Comments received on poems by Neville
At the Very End of Darkness
Goldfinch60 said:
The porch light is always on for all in our house Neville.
Andy
January 18th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
The porch light is always on for all in our house Neville.
Andy
January 18th, 2025 02:22
At the Very End of Darkness
Doggerel Dave said:
Having just come out of an six hour electricity blackout....🔆
January 17th, 2025 20:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Having just come out of an six hour electricity blackout....🔆
January 17th, 2025 20:24
At the Very End of Darkness
orchidee said:
Did an \'Idea\' light-bulb come on in your head when you thought to write this?!
January 17th, 2025 10:42
orchidee said:
Did an \'Idea\' light-bulb come on in your head when you thought to write this?!
January 17th, 2025 10:42
At the Very End of Darkness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The light within, waiting to be unleashed but blocked by circumstances. Still, no circumstance is too large to snuff that light or its inner potential. Or at least that is what I got out of it. A wonderful write, Neville! Faved, my friend! 🌹👏
January 17th, 2025 09:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The light within, waiting to be unleashed but blocked by circumstances. Still, no circumstance is too large to snuff that light or its inner potential. Or at least that is what I got out of it. A wonderful write, Neville! Faved, my friend! 🌹👏
January 17th, 2025 09:07
At the Very End of Darkness
arqios said:
There is a light within us waiting to be unleashed that is quite locked up by many a circumstance and situation. That’s the feel I got reading this.
January 17th, 2025 06:54
arqios said:
There is a light within us waiting to be unleashed that is quite locked up by many a circumstance and situation. That’s the feel I got reading this.
January 17th, 2025 06:54
At the Very End of Darkness
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has echoes. It resounds with internal rhymes and near rhymes that bounce off word\'s walls. It has a haunting quality reinforced by the last word. Nicely constructed its archetecture is musical
January 17th, 2025 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has echoes. It resounds with internal rhymes and near rhymes that bounce off word\'s walls. It has a haunting quality reinforced by the last word. Nicely constructed its archetecture is musical
January 17th, 2025 05:22
Flushed
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. Lots of lovely little details.
January 17th, 2025 05:19
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. Lots of lovely little details.
January 17th, 2025 05:19
Flushed
Goldfinch60 said:
Those touches to the one you love are so meaningful Neville.
Andy
January 17th, 2025 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Those touches to the one you love are so meaningful Neville.
Andy
January 17th, 2025 02:11
Flushed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I absolutely love this beautiful and sensual poem. Wonderful job, Neville. 🌹👏 Easily faved.
January 16th, 2025 08:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I absolutely love this beautiful and sensual poem. Wonderful job, Neville. 🌹👏 Easily faved.
January 16th, 2025 08:52
Flushed
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply sensual in literal and metaphorical ways double entendre give even greater feel to this seductive piece
January 16th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply sensual in literal and metaphorical ways double entendre give even greater feel to this seductive piece
January 16th, 2025 04:31
The Joy of Silence
Cheeky Missy said:
[That\'s right, THIS pretty little number was so eloquent I felt me too much of a child to leave a comment. Here goes nothing.] Whew! Pass me the smelling salts, the heat is killing me! I declare, you men know too well how to expertly describe the exquisite joys of the boudoir. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a heady poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 15th, 2025 14:24
Cheeky Missy said:
[That\'s right, THIS pretty little number was so eloquent I felt me too much of a child to leave a comment. Here goes nothing.] Whew! Pass me the smelling salts, the heat is killing me! I declare, you men know too well how to expertly describe the exquisite joys of the boudoir. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a heady poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 15th, 2025 14:24
Masterpieces
Cheeky Missy said:
And yet there\'s always at least one or more souls who think to try their hand at it likewise. Fascinating with a haunting, teasing, intrigue and poignancy oh how charming this pretty little number is! Thank you very much for sharing.
January 14th, 2025 16:16
Cheeky Missy said:
And yet there\'s always at least one or more souls who think to try their hand at it likewise. Fascinating with a haunting, teasing, intrigue and poignancy oh how charming this pretty little number is! Thank you very much for sharing.
January 14th, 2025 16:16
Barely Visible Indentations
NafisaSB said:
sensual, erotic, what more can i say
January 14th, 2025 00:21
NafisaSB said:
sensual, erotic, what more can i say
January 14th, 2025 00:21
The Horse With the Red Umbrella
Cheeky Missy said:
Mystifying me with sheer intrigue and such detailing as should enlighten me, but perhaps the inherent fatigue eating at my sense is the issue, either way, very lovely and fascinating. Rendered to effect so expressively with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy, thank you very, very much for sharing!
