Comments received on poems by Neville
Dementia’s Cruel Kiss
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Sensitive and compelling. Perhaps many of us have experienced the confusion and frustration at seeing someone we knew throughout our lives disappearing slowly but inevitably.
December 12th, 2024 09:51
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Sensitive and compelling. Perhaps many of us have experienced the confusion and frustration at seeing someone we knew throughout our lives disappearing slowly but inevitably.
December 12th, 2024 09:51
Dementia’s Cruel Kiss
Tom Dylan said:
A moving piece, Neville. Such a cruel disease.
December 12th, 2024 09:43
Tom Dylan said:
A moving piece, Neville. Such a cruel disease.
December 12th, 2024 09:43
Dementia’s Cruel Kiss
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Having once worked in a CCRC which had a memory support unit, this poem hit home friend! ❤️🩹🌹👏 An awful disease hitting more and more people each day!
December 12th, 2024 06:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Having once worked in a CCRC which had a memory support unit, this poem hit home friend! ❤️🩹🌹👏 An awful disease hitting more and more people each day!
December 12th, 2024 06:58
Strategically Lost
Cheeky Missy said:
Keep me hogtied thus with sheer intrigue as your note in conclusion begs off further and I\'ve tried to be good, to fail miserably. Whatever the import, tis expertly rendered with such delicious imagery and that exquisitely haunting poignancy which only winks mischievously at me.
December 12th, 2024 04:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Keep me hogtied thus with sheer intrigue as your note in conclusion begs off further and I\'ve tried to be good, to fail miserably. Whatever the import, tis expertly rendered with such delicious imagery and that exquisitely haunting poignancy which only winks mischievously at me.
December 12th, 2024 04:44
Dementia’s Cruel Kiss
Poetic Licence said:
A very emotional and touching write about one of the most painful things to watch some one live with, thank you Neville
December 12th, 2024 04:13
Poetic Licence said:
A very emotional and touching write about one of the most painful things to watch some one live with, thank you Neville
December 12th, 2024 04:13
Dementia’s Cruel Kiss
arqios said:
That has rammed its way close to home. I\'ve still to process some moments and episodes from experience. Since it runs in the family that may be a factor for the near future to consider. mmm.... but good to read about it and meditate some.
December 12th, 2024 03:56
arqios said:
That has rammed its way close to home. I\'ve still to process some moments and episodes from experience. Since it runs in the family that may be a factor for the near future to consider. mmm.... but good to read about it and meditate some.
December 12th, 2024 03:56
Dementia’s Cruel Kiss
sorenbarrett said:
Although I have never personally experienced it, I have seen it in many others, and this is the most poetic and apt description of it. Lovely if one could say such a thing about such a sad illness.
December 12th, 2024 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
Although I have never personally experienced it, I have seen it in many others, and this is the most poetic and apt description of it. Lovely if one could say such a thing about such a sad illness.
December 12th, 2024 03:45
Dementia’s Cruel Kiss
orchidee said:
A sensitive write N.
Meanwhile - if it wasn\'t such a serious theme - KP drives me demented!
December 12th, 2024 03:12
orchidee said:
A sensitive write N.
Meanwhile - if it wasn\'t such a serious theme - KP drives me demented!
December 12th, 2024 03:12
Holding Back the Smile
arqios said:
In situations of tension and restraint, we all need to retain a modicum of emotional and psychological autonomy which reflects our exercise of control over our own spirit and identity and the retention of our dignity, however frayed in confrontation. The quiet expression of defiance and self-possession moves and evokes, raw provocation in verse!
December 12th, 2024 02:33
arqios said:
In situations of tension and restraint, we all need to retain a modicum of emotional and psychological autonomy which reflects our exercise of control over our own spirit and identity and the retention of our dignity, however frayed in confrontation. The quiet expression of defiance and self-possession moves and evokes, raw provocation in verse!
December 12th, 2024 02:33
Dementia’s Cruel Kiss
Cheeky Missy said:
\"....No more\" Eh?! Dear, dear vault within each of us, containing such a wealth even we shall never fathom. And thus the elusive \"he\" is a mystery, even to himself. Beautifully rendered with a haunting poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing. [I\'m pulling third shift...]
December 12th, 2024 02:28
Cheeky Missy said:
\"....No more\" Eh?! Dear, dear vault within each of us, containing such a wealth even we shall never fathom. And thus the elusive \"he\" is a mystery, even to himself. Beautifully rendered with a haunting poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing. [I\'m pulling third shift...]
December 12th, 2024 02:28
Holding Back the Smile
Goldfinch60 said:
Just choose carefully Neville.
Andy
December 12th, 2024 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Just choose carefully Neville.
Andy
December 12th, 2024 02:25
Holding Back the Smile
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A subject very close to my heart. Expressed beautifully. A study in ecconomy of words
December 11th, 2024 22:31
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A subject very close to my heart. Expressed beautifully. A study in ecconomy of words
December 11th, 2024 22:31
Holding Back the Smile
Thomas W Case said:
I\'ve been there. lol. I love your work. Great job.
