Comments received on poems by Neville
A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer
Thomas W Case said:
Boom. Excellent work.
April 19th, 2024 11:53
Thomas W Case said:
Boom. Excellent work.
April 19th, 2024 11:53
A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer
Accidental Poet said:
All I want is what is meant for me. Well penned N. 👍
April 19th, 2024 08:07
Accidental Poet said:
All I want is what is meant for me. Well penned N. 👍
April 19th, 2024 08:07
A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer
Bella Shepard said:
An enigmatic write my friend, open to interpretation? A painful parting that must be? Fine and dandy.
April 19th, 2024 07:25
Bella Shepard said:
An enigmatic write my friend, open to interpretation? A painful parting that must be? Fine and dandy.
April 19th, 2024 07:25
Some Words Speak for Themselves
sorenbarrett said:
Hope the beginning of all things such a great beginning. Love that amorphous emotion impossible to define. So often misunderstood. If God is everything, everywhere, and all present then God is love. I see all nature as love. Peace comes after Hope is realized and love is present. There is too little of each in this world and probably will be for some time but as John Lennon said I cant help but \"Imagin e\". Great write Neville
April 19th, 2024 06:46
sorenbarrett said:
Hope the beginning of all things such a great beginning. Love that amorphous emotion impossible to define. So often misunderstood. If God is everything, everywhere, and all present then God is love. I see all nature as love. Peace comes after Hope is realized and love is present. There is too little of each in this world and probably will be for some time but as John Lennon said I cant help but \"Imagin e\". Great write Neville
April 19th, 2024 06:46
A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer
Doggerel Dave said:
So you have enough, you assert, to avoid the need to ever weep or bleed....
A generous wish Neville, which has universal applicability.........
April 19th, 2024 06:06
Doggerel Dave said:
So you have enough, you assert, to avoid the need to ever weep or bleed....
A generous wish Neville, which has universal applicability.........
April 19th, 2024 06:06
A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful and elegant dear Nev 🌹💐
April 19th, 2024 03:47
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful and elegant dear Nev 🌹💐
April 19th, 2024 03:47
A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully stated in so few eloquent words.
April 19th, 2024 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully stated in so few eloquent words.
April 19th, 2024 03:42
A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer
orchidee said:
Yes, intriguing N.
I added to the first line..... botox! For you know who. lol.
April 19th, 2024 02:25
orchidee said:
Yes, intriguing N.
I added to the first line..... botox! For you know who. lol.
April 19th, 2024 02:25
A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville.
Andy
April 19th, 2024 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville.
Andy
April 19th, 2024 01:21
Some Words Speak for Themselves
Goldfinch60 said:
May the hope of peace and love be with all very shortly Neville.
Andy
April 19th, 2024 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
May the hope of peace and love be with all very shortly Neville.
Andy
April 19th, 2024 01:14
Some Words Speak for Themselves
Thomas W Case said:
Another homerun. All we can do is hope and pray.
April 18th, 2024 15:52
Thomas W Case said:
Another homerun. All we can do is hope and pray.
April 18th, 2024 15:52
Some Words Speak for Themselves
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Now KP and I don\'t help towards peace, with our constant fighting like cat and dog. Doh!
Do many cats and dogs actually fight each other?
You beaten that egg yet?!
April 18th, 2024 08:12
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Now KP and I don\'t help towards peace, with our constant fighting like cat and dog. Doh!
Do many cats and dogs actually fight each other?
You beaten that egg yet?!
April 18th, 2024 08:12
Some Words Speak for Themselves
Cassie58 said:
Hope, love and peace. The most important words in the dictionary in present times of conflict. How eloquently you convey the meaning of those three little words that can make every difference to our planet. Thank you Neville.
April 18th, 2024 07:56
Cassie58 said:
Hope, love and peace. The most important words in the dictionary in present times of conflict. How eloquently you convey the meaning of those three little words that can make every difference to our planet. Thank you Neville.
April 18th, 2024 07:56
Before it All Began to Go Wrong
Bella Shepard said:
I find that as I age I hit the rewind button in my mind a little more each day, and wonder how all that life passed by. Was I really that child, adolescent, adult, now senior? I think going back helps us understand where we are. Socrates said \"The unexamined life is not worth living\", so the food for thought you offer here is most relevant and beautifully said.
April 18th, 2024 07:48
Bella Shepard said:
I find that as I age I hit the rewind button in my mind a little more each day, and wonder how all that life passed by. Was I really that child, adolescent, adult, now senior? I think going back helps us understand where we are. Socrates said \"The unexamined life is not worth living\", so the food for thought you offer here is most relevant and beautifully said.
April 18th, 2024 07:48
Some Words Speak for Themselves
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve chosen wisely and well my friend, words that should be taken to heart and not carelessly bandied about, but uttered with the deepest respect. You\'ve made my day!
April 18th, 2024 07:34
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve chosen wisely and well my friend, words that should be taken to heart and not carelessly bandied about, but uttered with the deepest respect. You\'ve made my day!
April 18th, 2024 07:34
Some Words Speak for Themselves
David Wakeling said:
Hope Love and Peace. Not a bad recipe for a good life
April 18th, 2024 03:19
David Wakeling said:
Hope Love and Peace. Not a bad recipe for a good life
April 18th, 2024 03:19
Before it All Began to Go Wrong
Goldfinch60 said:
I would be there like a shot Neville, such wonderful times and memories back in the day. My friends and I made bows and arrows, we were never ever injured by them, or the catapults we made. LOL
Great times and such innocence all around.
Andy
April 18th, 2024 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
I would be there like a shot Neville, such wonderful times and memories back in the day. My friends and I made bows and arrows, we were never ever injured by them, or the catapults we made. LOL
Great times and such innocence all around.