January 13th, 2025 17:25
Cheeky Missy said:
Mystifying me with sheer intrigue and such detailing as should enlighten me, but perhaps the inherent fatigue eating at my sense is the issue, either way, very lovely and fascinating. Rendered to effect so expressively with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy, thank you very, very much for sharing!
January 13th, 2025 17:25
Breaking a Myth About Bad Words
Tom Dylan said:
An intriguing write, Neville. Makes you think about the actual words themselves. As you suggest, hate and words like that should be more offensive than swear words. Nicely done.
January 13th, 2025 06:47
Tom Dylan said:
An intriguing write, Neville. Makes you think about the actual words themselves. As you suggest, hate and words like that should be more offensive than swear words. Nicely done.
January 13th, 2025 06:47
Breaking a Myth About Bad Words
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, there are not many bad words in your words. Have I worded enough. LOL
Wordy.
January 13th, 2025 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, there are not many bad words in your words. Have I worded enough. LOL
Wordy.
January 13th, 2025 02:48
Breaking a Myth About Bad Words
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re a regular riot herein! Hahaha! Oh how I love this! You can begin with that four-letter word and I\'ll sidle over to that larger, oft misused word jealousy. Ah, way too fun! Thank you so very much! Wittily rendered with perfect tact and excellent imagery, not to mention a playful poignancy.
January 12th, 2025 19:42
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re a regular riot herein! Hahaha! Oh how I love this! You can begin with that four-letter word and I\'ll sidle over to that larger, oft misused word jealousy. Ah, way too fun! Thank you so very much! Wittily rendered with perfect tact and excellent imagery, not to mention a playful poignancy.
January 12th, 2025 19:42
Breaking a Myth About Bad Words
Bella Shepard said:
I never met a word I didn\'t like. Even swear words have their charm. I love the way you arrange your words to say such remarkable things, as in this poem.
January 12th, 2025 12:28
Bella Shepard said:
I never met a word I didn\'t like. Even swear words have their charm. I love the way you arrange your words to say such remarkable things, as in this poem.
January 12th, 2025 12:28
Breaking a Myth About Bad Words
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this poem...the word play write/right...and also the ending. OMG...the ending! Yes. This is more than elementary, my dear Neville, this is pure brilliance. Well done, friend! 🌹👏
January 12th, 2025 11:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this poem...the word play write/right...and also the ending. OMG...the ending! Yes. This is more than elementary, my dear Neville, this is pure brilliance. Well done, friend! 🌹👏
January 12th, 2025 11:58
Breaking a Myth About Bad Words
Poetic Licence said:
A very valid message about how we use things, like they say about dogs, no such thing as a dangerous dog, it is the owners that are dangerous, enjoyed the read
January 12th, 2025 05:21
Poetic Licence said:
A very valid message about how we use things, like they say about dogs, no such thing as a dangerous dog, it is the owners that are dangerous, enjoyed the read
January 12th, 2025 05:21
Breaking a Myth About Bad Words
sorenbarrett said:
I used to hate vegtables as a child now I love them. I guess things change. Sometimes old loves become something else and vice versa. Loved the poem
January 12th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
I used to hate vegtables as a child now I love them. I guess things change. Sometimes old loves become something else and vice versa. Loved the poem
January 12th, 2025 04:45
Gaea’s Garden
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Neville
Like How The Seasons Compliment One Another
January 12th, 2025 04:23
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Neville
Like How The Seasons Compliment One Another
January 12th, 2025 04:23
Breaking a Myth About Bad Words
orchidee said:
Fido says to me - Nooooo, don\'t start with hate with KP. Start with putting her down a peg or two though! lol.
January 12th, 2025 03:24
orchidee said:
Fido says to me - Nooooo, don\'t start with hate with KP. Start with putting her down a peg or two though! lol.
January 12th, 2025 03:24
Breaking a Myth About Bad Words
arqios said:
Ooh those bad words... don\'t you just hate it! 🤪🙏🏻👍🕊️
January 12th, 2025 03:22
arqios said:
Ooh those bad words... don\'t you just hate it! 🤪🙏🏻👍🕊️
January 12th, 2025 03:22
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