Comments received on poems by Neville
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Dan Williams said:
Damn I am so jealous. May all your encounters be as pleasant. Nice write.
December 11th, 2024 01:27
Dan Williams said:
Damn I am so jealous. May all your encounters be as pleasant. Nice write.
December 11th, 2024 01:27
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rebellion_in_sanity said:
You said \'it is what it is\'. Please allow me to rephrase - \"It is Beautiful as it is\". Hope that conveys how I felt while reading it.
December 11th, 2024 01:21
rebellion_in_sanity said:
You said \'it is what it is\'. Please allow me to rephrase - \"It is Beautiful as it is\". Hope that conveys how I felt while reading it.
December 11th, 2024 01:21
Hidden in Sight
Dove said:
I love words.. Sometimes they can paint the sky, or drip down like rain. Left for interpretation. Great little poem.⭐⭐⭐
December 10th, 2024 23:20
Dove said:
I love words.. Sometimes they can paint the sky, or drip down like rain. Left for interpretation. Great little poem.⭐⭐⭐
December 10th, 2024 23:20
Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe
Dove said:
The path never runs smoothly. But your poetry is always amusing.
December 10th, 2024 23:17
Dove said:
The path never runs smoothly. But your poetry is always amusing.
December 10th, 2024 23:17
Still Art For Art’s Sake
Dove said:
Reminds me of my painting supplies. Tucked away in my closet. 💗💗💗
December 10th, 2024 23:15
Dove said:
Reminds me of my painting supplies. Tucked away in my closet. 💗💗💗
December 10th, 2024 23:15
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MendedFences27 said:
Lost in the warmest place you could find? For a short while anyway. Yet, \"abundance at her pleasure\" sounds like it may be longer. - Phil A.
December 10th, 2024 16:38
MendedFences27 said:
Lost in the warmest place you could find? For a short while anyway. Yet, \"abundance at her pleasure\" sounds like it may be longer. - Phil A.
December 10th, 2024 16:38
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Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Neville. And a great shag.
December 10th, 2024 14:51
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Neville. And a great shag.
December 10th, 2024 14:51
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Dove said:
Beautiful and soothing. Passion seen through a cranberry glass.
December 10th, 2024 11:38
Dove said:
Beautiful and soothing. Passion seen through a cranberry glass.
December 10th, 2024 11:38
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
It is what it is...and that is...it is is a mighty fine poem, Neville! Well done, friend! And enjoy the leisure! 🌹👏🍻
December 10th, 2024 09:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It is what it is...and that is...it is is a mighty fine poem, Neville! Well done, friend! And enjoy the leisure! 🌹👏🍻
December 10th, 2024 09:44
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Bobby O said:
Loved the ending and really smiled as I picture the tint that caused the light to slide into that perfect ambience
December 10th, 2024 07:42
Bobby O said:
Loved the ending and really smiled as I picture the tint that caused the light to slide into that perfect ambience
December 10th, 2024 07:42
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Doggerel Dave said:
Right then Sir - if you persist. Cranberry is a really rich colour which can bring out the subtleties in a piece of well molded glass in a very special way.....
December 10th, 2024 06:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Right then Sir - if you persist. Cranberry is a really rich colour which can bring out the subtleties in a piece of well molded glass in a very special way.....
December 10th, 2024 06:06
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sorenbarrett said:
Paradoxes of truth blend with familiar idioms into a coherent view of life as it really is. A masterpiece of language and social norms that defy their outward portrayal. Loved it
December 10th, 2024 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
Paradoxes of truth blend with familiar idioms into a coherent view of life as it really is. A masterpiece of language and social norms that defy their outward portrayal. Loved it
December 10th, 2024 04:43
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Poetic Licence said:
When the pleasure arrives hope it is eternal, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 10th, 2024 04:24
Poetic Licence said:
When the pleasure arrives hope it is eternal, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 10th, 2024 04:24
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orchidee said:
If KP and I ever become naked I will never recover! lol.
My poem about it will start \'As I felt the smoothness of an old trout....\' Or \'sagginess\' with the botox.
December 10th, 2024 02:58
orchidee said:
If KP and I ever become naked I will never recover! lol.
My poem about it will start \'As I felt the smoothness of an old trout....\' Or \'sagginess\' with the botox.
December 10th, 2024 02:58
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Goldfinch60 said:
May that leisure bring such pleasure to your life Neville, as it has mine.
Andy
December 10th, 2024 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
May that leisure bring such pleasure to your life Neville, as it has mine.
Andy
December 10th, 2024 02:23
Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe
cellinic said:
That\'s really brilliant, Neville, best wishes
December 9th, 2024 11:30
cellinic said:
That\'s really brilliant, Neville, best wishes
December 9th, 2024 11:30
Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe
Tom Dylan said:
A couple of powerful pieces, Neville. A fine write.
December 9th, 2024 09:28
Tom Dylan said:
A couple of powerful pieces, Neville. A fine write.