Andy
April 18th, 2024 01:21
Before it All Began to Go Wrong
Doggerel Dave said:
First: A fine line in pure nostalgia Neville, full of the most appealing detail (and I mean \'most\' as part of many or much) which filled me with the above mentioned...
Second: Yes - I\'d go back for a week\'s visit because there were many things/attitudes I really enjoyed.....but do I want my own naivety too?
April 17th, 2024 21:04
Doggerel Dave said:
First: A fine line in pure nostalgia Neville, full of the most appealing detail (and I mean \'most\' as part of many or much) which filled me with the above mentioned...
Second: Yes - I\'d go back for a week\'s visit because there were many things/attitudes I really enjoyed.....but do I want my own naivety too?
April 17th, 2024 21:04
Before it All Began to Go Wrong
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. You pull the reader along brilliantly. I anticipated everything. Superb work.
April 17th, 2024 15:07
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. You pull the reader along brilliantly. I anticipated everything. Superb work.
April 17th, 2024 15:07
Before it All Began to Go Wrong
Cassie58 said:
Some say you should never go back, but I would give my right arm to have a day back with my mum and dad, my four grandparents and my four siblings. So much in your words Neville that I like and resonate with. Simple times, when money wasn’t king, when people were friendlier and your neighbours were called auntie and uncle. Values have sadly changed. I sometimes pine for what has gone. That doesn’t mean I am unhappy. It just means time has moved on and I am nostalgic. Thank goodness for poetry, where we can pen our memories and enjoy them with like minded souls. I’d gladly go back with ya to the days before it all went wrong . Just think, no internet, no mobiles we all walked or got buses. A very different world. I really enjoyed the detail in this write.
April 17th, 2024 12:08
Cassie58 said:
Some say you should never go back, but I would give my right arm to have a day back with my mum and dad, my four grandparents and my four siblings. So much in your words Neville that I like and resonate with. Simple times, when money wasn’t king, when people were friendlier and your neighbours were called auntie and uncle. Values have sadly changed. I sometimes pine for what has gone. That doesn’t mean I am unhappy. It just means time has moved on and I am nostalgic. Thank goodness for poetry, where we can pen our memories and enjoy them with like minded souls. I’d gladly go back with ya to the days before it all went wrong . Just think, no internet, no mobiles we all walked or got buses. A very different world. I really enjoyed the detail in this write.
April 17th, 2024 12:08
Before it All Began to Go Wrong
Accidental Poet said:
Although there are many times in the past I would not want to relive, there are more that I\'d give almost anything to be able to relive. When time was slower paced and less arrogance and ignorance in the world. When everyone in the neighborhood knew each other and would stop to talk. When you could leave your house unlocked without fear of strangers been there while you were gone. And when I saw a pretty girl smile to outshine everyone else. 😊
April 17th, 2024 06:21
Accidental Poet said:
Although there are many times in the past I would not want to relive, there are more that I\'d give almost anything to be able to relive. When time was slower paced and less arrogance and ignorance in the world. When everyone in the neighborhood knew each other and would stop to talk. When you could leave your house unlocked without fear of strangers been there while you were gone. And when I saw a pretty girl smile to outshine everyone else. 😊
April 17th, 2024 06:21
Before it All Began to Go Wrong
Teddy.15 said:
I wouldn\'t go back in time simply because I believe nothing would change and what I have learnt on my road is that everything from the past has led me to today 🌹 Fabulous thought provoker dear Nev.
April 17th, 2024 03:27
Teddy.15 said:
I wouldn\'t go back in time simply because I believe nothing would change and what I have learnt on my road is that everything from the past has led me to today 🌹 Fabulous thought provoker dear Nev.
April 17th, 2024 03:27
Before it All Began to Go Wrong
orchidee said:
Oohhh, I wish I could go back to pre-KP days! lol.
April 17th, 2024 02:18
orchidee said:
Oohhh, I wish I could go back to pre-KP days! lol.
April 17th, 2024 02:18
No Certain Doubt
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville, it is so awful that many ladies have problems like this because of the swineherd of men who see them as prey.
Andy
April 17th, 2024 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville, it is so awful that many ladies have problems like this because of the swineherd of men who see them as prey.
Andy
April 17th, 2024 01:11
No Certain Doubt
Accidental Poet said:
And the friend she called was you, yes? 😊
April 16th, 2024 07:38
Accidental Poet said:
And the friend she called was you, yes? 😊
April 16th, 2024 07:38
No Certain Doubt
Cassie58 said:
The safety of women is paramount. They need protecting from the violence and twisted minds of some of the male species. This poem gave me the chills and I started to think of stalkers and how frightening it would be for a woman on her own, anxious and afraid at night. And then my mind travelled elsewhere to women with mental health problems and that all this might be playing out in their minds. There is so much to ponder on this piece Neville. Different takes. Results the same. Frightened women. A poem of current times, so well penned which exercises the brain cells.
April 16th, 2024 04:27
Cassie58 said:
The safety of women is paramount. They need protecting from the violence and twisted minds of some of the male species. This poem gave me the chills and I started to think of stalkers and how frightening it would be for a woman on her own, anxious and afraid at night. And then my mind travelled elsewhere to women with mental health problems and that all this might be playing out in their minds. There is so much to ponder on this piece Neville. Different takes. Results the same. Frightened women. A poem of current times, so well penned which exercises the brain cells.
April 16th, 2024 04:27
No Certain Doubt
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I had my doubts of marrying KP, but she hid the water from my whisky. I got tipsy and said \'I do\'! lol.
April 16th, 2024 02:14
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I had my doubts of marrying KP, but she hid the water from my whisky. I got tipsy and said \'I do\'! lol.
April 16th, 2024 02:14
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