Comments received on poems by Neville
Aide-Mémoire’s
orchidee said:
Yes, I carry a mini-trout toy key-ring to remind me of KP! lol.
February 26th, 2025 11:33
orchidee said:
Yes, I carry a mini-trout toy key-ring to remind me of KP! lol.
February 26th, 2025 11:33
Aide-Mémoire’s
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, there you go, Neville. Taking simplicity and wrapping it up into a mind-blowing statement that unravels the very fabric of all holding my chaotic inner world together. 🤣 This is so true, I had to attempt at being more witty than saying how true this is. Hope you don\' t mind the feeble attempt! Wonderful write my friend. An easy fave! ❤️🌹👏
February 26th, 2025 11:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, there you go, Neville. Taking simplicity and wrapping it up into a mind-blowing statement that unravels the very fabric of all holding my chaotic inner world together. 🤣 This is so true, I had to attempt at being more witty than saying how true this is. Hope you don\' t mind the feeble attempt! Wonderful write my friend. An easy fave! ❤️🌹👏
February 26th, 2025 11:19
Aide-Mémoire’s
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful twist in this logic that seems so true for many. This one is short or should I say little and therefore easy to remember. Loved the simplicity in this Neville.
February 26th, 2025 09:27
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful twist in this logic that seems so true for many. This one is short or should I say little and therefore easy to remember. Loved the simplicity in this Neville.
February 26th, 2025 09:27
Aide-Mémoire’s
Poetic Licence said:
Amazing how the simplest and smallest of things can mean the most, enjoyed today\'s read
February 26th, 2025 08:58
Poetic Licence said:
Amazing how the simplest and smallest of things can mean the most, enjoyed today\'s read
February 26th, 2025 08:58
Some Kind of Curious Something
Goldfinch60 said:
That always happens when you mean so much to each other Neville.
Andy
February 26th, 2025 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
That always happens when you mean so much to each other Neville.
Andy
February 26th, 2025 02:52
Some Kind of Curious Something
Tristan Robert Lange said:
For some reason, I envision this scene being followed by a German Shepherd named, Jerry Lee, frolicking in grass after a limousine hookup with a French Poodle. Not sure if you get the reference, but if so, I hope it makes you laugh as much as I did thinking of it. Well done, my friend. Sated indeed. Beautiful! 🌹👏
February 25th, 2025 15:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
For some reason, I envision this scene being followed by a German Shepherd named, Jerry Lee, frolicking in grass after a limousine hookup with a French Poodle. Not sure if you get the reference, but if so, I hope it makes you laugh as much as I did thinking of it. Well done, my friend. Sated indeed. Beautiful! 🌹👏
February 25th, 2025 15:01
Playing With Words
Cheeky Missy said:
She blushed when he finished, wishing he\'d seal it with a kiss, but as I\'m the proverbial fly in the wall, and lost interest, guess I\'ll never know. Beautifully rendered with an erotic poignancy and tasteful imagery. Thank you for sharing, Sir.
February 25th, 2025 15:01
Cheeky Missy said:
She blushed when he finished, wishing he\'d seal it with a kiss, but as I\'m the proverbial fly in the wall, and lost interest, guess I\'ll never know. Beautifully rendered with an erotic poignancy and tasteful imagery. Thank you for sharing, Sir.
February 25th, 2025 15:01
No More Mr. Blue Skies
Cheeky Missy said:
I guess I didn\'t bother blaming the big boys for the oceanside birds haunting the Midwest, crying ever and anon over naked parking lots whose trash, littered everywhere, seemed to charge mankind with a fault because their cries were here in the heartland, far, far from the seas. You\'ve capably drawn up a vision and charged the few where I\'ll blame every last one of us. Excellently rendered with haunting imagery and a resonating poignancy.
February 25th, 2025 14:55
Cheeky Missy said:
I guess I didn\'t bother blaming the big boys for the oceanside birds haunting the Midwest, crying ever and anon over naked parking lots whose trash, littered everywhere, seemed to charge mankind with a fault because their cries were here in the heartland, far, far from the seas. You\'ve capably drawn up a vision and charged the few where I\'ll blame every last one of us. Excellently rendered with haunting imagery and a resonating poignancy.