December 9th, 2024 09:28
Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe
Goldfinch60 said:
1. Such a shame if true Neville, I hope all is well.
2. We will never away from life.
Andy
December 9th, 2024 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
1. Such a shame if true Neville, I hope all is well.
2. We will never away from life.
Andy
December 9th, 2024 02:58
Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe
MendedFences27 said:
The first seems a bit \"passive-aggressive\" for both the \"you\" and the \'I.\' The second could not be any truer. Administered on time it is \"resuscitation,\" A heartbeat too late and, if successful, \"resuscitation\" becomes either \"reincarnation\" or \"resurrection.\" Yeah, but who\'s counting? Loved \'em both. - Phil A.
December 8th, 2024 23:43
MendedFences27 said:
The first seems a bit \"passive-aggressive\" for both the \"you\" and the \'I.\' The second could not be any truer. Administered on time it is \"resuscitation,\" A heartbeat too late and, if successful, \"resuscitation\" becomes either \"reincarnation\" or \"resurrection.\" Yeah, but who\'s counting? Loved \'em both. - Phil A.
December 8th, 2024 23:43
Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe
Doggerel Dave said:
I’m leaving the first; there’s too much of it about. Very little ‘me’ in this comment - it’s everywhere.
Second (this mentioned by someone a while back) Anesthesia in hospital links all those for me. Thanks for defining it in that way, Neville.
PS: What is the ‘pissed off’ about?
December 8th, 2024 18:05
Doggerel Dave said:
I’m leaving the first; there’s too much of it about. Very little ‘me’ in this comment - it’s everywhere.
Second (this mentioned by someone a while back) Anesthesia in hospital links all those for me. Thanks for defining it in that way, Neville.
PS: What is the ‘pissed off’ about?
December 8th, 2024 18:05
Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe
Jerry Reynolds said:
Fine writed, Neville. Very astute.
December 8th, 2024 09:28
Jerry Reynolds said:
Fine writed, Neville. Very astute.
December 8th, 2024 09:28
Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe
Tony36 said:
Excellent writes Neville
December 8th, 2024 08:49
Tony36 said:
Excellent writes Neville
December 8th, 2024 08:49
Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe
Cheeky Missy said:
Ahem. *cough, cough* erm, this, THIS is you pissed off? You\'re such a gentleman at it, I rather wish we were better acquainted. What I actually love about these two dainties is how very eloquent they are, (excepting my fundamental disagreement with the second in one point). Besides, take Genesis 3: who put the blame on his creator? We make our choices but prefer casting the blame on, yes. But if resuscitation and resurrection were siamese twins, there is no hope. Okay, enough of me. Beautifully rendered with a delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. (Put on the kettle and have Barry\'s; it\'ll give you relative peace of mind in lieu of that piece of mind, if you catch my drift.)
December 8th, 2024 07:46
Cheeky Missy said:
Ahem. *cough, cough* erm, this, THIS is you pissed off? You\'re such a gentleman at it, I rather wish we were better acquainted. What I actually love about these two dainties is how very eloquent they are, (excepting my fundamental disagreement with the second in one point). Besides, take Genesis 3: who put the blame on his creator? We make our choices but prefer casting the blame on, yes. But if resuscitation and resurrection were siamese twins, there is no hope. Okay, enough of me. Beautifully rendered with a delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. (Put on the kettle and have Barry\'s; it\'ll give you relative peace of mind in lieu of that piece of mind, if you catch my drift.)
December 8th, 2024 07:46
Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe
sorenbarrett said:
Neville. The first poem so identifiable. I think we all have felt this. So well put in so few words blame, returned for kindness given. The second poem also so true reflections of the same image in different mirrors. Poetic breaths of the air around us.
December 8th, 2024 07:17
sorenbarrett said:
Neville. The first poem so identifiable. I think we all have felt this. So well put in so few words blame, returned for kindness given. The second poem also so true reflections of the same image in different mirrors. Poetic breaths of the air around us.
December 8th, 2024 07:17
Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe
rin said:
So many life experiences are piled up in a few short words, it\'s like seeing a fragment of the path you followed.
December 8th, 2024 05:56
rin said:
So many life experiences are piled up in a few short words, it\'s like seeing a fragment of the path you followed.
December 8th, 2024 05:56
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arqios said:
Just been there oh so recently... still fuming... two stacks on the Titanic... the remaining ones bellowing in the background.
December 8th, 2024 05:19
arqios said:
Just been there oh so recently... still fuming... two stacks on the Titanic... the remaining ones bellowing in the background.
December 8th, 2024 05:19
Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe
Poetic Licence said:
On ( Maybe) the words are so true, hope the storm has eased ?, enjoyed the read
December 8th, 2024 03:34
Poetic Licence said:
On ( Maybe) the words are so true, hope the storm has eased ?, enjoyed the read
December 8th, 2024 03:34
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orchidee said:
Yes, the first one - KP always blames me of course!
The second one - KP says to me - \'If you believed in reincarnation, I will come back to haunt ya!\'
I must say you\'re saving a lot of ink using 2 dots .. instead of 3 ... each time.
\'Go back to sleep now, you\'re rambling,\' says Fido to me.
December 8th, 2024 03:13
orchidee said:
Yes, the first one - KP always blames me of course!
The second one - KP says to me - \'If you believed in reincarnation, I will come back to haunt ya!\'
I must say you\'re saving a lot of ink using 2 dots .. instead of 3 ... each time.
\'Go back to sleep now, you\'re rambling,\' says Fido to me.
December 8th, 2024 03:13
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