™t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
Thomas W Case said:

Wow. You will have that. What\'s the old saying, with friends like that, you don\'t need enemies. Great work.

May 8th, 2024 09:15

Donā€™t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
Accidental Poet said:

Sadly N, there are those in our beautiful compassionate world who would rather see every person suffer in pain and emotional sadness. But as I\'ve always said, \"What goes around usually comes back around.\" Keep that quill wet Sir N. šŸ˜‰

May 8th, 2024 08:48

Donā€™t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
Teddy.15 said:

Narcasism at a new level dear Nev, there are unfortunately more than a few minds in this world that would have this exact pleasure. My own sister came to mind. šŸŒ¹

May 8th, 2024 05:14

Donā€™t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
Doggerel Dave said:

Wot? Not done the washing up again?

May 8th, 2024 03:12

Donā€™t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive sad words Neville, nobody deserves to in our world.

Andy

May 8th, 2024 01:51

The Spilling of Orionā€™s Last Great Secret
Goldfinch60 said:

Looking up to the night sky brings glory, hope and beauty Neville.

Andy

May 8th, 2024 01:44

Donā€™t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
orchidee said:

KP sweats and melts her botox on warmer days - she would! lol.

May 8th, 2024 01:32

Donā€™t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
2781 said:

Sounds like torture

May 8th, 2024 01:19

The Spilling of Orionā€™s Last Great Secret
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful imagery. I can see it.

May 7th, 2024 11:24

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
Tom Dylan said:

A lovely sentiment, Neville, just perfectly captured.

May 7th, 2024 09:58

The Spilling of Orionā€™s Last Great Secret
Accidental Poet said:

Blessed be they who cast their gaze into the star filled skies wondering of all the unanswered questions. Awesome poem N. šŸ˜ŠšŸ‘

May 7th, 2024 08:59

The Spilling of Orionā€™s Last Great Secret
2781 said:

\"To whom will you compare me?
or who is my equal?\" Say the Holy One.
Lift up your eyes and look to the heavens:
Who created all these?
He who brings out the starry host one by one
and calls them all by name.
Because of his great power and mighty strength,
not one of them is missing.

May 7th, 2024 07:47

The Spilling of Orionā€™s Last Great Secret
Doggerel Dave said:

You poor buggers in the northern hemisphere have no idea. To look , away from city and other distracting earth-bound light at the ā€˜milky wayā€™ ā€“ the galaxy to which our sun and hence we are bound, from our viewpoint south is on its own both a humbling and wonderful experience.
And that is just a small part of our galaxy, never mind the billions of others in our own universe. Andā€¦ā€¦ā€¦.
Thanks Neville.


May 7th, 2024 07:15

The Spilling of Orionā€™s Last Great Secret
Cassie58 said:

Star gazing in the heavens looking for Orionā€™s Belt. Her Majesty must be a very close neighbour. I reckon a dazzler of a star. . Can you see it without a telescope? Whatā€™s the secret Neville? Just asking as a star gazer myself:) Happy Tuesday.

May 7th, 2024 05:50

The Spilling of Orionā€™s Last Great Secret
orchidee said:

An atmospheric write there N - pun intended.

May 7th, 2024 02:22

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
Goldfinch60 said:

It must be love as life is like this when love is in the air Neville.

Andy

May 7th, 2024 01:04

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work and use of the senses. This tastes good.

May 6th, 2024 14:45

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
Teddy.15 said:

And now the resident romance poet, šŸ¤£ sounds to me someone has put the spring in your step dear Nev. I\'m definitely enjoying those muse. šŸŒ¹

May 6th, 2024 11:25

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
Cassie58 said:

I detect some spring in your summer steps Neville. May your days always be summer. Happy bank holiday Monday. What romantic poetry you pen poet.

May 6th, 2024 02:52

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
orchidee said:

And - can ya beat a bit of coincidence? I\'m waffling now. lol.

May 6th, 2024 02:20

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
orchidee said:

Yes, I did a similar poem for KP. It began:
\'Can you explain dearest, why there is a dullness to each new day, and why I got further downhill every day married to you?!\' lol

May 6th, 2024 02:19

My Very Dearest of Coincidences
2781 said:

His glory goes on...

May 6th, 2024 02:13



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