February 25th, 2025 14:55
Some Kind of Curious Something
Cheeky Missy said:
Really?! You\'re certain of that? Pardon my inherent cheekiness, but I\'ll beg to differ, unless that is, you concur with the vanity plate my father bought reading: \"2 R 1\" or something like that. Nothing like a hot coal to burn one\'s fingertips for eagerness, but this pretty number sassily winks and flirts so much I fear I\'m hard pressed to feel like I\'ve not been rather naughty. Excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a deliciously haunting imagery. Thank you for sharing.
February 25th, 2025 14:33
Cheeky Missy said:
Really?! You\'re certain of that? Pardon my inherent cheekiness, but I\'ll beg to differ, unless that is, you concur with the vanity plate my father bought reading: \"2 R 1\" or something like that. Nothing like a hot coal to burn one\'s fingertips for eagerness, but this pretty number sassily winks and flirts so much I fear I\'m hard pressed to feel like I\'ve not been rather naughty. Excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a deliciously haunting imagery. Thank you for sharing.
February 25th, 2025 14:33
Some Kind of Curious Something
orchidee said:
KP and my marriage - something and nothing - mainly nothing! lol.
February 25th, 2025 09:56
orchidee said:
KP and my marriage - something and nothing - mainly nothing! lol.
February 25th, 2025 09:56
Some Kind of Curious Something
Poetic Licence said:
The contemplating after the exileraration, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 06:46
Poetic Licence said:
The contemplating after the exileraration, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 06:46
Some Kind of Curious Something
sorenbarrett said:
What appears simple in this poem is far deeper hidden under sheets and blankets, maybe under the bed itself. A realization of what is the meaning of life. A complexity in a simplicity and isn\'t nature always so? Lovely Neville
February 25th, 2025 06:08
sorenbarrett said:
What appears simple in this poem is far deeper hidden under sheets and blankets, maybe under the bed itself. A realization of what is the meaning of life. A complexity in a simplicity and isn\'t nature always so? Lovely Neville
February 25th, 2025 06:08
No More Mr. Blue Skies
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Neville, will our world ever get better.
Andy
February 24th, 2025 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Neville, will our world ever get better.
Andy
February 24th, 2025 02:49
No More Mr. Blue Skies
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful, true, and offers a sobering vantagepoint of human nature. Well done, Neville 🌹👏
February 23rd, 2025 22:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful, true, and offers a sobering vantagepoint of human nature. Well done, Neville 🌹👏
February 23rd, 2025 22:35
No More Mr. Blue Skies
Doggerel Dave said:
My attention span is shrinking so do you mind if I just hang on to your last four lines? With the \'you\' in there rather than \'we\' I believe you have it, Sir....
February 23rd, 2025 22:02
Doggerel Dave said:
My attention span is shrinking so do you mind if I just hang on to your last four lines? With the \'you\' in there rather than \'we\' I believe you have it, Sir....
February 23rd, 2025 22:02
No More Mr. Blue Skies
sorenbarrett said:
Now that casts a rather dark pall over this poem. \"Pray\" indeed \"haunt\" yes. This poem is haunting and the message is clear. People are not yet ready to govern themselves, not wise enough to choose proper leaders, too weak to overcome greed. A sad commentary of the human race. A wonderful write that talks to the potential outcome of such actions or inactions. As usual well done in poetic grace
February 23rd, 2025 16:07
sorenbarrett said:
Now that casts a rather dark pall over this poem. \"Pray\" indeed \"haunt\" yes. This poem is haunting and the message is clear. People are not yet ready to govern themselves, not wise enough to choose proper leaders, too weak to overcome greed. A sad commentary of the human race. A wonderful write that talks to the potential outcome of such actions or inactions. As usual well done in poetic grace
February 23rd, 2025 16:07
No More Mr. Blue Skies
Poetic Licence said:
A strong rightful critism of the human race as a whole, they who commit the sins and crimes we see on the news everyday but also those of us who allow them to, a powerful and accurate write.