December 11th, 2024 22:08
Thomas W Case said:
I\'ve been there. lol. I love your work. Great job.
December 11th, 2024 22:08
Holding Back the Smile
orchidee said:
Was that those 5 golden rings in that Christmas song?!
December 11th, 2024 11:02
orchidee said:
Was that those 5 golden rings in that Christmas song?!
December 11th, 2024 11:02
Holding Back the Smile
cellinic said:
Very deep and really enigmatic, I\'d agree...
December 11th, 2024 08:05
cellinic said:
Very deep and really enigmatic, I\'d agree...
December 11th, 2024 08:05
Close Shaves and Final Cuts
NafisaSB said:
don\'t use razors, but enjoyed reading the poem
December 11th, 2024 07:04
NafisaSB said:
don\'t use razors, but enjoyed reading the poem
December 11th, 2024 07:04
Holding Back the Smile
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen to your comment and bravo to your poem! You, my friend, are brilliant! 🌹👏
December 11th, 2024 06:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen to your comment and bravo to your poem! You, my friend, are brilliant! 🌹👏
December 11th, 2024 06:28
A Hand Full of Ashes
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Absolutely brilliant piece of art. Astonishing imagery of the bubble wrap!! Felt like a journey into isolation and lingering pain. The subtle expressions lended an air of deep imotion.
December 11th, 2024 06:17
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Absolutely brilliant piece of art. Astonishing imagery of the bubble wrap!! Felt like a journey into isolation and lingering pain. The subtle expressions lended an air of deep imotion.
December 11th, 2024 06:17
Holding Back the Smile
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the read and echo the sentiment in the authors comment
December 11th, 2024 05:29
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the read and echo the sentiment in the authors comment
December 11th, 2024 05:29
Holding Back the Smile
teardrop said:
Hi Neville, another enjoyable read. Thanks!!
December 11th, 2024 04:54
teardrop said:
Hi Neville, another enjoyable read. Thanks!!
December 11th, 2024 04:54
Holding Back the Smile
sorenbarrett said:
The comment as poetic and with as much word play as the poem itself. Neville you are devilish in the working of words this poem is no exception. Enigmatic, yet full of deep meaning. Written as a mystery a puzzle I choose care fully and intend to write fully as well. Most fun and satisfying
December 11th, 2024 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
The comment as poetic and with as much word play as the poem itself. Neville you are devilish in the working of words this poem is no exception. Enigmatic, yet full of deep meaning. Written as a mystery a puzzle I choose care fully and intend to write fully as well. Most fun and satisfying
December 11th, 2024 04:50
Strategically Lost
Dan Williams said:
Damn I am so jealous. May all your encounters be as pleasant. Nice write.
December 11th, 2024 01:27
Dan Williams said:
Damn I am so jealous. May all your encounters be as pleasant. Nice write.
December 11th, 2024 01:27
Strategically Lost
rebellion_in_sanity said:
You said \'it is what it is\'. Please allow me to rephrase - \"It is Beautiful as it is\". Hope that conveys how I felt while reading it.
December 11th, 2024 01:21
rebellion_in_sanity said:
You said \'it is what it is\'. Please allow me to rephrase - \"It is Beautiful as it is\". Hope that conveys how I felt while reading it.
December 11th, 2024 01:21
Hidden in Sight
Dove said:
I love words.. Sometimes they can paint the sky, or drip down like rain. Left for interpretation. Great little poem.⭐⭐⭐
December 10th, 2024 23:20
Dove said:
I love words.. Sometimes they can paint the sky, or drip down like rain. Left for interpretation. Great little poem.⭐⭐⭐
December 10th, 2024 23:20
Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe
Dove said:
The path never runs smoothly. But your poetry is always amusing.
December 10th, 2024 23:17
Dove said:
The path never runs smoothly. But your poetry is always amusing.
December 10th, 2024 23:17
Still Art For Art’s Sake
Dove said:
Reminds me of my painting supplies. Tucked away in my closet. 💗💗💗
December 10th, 2024 23:15
Dove said:
Reminds me of my painting supplies. Tucked away in my closet. 💗💗💗
December 10th, 2024 23:15
Strategically Lost
MendedFences27 said:
Lost in the warmest place you could find? For a short while anyway. Yet, \"abundance at her pleasure\" sounds like it may be longer. - Phil A.
December 10th, 2024 16:38
MendedFences27 said:
Lost in the warmest place you could find? For a short while anyway. Yet, \"abundance at her pleasure\" sounds like it may be longer. - Phil A.
December 10th, 2024 16:38
Strategically Lost
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Neville. And a great shag.
December 10th, 2024 14:51
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Neville. And a great shag.
December 10th, 2024 14:51
Strategically Lost
Dove said:
Beautiful and soothing. Passion seen through a cranberry glass.
December 10th, 2024 11:38
Dove said:
Beautiful and soothing. Passion seen through a cranberry glass.
December 10th, 2024 11:38
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