Comments received on poems by Neville



Holding Back the Smile
Thomas W Case said:

I\'ve been there. lol. I love your work. Great job.

December 11th, 2024 22:08

Holding Back the Smile
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Nevilie

December 11th, 2024 15:06

Holding Back the Smile
orchidee said:

Was that those 5 golden rings in that Christmas song?!

December 11th, 2024 11:02

Holding Back the Smile
cellinic said:

Very deep and really enigmatic, I\'d agree...

December 11th, 2024 08:05

Close Shaves and Final Cuts
NafisaSB said:

don\'t use razors, but enjoyed reading the poem

December 11th, 2024 07:04

Holding Back the Smile
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Amen to your comment and bravo to your poem! You, my friend, are brilliant! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 11th, 2024 06:28

A Hand Full of Ashes
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Absolutely brilliant piece of art. Astonishing imagery of the bubble wrap!! Felt like a journey into isolation and lingering pain. The subtle expressions lended an air of deep imotion.

December 11th, 2024 06:17

Holding Back the Smile
Poetic Licence said:

I enjoyed the read and echo the sentiment in the authors comment

December 11th, 2024 05:29

Holding Back the Smile
teardrop said:

Hi Neville, another enjoyable read. Thanks!!

December 11th, 2024 04:54

Holding Back the Smile
sorenbarrett said:

The comment as poetic and with as much word play as the poem itself. Neville you are devilish in the working of words this poem is no exception. Enigmatic, yet full of deep meaning. Written as a mystery a puzzle I choose care fully and intend to write fully as well. Most fun and satisfying

December 11th, 2024 04:50

Strategically Lost
Dan Williams said:

Damn I am so jealous. May all your encounters be as pleasant. Nice write.

December 11th, 2024 01:27

Strategically Lost
rebellion_in_sanity said:

You said \'it is what it is\'. Please allow me to rephrase - \"It is Beautiful as it is\". Hope that conveys how I felt while reading it.

December 11th, 2024 01:21

Hidden in Sight
Dove said:

I love words.. Sometimes they can paint the sky, or drip down like rain. Left for interpretation. Great little poem.⭐⭐⭐

December 10th, 2024 23:20

Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe
Dove said:

The path never runs smoothly. But your poetry is always amusing.

December 10th, 2024 23:17

Still Art For Art’s Sake
Dove said:

Reminds me of my painting supplies. Tucked away in my closet. πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—

December 10th, 2024 23:15

Strategically Lost
MendedFences27 said:

Lost in the warmest place you could find? For a short while anyway. Yet, \"abundance at her pleasure\" sounds like it may be longer. - Phil A.

December 10th, 2024 16:38

Strategically Lost
Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine write, Neville. And a great shag.

December 10th, 2024 14:51

Strategically Lost
Dove said:

Beautiful and soothing. Passion seen through a cranberry glass.

December 10th, 2024 11:38

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

It is what it is...and that is...it is is a mighty fine poem, Neville! Well done, friend! And enjoy the leisure! πŸŒΉπŸ‘πŸ»

December 10th, 2024 09:44

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Tony36 said:

Excellent write Nevilie

December 10th, 2024 08:30

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Bobby O said:

Loved the ending and really smiled as I picture the tint that caused the light to slide into that perfect ambience

December 10th, 2024 07:42

Strategically Lost
Doggerel Dave said:

Right then Sir - if you persist. Cranberry is a really rich colour which can bring out the subtleties in a piece of well molded glass in a very special way.....

December 10th, 2024 06:06

Strategically Lost
arqios said:

Strategy some say is half the game!

December 10th, 2024 05:17

Strategically Lost
sorenbarrett said:

Paradoxes of truth blend with familiar idioms into a coherent view of life as it really is. A masterpiece of language and social norms that defy their outward portrayal. Loved it

December 10th, 2024 04:43

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Poetic Licence said:

When the pleasure arrives hope it is eternal, enjoyable read, Thank you

December 10th, 2024 04:24

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orchidee said:

If KP and I ever become naked I will never recover! lol.
My poem about it will start \'As I felt the smoothness of an old trout....\' Or \'sagginess\' with the botox.

December 10th, 2024 02:58

Strategically Lost
Goldfinch60 said:

May that leisure bring such pleasure to your life Neville, as it has mine.

Andy

December 10th, 2024 02:23

Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe
cellinic said:

That\'s really brilliant, Neville, best wishes

December 9th, 2024 11:30

Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe
Tom Dylan said:

A couple of powerful pieces, Neville. A fine write.

December 9th, 2024 09:28

Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe
Goldfinch60 said:

1. Such a shame if true Neville, I hope all is well.

2. We will never away from life.

Andy

December 9th, 2024 02:58



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