February 23rd, 2025 06:42
Poetic Licence said:
A strong rightful critism of the human race as a whole, they who commit the sins and crimes we see on the news everyday but also those of us who allow them to, a powerful and accurate write.
February 23rd, 2025 06:42
No More Mr. Blue Skies
sorenbarrett said:
And those are the good guys. A powerful poem, a critique on human nature not only to do such things to the world we live in and ourselves but to allow it. Black Sunday it is. The worst part is that it is true.
February 23rd, 2025 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
And those are the good guys. A powerful poem, a critique on human nature not only to do such things to the world we live in and ourselves but to allow it. Black Sunday it is. The worst part is that it is true.
February 23rd, 2025 05:27
No More Mr. Blue Skies
arqios said:
Of 8B+ agendas the world over, the few that are fulfilled and subscribed to could be counted on the fingers of one hand…. that it seems is where the powers that be resides… of course kingmakers and power brokers are thrown in the swill as in days of old, we don’t need to attend mediaeval fairs because we are living in such times. 🙏🏻🕊
February 23rd, 2025 04:20
arqios said:
Of 8B+ agendas the world over, the few that are fulfilled and subscribed to could be counted on the fingers of one hand…. that it seems is where the powers that be resides… of course kingmakers and power brokers are thrown in the swill as in days of old, we don’t need to attend mediaeval fairs because we are living in such times. 🙏🏻🕊
February 23rd, 2025 04:20
Once I Felt Like a Sky Hungry Kite
Goldfinch60 said:
Revival will be there Neville and you will fly in the glorious blue sky once more.
Andy
February 21st, 2025 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Revival will be there Neville and you will fly in the glorious blue sky once more.
Andy
February 21st, 2025 02:16
Once I Felt Like a Sky Hungry Kite
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work.. Here in Clear Lake, they have a kite festival every winter on the frozen lake. Fly high, my friend.
February 20th, 2025 14:30
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work.. Here in Clear Lake, they have a kite festival every winter on the frozen lake. Fly high, my friend.
February 20th, 2025 14:30
Once I Felt Like a Sky Hungry Kite
Cheeky Missy said:
In the rarer instances where a kite was my vehicle, dipping, diving, soaring, flying, the heavier motions of pride and greed were lost to the higher regions of purer air whose essence knew not such base notions. That was also the occasion where my newly acquired baby doll had her face totally squashed in while my back was turned, by the heat of the sun, allegedly, and after that I only remember the subsequent amusement of too many years later when the minor truths rectified that in style. Your characteristic rendering so charmingly culling these same sensations, tis regrettable the Phoenix won\'t remain on the menu indefinitely. Intriguing with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
February 20th, 2025 09:32
Cheeky Missy said:
In the rarer instances where a kite was my vehicle, dipping, diving, soaring, flying, the heavier motions of pride and greed were lost to the higher regions of purer air whose essence knew not such base notions. That was also the occasion where my newly acquired baby doll had her face totally squashed in while my back was turned, by the heat of the sun, allegedly, and after that I only remember the subsequent amusement of too many years later when the minor truths rectified that in style. Your characteristic rendering so charmingly culling these same sensations, tis regrettable the Phoenix won\'t remain on the menu indefinitely. Intriguing with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
February 20th, 2025 09:32
Once I Felt Like a Sky Hungry Kite
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can relate to this. The feeling of once wanting to soar, to fly...but life has beaten and weathered one down to the point of limply stumbling, or chaotically skipping along the ground as one tries to haphazardly take flight with little ability, let alone desire, to soar anymore. That, at least, is what I got out of it, anywho. Well done, my friend. ❤️
February 20th, 2025 08:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can relate to this. The feeling of once wanting to soar, to fly...but life has beaten and weathered one down to the point of limply stumbling, or chaotically skipping along the ground as one tries to haphazardly take flight with little ability, let alone desire, to soar anymore. That, at least, is what I got out of it, anywho. Well done, my friend. ❤️
February 20th, 2025 08:48
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